.<.!U ..>urrertuenng tne .11Utnur:turu.;tturt Parker, Stephen, Peter Davies and Matthew Philpotts (2004) The Modern Restoration: Re-thinking German Literary History 1930-1960, Berlin: de Gruyter. Philpotts, Matthew (2003) The Margins ofDictatorship: Assent and Dissent in the Work of Gunter Eich and Bertolt Brecht, Oxford: Lang. Venuti, Lawrence (1995) The Translators Invisibility: A History ofTranslation, London & New York: Routledge. ------ (1998) The Scandals of Translation: Towards an Ethics of Difference, London & New York: Routledge. Vieregg, Axel (1993) Der eigenen Fehlbarkeit begegnet: Gunter Eichs Realitiiten 1933-1945, Eggingen: Edition Isele. ------ (ed.) ( 1996) "Unsere Sunden sind Maulwurfe ": Die GUnter-Eich-Debatte, Amsterdam: Rodopi. Wessels, Wolfram (1985) Horspiele im Dritten Reich: Zur InstitutionenTheorie-und Literaturgeschichte, Bonn: Bouvier. ' ------ (1996) 'Zum Beispiel Gunter Eich: Von der schuldlosen Schuld der Literatur', in Axel Vieregg (ed.) "Unsere Sunden sind Maulwurfe": Die Gunter-Eich-Debatte, Amsterdam: Rodopi, 13 7-54. Wiirffel, Stefan Baldo (1978a) '"Denn heute gehort uns Deutschland": Anmerkungen zum Horspiel im Dritten Reich', in Ralf Schnell (ed.) Kunst und Kultur im deutschen Faschismus, Stuttgart: Metzler, 129-55. ------ ( 1978b) Das deutsche Horspiel, Stuttgart: Metzler. Take Three The National-Catholic Versions ofBilly Wilder Broadway Adaptations s JEROEN VANDAELE KULeuven & VLEKHO, Belgium* Abstract: In the mid-195Os Billy Wilder adapted three Broadway shows for the screen: Stalag 17 (1953), Sabrina (1954), and The Seven Year Itch (1955). Wilder tended to modify the scripts in line with his own standards of sarcasm, wit and (transgressive) behaviour and language. In the process, Wilder came into conflict with the censoring Hollywood Production Code, as embodied by the Breen Office. While the story ofhis struggles with the Americanfilm industry s self-censorship has to a large extent already been told, the censorship, again driven by the Catholic Church, but implemented in a harsher and more anonymous manner, of Billy Wilder s films in Franco s Spain remains largely unknown to American and European Wilder specialists, and even to the Spanish audiences who continue to watch the Francoist dubbings nowadays. This chapter unearths what might be called the Francoist 'third take' of Wilder s original Broadway re-writes. Sabrina s 1955 dubbing offers an insight into early Francoistfilm manipulations. The 1964 dubbings of Stalag 17 and The Seven Year Itch, typical products of the regimes post-1963 cultural policies, illustrate how important a player Billy Wilder was in Spain s hesitant move towards cultural openness (apertura) around 1963. Even today, the 1955 and 1964 dubbings are of great importance for the study ofthe dissemmination of Wilder s work, as they are still the only Spanish-language versions on sale in Spain (as of 2005), and are also found on multilingual D VDs destined for other European countries. Its all a question of imagination -and Mr. Sherman has a lot of imagination. [The Seven Year Itch] * I should like to thank Miguel Angel Martinez L6pez, Margarita Lobo and Trinidad del Rio (Filmoteca Espaftola, Madrid), Janet Moat (British Film Institute, London), and 280 Jeroen Vandaele Take Three try to suppress these same forces over the following seven years (from July 1962 until July 1969), while the highly reactionary Catholic Alfredo Sanchez Bella would declare war against them from 1969 until Franco's death (1975) (Gubern 1981). The practice of Francoist translation was part and parcel of the regime's strategy to turn the whole of Spain into a 'National-Catholic' country: patriotic, 'vaticanist' and redeemed, isolated both from a sinful capitalist lifestyle and from Communism. With hindsight, some scholars argue that foreign texts were 'manipulated' rather than 'translated'. Others, especially translators under Francoism were- and some still remain - sincerely convinced that they were, as professionals, indeed producing translations, albeit ones that were occasionally 'corrected' either by anticipatory self-censorship - a practice common until 1963 (see Garcia Escudero 1978)- or by imposed State censorship. On the whole, however, under Franco translation was not about cultural mediation, in any positive sense, between Spain and other cultures. Precisely, in Vandaele (2002) I have already discussed how two famous Billy Wilder films, Some Like It Hot (1959) and The Apartment (1960), were censored and re-written in their Franco-era dubbed versions. Francoist film translation was protectionist, untruthful, deceptive and heavily 'domesticating' (Venuti 1998), since it manipulated 'alien' values represented in the original text. More accurately, the Francoist translational system could be described as a "defensive" system (Robyns 1994: 60), since it (partly) acknowledged the 'otherness' of alien intruders, but only to transform it. This is not to say, of course, that the translators themselves had options to act otherwise. The present chapter, then, will focus on the Francoist reception and manipulation of three earlier Billy Wilder comedies. 1. Francoism, culture and translation After his victory in the Spanish Civil War (1936-1939), General Francisco Franco isolated Spain culturally, politically and economically from the rest of the world. His administration accordingly exercized strict control over the translation of foreign cultural material. Only in the 1950s, after more than ten years of poverty and misery, was he forced to relax his repressive, autocratic rule (Tusell 1988: 251-62; Garcia Delgado 2000: 120); economic modernization did not properly begin until 1957-59, and was guided mainly by Opus Dei-affiliated capitalists (Moradiellos 2000: 26-7). From the 1950s onwards, Franco made efforts to regain international standing by manoeuvring his country into global political organizations, such as the United Nations, to which Spain was admitted in 1955. Spanish culture, however, remained very much closed until the Caudillo's death. While, over the decades, institutions changed names and/or fac;:ades, and new leading figures and sub-ideologies took power, the Spanish cultural system retained a highly defensive posture. In 1945, immediately after the Nazi defeat, Franco had moved the responsibility for censorship, through which this cultural isolation was enforced, from his semi-Fascist party ('la Falange Espanola Tradicionalista y de las JONS') to the Ministerio de Educaci6n Nacional (Ministry ofNational Education). Six years later, in 1951, he reshuffled his Government, shifting power even more drastically from thefalangistas (the Fascists proper) and the 'liberals' to the ultraconservative Catholics (not to be confused with the later Opus Dei), who would keep the country culturally isolated. This administrative change led to the creation of an interesting new organ, the Ministerio de Informacion y Turismo (Ministry oflnformation and Tourism), that was to watch over tourism, a very significant part of the new Spanish economy and an acknowledged source of change in society. This Ministry further absorbed the functions of all existing censorship organisms, for both foreign and domestic production offiction and non-fiction alike (see Gubern 1981). Tourism, but more particularly information and (foreign) fiction were the evil forces that the ultracatholic 'supercensor' Gabriel Arias Salgado kept under control for around fifteen years as Minister of Tourism, from July 1951 to July 1962, and earlier, from 1941 to 1945, as Vice-Secretary of the Falange. His more moderate successor Manuel Fraga Iribarne would Mieke Neyens for their generous help, and Ed Sikov for his comments on an earlier draft of this chapter. 281 I I % 2. Source text discourse: Wilder's 1953-1955 adaptations In 1950 Wilder brought out Sunset Boulevard, widely seen as a, timeless masterpiece, although the Academy only nominated it for Best Director. Five years earlier the Austrian director had earned his first international credentials with two more straightforward.film noir classics: for Double Indemnity (1944), co-written with Raymond Chandler, he was nominated for Best Director, an award that he would win in 1945 for The Lost Weekend. But Wilder would soon experiment with other genres. Only eight years after the end of World War II, the comical P.O.W. camp whodunnit Stalag 17 (1953) was a strange and risky narrative, especially in view of the negative re,~eption that his first 'war comedy', A Foreign Affair 282 Take Three ( 1948), had received, and the fact that his latest film- the bitter media satire Ace in the Hole (a.k.a. The Big Carnival, 1951)- had bombed. Paramount's powerful propaganda machine therefore set up a huge campaign, with special private previews for American Prisoners of War, which helped turning Stalag 17 into a big hit. "The Hollywood trade papers loved it, and so did most of America's movie reviewers" (Sikov 1998: 343). Stalag 17 was a thoroughly re-written adaptation of what had been a tremendous Broadway hit in the spring of 1951 (Sikov 1998: 335). Despite the vulgarities of the script, the cynicism of the protagonists, the setting, an extended gay joke which annoyed American censors (ibid.: 339), and sexual references to Russian women prisoners "Wilder got ... applause, approval, and financial return" (ibid.: 343). The Spanish censorship boards would not share the Americans' opinion. Only 11 years after the original's American premiere would a slightly re-written version be authorized in Spain (see section 3, below). Billy Wilder had acquired a taste for Broadway. Over the next three years, he would adapt three Broadway shows for the big screen: after Stalag 17 (1953) came the romantic comedy Sabrina (1954), famously featuring Audrey Hepburn as a working-class girl who climbs the social ladder through seduction and marriage, and The Seven Year Itch (1955), legendary for its title and for the iconic scene in which Marilyn Monroe's skirt is lifted by the wind coming out of a subway grate. 