Deep Reading Deep Analytical Thinking Deep Writing About Reading Prepared for Scholastic by Laura Robb Writing to Read Steve Graham and Michael Hebert Vanderbilt University Evidence for How Writing Can Improve Reading A Report from Carnegie Corporation of New York www.carnegie.org/literacy The Recommendations Have Students Write About Their Reading • Write to Build Prior knowledges • Write Personal Reactions, Analyzing and Interpreting the Text) • Write Summaries of a Text • Write Notes About a Text • Answer Questions About a Text in Writing or Create and Answer Written Questions For a Text From: “A Path to Better Writing: Evidence-Based Practices in the Classroom” by Steve Graham and Karen R. Harris. “”For instance, when elementary –grade students are directed to write about material thy are reading, (versus students who mainly read and reread or study this material) their comprehension of the text jumps 24 percentile points, whereas writing about content material presented in class results in a 9 percentile-point jump on measures of learning” page 381 In The Reading Teacher, January/February 2016. 2 Talk About Reading Improves Writing About Reading Six kinds of Talk to integrate Into Your Lessons • Turn-and-Talk:1 to 3 minutes • Whole-Class Discussion: 10 to 20 minutes • Partner Talk: 5 to 15 minutes • Small-Group Discussion: 10 to 20 minutes • In-the-Head Conversations: while reading • Teacher-Student Talk, Conferring to Scaffold: 5-Minutes Four Informal Responses to Literautre Visualize and Draw. Have students draw the images they see after reading and/or listening to a poem. Word Four Words: Ask students to write in their notebooks the first four words that come to mind after hearing the poem. Next, have students choose one of the words that resonated with them and write about how the word connects to the poem. Partners share and discuss their written responses. Choice and Mood or Tone: Have each student reread the poem silently and then choose four to ten words and short phrases that contribute to the mood or tone of the poem. Partners share their lists and discuss the mood or tone the words imply or suggest. Feelings: Have students jot two feelings they experienced while listening to the poem. Invite students to compare their feelings to the feelings they believe are part of the authorʼs purpose. Are they alike? Different? Explain. 3 From The Declaration of Independence We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness.--That to secure these rights, Governments are instituted among Men, deriving their just powers from the consent of the governed, --That whenever any Form of Government becomes destructive of these ends, it is the Right of the People to alter or to abolish it, and to institute new Government, laying its foundation on such principles and organizing its powers in such form, as to them shall seem most likely to effect their Safety and Happiness. PRIOR KNOWLEDGE On December 7, 1941, the day of the Japanese attack on Pearl Harbor, there were more than 110,000 people of Japanese descent living on the West Coast of the United States. Within a few months, this entire population was gone. Out of fears of espionage and sabotage along the Pacific, the government removed Japanese American men, women, and children from their homes and placed them in internment camps in the interior of the country. Two-thirds of the internees were U.S. citizens. None of them was ever charged with a crime. 4 IN RESPONSE TO EXECUTIVE ORDER 9066 ALL AMERICANS OF JAPANESE DESCENT MUST REPORT TO RELOCATION CENTERS Dwight Okita Dear Sirs: Of course Iʼll come. Iʼve packed my galoshes and three packets of tomato seeds. Denise calls them love apples. My father says where weʼre going they wonʼt grow. I am a fourteen-year-old girl with bad spelling and a messy room. If it helps any, I will tell you I have always felt funny using chopsticks and my favorite food is hot dogs. My best friend is a white girl named Denise-we look at boys together. She sat in front of me all through grade school because of our names: OʼConnor, Ozawa. I know the back of Deniseʼs head very well. I tell her sheʼs going bald. She tells me I copy on tests. We are best friends. I saw Denise today in Geography class. She was sitting on the other side of the room. “Youʼre trying to start a war,” she said, “giving secrets away to the Enemy, Why canʼt you keep your big mouth shut?” I didnʼt know what to say. I gave her a packet of tomato seeds and asked her to plant them for me, told her when the first tomato ripened sheʼd miss me. From: Celebrate America in Poetry and Art, Hyperion, 1994 5 November 16, 1942 Dear Miss Breed, Guess who? Yup it's ole unreliable again, none other than yours truly, Tetsuzo. Gosh the wind's been blowing all night and all morning. Kinda threatening to blow the roofs down. Dust is all over the place. Gives everything a coating of fine dust. The food has been all right except for quantity...The medical situation here is pitiful. For that matter in all three camps. The main and the only hospital is at Camp I 15 miles away. Here in Camp III there is one young doctor with not too much experience and one student doctor working in an emergency clinic. They are supposed to take care of approximately 5000 people!!!! and they (the Big shots) wonder why we squawk about inadequate medical attention. No I haven't hiked to the river yet. I'd better do it soon cause there is going to be a fence around this camp!!!!!! 5 strands of barbed wire!!!!!!!!!! They say it's to keep the people out. . . . It's also to keep out cattle. Where in the cattle countries do they use 5 strands of barbed wire?? If