Grade 6 Instructional Writing Rubric* (Last Revised 11/1/2012) Aligned to Next Generation West Virginia Content Standards and Objectives for English Language Arts and Literacy Smarter Balanced Claim 2: Students can produce effective and well-grounded writing for a range of purposes and audiences. ARGUMENTATIVE Development: Elaboration of Evidence Organization Statement of Purpose/Focus 4 Exemplary – Exceeds Standard 3 Proficient – Meets Standard 2 Partial – Approaches Standard 1 Minimal – Begins Standard The writer effectively and consistently focuses on a clearly identified purpose and topic throughout effectively introduces claim(s) The writer adequately focuses on an identified purpose and topic The writer somewhat focuses on an identified purpose and topic The writer uses a clear organizational structure that effectively and clearly sequences claims, reasons and evidence creating unity effectively and consistently uses a variety of transition words, phrases and clauses, along with varied syntax, to: o effectively clarify relationships among claim(s) and reasons provides an effective introduction provides a powerful conclusion that follows from and effectively supports the argument presented The writer effectively supports claim(s) with logical reasoning supplies thorough and convincing support/evidence with many relevant: o facts o definitions o concrete details o quotations/other information o strong examples effectively uses a variety of elaborative techniques effectively uses evidence from sources that is smoothly integrated, comprehensive and concrete The writer uses an evident organizational structure that adequately sequences claims, reasons and evidence creating a sense of completeness adequately uses variety of transition words, phrases and clauses, along with some variation in syntax, to: o adequately clarify relationships among claim(s) and reasons The writer uses an inconsistent organizational structure that partially sequences claims, reasons and evidence with some evident flaws inconsistently uses basic transition words, phrases or clauses with little variety and simple syntax to o partially clarify relationships among claim(s) and reasons The writer uses little or no discernible organizational structure uses few or no transition words, phrases or clauses (limited language structures) with frequent extraneous ideas that may intrude provides a limited introduction provides a conclusion that partially and weakly supports the argument presented The writer partially supports claim(s) with somewhat logical reasoning supplies some relevant support/evidence: o facts o details o quotations o examples provides a minimal or no introduction does not provide a conclusion that supports the argument presented adequately introduces claim(s) provides an adequate introduction provides a conclusion that follows from and adequately supports the argument presented The writer adequately supports claim(s) with logical reasoning supplies adequate support/evidence with sufficient relevant: o facts o definitions o concrete details o quotations/other information o sufficient examples adequately uses some elaborative techniques adequately uses some evidence from sources that is integrated, though citations may be general or imprecise introduces claim(s), but claim(s) may be unclear and unfocused uses weak or uneven elaborative techniques uses evidence from sources that is weakly integrated, and citations, if present, are uneven The writer shows a minimal focus on purpose and topic, and response may be very brief shows an attempt to introduce claim(s), but claim(s) may be confusing or ambiguous The writer attempts to develop claim(s) but without logical reasoning provides little or no relevant support/evidence: o facts o details o quotations o examples uses little or no elaborative techniques uses little or no evidence from sources or evidence that is erroneous or irrelevant Language and Vocabulary Conventions The writer clearly and effectively expresses ideas, using precise words, phrases and clauses to manage the logic and clarity of the argument uses academic and domain-specific vocabulary that is clearly appropriate for the audience and purpose effectively establishes and maintains a formal style The writer demonstrates an effective command of conventions: o demonstrates effective use of capitalization, punctuation, and spelling, with insignificant errors that need little or no editing: commas, parentheses, dashes to set off nonrestrictive/parenthetical elements o demonstrates few, if any, errors in grammar and usage: effective and mostly correct use of pronouns in proper case subjective objective possessive effective and mostly correct use of intensive pronouns almost always recognizes and corrects inappropriate shifts in pronoun number/person almost always recognizes and corrects vague pronouns o demonstrates few, if any, errors in sentence formation The writer adequately expresses ideas, employing a mix of precise with more general words, phrases and clauses to support the logic of the argument uses domain-specific vocabulary that is generally appropriate for the audience and purpose adequately establishes and maintains a formal style The writer demonstrates an adequate command of conventions: o demonstrates adequate use of capitalization, punctuation, and spelling, with few errors that need editing but do not detract from the narrative: commas, parentheses, dashes to set off nonrestrictive/parenthetical elements o demonstrates some minor errors in grammar and usage: adequate and frequently correct use of pronouns in proper case subjective objective possessive adequate use of intensive pronouns frequently recognizes and corrects inappropriate shifts in pronoun number/person frequently recognizes and corrects vague pronouns o demonstrates some minor errors in sentence formation The writer unevenly expresses ideas, using simplistic words, phrases and clauses to support the logic of the argument uses domain-specific vocabulary that may at times be inappropriate for the audience and purpose partially establishes a formal style The writer demonstrates a partial command of conventions: o demonstrates inconsistent use of capitalization, punctuation, and spelling, with frequent errors that need editing to clarify the narrative: commas, parentheses, dashes to set off nonrestrictive/parenthetical elements o demonstrates frequent errors in grammar and usage: inconsistent use of pronouns in proper case subjective objective possessive inconsistent use of intensive pronouns sometimes recognizes and corrects inappropriate shifts in pronoun number/person sometimes recognizes and corrects vague pronouns o demonstrates frequent errors in sentence formation The writer expresses vague, unclear or confusing ideas, rarely using words, phrases and clauses that support the argument uses limited language or domainspecific vocabulary rarely establishes a formal style The writer demonstrates a lack of command of conventions o demonstrates incorrect use of capitalization, punctuation, and spelling, with frequent and severe errors that need editing to convey the narrative: commas, parentheses, dashes to set off nonrestrictive/parenthetical elements o demonstrates frequent and severe errors in grammar and usage: pronouns are not in proper case subjective objective possessive incorrect use of intensive pronouns does not recognize and correct inappropriate shifts in pronoun number and person does not recognize and correct vague pronouns o demonstrates frequent and severe errors sentence formation *This instructional writing rubric is designed as an instructional tool for teachers and students to use as they begin implementation of the Next Generation WV Content Standards and Objectives in the classroom. The existing WV Writing Rubric, aligned to the 21 st Century WV Content Standards and Objectives, will continue to be used to assess student writing produced for WESTEST 2 Online Writing, a component of WESTEST 2, through 2014. Classroom teachers, schools and school systems implementing the Next Generation Content Standards prior to 2014 should use this instructional rubric to assess student growth in writing relevant to the expectations set forth in the Next Generation Standards prior to 2014-15 when the SMARTER Balanced Assessment is scheduled to be administered as the state summative assessment.