5 Modes of Writing Expository Persuasive Descriptive Narrative Reflective 1 What is an expository essay? It … …Gives facts. …Explains. …Gives steps in a process. …Presents ideas in logical order or correct sequence. To guide readers into a clea understanding of the subjec 3rd person (do not use “I”) 2 Strategies Know your topic – Find all appropriate facts about your topic – Use only the best information Organize points by order of importance Make sure facts clearly relate to the topic Be choosey/picky because you can’t tell everything 3 Strategies For supporting details: Use statistics, examples, and reasons Anticipate your readers’ questions and address those questions before they are asked. 4 What are the key words that show it is an expository prompt? Most people enjoy some type of music. Think about your favorite type of music and explain why you like that particular type of music. 2. Sometimes even the best drivers can get lost at times. Explain how you would direct a lost man to get back to the interstate highway from your neighborhood. Tell how to make a hamburger. 1. YOU WILL FIND THESE WORDS IN THE PROMPT EXPLAIN or TELL HOW. 5 What is a descriptive essay? Sensory images are used to describe what the writer sees, hears, smells, touches, and tastes. It paints a clear description of people, places, objects, or events. 6 Strategies Appeal to the reader’s senses Close your eyes and try to be there Look for the little things other people miss Practice observing people, situations, and events Use words that double as images rather than just descriptive words 7 Strategies Use vivid adjectives and adverbs It is all about word choice Compare and contrast things that are similar and different 8 What are the key words that show it is a descriptive prompt? 1. Describe your bedroom. Imagine telling someone who has never visited you. 2. There are many tourist spots to visit in Birmingham. Describe your favorite place to take visitors. You may want to tell what you will see, hear, smell and how you feel when you are there. Tell us what you see, hear, smell, taste, and feel on Christmas morning. YOU MUST DESCRIBE OR TELL WHAT A PERSON CAN SEE, HEAR, SMELL, TASTE OR FEEL. 9 What is a persuasive essay? You are asked to prove something. Give reasons why. Present arguments against your reasons. Show them to be false. Take a stand Ask or call for an action. Never use the word “you” 10 Strategies Make sure you have all your facts first Make sure the your evidence does not lack credibility Use only strong and convincing facts Consider all sides but argue in favor of only one side Make your opinions strong by backing them up with strong facts (impress readers with your strong facts) 11 What are the key words that show it’s a persuasive prompt? 1. 2. 3. Persuade a close friend to donate blood as part of a blood drive that your school is sponsoring for the Red Cross. Some of your kid brothers friends have taken up smoking and want him to start too. Write a convincing letter to your kid brother to not take up this habit. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper telling why citizens in Birmingham should support a tax increase benefiting the local public schools. YOU WILL NOTICE THE WORDS PERSUADE, CONVINCE OR TELL WHY SOMEONE SHOULD DO SOMETHING. 12 What is a narrative? A narrative… • Tells a story. • Has chronological order and sequence of events. • Has action. • Has conflicts or problems. • Has dialogue. • Has characters. • Has a definite beginning, middle and end. • Using first person is okay (I, me, my) 13 Strategies Plan your story with conflict and resolution in mind. Think of the conflict as a problem or a lesson to be learned Include all important elements: characters, setting, events or plot, conflict, resolution. To show characterization use dialogue 14 What are the key words that show that these are narrative prompts? You and your friend find a big box that is labeled “Do Not Open.” Your friend wants to open the box. Write a story about what happens next. Tell about a time when you made a serious mistake. Two little girls found a wallet on the sidewalk. Tell what happened next. NOTE THE WORDS: WRITE A STORY TELL ABOUT A TIME, or or TELL WHAT HAPPENED NEXT. 15 Reflective Mode The writer makes a connection between a personal observation and a universal idea – Love, courage, freedom, betrayal, etc. A way of thinking to explore your learning A way of making meaning out of what you learned Reflective writing is an activity that includes description (what, when, who) and analysis (how, why, what if). – It is descriptive and expository put together. 16 Strategies Think of an interaction, event or episode you experienced that can be connected to the topic Describe what happened What was your role? What feelings and perceptions surrounded the experience? 17 Strategies How would you explain the situation to someone else? What might this experience mean in the context of your course? What other perspectives, theories or concepts could be applied to the situation? 