Name ________________________________ Date _________________ Period _________ #6 Permanent Index Mood and Tone: Good Readers Analyze Mood & Tone! Do Now: Read through the two Word Bank below (one if for MOOD words, one if for TONE words). Circle the words you do not know. We will define them as a class. MOOD WORD BANK (how to a text makes YOU feel) POSITIVE MOOD WORDS + calm cheerful content energetic harmonious hopeful hyper inspired joyous lazy loving NEGATIVE MOOD WORDS - light-hearted mellow motivated peaceful playful relaxed relieved silly warm welcoming bittersweet depressed disappointed dreary gloomy heartbroken hopeless indifferent infuriated lonely melancholic nervous overwhelmed pessimistic scared sick somber stressed suspenseful tense terrifying threatening uncomfortable uncertain violent worried TONE WORD BANK (the narrator or author’s attitude) - Positive tone words + amused -cheerful comforting -compassionate excited -forgiving respectful -lighthearted silly -sweet joyful -playful sincere -humorous proud -grateful admiring -encouraging peaceful -hopeful benevolent -optimistic complimentary -affectionate sympathetic Tone = the author’s or narrator’s attitude towards something or someone in a text. HINT: TONE = the ‘tude of the author or speaker Neutral tone words - direct - confident - factual - straightforward - questioning - puzzled - dramatic - confused - informative - surprised - Negative tone words angry -argumentative cold - condescending sharp -childish arrogant -disrespectful upset -bitter grim -fearful melancholy -outraged sinister -pessimistic apologetic -nervous mocking -sorrowful tired -horrified sarcastic -disgusted depressed -worried Mood = how a text makes ME (the reader) feel. HINT: MOOD = my feelings about the text (find details, imagery, and diction) 1 Part 1: EXAMPLE: Determine Mood and Tone with Music 1. Listen to the musical selection. Ask yourself, how does this music make me feel? Consider the musical elements and write down your mood when listening to the musical selection. Musical Elements Rhythm/Tempo: How fast or slow is the music played? Is the beat regular or irregular? Pitch: How loud or soft is the music played? Are the notes high or low? Sound: Does the music sound pretty, or is it harsh and ugly? MOOD: How do these elements of the song make you feel? Scary, eerie, nervous, threatening , uncertain (Jaws soundtrackhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lV8i-pSVMaQ 2. MOOD: Write down 1 or 2 words to describe how the music makes you feel: This music makes me feel_ Scared _____________________________________________. POSITIVE MOOD WORDS + calm cheerful content energetic harmonious hopeful hyper inspired joyous lazy loving light-hearted mellow motivated peaceful playful relaxed relieved silly warm welcoming NEGATIVE MOOD WORDS bittersweet depressed disappointed dreary gloomy heartbroken hopeless indifferent infuriated lonely melancholic nervous overwhelmed pessimistic scared sick somber stressed suspenseful tense terrifying threatening uncomfortable uncertain violent worried 3. TONE: What is the author’s attitude towards the shark? How can you tell? Circle one: Positive Neutral Negative List 1-2 words to describe the author’s tone towards the shark (use your word bank). The author’s attitude towards the shark is ___ Fearful, Worried, Sinister ________________. e) As the music plays again, write a short paragraph describing a shark swimming in the water. Use the TONE that you chose above. ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 Part 1: YOU TRY! Determine Mood and Tone with Music 1. Listen to the second musical selection. Ask yourself, how does this music make me feel? Consider the musical elements and write down your mood when listening to the musical selection. Musical Element Rhythm/Tempo: How fast or slow is the music played? Is the beat regular or irregular? Pitch: How loud or soft is the music played? Are the notes high or low? Sound: Does the music sound pretty (euphonious), or is it harsh and ugly (cacophonous)? MOOD: How do these elements of the song make you feel? from Remember the Titans, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CYRbgTO-JF0 2. MOOD: Write down 1 or 2 words to describe how the music makes you feel: This music makes me feel__________________ inspired____________________ (HINT: use word bank). 3. TONE: What is the author’s attitude? How can you tell? Circle one: Positive Neutral Negative List 1-2 words to describe the author’s tone (use your word bank). The author’s attitude is_______ excited, proud __________________________. 4. Listen to the music again and imagine that it is the background music for a movie scene—with a specific setting, characters, and plot. Brainstorm what the scene looks like below. (Remember: a fast-paced score will likely go with an adventure or action-filled scene; you have to be imaginative here). Brainstorm elements for my movie scene: 1. SETTING: Where does the scene take place? 2. CHARACTER: Describe one main character (Who is it? What are they like?) 3. PLOT: What is my character doing? 3 4. You will write a paragraph describing your movie scene (“It was a dark and stormy night…”). Don’t use dialogue, just description. a. Your paragraph should capture the MOOD/feelings you had while listening to the music. The mood of the scene is: _________________________________ (refer to Word Bank) b. You should also have a clear TONE (attitude) towards to main character. My tone towards the main character is __________________________(refer to Word Bank) Write your movie scene here: ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ Part 2: Determine Tone in Partner’s Movie Scene 1. Exchange papers with your partner and read their movie scene silently. 2. Using the paragraph above, identify the TONE by finding details, imagery and specific words describing characters, the setting or events. ELEMENT Examples from the Paragraph Write down facts about the setting: Details Imagery Write down facts about the character: Write down facts about the plot/events: 1. Did they include examples of imagery? YES NO 2. Write down examples of imagery (details that appealed to your sense of sight, taste, touch, smell, or sound). What words does the author use to describe the setting or character? Words about the character or setting that convey a POSITIVE tone: _______________________________________________________________ Diction _______________________________________________________________ Words about the character or setting that convey a NEGATIVE tone: _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ I believe the TONE towards the main character is ____________________________________ 4 Name _____________________________________ Date _________________ Adv: _________ #_______ Revising Your Movie Scene: What’s the Tone? 1. Using your classwork today, identify your TONE towards the character in your movie scene. a. The TONE in my paragraph is (CIRCLE ONE): positive neutral negative. b. Specifically, the TONE in the paragraph is: _____________________________________ (use the Word Bank on page 1) **TONE can be improved by adding strong DETAILS, IMAGERY and DICTION (WORDS).** 2. DETAIL: Add a detail about a character, the setting or a plot event that captures the tone you are trying to convey. ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 3. IMAGERY: Add a sensory detail appealing to your sense of sound, taste, touch, smell, or sight (imagery) that captures the tone you are trying to convey. ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 4. DICTION: Replace two verbs (is, runs, goes) or adjectives with even stronger verbs or adjectives to help convey your tone. (example: Change “snuggled” to “smothered” to convey a negative, menacing tone. Change “thin” to “scrawny” to convey a judgmental tone). ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 5. Rewrite your movie scene using your original paragraph and #2, 3, and 4 above. __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ 5