CCR English Mr. Braam A Little Review on Figurative Speech Here's some reminders about definitions and examples of different types of figurative speech. (Compiled from a number of sources) fig·u·ra·tive adjective \ˈfi-g(y)ə-rə-tiv\ of words, language, etc. : used with a meaning that is different from the basic meaning and that expresses an idea in an interesting way by using language that usually describes something else : not literal HERE IS A PARTIAL LIST OF EXAMPLES: Simile A simile uses the words “like” or “as” to compare one object or idea with another to suggest they are alike. Example: busy as a bee brave as a lion stand out like a sore thumb as easy as shooting fish in a barrel as dry as a bone as funny as a barrel of monkeys they fought like cats and dogs like watching grass grow clean as a whistle Metaphor The metaphor states a fact or draws a verbal picture by the use of comparison. A simile would say you are like something; a metaphor is more positive - it says you are something. Example: You are what you eat. When you use a metaphor, you make a statement that doesn’t make sense literally, like “time is a thief.” It only makes sense when the similarities between the two things become apparent or someone understands the connection. Examples include: the world is my oyster you are a couch potato time is money he has a heart of stone America is a melting pot you are my sunshine CCR English Mr. Braam Personification A figure of speech in which human characteristics are given to an animal or an object. Example: My teddy bear gave me a hug. Personification gives human characteristics to inanimate objects, animals, or ideas. This can really affect the way the reader imagines things. Examples include: opportunity knocked on the door the sun greeted me this morning the sky was full of dancing stars the vines wove their fingers together to form a braid the radio stopped singing and stared at me the sun played hide and seek with the clouds Oxymoron A technique in which two words with opposite meanings are put together for a special effect. Example: Jumbo shrimp black light tough love cruel kindness Onomatopoeia The use of a word to describe or imitate a natural sound or the sound made by an object or an action. Example: snap crackle pop Onomatopoeia is the use of words that sound like their meaning, or mimic sounds. They add a level of fun and reality to writing. Here are some examples: the burning wood hissed and crackled the words: beep, whirr, click, whoosh, swish, zap, zing, ping, clang, bong, hum, boom, munch, gobble, crunch, pow, smash, wham, quack, meow, oink, and tweet. Hyperbole An exaggeration that is so dramatic that no one would believe the statement is true. Tall tales are hyperboles. Example: He was so hungry, he ate that whole cornfield for lunch, stalks and all. Hyperbole is an outrageous exaggeration that emphasizes a point, and can be ridiculous or funny. Hyperboles can be added to fiction to add color and depth to a character. More examples: : CCR English Mr. Braam You snore louder than a freight train. It's a slow burg. I spent a couple of weeks there one day. She is so dumb, she thinks Taco Bell is a Mexican phone company. I had to walk 15 miles to school in the snow, uphill. You could have knocked me over with a feather. Idioms According to Webster's Dictionary, an idiom is defined as: peculiar to itself either grammatically (as no, it wasn't me) or in having a meaning that cannot be derived from the conjoined meanings of its elements. Example: Monday week for "the Monday a week after next Monday" Imagery Imagery is a type of figurative language that appeals to the senses. The descriptions can be about living things or inanimate objects. A good example is from Wordsworth's "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud": A host of golden daffodils; Beside the lake, beneath the trees, Fluttering and dancing in the breeze. He doesn’t say “many” or “a lot of” daffodils, he uses the word “host.” That means a huge number of daffodils. Later, he personifies the daffodils, and personification will be covered later on. Another example is from “The Eagle” by Tennyson, “He clasps the crag with crooked hands." The hard consonant sounds add even more to the imagery here. Alliteration Frequently included as an example of figurative language, alliteration is more of a sound device. The repetition of the same initial letter, sound, or group of sounds in a series of words. Alliteration includes tongue twisters. Example: She sells seashells by the seashore. Alliteration is the easiest of the examples of figurative language to spot. It is a repetition of the first consonant sounds in several words. Some good examples are: wide-eyed and wondering while we wait for others to waken and tongue twisters like: Betty bought butter but the butter was bitter, so Betty bought better butter to make the bitter butter better. CCR English Mr. Braam Other examples Want to see a list that includes some lesser-used (but still VERY valid) examples of figurative speech? Try these: 1. Anaphora The repetition of the same word or phrase at the beginning of successive clauses or verses. (Contrast with epiphora and epistrophe.) 2. Antithesis The juxtaposition of contrasting ideas in balanced phrases. 3. Apostrophe Breaking off discourse to address some absent person or thing, some abstract quality, an inanimate object, or a nonexistent character. 4. Assonance Identity or similarity in sound between internal vowels in neighboring words. 5. Chiasmus A verbal pattern in which the second half of an expression is balanced against the first but with the parts reversed. 