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Hello. My name is
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Gilgamesh Laments Friend’s Death
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Sumerians:
Your fixes
The Sumerians Sentence#4: Thus, Gilgamesh
believe that when turned into what we might call a
you die you go to dynamic character.
the heavens for Sentence#1: The wild man died.
good deeds.
Sentence#5: Let’s give the King
props for having a moment of
Greeks:
recognition and changing into a
The Greeks
better man.
believe that when
Sentence#9: Strong and
you die, the good determined, Gilgamesh
people go to the managed to locate the flower of
same place as the eternal youth, but lost it to a sea
serpent.
evil people.
Sentence#3: The King, once a
part boy, seemed change…
1. The wild man is dead. 2. After an adventurous life of being raised by
wolves, finding true love, wrestling with a king to defend the honor of a
new bride, the wild man succumbed to a fateful dream and breathed
his last. 3. The King, party boy that he was, seemed changed in that
he no longer sought out hedonistic pleasures, but began a quest that
we will all one day take, the quest for purpose and meaning, for
longevity and legacy. 4. Thus, Gilgamesh became what we might call a
dynamic character. 5. Let’s give the king props for having a Greek
moment of recognition and becoming a better man. 6.The lamentation
started by Gilgamesh, a demi-God in his own right, walked through a
mountain. 7. Then, due to a Godly denial of his request for eternal life,
Gilgamesh traveled to the flood survivor to have a one on one chat. 8.
Learning of what became of the human race, Gilgamesh moved on
after obtaining some important information about a flower. 9. Being
strong and determined, Gilgamesh managed to locate the flower of
eternal youth, but lost it to a sea serpent. 10. Finally, the King gave up,
returned home, lived out his life, and died.
WORKING TITLE:
OPTION ALPHA “King Oedipus Bids Farewell” OR
OPTION OMEGA “Internal Affairs Takes on New Meaning”
Strophe / Antistrophe
Blind Prophet Right
Strophe (15 points)
I agree with the statement. Oedipus Rex came to Thebes,
married HIS MOTHER, and brought a plague on the
people. Of course this is shameful. Accident or not he still
slept with his mom. Who would be proud to go to or come
from a place whose citizens had not only allowed this, but
encouraged it, a place where this happened and then the
Queen committed suicide and the King was exiled. It is
absolutely shameful, and it is shame that Oedipus bought
to these people. If he had stayed home then none of that
would have happened and the original King would most
likely still be alive. Sure you can say that he saved the
people from the plagues but who wouldn’t rather die from a
plague then die from shame.
Anti-Strophe (15 points)
I completely disagree with this statement. Oedipus is the
only reason the people of Thebes are still alive. During
his reign as king, Oedipus saved them from two
plagues. If he hadn’t have then they all would’ve died.
He showed up at a time when their King obviously
hadn’t helped them. He was strong enough to fight of
the original King and his entourage, and win. He may
have married his mother, but this was completely
unbeknownst to him. As far as he knew he was doing
every right. You know that he is a moral man because
he ran away from home so that he wouldn’t marry his
mother. If anything, Oedipus Rex brought honor to his
kingdom. He kept his promise of punishing the “culprit”
and he owned up to a mistake he didn’t even know he
made. That is not something to be ashamed of.
All Staffers Required to Get a Good Pronoun Lesson
Editor’s Note 6: Listen, There’s some serious pronoun abuse going on
here. I’ve a presentation when the sun is at midday. Can you just check
my presentation notes quickly by marking up these labels. (5 points) and
giving samples on the bottom half (5 points)
Old Timers Gather Round the Forum to Learn
About Replacement Words Called Pronouns
1.
2.
2.
3.
4.
It is a day filled with Apollo’s bright sunlight.
I guess I’ll have to get to the bottom of this murder mystery myself.
Go to Delphi and the oracle.
Jocasta defied the stars. She really should not have tried to escape her fate.
We know that Oedipus is guilty of murder.
A.
B.
C.
D.
E.
Second Person Assumed # ______2b Go to…___
Antecedent # ____2a I guess…______
Dummy Pronoun # _____3______
Reflexive # ___1______
Editorial We # ____4______
6. First Person Possessive Singular : I knew that in this moment I had become the top
dog again. I owned them.