18 What are the key words that show it’s a reflective prompt? How can you take what you have learned and apply it to your own life? If you could go back in time two or three years, what advice would you give yourself? Why is it important for students in a school to have positive relationships with each other? NOTE the words: HOW, [what] IF, Why 19 Ready to write? First determine what type prompt you have. You should read your prompt at least “three” times. Expository--explain, tell how Descriptive--describe Persuasive---persuade or convince Narrative-- tell about a time when, tell a story Reflective—a combination of descriptive and expository Use your scratch paper to brain storm and then make an outline, or web, for a five paragraph essay. 20 Think – Brainstorm-PACO P-What is your purpose? A- Who is your audience? C- Content --What are your ideas for details, facts, or reasons? O- Organization --Think how you want to structure your paper. Jot down these ideas. NOW START YOUR OUTLINE, OR WEB! 21 FIRST PAPAGRAPH Introduce your topic Give 3 details, reasons, facts or steps in a process You will talk about in your paper. KEY IDEA D(details) P (reasons) E (facts/steps) KEY IDEA D(details) P (reasons) E (facts/steps) KEY IDEA D(details) P (reasons) E (facts/steps) explanation explanation explanation elaboration elaboration elaboration examples examples examples KEY IDEA KEY IDEA KEY IDEA explanation explanation explanation elaboration elaboration elaboration examples examples examples Conclusion Summarize the points you made in the essay go back to the introduction 22 Let’s prepare to write an essay! Here’s the prompt. There are many good and bad things about being in the seventh grade. Explain what these things are. What kind of prompt do we have? Did you say expository? You’re right! 23 What’s one thing you’d change about your appearance if you could? What’s one character trait you’d change? 24 Many people believe that television violence has a negative effect on society because it promotes violence. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response. 25 Some people feel that the public school system does not adequately prepare students for the real world. Identify one improvement you think schools need to make in order to better prepare students for life after high school. Write a letter to the school board in which you describe this improvement and explain why it is needed. 26 Most people have a place where they feel comfortable and relaxed. Think of a place where you feel comfortable and relaxed. Picture it in your mind. In a composition, describe this place for your classmates so that they can imagine what it is like and how you feel there. 27 Think about an event in your life that taught you an important lesson. Write a narrative in which you tell what happened and how you learned a lesson. Be sure to include specific details so that a reader can follow your story. 28 Use your scratch paper Jot down a few transitions. What are transitions? Words or phrases that connect ideas or introduce the topic. Such as one, if, although, however, finally, in conclusion, first, second, next, additionally,consequently Make an outline or web. Develop a 1-3-1 plan. One Paragraph for introThree paragraphs for the body – One paragraph for the conclusion. 29 This is an important step! Don’t try to write your paper without doing an outline first. Why?! •You will be graded on organization. 30 Introductions for expository, descriptive and persuasive essays should…. Grab the reader’s attention. Or -- Let the reader know what you’re going to talk about. Or--Show a plan for what you’re going to be talking about in the three body paragraphs. Or --State what the audience will learn in this essay. 31 Sample Introduction Although I have taken many wonderful vacations, my trip with my two best friends to New York City is one I’ll always remember. This was a fantastic trip because of the sights we saw, the people we met, the plays we enjoyed, and the laughs we shared. What’s the topic? What’s the plan? Each part of the plan will be developed into paragraphs. 32 After you make your web or outline, start writing your introduction. Leave space at the top for two more lines. ( It won’t count against you.)You might come back later to insert a little background information in the introduction. Remember to grab interest and show the plan of your paper in the introduction. 33 Summary Identify your prompt Plan your work with an outline. Give your work a title with an action word. Grab interest in the beginning Build your paragraph with explanations, examples, & evidence following the topic statement or key statement. Use strong action words Use vivid adjectives Use metaphors Finished? Reread & reread to improve and clarify. 34 Credits Created by Chris Browning for Arrington Middle School, Birmingham City Schools Maureen Autum Step Up to Writing Program Birmingham City Schools workshops presenters Jerrie Foster, Gail Brown, Theresa Thomas, Jacquelyn Washington, Janet McMiller State of Alabama workshop presentations Rhonda Silmon –Teaching clear thinking before writing. Lecture Demonstration with Rick Shelton & Write Where You Are! 35