1 The Hepburn comedy was "a big hit" and "[a]udiences seem not to have minded the edge Billy gave to Sabrina", writes Sikov (1998: 359), referring to elements the Francoist Junta would also address (see section 3). The Seven Year Itch has always divided critics. As a Broadway spectacle, Axelrod's "adultery comedy" was "a smash hit" in November 1952, but liberal critics severely criticized the film (Sikov 1998: 361 ). In Wilder's movie, the working husband does not take advantage of his wife's summer leave to have intercourse with the newly arrived neighbour (played by Marilyn Monroe in the film). The famous New York Times journalist Bosley Crowther observed in his devastating review that "in the [Broadway] play, as we recall, the wishful thoughts of the fellow toward the lady were finally realized" while "[i]n the picture there is no such fulfillment. The rules of the Production Code have compelled a careful evasion" (Crowther 1955).2 On the other hand, Wilder expert Ed Sikov notes that the director 1 Only once, in 1957, would Wilder return to Broadway for inspiration, with the 1957 production Witness for the Prosecution, which was itselfbased on the short story (1933) and play (1953) by Agatha Christie. 2 The issue was certainly a burning one in 1955. A "personal" letter appended to the 283 Jeroen Vandaele and screenwriter had managed to gain approval for a film that the censors had said they would never accept. As he notes, the Hays Office had written that "even if the play's hanky-panky were eliminated completely, The Seven Year Itch would remain unacceptable because 'the subject material of adultery would still be the springboard of all the comedy"' (Sikov 1998: 362). ·Sikov continues: By the time the film was released, the Production Code Administration concluded, astoundingly, that The Seven Year Itch was not about adultery. (Since no adulterous sexual acts were committed in the film, there was therefore no adultery in the film.) (ibid.) Seidl (2000) coined a phrase that, in his opinion, captures the spirit of the whole film: The Seven Year Itch was a 'UFF', an Unfinished Fuck. Whether it was finished or not, Francoist censors would find the plot far too sexual to approve in 1958. 3. Francoist reception, a chronology Of these films, only Sabrina made it to Spanish screens in the period before the regime's first cultural apertura in 1963. All three films under consideration, even the 1964 dubbings Traidor en el infierno ('Traitor in Hell') and La tentaci6n vive arriba ('Temptation Lives Upstairs'), would suffer manipulative Francoist censorship. 1953 Stalag 17 Traidor en el infierno 1964 1954 Sabrina Sabrina 1955 1955 The Seven Year Itch La tentaci6n vive arriba 1964 Table I. Year of release of Wilder :S films in the US (left) and, Spain (right, translated titles) Seven year Itch script in the archives ofthe British Film Institute, dated 16 June, 1955, from a certain John Lefebre to a certain Robert Kreier, apparently an American film executive, pleads for the restoration ofthe element of adultery for European audiences: "Mr. Silverstone ... mentioned ... that, for censorship reasons, in THE SEVEN YEAR ITCH, one little scene, showing the male star on the couch all by himself in the morning, indicates that he has not spent the night with Marilyn Monroe (which in the play he does). This, by the European public, might be considered a great mistake, and we are sure that if censorship in your territory does not insist on this scene, it would be easy by cutting these few meters, to let justice prevail." 284 Take Three ,..1953~ Stalag 17 State censorship Paramount's Spanish branch tried to sell the film as a fundamentally comic whodunnit, but the Junta de Clasificaci6n y Censura, presided over by Joaquin Argamasilla was clear in its verdict : "NO PROCEDE SU IMPORTACION" ("Not to be imported"; April28, 1953; censorship file n. 11.779; AGA 36/3453).3 Not much later, the Comisi6n Superior de Censura, in theory a board of appeal, confirmed the Junta's decision. This is unsurprising, since the Committee was also presided over by Joaquin Argamasilla, the right hand of the previously mentioned ultra-catholic minister Arias Salgado. The objections against Stalag 17 were nevertheless political rather than strictly moral. This is logical if we recall Franco's efforts in the mid-1950s to rejoin the international community via anti-communist rhetoric, a strategy supported by Falangists as well as catholicists. Since Communism frightened the western powers, Franco speculated, correctly, that they would implicitly support his regime against any possible leftwing Republican outbreak (see Moradiellos 2000, for instance). Hence his constant references to the Communist threat that had been faced during the Civil War. From 1947 onwards, the American military urged its fellow diplomats to re-establish contacts with Spain. The Embassy reopened, and although Francoist Spain was excluded from the Marshall Plan (which began in 1947), three hispanoamerican 10-year agreements were signed on September 26, 1953. The Junta's anticommunist comments may be interpreted in this immediate context. Vice-President Jose Maria Alonso-Pesquera believed that the partly "false" and "outdated" film should be forbidden for "ridiculiza al ejercito aleman" ("ridicules the German army") and "reverdece rencores y odios fomentando las divisiones entre y americanos" ("revives hatred and division among Americans and Germans"). In fact, the film paints a comparatively rosy picture oflife in a Nazi P.O.W. camp. True, a harsh reality may be suggested by the film's opening sequence, which shows the machine-gunning of two prisoners during an escape attempt. Likewise, as a punishment for this attempted break-out, the Germans remove the barracks' stove, there is 3 All translations are my own unless stated otherwise. Jeroen Vandaele 285 permanent food shortage in the camp, the German camp officers are rather sarcastic, or sometimes just stupid, and they deceive the Red Cross inspector. But nowhere does the film transmit a gloomy atmosphere. And as for entertainment, the plot of Stalag 17 is rather thin. The failed escape makes the prisoners realize that there is a 'stoolie' among them, who briefs the German officers and guards about anything prisoners do or plan. A cynical Einzelgiinger who trades with the Germans, prisoner Sefton is the first to arouse suspicion. As he is threatened, and later beaten up, he tries to unveil the identity of the real spy, and in the event manages to do so. Given this conventional whodunnit plot, the tone of the Junta's comments is revisionist by any standard. According to the fascistoid censor Mariano Daranas, the picture supposedly created a "version tendenciosa", or even "falsa", of how prisoners lived in German camps. 4 The properly fascist censor Mourlane Michelena explicitly asked for a "revision" of such "deformation" and "prejudices", and attacked the film's "caricatures": "Estas peliculas de propaganda deforman la realidad y la pliegan a prejuicios o a supuestos cuya revision es deseable .... En este film se tiende a la caricatura al pintar usos, caracteres y modos de ser" ("These propaganda films deform reality, and adapt it to prejudices and suppositions in need of revision .... There is tendency in this film to caricature certain habits, temperaments and ways of living"). The low-profile Secretary Francisco Fernandez y Gonzalez feared the social uproar Stalag 17 might cause ("las perturbaciones que habria de suscitar entre los espectadores"), and the 4 In my PhD thesis, I devote one chapter to profiling 62 Junta censors who dealt with Billy Wilder's 23 Hollywood films. In this context, 'fascistoid' refers to aesthetic and ethical preferences related to Fascism rather than Spanish Catholicism. Fascist and fascistoid censors are generally more tolerant than catholicists in issues of social morality, and more forward-looking in aesthetic matters, thus respecting the imperativo poetico joseantoniano. They are less tolerant when it comes to World War II, but join catholicists again in their hostility towards Communism. At least half ofthe censors were important ideologists and/or agents. Therefore, Neuschafer's assertion' that censors were "ruedecitas" ("tiny wheels") in the "gran maquinaria" ("big machine") is historically false (Neuschafer 1994:52). Alonso-Pesquera was an actor, film technician, Director General ofTheatre and Film, Secretary General of Theatre and Film, National Union Member for Technicians and (Script)Writers, President of the Grupo Nacional de Cooperativas Cinematograficas, and Professor at the Instituto de Investigaciones y Experiencias Cinematograficas. Mourlane Michelena, personally close to the founder of Spanish Fascism, Jose Antonio Primo de Rivera, was Director of Escorial, an important cultural magazine launched by the well-known Fascists Ridruejo and Lain Entralgo, and a contributor to Vertice, Revista Nacional de FET y de las JONS, which he also directed for some time. 286 Take Three ecclesiastical censors wtthin the state board, Father Garcia del Figar and Father Villares, also condemned the film in many respects: for depicting a "campo de concentracion aleman" ("German concentration camp") and the "terror of war", or else for the "ridiculing of Germans" which would lead to a "division of nations" ("reaviva las divisiones entre las naciones ridiculizando al Ejercito y al pueblo aleman"; Villares in AGA 36/3453). Similar objections are found in the reports written by the conservative and (until 1962) everpresent censor Alfredo Timermans, and by the anticommunist catholic Pio Garcia Escudero, who stated that such camps "should be Russian" instead of German ("es inadmisible, sobre todo, en los momentos actuales en que el campamento debiera ser ruso"). 