7. Pluralis Modestiae: We all watched the train pass by us until it gone.
8. Third Person Male: He just stood there, looking around as if he was lost and alone.
9. Antecedent Agreement: You should definitely do this or no one else will.
10. Second Person Possessive Plural: The world is yours. Only you can care for it.
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Feature Essay Fully Published in This Edition!!!!
Jakiyah Redding Writes Exemplar Essay!
In an incredible celebration on the streets of Hampton Roads, star reporter Jakiyah Redding gathers her
fan base to share the winning of the Pulitzer Prize for this year’s Best in Essay Writing Category. The
topic was daring, and the writing followed all the proper formatting of good essay writing.
Said one stunned fan, who managed to squeeze through the huge midnight crowd to catch a glimpse of the
newest member of the Pulitzer winners. “I was so excited to be able to be in the same area as her. I mean
who else could so eloquently support body paragraphs with literary referencing, offering opinion which is
never unverified, but also backed up by the contents of the literature (10 points)”
Another fan – who cathartically choked up on tears during the interview – was impressed with the
outstanding hook that not only attracted the reader to delve into the writing, but also managed to maintain
a delicate balance of transitions (10 points).
And the winner is….
Jakiyah Redding
A third bystander, one who camped out on the grounds immediately upon hearing that the famed writer
may make a public appearance, respectfully disagreed with the two other fans. “I can appreciate these
items, but the genius is in the conclusion, which is not only broad and didactic, but analyzes as well as
summarizes. It shows – in one paragraph, mind you – the significance of all the paragraphs that come
before it (10 points). Who could not just want to live life just a little bit stronger after reading such
beautiful words?”
Answers Question in Beautiful Essay Form and… Uses 5 Vocabulary words correctly (10 points)!
Tallwood Scholar Wins Pulitzer for Unequaled Style and Analytical Panache in World’s Coveted Prize
5 Words: Ancur (TABOO, SIMPLETON, LAMENTATION, TAUT, CORPULENT), Faver (TACIT, INTERMINABLE, INDIGNANT, REVERENCE, CLAMOR),
Havman (EFFIGY, DECORUM, DIFFIDENTLY, INSCRUTABLE, BRAVADO), Ibvil (INDIGNANT, IMPERVIOUS, DECORUM, DIFFIDENTLY, VICISSITUDES),
Legendary times
Jofar (MIMICRY, HINDERING, ILLUSIVE, MALEVOLENTLY, REBUIKE), Lotow (BELLIGERANCE, DREDGED, TRUCULENT, REBUKE, ROUSE),
Myath (TALISMAN, SIMPLETON, TABOO, SUPERFICIAL, LUMINOUS)
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Original Essay! Full Text!
When considering the concept of hero, select a character studied thus far in all our readings that represents a hero, one
that represents the antithesis of a hero, and one that represents a dynamic character who possesses both heroic and unheroic attributes. Why is it important to have all three types present in literature?
When considering the concept of a hero it is quite hard to stop yourself from thinking of
Superman. Super strength, the ability to fly and X-ray vision seem to be the only requirement
of being considered a “hero”. However there are different points of view on exactly what a
hero is. One of them include the fact the no one is a hero by force. There is a choice to help
someone, to save them, to be their guide or role model. These choices are a result of some
form of goodness. The best kind just may be the sweet innocent kind of goodness that would
help anyone under any circumstances. When I think of that type of innocence, I think of
Piggy, the little fat boy from the book Lord of the Flies. Piggy may have lacked that sense of
bravado that many super heroes carry, but he was a hero anyway. He was
Dear Reader
Errata:
reported the following:
Occasionally we make mistakes. Our newspaper is
committed to correcting any false reporting. In that light,
please note the following list of errors in prior publications.
Our apologies for any misleading information.
