Cause/Effect Rubric, Spring 2014
SCORE INTRODUCTION
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Responds to the topic appropriately
Has a strong opening sentence that creatively and/or effectively uses at least 1 of 7 strategies to create interest
Includes important details
Thesis clearly identifies a
C/E relationship; has a clear purpose that effectively moves beyond establishing C/E relationships and provides a thoughtful and meaningful “so what”
Responds to the topic appropriately
Has opening sentence that uses strategies to create interest
Thesis clearly identifies a
C/E relationship; has a purpose that moves beyond establishing categories and provides a thoughtful and meaningful “so what”
Responds to the topic
Has an opening sentence that does not effectively create interest
Omits important details
Thesis may only loosely
BODY PARAGRAPHS
Always uses strong topic sentences
Explains clearly and fully how the details support the topic sentence; C/E explanations are welldeveloped, informative, and useful.
C/E explanations are logical, clear, and distinct.
All causes and effects are supported with relevant and quality details that go beyond the obvious and predictable
Transitions are well-crafted and successfully link the causes and effects.
Always uses topic sentences
Has several details that support the topic.
Explains clearly and/or fully how the details support the topic sentence; C/E explanations are welldeveloped, informative, and useful.
C/E explanations are logical, clear, and distinct.
Supporting details and information are relevant but one key cause or effect is not sufficiently supported.
Transitions link causes and effects
Uses topic sentences that omit important facts
Has few details that support the topic
Has undeveloped and/or unclear explanation of details
CONCLUSION
Effectively uses one of the strategies for writing conclusions
Has strong restatement of thesis idea without relying on simple rephrasing
Effectively addresses the implications of the C/E analysis
Uses one of the strategies for writing conclusions
Has restatement of thesis idea without relying on simple rephrasing.
Echoes the ideas in the introduction and the body paragraphs without restating them.
Addresses the implications of the C/E analysis
STYLE AND
DOCUMENTATION
Uses DIDLS and/or other rhetorical strategies effectively
Avoids passive verbs, uses strong action verbs effectively
Varies sentence structure effectively
Integrates secondary sources effectively (if used)
Has error-free
documentation and does not plagiarize
Uses appropriate word choice
Avoids passive verbs
Varies sentence structure
Integrates secondary sources effectively (if used)
Has error-free documentation and does not plagiarize
CONVENTIONS
Indicates solid grasp of standard writing conventions and uses them effectively to enhance readability
Does not use run-ons or fragments
Parallelism, commas, and modifiers are used appropriately.
Has few minor and no major grammatical errors.
Conforms to all the format requirements of the assignment
Suggests reasonable control over a limited range of standard writing conventions
Does not use run-ons or fragments
Parallelism, commas, and modifiers are used appropriately.
Has several minor and no major grammatical errors
Conforms to all the assignment’s format requirements
Has restatement of thesis idea but relies some on simple rephrasing.
Relies on restating the ideas in the introduction and the body paragraphs.
Integrates secondary sources effectively (if used)
Has minor word choice errors
Uses some passive
Has some control over a limited range of standard writing conventions.
Has comma errors
Uses run-ons and/or
Cause/Effect Rubric, Spring 2014
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identify a C/E
Omits important details
relationship; thesis statement that may not clearly convey purpose and/or “so what”
Responds to the topic
Has opening sentence that makes no attempt or does little to engage the reader
Thesis statement is vague, unclear, confusing, or missing
Supporting details and information are relevant but key causes or effects are not sufficiently supported.
More transitions are needed to link causes and effects
Topic sentences do not identify the subject
Has few details that support the topic and/or details that don’t support the topic
Has undeveloped and/or unclear explanation
Classification may be poorly developed and/or lack usefulness
Categories may overlap
Is predictable and/or weak in expressing the implications of the C/E analysis
Rephrases the thesis idea
Is predictable and/or does not address implications of the C/E analysis verbs.
Predictable or ineffective phrasing or sentence structure
May have minor errors in Works Cited or parenthetical references (if used)
Does not plagiarize.
Doesn’t always integrate quotes (if quotes are used).
Has word choice errors.
Uses some passive verbs.
Phrasing is repetitive or confusing
Little awareness of audience or task; tone may be inappropriate
Uses little sentence variety; reading is monotonous
Has minor errors in
Works Cited and parenthetical
standard English
Conforms to most of
faulty parallelism
Demonstrates a pattern of errors in more than one category of the assignment’s format requirements
Has little control over writing conventions.
Has frequent and serious errors in more than one category of standard English
Does not meet two or more of the assignment’s format requirements. references.
Does not plagiarize.
All assignments must be submitted on or before their due dates. No late work will be accepted. If you are absent, you may email your work on the due date and bring in a hard copy on the day you return. Plagiarism can result in a 0 for this assignment as well as disciplinary consequences.
All papers must be in MLA format with a title and MLA headings. Papers should be typed in 12 pt., Times New Roman font, double-spaced. Papers should be a minimum of 500 words.
20=100
19=96
18=93
17=89
12=72
11=68
10=65
Below 10 conference required
16=86
15=82
14=79
13=75