GRADE 8 POETRY UNIT Time and Timelessness: Moments To live in this world you must be able to do three things: to love what is mortal; to hold it against your bones knowing your own life depends on it; and, when the time comes to let it go, to let it go. - Mary Oliver The purpose of this unit is to engage students in an exploration of poetry that encompasses multiple forms and modes (text, song, spoken word), and reflects diverse nationalities and ethnicities. The unit’s selections will be linked by the theme of memory, movement, and time. The unrelenting fluidity of time underscores the moments that are fleeting, but also those that endure. In exploring the passage of time, students will investigate and discover moments – moments of regret, moments of joy, moments of connection, moments of suffering, moments of grace. The illustrated moments of shared humanity will prompt, throughout the unit, a personal exploration, coupled also with an investigation into aspects of social justice and responsibility. The unit is meant to introduce 8th graders to the multiple possibilities inherent in poetry. Poetry will be approached as a living, breathing, and dynamic art form; one that is personal and moved by interpretation. Students will be encouraged to foster a creative and respectful collaborative environment as they engage in the reading, creation, and appreciation of poetry. An experiential thrust will guide our exploration of poetry throughout the unit. This is to say that students will be encouraged to experience poetry by reading, listening, creating/writing, and performing poetry. By exploring their individual poetic voices through various exercises, students will be able to make connections not only between the ‘word’ and the ‘world’ (Freire, Leggo), but also between the ‘word’ and their worlds. The multi-modal focus of the unit will facilitate adaptations to accommodate diverse learners, and provide various opportunities to scaffold and reinforce elements of language to EL learners. The unit will culminate in a final project that will allow students to synthesize the various modalities that have been utilized throughout. Students will choose between two options. The first is to create a personal poetry book (“chapbook”) that will feature a selection of (3) poems by other poets with personal introductions explaining their choices, as well as a selection of (3) individual poems and illustrations. The second option will be to create an original spoken word piece or song, to be performed, along with a written component that explains the student’s creative process and interpretation. The final class will be transformed into a poetry café in which students will perform dramatic readings of selected poems/ spoken word pieces. Poetry 8 Unit Plan Lesson 1: About Me Lesson 4: Across Generations Lesson 7: Dis/Connections Lesson 10: Choices Lesson 2: Moments in Time Lesson 5: Dreams and Realities Lesson 8: Agency and Transformation Lesson 11: Poetry Cafe Lesson 3: Growing and Learning Lesson 6: Connections Lesson 9: Lasting Impressions Lesson 12: Poetry Cafe PLOs (Learning Objectives): A1: interact and collaborate in pairs and groups to support the learning of self and others, explore experiences, ideas, and information, understand the perspective of others, comprehend and respond to a variety of texts, and create a variety of texts B10: synthesize and extend thinking about texts by personalizing ideas and information, explaining relationships among ideas and information, apply new ideas and information, transforming existing ideas and information B12: Recognize and explain how structures and features of text shape readers’ and viewers’ construction of meaning, including form and genre, functions of text, literary elements, literary devices, use of language, non-fiction elements, visual/artistic devices C1: Write meaningful personal texts that explore ideas and information to experiment, express self, make connections, reflect and respond, and remember and recall. Student Outcomes/Objectives: Students will: - write original poetry, employing literary elements perform poetry analyze poetry write succinctly on poetry, demonstrating understanding of thematic and poetic devices William Cullen Bryant (1794-1878) defined poetry as "the art of exciting the imagination and touching the heart by selecting and arranging symbols and thoughts." Extra ideas to insert: children’s story – Ish – - Draw something, crumple it up, throw it to the middle of the room, someone else picks it up and writes a poem about the illustration, then returns it (meet and greet) to the original illustrator. - Come up with words for each letter of the alphabet that correspond to “idea” Lesson 1: About Me Opening: What is Poetry? - Discuss multiplicity of responses. Introduce poetry as a form that gives expression to personal voices. What is poetry? Why do we read poetry? Why do we write poetry? Brainstorm in pairs. Discuss as a class. Poetry as emotional journey: