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Introduction
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Hook?
 Is there a thesis?
 An opinion?
 B1 idea B2 idea-
Opinion?
B1 idea?
B2 idea?
Introduction
Do you speak English? Many students in
school are learning English, however they do not
always understand what people are saying. They
also do not understand what they read. The
solution to these problems is effective study
habits. Students must use effective study habits
to learn faster and get better grades.
Introduction
Many students in school are learning English,
however they do not always understand what people
are saying. They also do not understand what they
they read! The solution to these problems is
effective study habits. Students must use effective
study habits to learn faster and get better grades.
Hook?
Opinion?
B1 idea?
B2 idea?
Body Paragraphs
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 Is there supporting detail?
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 Explanation?
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 Is there a concluding sentence?
CS ?
Body Paragraph 1
Many students in school do not speak English well. They
do not always understand what people say. They do not get
enough practice. They study in English class, but speak their
own language everywhere else. They cannot understand when
they read because they do not read outside of class. These bad
habits slow down how much English they learn.
TS
SD
CS
Body Paragraph 1
Many students in school do not speak English well.
They do not always understand what people say. They do
not get enough practice. They study in English class, but
speak their own language everywhere else. They cannot
understand when they read because they do not read
outside of class. These bad habits slow down how much
English they learn.
TS?
SD?
CS?
Body Paragraph 2
How do students solve this problem? They
must have effective study habits. One good habit
is to practice English all day long. Another helpful
habit is to read all the time in both English and
their own language. Students should develop
effective study habits to learn English significantly
faster.
TS?
SD?
CS?
Conclusion
 Is there a thesis
in different words than the introduction ?
 An opinion?
 B1 idea B2 idea-
Opinion?
B1 idea?
B2 idea?
Conclusion
If a student does not understand English
very well, they should develop effective study
habits. They should practice English all day long
and read a lot of books in English and other
languages. Effective study habits save time. Be a
successful student and get them!
Conclusion
They should practice English all day long
and read a lot of books in English and other
languages. Effective study habits save time. Be a
successful student and get them!
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miserable
sad
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do you speak English? Many students in School
are learning English. They do not always understand
what People are saying. they also do not understand
what they read. The solution to these problems is
effective study habits. Students must use effective
study Habits to learn faster and get better grades.
BONUS
1. yesterday My dad helped me so i was Happy.
1. fatima ali and noora abdulaziz went to the mall to buy things for eid.
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N? N? N? N?
Usage
VT? VT? VT? VT?
VT? VT? VT? VT?
match nouns and verbs correctly
VT? jumps
N? kids
Do you spoke English? Many student in school is
learning English. They not always understand what
people are saying. They also do not understanding
what they read. The solution to this problems is
effective study habits. Students must use effective
study habits to learn faster and get better grade.
BONUS
1. Yesterday the kid play a game and they had fun.
2. The girls at school is nice because they helped me.
Punctuation
full stops, exclamation points,
commas, quotation marks,
question marks, apostrophes
Do you speak English Many students in school are
learning English They do not always understand what
people are saying. They also do not understand what
they read, The solution to these problems is effective
study habits. Students must use effective study habits
to learn faster and get better grades
Spelling
All words. Use a dictionary
Due you speak English? Many students in
scool are learning English, however they do not
always understand what people are saying. Thy
also do not understand what they read. The
solotion to these problems is efective study
habits. Students must use effective study hebits
to learn faster and get better grads.
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