5 In the letter of appeal that the Comisi6n Superior received from Paramount-Espafi.a, it was argued that the "topic" of the film was "rather comedy", "without atrocity" ("una pelicula cuyo asunto es mas bien comedia, no habiendo en ella ninguna atrocidad"; May 5, 1953); their argument fell flat. Censor Torres Lopez really did "not understand why one would want to show such a picture", given "the current state of the world" ("en Ia situacion actual del mundo"). Father Garau's evaluation resembled Pio Garcia Escudero's remark. "An interesting film", he wrote, "if Paramount could make it anticommunist, it would deserve to be seen in cinemas around the world" ("Interesante pelicula. - Si Ia Paramount consiguiera hacerla anticomunista, mereceria cines del mundo"). Sanchez Silva, scriptwriter of the famous film Marcelino, pan y vino (1955), had to resort to a non sequitur: "Out of date, hence, banned" ("Prohibida por inactual"). Since the film did not reach the screens, the Francoist Spanish press, including Church publications, did not cover Stalag 17 in 1953. ~1955~ Sabrina As has already been mentioned, Sabrina was Wilder's only mid-1950s Broadway adaptation that was authorized in pre-1963 ultra-catholic Spain. 5 Given the striking parallelism between the various reports, it is fairly safe to suggest that some kind of debate preceded the individual written appreciations. Such a debate will have obeyed established institutional and group hierarchies: what does the President say? How does the Priest react? In order to behave like perfect censors, censors will look for cues from peers and higher-order censors. Jeroen Vandaele 287 State censorship (1) The Censorship Board On February 8, 1955, the Junta authorized that a dubbed version of Sabrina be prepared (AGA 36/3518; Francoist file no 13 .467). The Vice-President did not see any need for cuts, as the film was a "typical American comedy" in which two rich brothers "entertainingly" struggled for the love of Sabrina, the daughter of the family chauffeur ("Comedia al estilo americano ... con una serie de peripecias entretenidas") (Alonso-Pesquera in AGA file 36/3518). Father Villares' reading coincided quite closely with Alonso-Pesquera's, although it was slightly more moralizing. While the plot was, in his view, quite unimportant, the theme made the film suitable only for adults ("Argumento intrascendente desde el punto de vista moral. Por el asunto creo solo debe autorizarse para mayores"; ibid.) The Falangist veteran Mourlane Michelena agreed that Sabrina was a "comedia muy norteamericana" and praised the good dialogue and acting. Censor Daranas found the comedy "quite clean", "entertaining", and was happy with the optimistic ending ("fertil en situaciones entretenidas, sin perjuicio del optimismo del desenlace"; ibid.). Fascistoid aesthetics was notably unconcerned by moral issues of a sexual kind. However, pitfalls awaited Sabrina. A letter of appeal, subsequent to the first reports, is indirect evidence of at least one suggested censorship cut, which Paramount found unnecessary: "the following cut: Reel 9 - Delete David and Sabrina's kissing in the garage and, hence, her phrase 'Kiss me"' ("el corte siguiente: Rollo 9.- Suprimir los besos de David y Sabrina en el garaje y por consiguiente Ia frase de ella cuando dice: 'Besame'"). Months later, on 28 July, the Junta members authorized the dubbed version for audiences over 16. 6 Paramount were no doubt unamused, since their letter of appeal had clearly stated that they had "always been certain" that an "innocent" "funny comedy" like Sabrina was destined "for all audiences", especially since it lacked "shocking situations" and "malevolen~e": Siempre hemos estado seguros de que esta [sic] pelicula seria'autorizada para todos los publicos por su caracter [sic] de comedia graciosa que no tiene ninguna dureza ni situaciones escabrosas, pues desde el principio a! final se crean escenas que desembocan en comicidad sin mali cia para hacer pasar un rato agradable a todos los publicos y su argumento no puede ser mas inocente, pues se 6 Among them were, again, Daranas and Michelena, and a translator of Shakespeare, canon Nicolas Gonzalez Ruiz. 288 Take Three trata de las naturales dudas para elegir marido unajovencita [sic]. Por todo ello consideramos que la pelicula en cuesti6n deberia ser AUTORIZADA PARA TODOS LOS PUBLICOS. Fdo Andres Sanz Ladr6n de Guevara, Gerente Sucursal Madrid Paramount Films. (AGA 36/3518) Their explanations were to no avail. On 26 September, President Manuel Torres Lopez and his Junta decided by majority (AGA 36/3518) to maintain the age restriction. 7 Jeroen Vandaele 289 'Cinderella'-story and a novelette ... pleasant, nice and entertaining" (Ecclesia, 22.1 0.1955). However, Ecclesia continues, "[I]t is well known that such romantic comedies are not as innocent and harmless as they seem to be; the same goes for this film, which has this atmosphere and depicts daring situations". Its final evaluation, "3 mayores" ("adults"), should be understood as for 'adults for the Spanish Church', people over 21 years of age, which is five years older than the special 'over 16' audience voted for by the State censors. 8 ,.1958~ State censorship (2) The Francoist Press The Seven Year Itch 'Donald', the famous film critic of the largest newspaper ABC, believed that within its soft romantic genre ("rosa"), this film was another "masterpiece", much as Sunset Boulevard had been within a different genre. Other newspapers stressed its "cordial", "funny", "soft" and "romantic" nature (Marca), the "enjoyment" it offered (Hoja dellunes), its "nicely told" story (7fechas), its "unimportant but funny" narrative (Digame). Writing for the Falangist newspaper Arriba, the future censor (and eminent film expert) Gomez Mesa was less enthustiastic: Sabrina "brings together all the characteristics of a trivial genre". The fascist weekly magazine Primer Plano, prominent until the early 1960s, liked this "realistic" "re-edition of Cinderella" that satirized capitalism, even though one major objection was issued: Wilder had unconvincingly crafted one character, a French Baron who had taken cooking lessons with Sabrina in Paris (Primer Plano~ 1.1 0.1955). Interestingly, Sikov writes of the relationship between the Baron and Sabrina as being "[o]ne of Billy's most subtly filthy jokes", explaining how "Wilder needs to suggest - but only in the vaguest, least censorable way - that Sabrina and the Baron have enjoyed each other's company" (Sikov 1998: 357). Her father the chauffeur reads Sabrina's letter from Paris: "He [the Baron] came to the cooking school to take a refresher course in souffles and liked me so much he decided to stay on for the fish". Due to Hollywood's second boycott against Francoist protectionism in 1956 (see Diez Puertas 2003: 163), The Seven Year Itch would not reach the Junta until October 1958, three years after its US release (1955). By then, Spanish State Censorship had gone over entirely to the ultracatholic option. As its new President, Jose Mufioz Font!in's task was to stop the "irresponsible tolerance" of his predecessor Torres Lopez (Gubern 1981 :151-52). Church censorship Ecclesia, the official publishing organ of Accion Catolica, published the moral assessment by the private Catholic censorship apparatus. The first part is rather descriptive, in line with other Francoist publications: "[A] 7 Father Garau, Antonio Fraguas, Vicente Llorente and Francisco Ortiz voted "audiences over 16", Sanchez-Silva and Timermans found the film suitable for "all audiences". State censorship: The Censorship Board Distributing company Filmax first tried to obtain an import licence for the film, with the provisional title Maridos en Ia ciudad ("Husbands in the City") (AGA 36/3680; Francoist file n° 18.452). The answer of Mufioz Font!in's Junta on 24 October 1958 was negative. According to Father Juan Fernandez, "both the dialogues and the images" were "completely morbid", the husband dreamt "the most ludicrous and suggestive things in sexual matters", thoughts and dreams that were "plastically shown on stage". Fernandez saw "no way" to "adapt" the film ("noes susceptible de adaptaciones por que no hay por donde cogerla"). Father Avelino agreed with his colleague, as "the humour and the dialogues" were "too dangerous" ("demasiado peligrosa la comicidad y el dialogo"), as they "all concerned sexual leanings". He stopped watching the film after three reels "No he visto 8 "Una vez mas, el tema de Ia cenicienta.... Resulta simpatica, amable y entretenida. ... Sabido es que el genero llamado 'rosa' noes tan ingenuo e inofensivo como parece; tampoco lo es en esta pelicula, desarrol!ada en un ambiente y entre situaciones atrevidas .... Censura del Estado: Autorizada para mayores. Calificaci6n moral: 3 Mayores" (p. 473). 