Poetry is emotion put into measure (Thomas Hardy). Poetry as discovery: I have never started a poem whose end I knew. Writing the poem is discovering (Robert Frost). Poetry as “babble and doodle” (Northrop Frye). The possibilities of language (Dr. Seuss – On Beyond Zebra). Read aloud: How to read a poem: Beginner’s Manual (Pamela Spiro Wagner) Activity: View film clip from V for Vendetta Explain alliteration as it is illustrated in the clip. Have students create their own personal introductions (one sentence) using alliteration of the first letter of their names. Have students write a list of things that they associate with their home/where they come from. Create a poem using items from this list, as metaphors Present poems. Closure: Youtube clip of Billy Collins-Litany Exit slip (1 thing you learned/enjoyed; 1 question) Lesson 2: Moments in time Opening: Write on board: “Before I die I want to…” Song: Seasons of Love (RENT) Free-write: most memorable moments of the year. Students will create individual poems out of their free-write paragraphs simply by omitting certain words, thereby reorganizing the words into a novel form (“freedom within constraint”). Share with class. Activity: Song: Red (Taylor Swift), to illustrate poetic devices: metaphor, irony, paradox, symbol. OR: Spoken word – Taylor Mali - “Why Falling in Love is Like Owning a Dog” to illustrate metaphor. Read aloud: Yehuda Amichai-Tourists. Have students illustrate as they listen. Have students discuss the poem in pairs. Discuss as a class. In small groups, students will go back to the “moments” poem they created in the opening. They will collaborate with their colleagues to co-create a group poem/choral montage about “moments”, arranging and re-arranging the order of the lines to explore differing interpretations and decide on the most effective version. (Coleridge: “poetry is about the best words in the best order”) Play poetic devices “memory” game (extension; time permitting) Closure: Read aloud: Mary Oliver-Percy. Have students write a one-word response to the poem. Pass along (“popcorn style”). Share. Ask students to reply (add to index card) to the question: Which is more important/reliable, the heart or the mind?” Pass along a second time. (gallery walk?) Song: Turn Turn Turn (CSNY) Lesson 3: Growing and Learning Opening: Ask students how they feel about being 13-14? In grade 8? Would they like to go back to a different age? Go forward to a different age? Why? Have they learned anything important this year? Discuss in pairs. Activity: Read aloud: With Age Wisdom – Archibald MacLeish. In pairs students will respond to guiding questions: 1. When he is young, why does he think that the world is so bad? 2. Why does he change his mind as he gets older? 3. The name of the poem is "With Age Wisdom" -- what do you think "wisdom" is? How is "wisdom" different than "knowledge"? Would you rather have "wisdom" or "knowledge"? 4. What are some of the "wonders" that you can think of? Explain why they are wonders. Each pair will write and/or illustrate “wonders” on a sheet of paper and tape onto wall. Students will be invited on a gallery walk of wonders and instructed to choose one wonder they particularly like and explain why. Hand out copies of Billy Collins’ On Turning 10. In small groups, students will create a performance of the poem in three sequential tableaux. Students perform. Discuss salient moments/ideas in the poem. Discuss irony. Closure: Song: You Bleed You Learn (Alanis Morisette). Distribute lyrics. Have students consider inference, denotation, and connotation, as they listen to the song. Discuss what is to be learned from pain. Assignment: Have students write a poem using one of the chorus lines from the song (“you learn”) as inspiration and incorporating the line into their poem. Lesson 4: Across generations Opening: Song: Cats in the Cradle (Cat Stevens). Free-write/journal prompt: Regrets? Share regrets if students wish to. What can we learn from regrets? Activity: Distribute copies of If by Rudyard Kipling. Ask students what character traits they associate with being a “man”/”woman”? Are they familiar with cultural customs that inculcate youth to “manhood/womanhood”? Read poem aloud. Think pair share: What advice do you agree with? How would you respond if you were Kipling’s son/daughter? Do you feel pressure to make your parents proud? Disappointment, regret, and moments of grace: View The Lanyard (Billy Collins) reading. View spoken word – Rachel McKibbens - Central Park Mother’s Day Discuss imagery. Divide students into small groups. Distribute copies of Carl Leggo’s poem about his father: I Still Hear the Bell Ringing. Have each group come up with a series of questions to fuel the discussion. Each group will write a paragraph analysis of the poem in response to their questions and present their interpretation to the class. Closure: View spoken word clip: Sarah Kay – “If I had a daughter”. What would you want to teach your children? Share