Year 6: Biography Rubric – Written Report Term 2, 2014 Task You are to write a biography on a FAMOUS AUSTRALIAN PERSON (MALE OR FEMALE). They can be living or deceased. When you have decided who your person will be, you must inform your class teacher. (A list is attached) You must follow the techniques of biography writing learnt in class to develop your biography appropriately. The Biography PowerPoint will be posted onto the Class Weebly for your review if needed. You need to identify why your person is important/notable and therefore your choice writer of someone who is an outstanding leader in the Australian community / or not/ why and why not. Your biography must follow relevant and accurate events in chronological order including accurate and relevant key facts, events and/or examples which reveal the subject’s character. The tone of the text is engaging and descriptive, supports the writer’s purpose, engaging and provides an overall positive image of the famous Australian. Year level appropriate writing conventions are followed including correct spelling, accurate punctuation, understanding and consistent application of capitalization skills, correct grammar which contributes to clarity and style of the text The work done is that of the student and no plagiarism is evident or assistance from other family members. The biography is publishable All writing is to be completed in class. Final copy can be handwritten or typed (Ariel 12 point font / 1.5 line spacing). You are welcome to hand your teacher a DRAFT COPY of your biography for comment and assistance one week prior to final hand in date. Your teacher will identify your spelling and grammatical errors and debrief you with ways to improve your final copy. No Drafts will be accepted the week the final copy is due. No new drafts will be accepted after: _____________ (Teacher to date) Due Date of Final Copy: Friday 23rd May, 2014. Marks will be taken for late submission. Year 6: Biography Rubric – Written Report Term 2, 2014 Criteria Very High Achievement High Achievement Sound Achievement Developing The biography identifies why this person is important. The writing shows clear and thorough insight into the person’s character (motivations, opinions, personality traits, achievements and obstacles) and supports the writer’s choice of outstanding leader. Information about the person’s character is evident which clearly support the writer’s choice of outstanding leader. Information about the person’s character is provided which loosely connect to the writer’s choice of outstanding leader. Limited information about the person’s character is provided which may not clearly connect, or only superficially connects, to the writer’s choice of outstanding leader. The biography follows relevant and accurate events in chronological order. Strong and insightful descriptions of accurate and relevant key facts, events and examples are given in logical order, which reveal the subject’s character. Accurate and relevant key facts, events and/or examples are given in logical order, which reveal the subject’s character. Key facts, events and/or examples are simplistic and loosely connected the subject’s character. A logical order is somewhat maintained. Facts, events and/or examples are limited and may not connect to the subject’s character. Events are difficult to follow as a logical order has not been maintained. The tone of the text is engaging and descriptive. The tone of the text is thoughtful and clearly supports the writer’s purpose. The writer effectively maintains an engaging voice and provides a vivid portrait into the subject. The tone of the text supports the writer’s purpose. Primarily an engaging voice is used that provides an overall positive image of the subject. The tone of the text is recognizable but lacks the depth that is necessary to support the writer’s purpose. The tone of the text is lacking and may not support the writer’s purpose. Grade-appropriate writing conventions are followed. (This will be assessed prior to teacher editing.) Spelling is generally correct, even on more difficult words and punctuation is accurate. A thorough understanding and consistent application of capitalization skills are present. Grammar is correct and contributes to clarity and style. The biography is very close to being ready to publish. Spelling is usually correct, but more difficult words are problematic. End punctuation is usually correct; internal punctuation is sometimes missing/wrong. Most words are capitalized correctly. Problems with grammar are not serious enough to confuse meaning. Moderate editing is required by the teacher to polish the text for publication. Spelling errors are somewhat apparent. Punctuation is sometimes missing or incorrect. Capitalization errors are somewhat apparent. Several errors in grammar are evident but do not usually affect meaning. Some editing is required by the teacher to polish the text for publication. Spelling errors are frequent, even on high frequency words. Punctuation is often missing or incorrect. Capitalization is random. Errors in grammar are very noticeable, frequent, and affect meaning. Extensive editing is required by the teacher to polish the text for publication. 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