290 Take Three nada mas que 3 Rollos" (Avelino in AGA 36/3680). According to Father Avelino, the following scenes, among others, were reprehensible: the title of a book about the sexual instincts of the middle-aged man, the daydream scene on the beach where Sherman supposedly resists the temptation of his wife's best friend, Sherman's daydream of being attacked by his secretary (Avelino writes of his attack 'on the secretary'), and the entire third reel. Wilder's set-up was indeed very cunning. It is summertime, and too hot for the wife and child to stay in New York, so husband Richard Sherman is on his own when he meets a new neighbor (Marilyn Monroe). In his vivid imagination, his rather healthy libido is in constant debate with a strong Uber-Ich. Sherman is in constant debate with himself, with the imagined voices of his wife and doctors, with the idealized voice of Marilyn Monroe, and others. Repeatedly, this monologic/dialogic mode of telling (diegetic dialogue interieur) moves to the dramatic showing mode (mimesis), in which his imagination is visualized as a quasi-real event. Eventually, he always returns to reality, but the realistic visualizations of his constant relapses were apparently too strong for the Francoist Junta. The high-profile ultra-catholic censor and Secretary Ortiz Munoz did not appreciate this mixing of "real and imaginary events" which show "a continuous obsession with sex". And no, the comic tone would not do as an extenuating circumstance ("El tono festivo del relato no es bastante para compensar la continua procacidad de imagenes y dialogos"; ibid.). "The mind and the image" were "pervaded with sex", Cuartero writes, so much so that even the happy ending, where "courage defeats desire", was insufficient ("AI final aunque su valentia vence al deseo, la pelicula esta toda empregnada de la sexualidad, en la mente, y en la imagen, y no tiene posible adaptaci6n ni arreglo"; ibid.). Only Mariano Daranas finds the courage to report that The Seven Year Itch is "even psychologically estimable in spite of its apparent frivolity": "a good husband" finds himself"alone at home and in New york", and goes through "the process of his conscience and sensitivity". But, he admits, the process is too "obsessive" and "sexual" for public visualization in Spain: "Es tan obsesiva y tan plastica la preocupaci6n sexual que no cabe dentro de nuestra moral publica su grafica representaci6n"; (ibid.). The veto was unanimous. ,..1963, December~ The Seven Year Itch [revised version] 1963 was a crucial year in Spanish cultural politics. Economic needs had forced Franco to allow a relative cultural apertura. The number of tourists Jeroen Vandaele 291 had increased from around two and a half million in 1958 to nearly six and a half in 1962 (Gubem 1981: 181). Tourism was not only the largest source of foreign currency, it also forced Franco to present a friendlier image of his regime. Furthermore, in the Spring of 1962, huge strikes for better working conditions gradually took on political connotations, obliging Franco to re-organize his government (Moradiellos 2000: 161-62). Technocrats came to power, most of them members of Opus Dei, some others more closely connected to the Party (Movimiento ), like Minister of Tourism and Information Manuel Fraga Iribame and aperturista Jose Maria Garcia Escudero (in his second term as Director of Cinematography and Theatre and, hence, President of the Junta). Previously, many Spanish film professionals had heavily criticized contemporary national cinema in an astonishingly open colloquium known as the Conversaciones de Salamanca (1955), at which Jose Maria Garcia Escudero had spoken. The need for a transparent censorship code, expressed by many during the 1955 talks, would be one of the new Junta's achievements (the result was the C6digo de Censura of 1962). The 1962-1967 Censorship Board worked very hard, particularly on Billy Wilder films. Specifically, they had four tasks relating to Wilder. Not only did they re-consider - according to their newly written official norms - the recently banned films Some Like It Hot and The Apartment (see Vandaele 2002), they also picked up the earlier Stalag 17 (Traidor en el infierno) and The Seven Year Itch (La tentaci6n vive arriba). Third, they accepted there-dubbing of Five Graves to Cairo (1943, Cinco Tumbas al Cairo) and Double Indemnity (Perdici6n ), although this was not necessarily a consequence of the new censorship code (the old dubbed copies may have been lost, destroyed, gone out of date, or not been handed over by the previous distributor). Fourth, and finally, the new Junta provided quick assessments of One, two, three ( 1961, Uno dos tres; authorized for adults in 1962), Irma Ia Douce (1963, Irma Ia dulce; banned for six years until1969), Kiss Me, Stupid (1964, Besame, tonto; banned for eleven years.until 1973) and The Fortune Cookie ( 1966, En bandeja de plata; authorized for adults in 1967). As a result, Billy Wilder was suddenly omnipresent on Spanish screens, as J.M. Perez Lozano remarked in the Catholic newspaper Ya (28 January, 1964): "Yet another Billy Wilder picture this season- no other director has seen so many of his films premiere this film year - although some pictures, like this one, are already several years old" (Lozano 1964). Historically, Billy Wilder was probably the most visible and talked-about Hollywood film director in Spain during the first years of the openingup, both for critics and for audiences. His importance for the cinematic apertura of 1963-1969 can hardly be overestimated, and has farreaching 292 Take Three consequences. "If I had to choose one master or model, I would choose Billy Wilder", Pedro Almodovar stated in 1987 (quoted in Kinder 1987). Six years later, upon receiving his Best Foreign Film Oscar for Belle Epoque (1992), Fernando Trueba famously shouted to the audiences that he would have liked to thank God "but I don't believe in God, so I'd like to thank Billy Wilder". In recent times, Sikov's excellent Wilder biography (1998) has so far only been translated into Spanish, by the prestigious publishing house Tusquets (Barcelona, 2000). State censorship (1) The Censorship Board On 13 December, 1963, Jose Maria Garcia Escudero and his team (Jesuit Father Staehlin, (liberal) fascistArroita-Jauregui, the three aperturistas Bautista de Ia Torre, Auz, and Celis y Orue, and the very conservative catholic Cano, among others) unanimously authorized The Seven Year Itch for audiences over 18, as it was a "comical clean happy farce" ("Farsa comica limpia alegre; para mayores 18"; AGA 36/3680). Again, this did not mean that the film would be translated as such. Correspondence between the distributing company Radio Films and the Junta in 1963 and 1964 shows, for example, that Radio Films first suggested the quite literal translation El cosquilleo del septimo ano, to which the State censors made their counterproposal La chica del segundo piso ('The Girl on the Second Floor'). 9 Finally, the Junta settled for La tentaci6n vive arriba, another counterproposal from Radio Films, "for commercial reasons". For the Board, a 'temptation' 'living upstairs' may have sounded less drastic than the natural, semi-automatic, almost Darwinian 'itch' inside the male species. In the file, a loose handwritten anonymous note stated that some publishing material had to stay forbidden. It detailed the following scenes: - "En el suelo cogida del brazo" ("on the floor, [Marilyn] embraced") "Sentada en el brazo del sofa" ("[Marilyn] on the arm of the sofa") "Abrazados, el detras" ("Embraced, [Sherman] behind") "Abrazados, besandole en Ia barbilla" ("Embraced, [slhe] kissing [him/her] on the chin") "Sentada encima de el" ("She sitting on him") 9 Some other Hispanic countries know the film as La comezon del septimo ano, a literal translation of the original. Jeroen Vandaele 293 As we shall see in Section 4, the 1964 film itself also underwent cuts and dialogue changes in translation. State censorship (2) The Francoist Press Billy Wilder's Con faldas y a lo loco (Some Like It Hot, 1959), starring Monroe, and El Apartmento, had been released respectively on 24 October and 19 December 1963 and were major hits in Spain throughout 1964. Small wonder that the pressure to issue The Seven Year Itch in Spain was huge, especially after Marilyn Monroe's untimely death on 4 August, 1962. Upon release, the professional magazine for theatre owners Cine Asesor wrote that "the foremost point of attraction - sufficient in itself to fill any theatre - is the presence of the unforgettable Marilyn Monroe" (n. 19-64). The former Junta President ( 1946-1951) Gabriel Garcia Espina was now a major film critic for ABC: "Marilyn Monroe, bellisima,juvenil, sonriente", "resurrected in this terrifying miracle called cinema", "present again, alive and kicking, even though she's 'no longer there"' (Espina 1964). The catholic Ya was more negative, referring to "easy jokes" and "boring monologues", and so was the Falangist Arriba, where the old-fashioned high-brow State censor Gomez Mesa had control over the film section. But critics started to show more freedom, particularly in specialist publications. The new intellectual review Nuestro Cine mentioned ironically that "por razones oscuras" the film had come far too late to Spain (n. 26, January 1964: 59). It was the magazine Film Ideal, inspired by the intellectual standards of Cahiers du Cinema, but resolutely Catholic until 1962, that carried the most astonishing article. In an essay spread over four pages (n. 138, 15 February 1964), the critic Ramon Moix (nowadays known as the writer Terenci Moix) tried to rehabilitate the picture and defend the Monroemyth.10 Praising the film for its "tecnica cinemascopica", "la inclusion de Marilyn" and "el erotismo", he declared his article to be "un catlto a Marilyn en cuanto a sexo" ("a hymn to Marilyn as regards sex") (Moix, 1964: 13334). Moix even criticized Richard Sherman for not fighting "the absolute reality of imposed norms, of sick conformism", for his "incapacity to defy morality" (ibid.). Without irony, he regretted that "el adulterio no llega a consumarse", not even "in mentis" (ibid.). "En Espana el mito Monroe no existe", he concluded, and "the myth will probably never exist" (ibid.). Possibly, Moix deliberately wrote a self-defeating prophecy, because from 10 Sikov ( 1998:370) mentions that cahieriste Fran9ois Truffaut- not really a Wilder fan - loved The Seven Year Itch for its sexual ambiguity. 