Havisham Discussion Point… Describe something in your life that you have strong, mixed or contradictory feelings about. Describe why this person/place/issue etc. makes you feel this way. What impact does this have on you as a person? Important points to consider when reading the poem Miss Havisham is a character from the novel Great Expectations by Charles Dickens. Miss Havisham was left at the altar some years before we first meet her, and has never changed out of her wedding dress. Havisham She is a rather pathetic figure but also hates men as a result of having been left: throughout Great Expectations she spends her time trying to take her revenge on all men. Duffy’s intentions… The poem seeks to make us understand Havisham. The first person narrative enables the reader to empathise (rather than sympathise) with her feelings. The anger expressed in the poem gives a sense of her reclaiming her ability to change things, as opposed to just being a victim. The possibility of being only a victim is suggested by the wailing question of who did this to her. Form and Structure The poem is written in four stanzas which are unrhymed. Many of the lines run on, and the effect is like normal speech. The poem is written in free verse, in that it has no regular pattern of metre or rhyme. It is, however, arranged in four stanzas of equal length (has egs of internal rhyme), which suggests some control in its speaker, undermining the madness the character is known for, which is one of the points of the poem. Form and Structure A dramatic monologue, Havisham is written in the first person, with the poet assuming the voice of a character (a persona). This form enables us to understand her thoughts because she is speaking them directly. There is no sense of an audience, so she appears to be speaking to herself. Havisham – Verse 1 Oxymoron – Suggests love and hate. Ambivalent, contradictory, and conflicting ideas and feelings. It is pretty clear that Miss Havisham has these kinds of feelings about this man 1) Beloved sweetheart bastard. Not a day since then The Wedding Alliteration ‘B’ emphasises anger. The very first sentence in the poem is just three nouns in a row, without a verb. There are a number of other short and powerful fragments in the poem, which are deliberately used for effect. They create a sense of anger. 2) I haven’t wished him dead. Prayed for it Enjambement – Run on lines Not only wished for her fiancé's death; she's prayed for it. And she's prayed for it hard. Poem has taken on a distinctly sinister tone. Assonance -"hard" and "dark." A repetition of similar vowel sounds. Used often in this poem. 3) so hard I’ve dark green pebbles for eyes, Metaphor - Green as the colour of jealousy and greed, and sometimes even the colour of sickness. And pebbles are hard and small. Her fiancé's betrayal has left her jealous and hardened. 4) ropes on the back of my hands I could strangle with. Metaphor - "ropes" on the back of her hands again show how Havisham has aged (Veins) and hardened over the years. There is violence in this metaphor too, as they are ropes Havisham "could strangle with". Havisham – Verse 2 Single word sentence – Negative word for an unmarried older woman - Denotes Her bitterness- what society sums her up as. Monologue – get a glimpse into Miss Havisham's deepest thoughts (Stream of consciousness) 5) Spinster. I stink and remember. Whole days She has never washed since her wedding day. She sees her life as decay and memories. She ‘remembers’, suggests she has been stewing for decades, recalling every bit of unhappiness that she has had to endure because of her fiancé's actions. 6) in bed cawing Nooooo at the wall; the dress Metaphor - of a parrot “CAWING” makes her sound like an animal. Might she be reliving the moment when she of her fiancé's betrayal/bemoaning her current state of affairs? No one listening; she's just shouting at the wall. Age Internal Rhyme - repeated sounds of "Spinster. I stink and remember,"/"aw" sounds of caw and wall combined with her short sentences claustrophobic? Trapped in Havisham's terrifing mind/ repeated thoughts 7) yellowing, trembling if I open the wardrobe; Personification, As if dress waiting to be put back away / she lterally trembles when looking at the clothes of her past. Mirror. She sees herself first as a "her," as if she doesn't recognize herself and what she's become. Mirror is "slewed," or turned/broken and warped, like a funhouse mirror. She could also be drunk 8) the slewed mirror, full-length, her, myself, who did Full-length, giving Havisham a clear view of her entire body - old, yellowing, and wasting away. “Myself." this Havisham faces facts – she's the one in the mirror. identity crisis. She no longer knows who is to blame. Split personality? she's staring at herself. And because these words follow "myself," and there's no question mark after them, we might take it to mean she's blaming herself? Havisham – Verse 3 Enjambment – Gives the poem new, unexpected layer. Suddenly seems that she believes she's not at fault. Someone has done something to her/doesn't seem to take blame for the shape of her life. 9) to me? Puce curses that are sounds not words. Colour of deep red to purple-brown suggests old blood which represents old wounds (compare line 6) Suggests she no longer can access language to express her feelings – where pain is so deep there is no language available to describe it 10) Some nights better, the lost body over me, Conversational/Change to Lighthearted tone – Suggests Dreaming of man and intimacy with him are when some nights are better ‘Its’ She depersonalizes him; in this moment, he's just a ‘body’ or object to her. Continues to imagine intimacy between them Husband she never had Lost to her / also creates sexual imagery of body in her dreams 11) my fluent tongue in its mouth in its ear This violence ‘bite’ is picked up towards the end of the poem. The ‘suddenness’ ends the fantasy and wakes her – and us as the reader to the viciousness of the attack (or dreamed attack) Implied revenge? 12) then down till I suddenly bite awake. Love’s Enjambment - Finally, we get a lingering word on the last line of the stanza: "Love's." Again, builds expectation. Havisham – Verse 4 Oxymoron - ‘Love’s hate’ - She doesn’t trust love as it let her down. Also shows her confusion – she's trapped between hating and loving him. Triple meaning – ‘white’ suggests innocence, ‘white veil’ represents the wedding, ‘veil’ represents in feminist terms that she is concealing something (Hate?) 13) hate behind a white veil; a red balloon bursting Metaphor - Suggests celebrations that did not take place. Used to express her embarrassment (the veil concealed this) and the end of her innocence/dreams. ‘Red’ suggests anger, Alliteration of `b’ and plosive sound suggest violence. 14) in my face. Bang. I stabbed at a wedding-cake. Onomatopoeia - Short sentence for effect – also represents the shock she experienced. Violent imagery ‘Stabbed’ shows literally her anger at the time and metaphorically shows her opinion on marriage. 15) Give me a male corpse for a long slow honeymoon. Use of dark repulsive image. Reference to death/corpse links to idea that the ‘honeymoon’ would provide the long painful death she wants for him. Combines both love and revenge(a final triumph?). Rather have him dead than have him reject her(bitter/twisted) making the reader less understanding of Havisham. 16) Don’t think it’s only the heart that b-b-b-breaks. Use of plosive ‘b’ in a stuttering style, suggests the is breaking/crying/collapsing. She conveys that her life/mind/body has broken as a result – not just her heart. Pathos (emotional appeal) to reader – pity. May also refer to length of time her heart has been broken and the possibility of a stabbing, violent action towards the bridegroom