國企一乙
4A360075
高嘉璘
My Family
My young sister is a junior high school student.She is smart,so her homework is
very good,and her hobby is dance,and dance very well.
My old sister is a collage student.She is very friendly,so many people are willing
to make friend with her.And she very like sports,no matter baseball,volleyball
or running.
My mother is a housewife.She is busy in house and looks very tired
everyday.She like cooking,and the food taste delicious.
Revised:
My younger sister is a junior high school student. She is smart,so she is an
overachiever in school. Her hobby is dancing and she dances beautifully.
My older sister is a college student. She is very friendly,so many people are
willing to make friends with her. And she really likes sports, no matter
baseball,volleyball or running.
My mother is a housewife. She is always busy doing housework and looks
very tired all the time. She likes cooking and the food she cooks tastes
delicious.