294 Take Three 1964 onwards admiration for Marilyn Monroe has been a constant feature in broad sectors of Spanish society. 11 As far as Church censorship is concerned, Ecclesia had stopped publishing its censorial moral reviews by the end of 1963. The defeatist ecclesiastical censors openly admitted that they could no longer maintain control over an immoral society, nor pressurize the many lax State censors. State censorship had indeed also changed. Stalag 17 would be measured by different standards than in 1953. ~1964~ Stalag 17 [revised version] State censorship (1) The Censorship Board Ironically, it was the Francoist producer-distributor CIFESA, once the Regime's propaganda machine, that asked to reopen the Stalag 17 file (n°. 11. 779). As CIFESA's domestic products were desperately out of fashion, the company was in need of cash. On 30 April 1964 it was decided that the film could be imported to Spain "without adaptations". Father Staehlin found the picture suitable for adults over 18, Father Fierro - the censor who reportedly made L 'Osservatore Romano condemn Buiiuel 's Viridiana (see Camicero and Sanchez Salas 2000: 139)- saw no "harm" in the film ("No es pelicula que pueda perjudicar"). The various censors had different reasons to authorize the film. Pascual Cebollada, founder of the secretive and moralizing Church censorship, having now infiltrated the State board, opposed any kind of revisionism. This film was a "correcta exposici6n de un hecho hist6rico" ("correct presentation of a historical fact") which was "essentially a whodunnit that triggered purely human reactions". If the Catholic censors were generally more inclined than old Fascists to authorize wartime satire, this time all censors seemed to react favourably. In Jose Maria Garcia Escudero's diary we read that he believed his new Vice-President Florentino Soria to be the right man for cultural aperturismo. Soria was tolerant indeed. "No objections", he reported, "it is a war film with some extravagant humour. It contains no vicious attack on the Germans" ("una aventura guerrera con cierta desorbitaci6n humoristica. No hay ensafiamiento contra los alemanes"). The former ecclesiastical censor 11 For example, at the time of writing (April2005), the front page of the official Marilyn Monroe website (http://www.marilynmonroe.com) refers to a huge exhibition 'Marilyn Monroe: Life of a Legend' at the Centro de Cultura de Ia Villa (Madrid). Jeroen Vandaele 295 Cano preferred to read the film entirely in terms of the whodunnit genre: "El nucleo del argumento esta centrado en el descubrimiento y fracaso del espia aleman", and its comic tone was what impressed the liberalfalangista Arroita-Jauregui, a participant in the 1955 Salamanca Conversations, director's assistant for the famous neorealist film Calle Mayor (Bardem, 1956) and, later, critic for Film Ideal: "El tono de comedia ... quita cualquier peligrosidad", the comedy removes all danger. The open-minded- some Francoists reportedly called him a communist (see Garcia Escudero 1978: 225)- Victor Auz would even have authorized Stalag 17 for audiences over 14, but the majority stuck to the "adults" restriction. On the other hand, this meant that no manipulation was needed, as censor Zabala's notes indicate. Some, "few", shots ridiculed the German guards ("en algunos pianos, en pocos"), and presented them as cruel beings "but not to the extent that the film should be forbidden; especially if the following shots are deleted: 8lrets (It is voted by majority that no shots be cut)" ["Phares (Por mayoria se acuerda no practicar ninguno)."]. State censorship (2) The Francoist Press The intellectual Catholic magazine Film Ideal focused on the story-line, criticizing Wilder for what he always did: taking the side ofthe cynic. Sefton "only unmasks the traitor when it affects him personally" (n. 160, 15 January 1965: 69). Also, the 'translators' were under attack for their bad title choice "Traidor en el infierno"- 'in hell'. This "campo de concentraci6n" seemed more like a playground for Billy Wilder, wrote Film Ideal's Jose Maria Carreno, and it bore no resemblance to hell. On the other side of the spectrum, we find the ABC critic and former Junta President (1946-1951) Garcia Espina, a man with a Fascist background, who saw the film as a "tragedy of war", "a document full of drama", that "revive.s" "long-lost wartime emotions" and the "hostile barracks" of "prisoner cap1ps". This seems to corroborate reports that in some Spanish circles Stalag 17 served a mildly revisionist cause in 1964. Indeed, if it were 'hell', 'hostility', 'tragedies' and 'prisoner camps' that were shown in this film, then maybe the hellish German camps were not too bad a place after all. Church censorship Defeated by Spanish practice, Ecclesia had stopped publishing its moralizing censorship reviews. According to the official statistics from the Ministry of Education and Culture, only 18,681 spectators saw the 'praiseworthy' El 296 Take Three heroe solitario (1962, The Spirit ofSt. Louis), while 154,155 were registered for the 'immoral' Confaldasya lo loco (1963), 211,953 for the ambiguous El apartamento (1963), 183,852 for La tentaci6n vive arriba (1964), and 294,623 for Traidor en el infierno (1964). 12 4. The logic of Francoist translation 11"'1955~ Sabrina The version of Sabrina (1955) under consideration is the second oldest Francoist screen translation from the Spanish Billy Wilder corpus that I gathered in Madrid between 2001-2003 and thus constitutes an invaluable source for understanding translation practices in pre-1963 ultra-catholic Spain. 13 It was the first Wilder film Paramount commissioned to the Barcelona-based Voz de Espafia, a famous dubbing studio founded in Republican times (1935) but later co-run by Miguel Angel Puche, a man close to the Franco regime (Avila 2000: 51). Carmen Lombarte took Audrey Hepburn's part as Sabrina, William Holden was dubbed by Juan Manuel Soriano, Humphrey Bogart by Felipe Pefia; other voices were provided by Juan Ibafiez and Maribel Casals (see Vandaele 2006). All Voz de Espafia dubbings of Billy Wilder, although technically excellent, exhibit manipulation of content (ibid). Although the film was meant for audiences over 16, the Francoist manipulation of Sabrina was drastic. The original voice-over introduction of David, Sabrina's husband-tobe, and the youngest of the two rival rich brothers, reveals that he "went through several of the best Eastern colleges for short periods of time, and through several marriages for even shorter periods of time". In Spanish, he merely went through countless "engagements" ("paso tambien por incontables noviazgos"). Comments on David's adventures, made by characters in the story-world, are also streamlined. Thus, the older, more serious and business-minded brother Linus has David listed "as a 600 dollar deduction" on his "tax return", whereas the Spanish David has been assigned a "600 dollar year salary" ("tiene asignado un salario anual de seiscientos dolares"). Similarly, when a maid sarcastically remarks about David that 12 Figures taken from the database of the Instituto de la Cinematografia y de las Artes Audiovisuales. (www.mcu.es/cine/) 13 Only the first dubbing of El gran carnaval (1955) is older. Jeroen Vandaele 297 "he's getting married again ... number four", the translator consistently goes for a "tenemos otro compromiso de matrimonio en puertas", "el numero veinte" ("we've got another engagement coming up ... number twenty"). However pervasive the multiple-marriage theme was in the original version, for dubbing purposes it was decided to switch to "engagements". The abovementioned changes are not mere formalities, as they morally 'upgrade' David, with whom the audience's favourite Sabrina has fallen in love. In the same context, another, more sophisticated joke is sacrificed. As Linus keeps on pushing David to marry "Elizabeth Tyson of the Oyster Bay Tysons", for reasons of financial empire-building, David cynically replies: DAVID: One thing you overlooked. I haven't proposed to her and she hasn't accepted. LINUS: I proposed and