6. Euphemism The substitution of an inoffensive term for one considered offensively explicit. 7. Irony The use of words to convey the opposite of their literal meaning. A statement or situation where the meaning is contradicted by the appearance or presentation of the idea. 8. Litotes A figure of speech consisting of an understatement in which an affirmative is expressed by negating its opposite. 9. Metonymy A figure of speech in which one word or phrase is substituted for another with which it's closely associated; also, the rhetorical strategy of describing something indirectly by referring to things around it. 10. Paradox A statement that appears to contradict itself. 11. Pun A play on words, sometimes on different senses of the same word and sometimes on the similar sense or sound of different words. 12. Synecdoche A figure of speech in which a part is used to represent the whole (for example, ABCs for alphabet) or the whole for a part ("England won the World Cup in 1966"). 13. Understatement A figure of speech in which a writer or speaker deliberately makes a situation seem less important or serious than it is. CCR English Mr. Braam SENSORY DETAILS Sensory details are words that help readers see, hear, feel, taste, and smell the object of the author's description. Examples of phrases using sensory detail for sight could be, 'the deep blue of the ocean' or 'the flash of fireworks lit up the night sky.' Other examples relevant to smell and taste include, 'the sweet aroma of baking cornbread' and 'salty chips. ‘Here is a chart describing the different sensory details you might use of writing about a day at the beach. CCR English Mr. Braam VIVID VERBS NOTE: Mr. Braam has a massive list of vivid verbs that can be borrowed Grammatically Correct Weekly grammar tip created by Student Success Center Peer Writing Tutors. Using Vivid Verbs to Create Better Sentences by Candice Chovanec Melzow As writers we often get stuck in particular patterns of writing, and one of these patterns is using the same verbs over and over again. One way to solve this problem is by replacing your general verbs with vivid verbs. Vivid verbs are useful for a variety of reasons. First of all, they make your writing more interesting and enjoyable for the reader. Secondly, vivid verbs have more specific meanings than the general verbs they replace. However, you must be careful when replacing a general verb with a vivid verb to ensure that the vivid verb does not significantly alter the meaning of the sentence. Always consult a dictionary if you’re unsure of a word’s exact meaning. The following table reveals several examples of general verbs and the vivid verbs that you can use to replace them. Keep in mind that each vivid verb has its own distinct meaning. General Verb dislike eat like/love run say/said walk work Vivid Verbs abhor, abominate, avoid, condemn, deplore, despise, detest, disapprove, hate, loathe, resent, scorn, shun consume, devour, dine, feast upon, gobble, ingest admire, adore, appreciate, cherish, be fond of, worship dart, dash, jog, lope, scamper, scurry, sprint address, critique, define, establish, evaluate, examine, formulate, identify, propose, recommend, , report, suggest, urge amble, hike, march, plod, saunter, stroll, stride, trek, trudge employ, labor, toil, slave Let’s take a look at some examples that show how replacing general verbs with vivid verbs make sentences more interesting and more specific: EX As the students walked through the park, the breeze blew the leaves on the trees. EX As the students ambled through the park, the breeze lifted the leaves on the trees. In the revised sentence, the verb “ambled” connotes relaxation and pleasantness, while the verb “lifted” connotes a gentle action. Here the use of vivid verbs conveys a pleasant tone. Now, let’s look at another example: CCR English Mr. Braam EX The harder James worked, the more he disliked his job and the customers he served. EX The harder James toiled, the more he detested his job and the customers he served. In the revised sentence, the verb “toiled” denotes hard labor, while the verb “detested” denotes intense dislike. Here the use of vivid verbs conveys a more negative tone. Also note that not all of the verbs in the example sentence were replaced with vivid verbs; the writer chose to leave the verb served because it seemed specific enough for the situation. Vivid verbs are best used in moderation; replacing more than two or three general verbs in one sentence could make the sentence difficult for the reader to understand. The examples above demonstrate how using vivid verbs can significantly improve your writing by making it more enjoyable and more specific. In effect, vivid verbs are a great tool to use when you want to make your meanings clear to the reader. Test Your Knowledge by Candice Chovanec Melzow Test your understanding of vivid verbs by replacing each of the common verbs in the following sentences with a specific vivid verb. 1. Janet laughed at the professor’s Freudian slip. 2. The college student saw the traffic accident that occurred on Highway 87. 3. When I arrived home I was hungry enough to eat the entire cake. Answer 1. Janet snickered or sniggered or giggled at the professor’s Freudian slip. 2. The college student witnessed the traffic accident that occurred on Highway 87. 3. When I arrived home I was hungry enough to devour or consume or gobble up the entire cake. [Note that answers may vary. Even if you do not see your answer here, it may still be correct.]