Step 2: A closer look Working through the text using the AOs as a framework for detailed analysis The Assessment Objectives become our framework for interrogating the text. They should equip you with a way to organise your ideas. AO2 looking at dramatic, narrative, poetic means • Shaping of the action • Language of dialogue • Verse? Prose? • Language register, from formal to intimate AO3 Looking at context • Issues of the time (including language - overlaps with AO2) • Reflections of the age - then • Reflections of the age - now • How the play works for modern audiences AO4/5 Views of the action • within the text (characters on each other) • critics • productions A general note... • What are these characters doing? • What ideas are embodied in their language? • How do you respond to what is going on? Try to keep the idea of performance in mind: when a character says something, think about whether the language implied that a gesture or action goes with it, and try to imagine the physical bodies speaking those words or even not speaking at all. Don’t forget that characters may be on stage, even when silent, and may be making a significant non-verbal contribution to the scene. [AO5 – consideration of interpretation through performance] ? AO1: Who’s who? Match up the character names and descriptions. Act 1 Scene 1 SCENE I. Venice. A street. AO1: What are the characters doing? Look at your notes for this scene and quickly summarise. AO3: Setting the scene... Why Venice? Act 1 Scene 1 AO3: Setting the scene... Why Venice? Early modern (c. 1500-1750) Venice was a prosperous Italian city and a symbol of law and civilization. Elizabethan dramatists often used Italian settings for plays about intrigue, love and revenge – this is because foreign courts were stereotyped as being full of villainy and sexual perversion. Venice had a reputation as a city of wealth and sophistication but also as a place of loose morals. Venice also happened to be renowned for its courtesans (prostitutes). When the English thought about Venice, they often imagined it to be a city chock full of promiscuous women. As for the number of these Venetian courtesans it is very great. For it is thought there are of them in the whole city and other adjacent places, at the least twenty thousand, whereof many are esteemed so loose that they are said to open their quivers to every arrow, a most ungodly thing without doubt that there should be tolleration of such licentious wantons in so glorious, so potent, so renowned a city." (Coryat's Crudities, 1611) Act 1 Scene 1 AO2: Lines 1-7: what does the language of Iago and Roderigo reveal about their mood and attitude? How does this set the tone for the play? What theme does it introduce? RODERIGO Tush! never tell me; I take it much unkindly That thou, Iago, who hast had my purse As if the strings were thine, shouldst know of this. IAGO 'Sblood, but you will not hear me: If ever I did dream of such a matter, Abhor me. RODERIGO Thou told'st me thou didst hold him in thy hate. IAGO Despise me, if I do not. AO1 - KEY THEME: CONFLICT From the beginning of Othello the scene is set for Conflict. The topic of marriage, as discussed in the opening lines, seems of little significance however Shakespeare juxtaposes Roderigo’s failure to marry Desdemona with Iago’s failure to fain promotion, making it clear that private, domestic issues and the public, professional world will collide in Othello. The scene ends with Brabantio making his daughter’s elopement a public, political affair, as he calls for his neighbours to help him hunt down Othello. The audience realises that the marriage of Othello and Desdemona is going to be at the heart of the conflict in the play. There are also references to the Venetian conflict with the Turks over Cyprus, the setting where Othello’s marriage and mind will be destroyed. AO3 (ZIgZag Education) Character Introduction: What do these lines tell us about Iago? Lines 35-6: “Preferment goes by letter and affection/ And not by the old gradiation” Line 41: “I follow him to serve my turn upon him” Lines 143-4: “…not meet nor wholesome to my place To be produced” Line 126: “Thou art a villain!” (Brabantio) AO2 Character Introduction: What do these lines tell us about Iago? Lines 35-6: “Preferment goes by letter and affection/ And not by the old gradiation” AO2 This is Iago’s motive for causing Othello harm. He feels cheated out of his rightful promotion. Line 