Mr Tyson accepted. DAVID: Did you kiss him? DAVID: Olvidas un pequefio detalle: ni yo me he declarado a ella ni ella me ha aceptado. LINUS: Pedf su mano para ti al sefior Tyson y ella concedio. DAVID: ~Pediste su mano? [Backtranslation] DAVID: There's one detail you forget. I haven't declared my love to her, and neither has she accepted me. LINUS: I've asked for her hand and Mr Tyson has given it. DAVID: You've asked for her hand? The parallelism between "I haven't proposed to her and she hasn't accepted" and "I proposed and Mr Tyson accepted" is a fine Wilder quip, which finds no equivalent in the translation. More importantly, David's ironic retort "Did you kiss him?" is removed, and so is its double meaning: (a) David's negative, sarcastic evaluation of Linus' move; (b) the suggestion tha~Linus would indeed propose to a man, and kiss him, for financial reasons. The nice parallelism foregrounds the figurative meaning of "I proposed and Mr Tyson accepted", but David's retort implies a malevolent literal interpretation, which was (until then) less salient for the spectator. Moreover, the literal interpretation immediately takes on a new more metaphorical meaning- sex for money. Why lose this intricate joke? For its homosexual connotations? Such an explanation would be in line with previous findings on Wilder translations (Vandaele 2002), and also throws light on the next fragment, in which Linus tells us why he can't marry. 298 I would be unfaithful to my wife every day of my married life with Vice-Presidents, boards of directors and slide-rule accountants. Take Three Seria infiel a mi esposa todas las noches de mi vida matrimonial con cambios de bolsa, consejos de administracion, reuniones de peritos. Jeroen Vandaele SABRINA: That's a very unusual song. How did they ever think of those words? LINUS: Yes, they are clever, aren't they? ...with stock exchanges, boards of directors, expert meetings. Quite obviously, one can literally be unfaithful to "Vice-Presidents", "accountants" and (even) "(boards of) directors"- definitely an intended joke -,whereas unfaithfulness to "stock exchanges", "(expert) meetings", and "boards of directors" is certainly of a more figurative kind. Note how even the "boards of directors" are personalized in English, through the presence of "Vice-Presidents" and "accountants", and depersonalized in Spanish through "cambios" and "reuniones". It took Sabrina a Parisian course in fashion to become David's favourite. A French baron in her cooking class put it plainly: "you must stop looking like a horse" ("Y le advierto a usted senorita que ya no se lleva la cola de caballo") ("May I say to you, young lady, that ponytails are out of fashion"). But Sabrina does win David's heart and at his own engagement party with Elizabeth Tyson, he and Sabrina arrange a secret date on the family's indoor tennis court. Linus understands the situation in both versions, but much of Linus' practical, even cynical, business wording is lost in translation: If you love her, take her. Que triunfe el amor. Love should prevail. Linus is straightforward when he mentions his own capitalist aspirations, he is an entrepreneur by nature, and "it's purely coincidently that people who've never seen a dime now have a dollar". In dubbing it turns out that "thousands of unemployed who lived in misery suddenly have a nice day's pay" ("miles de desocupados que vivian miseramente ganan de pronto un buen jornal"). However, on a romantic boat tour, while David is still recovering from an accident with broken champagne glasses, tough Linus does seem to melt for Sabrina's charms. Linus has now taken a record player on the boat, but Billy Wilder lets Sabrina comment rather naively on a tune Linus is playing, Yes, we have no bananas!- possibly a caustic musical reference, by Wilder, to Linus' life without women. The Spanish dubbing has Sabrina remain intelligent, and Linus polite. 299 SABRINA: Es una cancioncilla muy pegadiza. LINUS: Si, muy pegadiza. SABRINA: A very catchy tune. LINUS: Yes, a very catchy tune (indeed). Sabrina's subsequent English remark is certainly more carnal than the Spanish: It's so strange to think of you being touched by a woman. Es dificil imaginarse que haya podido querer a alguna mujer ... It's hard to imagine that you'd have loved a woman ... Just before the boat trip, Larrabee Sr. understands from Linus that he plans to conquer Sabrina in order to save David's engagement with Elizabeth Tyson and, hence, the Larrabee-Tyson merger. LARRABEE Sr.: I only hope you remember what to do with a girl... LINUS: It'll come back to me, it's like riding a bicycle. LARRABEE Sr.: Supongo que no habnis olvidado como se conquista a una chica. LINUS: Ya lo recordare ... Es como volver a tocar el piano. LARRABEE Sr.: I guess you haven't forgotten how to win a girl's heart. LINUS: I'll remember ... It's like playing the piano again. For the Francoist plot it seems important that Sabrina makes up her mind, and chooses Linus. Thus, when she returns home with Linus she replies "mucho" ('very much so') when David asks her if she had a good time with his brother ("l,Te has divertido?"). In the original, she is less sure, answering "so-so". As we know from the Junta records, the following scene was cut from the Spanish tape: 300 Take Three SABRINA: Kiss me, David. DAVID: I'd love to, Sabrina. (He kisses her) SABRINA: Again. (Long kiss) That's better. (Cut.) It concerned a passionate kiss, requested by the girl, but the cut also helped to reorient Sabrina toward Linus. Meanwhile, the latter does everything possible to save the merger, and decides to put Sabrina alone on a boat to Paris. However, even the original Sabrina is a romantic comedy after all, a genre whose strongest convention may well be the happy ending. In a very Wilderian, paced ending, David now understands Sabrina has fallen in love with Linus, enters the family conference room where Linus is cancelling marriage and merger alike, declares his love to Elizabeth Tyson, and urges Linus to rush to the transatlantic boat and join his beloved Sabrina to Paris. And so it happens. And all's well that ends well, especially for Francoist narrative purposes. ,.1964 Jeroen Vandaele 301 Interestingly, the British Film Institute also possesses a later script with very detailed "INSTRUCTIONS TO TRANSLATORS" (in capital letters). On its first page we read: . .. In this column are the titles which you are to translate. Each title has been carefully edited to fit the available footage. In general, you will adhere as closely as possible to the English title, but not to the detriment of your adaptation. Try to use all the footage available for your title. A title so short that it can be read more than once is nearly as annoying as one which is too long to be read in the time it remains on the screen. (Emphasis added) The words in italics show how concerned Twentieth Century Fox was with the integrity and quality of translations. At least one example leads me to conclude that the Spanish translator(s) may have used a similar annotated script. Sherman comes home and declines a second invitation from his pretty neighbour. Throughout the picture, the slang words (underlined) are glossed for the translators at the end of each line. Here, the Spanish version literally accepts the gloss. ~ La tentacion vive arriba I The Seven Year Itch The dubbed version of The Seven Year Itch was approved on 13 December 1963 and was premiered on 27 January 1964. This 1955 Twentieth Century Fox film, filmed in Cinemascope, was dubbed in 1963 at Estudios Sevilla Films (then located in Madrid's Chamartfn district), with Vicente Bafi6 interpreting Richard Sherman (Tom Ewell) as the lonely husband who falls under Marilyn Monroe's spell (dubbed by Maria del Puy). Other voices are Mari Pe Castro, Antolin Garcia, Jesus Puente and Ana Diaz Plana. The screenplay was co-written by Billy Wilder and George Axelrod. It was finalized on August I 0, 1954 (British Film Institute archives). One scene from the original script did not make it to the final cut. When Marilyn Monroe and Sherman come out of the cinema theatre, two subway trains come and refresh Marilyn's legs. At the second train's passing, she was to say: Oh, here comes another one. This one's even eooler. Mttst be an express. Don't yoo wish yoo had a skirt? I feel so sorry for yoo in those hot pants. The crossed-out words do not figure on my 2003 DVD-copy of the original. - SHERMAN: This girl's a pistol. ... Whew. It's going to be Quietsville around here tonight, I promise you that. ("=dynamite") - Esa chica es dinamita.... Pfff. Hoy vamos a disfrutar de paz y tranquilidad, te lo prometo. - That girl's dynamite .... Whew, today we're going to enjoy peace and tranquillity, I promise you that. Inside the script, numbered instructions are given in a very specific way. In the introduction, an off-screen narrator tells us about the early Irtdians of Manhattan, who "sent their wives and children away", "every July when the heat and the humidity became unbearable", but "stayed themselves", (9) "to attend to business", (10) "setting traps, fishing, and hunting". The script states: "TRANSLATORS: Before translating the above ~itle and titles 9 and 10, see titles 14, 15 and 16 and make the wording match as closely as possible": (14) Husbands still send their wives and children away and remain behind ... 