they don't watch out there's going to be trouble. What do they think we are, fools?? At Santa Anita at the time of the riot the armored cars parked outside of the main gates, pointed the heavy machine guns inside and then the army had the gall to tell us that the purpose of that was to keep the white folks from coming in to mob the Japs. Same thing with the guards on the watchtowers. They had their machineguns pointed at us to protect us from the outsiders, hah, hah, hah, [I'm] laughing yet. I am sending you a few things in appreciation for what you have done for me as well as for my sister and all the rest.... Your nameplate I made from mesquite as are also the lapel pins. However the dark pin is made from a pine knot from Santa Anita. The rest are all Poston Products. I've got to close now so I can make the outgoing mail today. Very truly yours, Tetsuzo P.S. Have a nice Thanksgiving dinner. P. P.S. Do you think you could send me some Welch's peanut brittle 6 VOCABULARY IS COMPREHENSION FACTS TO CONSIDER NAEP Results: • Fourth graders who scored above the 75% in reading comprehension also had the highest average vocabulary scores. • Fourth graders who scored at or below the 25% in reading comprehension had the lowest average vocabulary scores, • In grade 8 in 2011 and in grade12 in 2009, reading comprehension and vocabulary scores had the same pattern as fourth graders. THE POWER OF MEANINGFUL TALK • A stream of talk to babies soon after birth, called parentese, influences vocabulary development. • Children from high poverty homes hear 600 words an hour. Children from middle class and professional homes hear up to 2100 words per hour. • The literacy gap starts at birth and gap is huge by the time children enter kindergarten: children living in poverty have heard 13 million words; children from middle class and professions homes, 48 million words. HOW TO BUILD STUDENTSʼ WORD POWER • Present daily 10 to 15 minute lessons in all subjects (CCSS supports this). • Relate lessons to texts and materials students read. • Included in learning at school is the fact that students gain 1,000 to 4,000 new words a year. We need to push the word-learning needle closer to 4,000 words a year. • Study roots, prefixes, and suffixes to give students the tools to unlock meaning from unfamiliar words and at the same time introduce them to many general academic words. • Weave into word study general academic words (7,000) because these words are in texts for all subjects and support studentsʼ reading of gracedlevel complex texts. 7 • Search the number of times that general academic words can be found in one million words of a text and the results are 71.7%; the frequency for social studies domain specific words per million is 9.7% (Hebert & Lubliner, 2008). • Teach school-task words as these fall into the general academic words: define, compare, contrast, evaluate, support, explain, defend, sort, categorize, show, sequence, infer, restate, conclude, brainstorm, etc. • Use lists of general academic words to help you link specific words to studentsʼ reading. Always teach in context. • Teach figurative language and connotative meanings of words as a reading comprehension tool that expands studentsʼ understanding and ability to visualize. • Teach the forms and multiple meanings of words: combine, combination, combining, combined. • Show students how to use context to determine meaning of unfamiliar words. 8 Some Important Facts About Vocabulary • Words are part of networks: synonyms, antonyms, families, concepts, forms of words. • With narratives, teach synonym sets. • With informational texts teach topic clusters--topically related words. • Children learn concrete words faster than abstract words. • Try to use pictures or the real object to teach concepts. • The number of words in the English language outnumbers teachersʼ opportunities to teach them one-by-one. • Avoid teaching one word—always teach in related groups. Narrative Synonyms and Antonyms cold hot frigid toasty chilly scorching icy sweltering shivery sizzling freezing tropical amazed, fascinated, marveled: enchanted, enthralled, spellbound, captivated, transfixed Word Families relate, related, relates, relating relative, relatable, relation(s), relationship, interrelated, correlate, correlation, age-related Word Concepts Instruments: musician, conductor, doctor, carpenter, 9 Multiple Forms of Words: combine, combining, combination, combinabl Tips for Teaching Words • Pre- teach new and challenging words—engage students in talk about the words. • Teach figurative language to help students visualize a concept and comprehend meaning. • Teach roots, prefixes, suffixes. • Teach words found in narrative texts in networks or related groups: Communication (verbs): think, argue, explain, guess, say Emotions (adjectives): glad, jealous, angry, happy, sad Movement (verbs): go, send, stay stop, run, jog, amble Traits (adjectives): funny, smart, courageous, shy, selfish, helpful • Teach words found in informational texts with related topical words Amazon Rain Forest: canopy, kelp beds, temperate rain forest, tropical rain forests, people, plant life, animal life, fresh water • Teach word families Teach Vocabulary With Intentionality The Big Ten 1. Promote Meaningful Talk 2. Study Word Parts: Roots, Prefixes, Suffixes 3. Attend to Figurative Language and Connotative Meanings 4. Situate Words in Various Contexts 5. Use New Vocabulary in Writing 6. Build Concepts 7. Make Connections 8. Tap Into Technology 9. Expect and Promote Independent Reading 10. Deliver Daily Read Alouds 10 Synonyms, Antonyms, Multiple Meanings Name______________________________________________Date_________ Directions: 1. Discuss the words with a partner and think of synonyms and two antonyms. 