41: “I follow him to serve my turn upon him” This makes us doubt that we should trust Iago. His intent is to deceive and “By the end of Act 1 Scene 1, Shakespeare has established Iago as a revenge. powerful, manipulative figure instigatestoand manages “…not meet norwho wholesome mystage place Lines 143-4: chaos effectively.” Warren, 1998) To be(Rebecca produced” - Do you agree? He is good at getting himself out of trouble. He leaves when it would be inconvenient to be discovered. This is also irony: nothing he has said or done in this scene has been ‘wholesome’. Line 126: “Thou art a villain!” (Brabantio) Another example of irony – this time dramatic irony – as Brabantio is unaware of the truth of his words. Likewise, Roderigo fails to recognise he is being deceived. AO1/2 - KEY THEME: DECEIT Deceit as a key theme is established in two ways. 1. Deceptions that occurred before the play began: • Roderigo believed that he would marry Desdemona • Brabantio has been deceived by Othello and Desdemona • Iago deceived himself when he believed he would be promoted 2. The language of deceit used by Iago: • He admires men who make “shows of service on their lords” (51) • His reputation as a dutiful subordinate is deceptive; he says, “I am not what I am” (64) Notice how Shakespeare structures the play in a way that makes the audience question the difference between appearance and reality from the start. What does the word ‘shows’ suggest about appearance versus reality? How does the use of sibilance reflect the tone of what Iago is saying? Line 51 "shows of service to their lords." How does he feel about his Think about how the ‘s’ sound creates a sinister tone subordinate position? and reflects the resentful nature of Iago. His language is the language of deceit and he respects people who are deceptive. Think about how Shakespeare has used dramatic irony here. What does the word ‘must’ suggest about Iago’s attitude? What is significant about the word ‘show’? Why does Iago use it so often? line 157 "I must show out a flag and sign of love." Iago helps Roderigo to wake Brabantio, leaves to How is this then word ironic? maintain the appearance of loyalty to Othello. This suggests how he manipulates other characters in ways that are only seen to the audience. He is willing to use How does this quotation show that this other people to maintain his reputation and a façade of character manipulates people from honesty. behind the scenes? Character Introduction: What do these lines tell us about Othello? AO2 Lines 13-17: “But he; as loving his own pride and purposes Evades them, with a bombast circumstance Horribly stuff'd with epithets of war; Nonsuits my mediators; for, 'Certes,' says he, 'I have already chose my officer.'” Lines 158-164: “I do know, the state, However this may gall him with some cheque, Cannot with safety cast him, for he's embark'd With such loud reason to the Cyprus wars, Which even now stand in act, that, for their souls, Another of his fathom they have none, To lead their business” Character Introduction: What do these lines tell us about Othello? Lines 13-17: “But he; as loving his own pride and purposes AO2 Evades them, with a bombast circumstance Horribly stuff'd with epithets of war; Nonsuits my mediators; for, 'Certes,' says he, 'I have already chose my officer.'” AO5: Because we do not see him and he is not referred to by name, He is a self-satisfied and bombastic speaker who promotes his favourites and has Othello a mysterious figure at this stage. Shakespeare has his own way inisthe Senate. structured the scene to draw the audience’s attention to the role Lines 158-164: rumour is to play in events. “I do know, the state,Everything we learn about Othello is second However hand. Would audience dismiss it as gossip at this stage? thisthe may gall him with some cheque, Cannot with safety cast him, for he's embark'd With such loud reason to the Cyprus wars, Which even now stand in act, that, for their souls, Another of his fathom theysoldier, haverelied none, He is an effective upon by the Senate. To lead their business” The language men use to define women… Line 20: Iago describes Cassio as… AO2 “A fellow almost damned in a fair wife” This casual sexism (i.e. that if Cassio’s wife is ‘fair’ she will cuckold him) helps to establish Iago’s misogyny, which he will use to infect Othello’s mind. Iago shouts to Brabantio… Lines 79-80: “Look to your house, your daughter and