302 Take Three (15) ... to attend to business, setting traps, fishing ... (16) ... and hunting. At ( 16), images show Native American men turning their backs on their wives and children in the canoes, and lasciviously following the steps of a beautiful young girl passing by. As a matter of fact, such 'echoic structures' -where lines ( 14)-( 16) repeat lines (9)-(1 0)- are found throughout Wilder's work. In an earlier article, I have shown that the dubbings of Some Like It Hot, and especially of The Apartment, often did not pay attention to this linguistic resource, especially when the echoes were aggressive, ironic, and interspersed with indecency (Vandaele 2002). My Seven Year Itch copy is a legal commercial Spanish VHS-tape which still mentions the 'age 18' requirement and the Censorship file number. On this copy, the opening scene has been translated as such- although there is a strange shift in colour quality just before and after the young girl passes by, possibly hinting at a later commercial restoration of the Franco tape. Later it will be shown that the tape bears other, more blatant traces of mutilation and restoration, but let us first focus on the lost echoic structures with an edge. As has already been mentioned, Sherman imagines long conversations with his wife, in which he insists on the 'animal' attraction he exerts on women of all kinds. In an imaginary beach scene parodying From Here to Eternity (Zinnemann, 1953), his wife's best friend Elaine repeats once more what countless women have said before (albeit in Sherman's vivid mind): - Elaine (to Sherman): What is this strange, animal thing you have? It bothers me. It's bothered me since the first time I saw you and it will bother me always - from here to eternity. Elaine: (,Que hay de extrafio en ti que asi me abrasa? Me confundes. Me desconcertaste desde la primera vez que te vi. Me confundinis siempre. toda una eternidad. - - What strange thing is it in you that consumes me? You confuse me. You disconcerted me from the first time I saw you. You will always confuse me, always, eternally. The woman is not allowed to pronounce the word "animal", it seems. The language shifts to a vocabulary in which "something strange" "con- Jeroen Vandaele 303 sumes" and "confuses" her, certainly to the detriment of the funny echoic structures, which in their original verbatim repetition of previous sequences can be interpreted as being thoughts springing from one and the same mind, Sherman's, and not those of the various women. 14 Also in Vandaele (2002), I have demonstrated how Con faldas y a lo loco and El apartamento sought for conservative gendering, even in the post-1963 era. Here again, in the same period of aperturismo ( 1963-1967), even imaginary women are not allowed to refer to animal instincts. The manipulative hypothesis is especially convincing because the original Twentieth Century Fox script insisted on a verbatim rendering, because other harmless echoic mechanisms are maintained ("confundir" appears elsewhere), and because crucial humorous elements are sacrificed, since Wilder's echoic structures mutually enhanced each other, crystallizing into stylistically fore-grounded patterns, or "nexuses", as Van Peer (1988) would call them, and turning Sherman's words into preposterously false renderings of female declarations that we suppose were never made. The dubbing preferred decent female gendering to subtle narrative ironic polyphony. This is to argue against translators who would minimize the semantic impact by referring to the formally insignificant linguistic shifts. In Con faldas y a lo loco, the Spanish version of Marilyn Monroe's character comes across as being far less stupid than Wilder had made her seem in the original. To be sure, Some Like It Hot and The Seven Year Itch were dubbed shortly after the actress' tragic death, and de mortibus nisi bene. But these translational decisions are also consistent with a principle of female decency and respectability, still in vigour in 1964 Spain: women- especially Marilyn Monroe- must not be ridiculous or ridiculed. The Seven Year Itch is the ultimate meta-Monroe film. As well as blending diegetic imagination (Sherman's soliloquy) and mimetic/dramatic representation (Sherman's visualized imagination), Billy Wilder also cruelly blends stereotyped reality (Monroe) and fiction (her nameless character). Some derisive Monroe jokes are translated but a particularly nasty scene is given a strange,twist in dubbing. As Sherman invites her in for a drink, Monroe's drinking problem is not thematized in Spanish. 'What would you like to drink?' ("(.Que va a tomar?"), he asks in Spanish, instead of the original "You do drink, don't you?" The new Spanish question leads to soft innuendo ("Because that's what you came for, right?"), ("Ha venido a eso, (,no?"), but may also fit 14 The fact that the Francoist title translation De aqui ala eternidad is not used, may find its explanation in the Francoist censoring of Zinnemann's beach scene. (http://www. cervantesvirtual.com!historialtertulias/tert_ 4-12-0 l.shtml). 304 Take Three in with what some progressive critics called the picture's conservatism, in that the protagonists dare not face their deeper desire to have intercourse. While Sherman desires to share his bed, as a good husband he consciously hopes to share no more than a drink with Monroe's character. Secondly, there is something absolutely derisive in Monroe's speech quality, child talk with a strong peasant American accent, whereas the Spanish Monroe merely sounds uninformed. Monroe's original childishness and Sherman's astonished reactions are turned into a more affirmative Monroe and a more polite host, respectively. There were, however, more radical manipulations. Even though our tape is the one commercialized in Spain until 2002-2003 (when DVDs took over from videos), at least four parts of the VHS-version show obvious physical traces of censorship cuts. As they are partly repaired, we can often only wonder how much original footage was cut in Francoist times. On the VHS-tape there are at least two visual- and visible, almost clumsy - cuts in the scene when Sherman has invited Monroe over to his apartment without knowing, at that point, that she is not exactly an expert in classical music. He still imagines her to be quite delicate, an amateur of Rachmaninoff. As Sherman stands in his living room, he fantasizes about how she will descend the stairway, enter his apartment, hear him play the grand piano, passionately lean back on the instrument, and confess, in an affected semi-British voice: "Every time I hear it, I go to pieces". In this fantasy, she comes and sits next to him, until he rests, and then they firmly embrace and kiss. Then, in a narratologically interesting way, the camera pulls back from the piano stool behind the back of the real Sherman who is still standing in the middle of the room watching his own fantasy image. In one and the same sequence, the story-world's 'real' bell rings, and the camera moves with Sherman's attention to the 'real' door, through which he expects the 'real' girl to enter. Now, whereas this sequence is originally one continuous shot, the Francoist version displays two cuts, most visibly just before the camera pulls back behind the 'real' Sherman. As a result, the thoroughly creative blending of Sherman's fantasy and reality is undone. It is quite possible that the fantasized scene was entirely cut under Franco, especially since the 'real' piano scene does not echo the one daydreamed by Sherman. Where Wilder made Sherman repeat the words spoken by Monroe in his fantasy ("go to pieces"), in an attempt to seduce her, the Spanish version opts for "se derrite" ('[people] melt') instead of Monroe's imagined words "Sucumbo a su impacto emotivo" ("I succumb to its emotional impact"). This last line may have been a quick, later addition by a Jeroen Vandaele 305 translator who lacked a thorough knowledge of the film. A second major cut concerns the iconic scene in which Monroe finds refreshment in the subway's breeze. The wind lifts her skirt, and Sherman's "Isn't it delicious?" takes on a different connotation when combined with the seconds-long shot of his leering look. In translation, the gaze is removed, and the comment is made off-screen. While the referential ambiguity of the deictic "it" originally meant 'breeze' for Monroe, and 'pair oflegs' for Sherman, and both things for the audience, the vulgarity is deleted in the censorship cut, even on the commercialized tape. 15 A third cut concerns nothing less than the end of the narrative, notoriously important for censors. It is well known that even Hollywood catholic censorship strongly insisted on the happy - moral - ending of a film narrative, and that Billy Wilder made a sport of twisting his often largely subversive stories toward a moral (but implausible) end (if possible, he would even twist the final twist.) While the director had to build in a scene from which it was clear that Monroe and Sherman had not spent the night together, he makes Monroe kiss Sherman on the lips, just before he runs off to his wife. In a reflex, Sherman wants to wipe of the lipstick, just as he said he had done when some secretary had kissed him. - MONROE: Don't wipe it off. If she - (Cut) Nose lo limpie. Si ella cree thinks that's cranberry sauce, tell her que es salsa de tomate, digale que tiene chorlitos en la cabeza. she's got cherry pits in her head. - Don't [polite] wipe it off. If she thinks it's tomato sauce, tell [polite] her that she's a scatterbrain. From the change of sound and image quality, and from the unneccesary cut just before "No se lo limpie" ("Don't wipe it off'') we can deduce with great certainty that this scene, Monroe's declaration oflove, was cut in Francoist times. Hence, the Francoist narrative ended with Sherman waking up on the couch, Monroe waking up in bed, Sherman realizing how much he loved his wife, Monroe wishing him all the best, and Sherman departing to his wife's holiday resort -no sex, and no declaration of love from Monroe. 