2. Complete the chart below by providing two synonyms and two antonyms for each word and two situations the word could be used in. You can use an online dictionary to check and adjust your work. 3. Choose three words and use the word and a situation in a sentence to show you understand its meaning. Synonym-Antonym Chart Word Synonyms Antonyms Situations enemy 1. 1. 1. 2. 2. 2. 1. 1. 1. 2. 2. 2. 1. 1. 1. 2. 2. 2. 1. 1. 1. 2. 2. 2. 1. 1. 1. 2. 2. 2. ripened Barbed wire gall appreciation Complete sentences here. 11 Roots, Prefixes and Suffixes Ten- Fifteen-Minutes-a Day-Lessons Days 1 to 3: students pair-share and generate words for the list; the teacher writes these on chart paper or projects them onto a whiteboard from a computer. Students use their knowledge of the root and affix to define each word and check, in a dictionary. Encourage students to challenge words if they feel the words come from a different root. Days 1 and 2: generate words Day 3: use root and affixes to define each word on the list. Here is the list of words that students generated over three days: spectacle: something to look at spectacular: related to spectacle spectator: person who sees spectacles: small seeing--eyeglasses respect: see or look at again respectable: capable of seeing again disrespect: opposite of seeing again inspect: see into inspector: a person who sees into special? challenged word: not from spec, to see, but from specialis, Latin, kind or sort inspection: the act of seeing into inspected: past tense of seeing into 12 Day 4: students and teacher discuss situations a word might be used in, refine the wordʼs meaning, and the teacher models how to use the word and situation to compose a sentence that shows an understanding of the word. Word Situations 1. spectacle: something to look at; pageant, circus 1. evaluating a spectacle 2. spectator: person who sees 2. an observer or critic 3. spectacles: small seeing—eyeglasses 3. used to see better 4. respect: see or look at again 4. to honor a person; be polite 5. respectable: capable of seeing again 5. show respect to people 6. disrespect: opposite of seeing again 6. answering back; not listening 7. inspect: see into 7. a microscope; building; clothing; a room; restaurant 8. inspector: a person who sees into 8. check safety in building; a restaurant, or hospital 9. inspection: the act of seeing into 9 & 10. checking out a room, nursing home, hospital, building, restaurant 10. inspected: past tense of seeing into One of the teacherʼs sentences: The school pageant was a spectacle the audience loved because all 200 students were singing for the audience. 13 Day 5: partners select two words and write sentences that reflect an understanding of the word and not simply the wordʼs definition. Pairs share their sentences. Here are two student sentences: 1. Every time mom reads a book or magazine she puts on her spectacles. 2. The class showed respect for the visitor by offering a seat, listening to her talk, and asking thought-provoking questions. Notice that with one root, students learn several words as well as prefixes and suffixes. Help students learn a few prefixes a week because prefixes change the meaning of a root. ENGLISH LANGUAGE ARTS ROOT MEANING EXAMPLE act (Latin) do actor, transact aud (Latin) hear audience, audiovisual clqr (Latin) clear clarity, declarative gen (Greek) birth, race genocide, generate, log (Greek) word prologue, dialogue narr (Latin) tell narrate, narative nun, noun (Latin) declare novel, innovate onym (Greek) name antonym, synonym struct (Latin) build structure, deconstruct urb (Latin) city suburb, urbane 14 SCIENCE ROOT MEANING EXAMPLE aero (Greek) air aerodynamics, aerate baro (Greek) weight barometer, isobar cardi (Greek) heart cardiac, cardiology corp (Latin) body corpse, corpuscule geo (Greek) earth geology, geophysical kine, cine (Greek) movement kinetic, hyperkinesia lys (Greek) break down electrolysis, catalyst opt (Latin) eye optical, optic scope (Greek) to see microscope, telescope therm (Greek) heat thermonuclear, t SOCIAL STUDIES ROOT MEANING EXAMPLE arch (Greek) chief monarchy, oligarchy belli (Latin) war bellicose, rebellion chron (Greek) time chronological, chronicle dem (Greek) people democracy, demagogy dogma (Greek) opinion dogma, dogmatic fug (Latin) flee fugitive, refugee mand (Latin) order mandate, remand migr (Latin) Change, move immigrant, migratory poli (Greek) city polis, political reg (Latin) guide, rule reign, regime 15 PREFIXES AND SUFFIXES Prefix Meaning Suffix Part of Speech ad, a, ac, af, ag, to, toward able, ible (adj.) adjective circum around ance, ence noun dis, dif, di apart, not er, or (noun) noun in in, into, not ful adjective inter between, among fy (verb) verb pro forward sion, tion noun re again, back ive adjective trans across, beyond ous adjective un not tude noun an, ar, at, as 16 Make and Define Multi-Syllable Words Name________________________________________Date________________ Directions: • Play this word game with a partner. See if you can make at least six words using a prefix and a root, a prefix, root, and suffix, or a root and suffix. • Use your knowledge of the word parts to define each word. You might have to check the meaning of a prefix in a print or online dictionary. Prefix Root Suffix dis flect—Latin, bend tion, ation, sion in spec—Latin, see ous re port—Latin, carry Ing, ed de cred—Latin, believe ible ex liber—Latin, free or, er vor—Latin, eat ate y ________________________________________________________________ 17 18