Please note the following corrected versions
below which correspond to the errors listed
on the right (20 points)
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In the Midsummers’ Edition, this newspaper falsely
1. Sundiata’s motif for picking up a tree was to redeem his mother’s shame.
2. Oedipus Rex is an excellent example of Verbal Irony.
3. The actor exeunted when his line was complete.
4. Pip’s answer to Estella regarding her natural beauty could fall under the
category of “Left Unsaid”
5. Jack was not a character of wise action because of his letting the fire go out.
6. Estella is mean, as shown in her Item Association.
7. The audience in the skene had many cathartic moments in Sophocle’s play.
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8. The Parados, so beautifully executed by the Chorus, followed a moving
Strophe / Antistrophe presentation.
9. The letter to the theatre was properly addressed
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“To: Apollo Maximus
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From: Hermes Expedius”
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10. Archetypes seen in literature are always stereotypical characters we can
relate to.
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er·ra·ta /ɪˈrɑtə, ɪˈreɪ-, ɪˈrætə/ noun 1. plural of erratum. 2. a list of errors and their corrections inserted, usually on a separate page or slip of paper, in a book or
other publication; corrigenda. Origin: 1625–35 / Usage note: Errata is originally the plural of the singular Latin noun erratum. Like many such borrowed nouns
(agenda; candelabra ), it came by the mid-17th century to be used as a singular noun, meaning “a list of errors or corrections to be made (in a book).” Despite
objections by some to this singular use, it is common in standard English:
BoxScores:
Archetypical Self ___/ 5; Revisionistic Self ____/5 ; DidUKnow ____/10; Be Verb ID ____ / 10; Your Fixes ____/10; Strophe ____/15; Antistrophe ____/15; PN
Labeling ____/5; PN Sampling ____/5; Literary Referencing ____ / 10; Hook ____ / 10; Broad Conclusion ____/10; Use of Vocabulary ____/10; Errata ____ /20 TOTAL ____ / 150
BoxScores
At the Arena:
Titicus Andreicus defeated (with
Trident and Studded Net) Iago the
Matador.
As this was a death match, there will
Be no rematch. If you purchased
Round two tickets, our apologies,
We cannot give out refunds.
Marius Antoinetticus lost a bout
To Guy Iteen in a swift decisive
One round tournament. Fans called
For a umpire review of the call of the
Match, however as this was a death
Match, there will be no umpire review.
Juliunius Seezaripmeapartubruticus
Will compete during the Ides of May.
He is considered an underdog despite
His defeat of the Gauls earlier this
decade.
Wrestling Book I
Gilgamesh v. Wildman
Gilgamesh
W-1 L-0
Wildman
W-0 L-1
BoxScores
Book II
Gilgamesh bye week
W-1 L-0
Wildman v. Birdman
Wildman
W-0 L-2
Strange bird man in dream
W-1 L-0
Book III-XII
Gilgamesh v. Sea Serpent
W-1 L-1
Gilgamesh v. Gilgamesh
W-1 L-1 T-1
Gilgamesh v. Strange Birdman
W-1 L-2 T-1
Gilgamesh v. Gilgamesh
W-2 L-2 T1
WWCC Sports Round UP
Sweden progressed to the gold medal game after winning
the 1v2 Page Play-off.
After blanking the first end, Sweden opened the scoring with a hit to score two points in the second
end. The teams then swapped singles all the way to the seventh end. In the eighth end, with Sweden
leading by 4-3, Muirhead drew nicely onto the button with her second stone and, in trying to winkle it
out, Sweden's fourth player Maria Prytz wrecked on a front guard, giving Scotland a steal of two and
the lead for the first time in the game, at 5-4.
Sweden blanked the ninth end to retain last stone advantage in the tenth. The Scots seemed to have
that end under control until Muirhead had a pick-up with her first stone, which gave Sweden a chance.
Even at that, Muirhead played a near-perfect freeze with her last, but Prytz was able to tap it out, as
Sweden scored three for their win.
After the game Swedish skip and lead player Margaretha Sigfridsson, said, "that was a fantastic game
and it feels so good to win. It was only the eighth end that was not so good from our side. It was so
close, we touched so many guards in that end and Eve got to steal two. But we thought we still had a
good chance to win the game and we thought it was so our game."
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RESULTS
Session 20: Scotland 5, Sweden 7.
Session 19: USA 7, Switzerland 4.
Session 18: Russia 6, Switzerland 7.
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