15 It is thus strongly recommended that researchers ofFrancoist dubbing look for VHStapes, even commercial ones, instead ofDVDs. 306 Take Three 5. Apertura, apres tout The manipulations mentioned - and those we have not had the space to mention- should not lead us to believe that no change had occurred between 1962 and 1963. Unlike completely banned films, censored versions had a considerable impact on the liberalization of film fiction. Indeed, even censored dubbings exposed Spanish audiences to the metropolitan atmosphere and lifestyle that suffuses Billy Wilder's films. Previously taboo elements were now translatable, especially in La tentaci6n vive arriba. In one of his monologues, Sherman mentions that his third-floor neighbours are both male decorators, and they remain so in Spanish. A film that was found immoral only years before was now suddenly available, with many passages scrupulously translated. The dubbed version translates, for instance, that Sherman could have had sex with other "beautiful" women - "Plenty. But plenty." Women had been "throwing themselves" at him for years. "Acres and acres of them." It would have been hard to count them "just offhand." Of course, Monroe plays her part in this too: "When it's hot like this, you know what I do? I keep my undies in the icebox." Given the hot weather, she tries to sleep in the bathtub, "Just lying there up to my neck in cold water .... But there was something wrong with the faucet. It kept dripping ... I pushed my big toe up the faucet. ... The only thing was: that my toe got stuck and I couldn't get it back out again .... No, but thank goodness there was a phone in the bathroom so I was able to call the plumber.... Oh sure! He was very nice- even though it was Sunday." Right from the start, Sherman lies to Monroe, and so he does in Spanish- "Yes, I-I live here alone. All alone." Later on, he ventures into Freudian speculation about humans: "Forty-eight hours ago we were strangers, and now you're here alone with me in my apartment. ... Why? The answer of course lies in the unconscious.... There's nothing to be ashamed of. Under this thin veneer of civilization we're all savages." Sherman's boss unabashedly expresses his distaste for family life- "Well, wait till you've been married as long as /have and you'll be delighted to get rid of them for the summer.... Never felt better in my life." And jokes can be built around suicide, as when the psychoanalyst explains that he has been running fifteen minutes ahead of schedule ever since "his three o'clock patient jumped out of the window in the middle of the session". To be sure, in the Broadway theatre version Sherman actually had sex, and in the Wilder film Monroe wanted sex, but even so, the Francoist dubbing was an astonishingly immoral stretch of discourse for Spain in 1964. Lack of space prevents me from spelling it Jeroen Vandaele 307 out, but I should insist again that all the above-mentioned sequences were faithfully dubbed. A similar relaxation was noticeable in political matters. Stalag 17 (1953, Paramount) was approved for dubbing without cuts (Traidor en el infierno; premiere 16 November 1964). As has already been mentioned, it was distributed by the eminently Francoist production and distribution company CIFESA, which specialized in war films of a less critical kind. Only one censor (Pedro Cobelas) completely opposed the prisoner camp film as it stimulated, in his opinion, "hatred between people/nations". The one thing the translator(s) tried to re-establish- apart from a generally higher register- was some kind of political respect, suppressing expressions like "kraut money", and changing "the Jerries" (the Germans) into the neutral third person plural ("they"). At most, "those filthy Krauts" were translated with "estos malditos teutones" ("those damned Teutonics"). "Those Nazis ain't kosher" became "Estos Nazis no son tontos" ("Those Nazis aren't stupid"). A sarcastic description about life at the barracks - "Crowded but gemiltlich, shall we say?" - was rendered as "Con mucha gente pero ordenado, 1., verdad?" ("Crowded but tidy, right?"). On some occasions, the story seemed to bear too close a resemblance to Spain's internal tensions and past. When the prisoners suspect Sefton to be the German spy, he is warned in two different ways: This war is gonna be over some day. And what do you think we '11 do to Kraut-kissers like you? Algun dia terminara esta guerra y tendras gue exRlicar las cosas ante un tribunal militar. Some day this war will be over and you'll have to exRlain things in militruy court. At the end of the film, Sefton's reply to them is hard. If we ~hould ever run into each other, he says, then let's pretend we've never met before. les retare a un combate de boxeo. I'll challenge you to a boxing match. Or when the Red Cross inspector comes into the barracks, a German officer warns: 308 I have orders to report everyone who complains. Take Three El Comandante lo ha prohibido terminantemente It has been forbidden by the Commander [to talk to the _inspector]. Moral matters have also been altered in this film. "The Russian broads" in the other part of the camp are "women" in Spanish ("las mujeres rusas"). On one occasion, the soldiers are queueing up in front of Sefton's telescope, to peep at the Russian girls. Some complain when the queue gets too long: By the time we get to look they'll be old hags. Cuando lleguemos nosotros senin unas ancianas. By the time we get to look they'll be old/elderly women. Authority-defying jokes about suicide are also difficult. A prisoner snaps at a German officer: Did you ever try 40 sleeping pills? L,No ha probado tomar un somnifero? Did you ever try taking a sleeping pill? And marriage is to be respected: "I never liked you", someone says to Sefton. Sefton replies: Many people say that and then they get married and live happily ever after Mucha gente dice esto y acaban siendo tan buenos amigos gue parecen hermanos. Many people say that and then they become such good friends that they seem brothers. Finally, some gay innuendo is deleted, such as when Sefton denounces the communication ("little lovenotes") between the stoolie and the German officer von Scherbach - they are dubbed as "unas cartas" ("some letters"). Perhaps, then, this translation is morally more conservative than Jeroen Vandaele 309 La tentaci6n vive arriba, although it should be said, again, that most elements- often visual- are left in. Think of the cross-dressing and courtship among male prisoners; think of the two most prominent German officers, with cross-gendered traits (the Commander has a well-built wife). In 1963 and 1964, then, Billy Wilder broadened le dicible et le visible of fiction, to borrow Marc Angenot's famous expression. References Avila, Alejandro (2000) Asi se crean doblajes para cine y television, Barcelona: CIMS. Carnicero, Marisol and Daniel Sanchez Salas (2000) Entorno a Bunuel, Madrid: Academia de las Artes y las Ciencias Cinematograticas de Espafia. 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As a historian, he has published articles on D 'Annunzio esteta per l'informazione (1981) and on Fascist spying in the Soviet Union in the 1930s and 1940s: Roma a Mosca ( 1990). He is author of L 'elenco ( 1998) on Fascist censorship, and particularly that against Jewish authors (in November 2005 partially translated in the German review Sinn und Form), II contratto (2004) on Hitler and Mussolini relations (translated in the USA as Hitler s contract, 2006) and Mussolini razzista (2005), about the racism of the young Fascist leader. Jacqueline A. Hurtley is a Professor of Literature in English at the University of Barcelona. She is a graduate in Spanish with Italian as well as in English Language and Literature and a number of her publications are of a comparative nature. She was awarded the Enrique Garcia y Diaz Research Prize by the Asociaci6n Espafiola de Estudios Anglonorteamericanos (AEDEAN) for her Jose Janes: editor de literatura inglesa (1992). More recently, she has produced chapters on Woolf, Pater, Yeats and Lawrence in Spain in The Athlone Critical Traditions Series: The Reception of British and Irish Authors in Europe. With two colleagues at the University of Barcelona, she has published editions of Austen's Pride and Prejudice and Emily Bronte's Wuthering Heights. She has taught literature in English from the Renaissance up until the present as well as literary theory. She is currently working to finish a biography on Walter Starkie, first British Council Representative in Spain. Katja Krebs completed her PhD at the Performance Translation Centre, University of Hull, and is currently Senior Lecturer in the Department of Music and Drama at the Cardiff School for Creative and Cultural Industries, University ofGlamorgan, where she teaches European theatre history. Her research interests concern the relationship between translation history and