your bags! Thieves, thieves!” This establishes the patriarchal view of women as possessions, to the point that Brabantio sees Desdemona’s choosing of her own husband as... Line 167: “…treason of the blood” Unable to believe that Desdemona is a willing bride, he suggests that she is a passive victim. Her Lines 170-1: “youth and maidenhood” have been “abused” This idea also reflects the Renaissance stereotype of the black man as cunning sexual predator. RODERIGO What a full fortune does the thicklips owe If he can carry't thus! IAGO Call up her father, Rouse him: make after him, poison his delight, Proclaim him in the streets; incense her kinsmen, And, though he in a fertile climate dwell, Plague him with flies: though that his joy be joy, Yet throw such changes of vexation on't, As it may lose some colour. 66 70 What does this racist name calling tell us about Iago’s influence on Roderigo? Iago uses metaphors to describe what he wants Roderigo to do. What does his choice of language associate him with? How does this link with the rest of the play? RODERIGO What a full fortune does the thicklips owe If he can carry't thus! IAGO Call up her father, Rouse him: make after him, poison his delight, Proclaim him in the streets; incense her kinsmen, And, though he in a fertile climate dwell, Plague him with flies: though that his joy be joy, Yet throw such changes of vexation on't, As it may lose some colour. 66 70 Iago has prejudiced Roderigo’s view of Othello and his marriage Iago’s use of metaphors associates him with poison, corruption and disease. Shakespeare has begun to prepare the audience for the poisoning of Othello’s mind. BRABANTIO appears above, at a window. AO2: The location of this part of the scene is significant. It is nighttime and the two levels of the stage are used – Brabantio at the window above; Iago and Roderigo in the darkness of the street below. This signifies disruption and confusion. AO2 BRABANTIO What is the reason of this terrible summons? What is the matter there? RODERIGO Signior, is all your family within? IAGO Are your doors lock'd? BRABANTIO Why, wherefore ask you this? IAGO 'Zounds, sir, you're robb'd; for shame, put on your gown; Your heart is burst, you have lost half your soul; Even now, now, very now, an old black ram Is tupping your white ewe. Arise, arise; Awake the snorting citizens with the bell, Or else the devil will make a grandsire of you: Arise, I say. BRABANTIO What, have you lost your wits? RODERIGO Most reverend signior, do you know my voice? BRABANTIO Not I; what are you? RODERIGO My name is Roderigo. 85 90 This choice of verb suggests an assault on Brabantio’s property Iago’s use of animalistic imagery reinforces a racist, negative stereotype of black men. 100 Note how many questions Brabantio asks: his authority has been subverted and instead of directing his social inferiors, he must act in response to them. This shows his alarm and Iago’s control. AO2 BRABANTIO The worser welcome: I have charged thee not to haunt about my doors: This reinforces the idea In honest plainness thou hast heard me say of Desdemona as My daughter is not for thee; and now, in madness, property. Being full of supper and distempering draughts, Upon malicious bravery, dost thou come He dismisses Roderigo in To start my quiet. a commanding tone, RODERIGO Sir, sir, sir,-showing his usual status, BRABANTIO But thou must needs be sure which is being My spirit and my place have in them power undermined. To make this bitter to thee. RODERIGO Patience, good sir. 110 BRABANTIO What tell'st thou me of robbing? this is Venice; My house is not a grange. Iago’s use of RODERIGO Most grave Brabantio, animalistic imagery In simple and pure soul I come to you. reinforces a racist, IAGO 'Zounds, sir, you are one of those that will not negative stereotype serve God, if the devil bid you. Because we come to of black men. Othello do you service and you think we are ruffians, you'll is cast as a lustful have your daughter covered with a Barbary horse; predator. It also you'll have your nephews neigh to you; you'll have creates the idea of an coursers for cousins and gennets for germans. unnatural match. BRABANTIO What profane wretch art thou? He is offended. IAGO I am one, sir, that comes to tell you your daughter and the Moor are now making the beast with two backs. BRABANTIO Thou art a villain. IAGO You are--a senator. BRABANTIO This thou shalt answer; I know thee, Roderigo. You = formal Thou = informal AO2 Iago’s crude words are undermining Brabantio’s social standing as much as Desdemona’s actions. He chooses them deliberately, confidently forcing his own interpretation of events onto him – a pattern that will be repeated with Othello himself later in the play. It is Iago’s crude comments that really capture Brabantio’s attention here, and he gets the result he wanted: an angry father, appalled by what he hears. “The reduction of the Othello-Desdemona match to bestial sexuality is typical of Iago, who is associated with unpleasant animal imagery throughout the play. However, we might already feel that the imagery here tells us more about Iago’s character than it does about Othello’s because we are aware of Iago’s hatred.” (Rebecca Warren, 1998) RODERIGO Sir, I will answer any thing. But, I beseech you, If't be your pleasure and most wise consent, As partly I find it is, that your fair daughter, 120 At this odd-even and dull watch o' the night, Transported, with no worse nor better guard But with a knave of common hire, a gondolier, To the gross clasps of a lascivious Moor-If this be known to you and your allowance, We then have done you bold and saucy wrongs; But if you know not this, my manners tell me We have your wrong rebuke. Do not believe That, from the sense of all civility, I thus would play and trifle with your reverence: 130 Your daughter, if you have not given her leave, I say again, hath made a gross revolt; Tying her duty, beauty, wit and fortunes In an extravagant and wheeling stranger Of here and every where. Straight satisfy yourself: If she be in her chamber or your house, Let loose on me the justice of the state For thus deluding you. AO2 What do the images Roderigo uses in his speech focus on? RODERIGO Sir, I will answer any thing. But, I beseech you, • The unnatural If't be your pleasure and most wise consent, quality of the As partly I find it is, that your fair daughter, 120 match; the At this odd-even and dull watch o' the night, Transported, with no worse nor better guard marriage is a But with a knave of common hire, a gondolier, subversion of To the gross clasps of a lascivious Moor-the natural If this be known to you and your allowance, We then have done you bold and saucy wrongs; order But if you know not this, my manners tell me • Desdemona’s We havexenophobic your wrong rebuke. believe Roderigo’s viewDoofnotDesdemona’s is one that Brabantio disobedience That, from the sense of all civility, can understand. He views his daughter’s marriage as an I thus would play and trifle with your reverence: 130 • Echoes of the incomprehensible of her everything she has ever known. Your daughter, if yourejection have not given leave, negative I say again, hath made a gross revolt; Brabantio’s death from grief later in the play will be directly descriptions of Tying her duty, beauty, wit and fortunes attributed to the sorrow he feels over Desdemona’s “gross revolt”. In an extravagant and wheeling stranger Othello from Of here and every where. Straight satisfy yourself: earlier in the If she be in her chamber or your house, scene Let loose on me the justice of the state For thus deluding you. • Influenced AO2 by…? Why is this a significant scene? This exchange of contrasts and discord sets the scene for the events that follow. The contrasts are reflected in the imagery and setting, establishing the themes of social disruption, class and power, delusion and knowledge, male and female sexuality, and black and white. The chaotic feel of the scene signifies that disruption has already occurred and we know that the marriage of Desdemona and Othello is going to be the focal point for further disruption because of the language that Iago, Roderigo and Brabantio use to describe it. We are also aware of the difference between the “white ewe”, Desdemona and the “black ram”, Othello. Desdemona has been stolen, but she has also given herself away by eloping secretly. Venice has been assaulted by a “wheeling stranger”. The audience are left wondering how the tension that has been built up in this scene will be resolved, particularly the dislike and disdain the three men feel for “the Moor”. Essay question: How effective an introduction to the play is Act 1 Scene 1? At least 500 words. Think about: • plot • character • theme • what we know • what we can expect • use of language and structure to express this • possibility for interpretation