my blog: On motherhood. Or, what I can learn from my children. Assignment: Ask students to find a poem or song they connect with, write a paragraph explaining their choice and a succinct analysis of the poem/song. Lesson 5: Dreams and Realities Opening: The fairy godmother’s gift: Students will write down three wishes. Students will then write down their whys for each wish. Repeat. Hold fast to dreams/for if dreams die/life is a broken winged bird/that cannot fly./Hold fast to dreams/ for when dreams go/life is a barren field/frozen with snow (Langston Hughes-Dreams). Students will respond in their journals to this quote and additional writing prompts: What dreams do you have for yourself? For your community? How can dreams become reality? What role can/do artists have in making dreams a reality? Activity: Tupac Shakur’s poem The Rose that Grew from Concrete. Langston Hughes’ poem Harlem. In small groups, students will discuss the song and the poem, juxtaposed. Each group will have its own set of questions to consider: 1) Genre: What makes a poem a poem? What makes a song a song? Explore stylistic differences and thematic similarities? How would you transpose poem to song and vice versa? 2) Critical literacy: Would these poems be different if they were written by someone who grew up in Vancouver’s west side? Consider the relationship of hometown, financial status, gender, and race, to ambitions and dreams. What environmental conditions are needed for dreams to take root and flourish? 3) Reader Response: Has anyone ever told you that you could not do something? How did it feel? What did you do? Describe a time when you succeeded against all odds? Have you ever dreamed of doing anything that you did not pursue? How do you feel about it now? Answer Hughes’ question: What happens to a dream deferred? Group 4: Identify and explain metaphors in the poem, and their relation one to another. Groups will present ideas to class. View spoken word: Daniel Beaty – “Knock Knock”. Journal prompt: How does this piece relate to dreams and reality? Closure: Song: Johnny Mercer – Dream. Students free-write or illustrate personal dreams. Homework: Write your own personal “dream” poem. Lesson 6: Connections Teacher Activity Introduction/ Play Lion King’s “Circle of Life” Anticipation chat: Write “We are all interconnected” on the board and give the students a couple minutes to respond in their journals Hook 5 min. Student Activity Students write personal response to song and written prompt. Time 5 min. Teacher Activity Body/Development (Modelling, - Guided Practice, Independent Practice, - Application of Strategy) 50 min. - - - Recite Donne selection from Meditation XVII and then have students read aloud together Student Activity 8 Min. Brief Lecture and Discussion: on idea of interconnectedness, meaning of Donne’s poem, poetic devices, teacher will demonstrate academic language (bricks and mortars) Present questions to discuss in small groups: What do you make of Donne’s message? (How) does it relate to you? Is the message more appropriate at the personal, social, political level? What are the consequences of following/not following Donne’s philosophy? Summarize group discussions as a whole class Students discuss theme and personal reflections in groups and subsequently as a class. 15 min. 2 min. 5 min. Play Simon and Garfunkel song: “I am a Rock”. Discuss contrast between song and Donne’s poem. Is the age of poet/songwriter when writing this significant? Artist biographies Time In groups of 3 or 4, have students create a melody for Donne’s poem; interpretive dance is also an option. Focus on tone and mood - Present songs to the class, discuss choices 10 min. 10 min. Teacher Activity Closure 5 min. Play Elton John’s version (youtube) Student Activity Time 5 Min. Lesson 7: Dis/connections Teacher Activity Show an image (“cellular indifference”) and ask students to write personal responses to the image. Play Bob Geldof’s Great Song of Indifference Teacher Activity - Distribute copies of Brueghel’s painting Icarus with no explanation of painting and its subject and divide students into small groups. Student Activity Students write personal response to image. Student Activity Students will study (“read”) the painting and write down questions that come up as well as their own version of the story Small groups will present their questions and versions Time 5 min. Time 10 Min. 10 min. 2 min. - Teacher will explain the context of the painting: the myth of Daedalus. 8 min. - - Teacher will pass out copies of W.H. Auden’s Musee des Beaux Arts and read the first half of the poem aloud. Pair students up and have them discuss the relation between Auden’s poem and Brueghel’s image. Teacher will read the poem again, this time in its entirety, as well as William Carlos Williams’s poem Landscape with the Fall of Icarus and lead discussion on the poems, highlighting the central themes and scaffolding academic language and literary terms. Students will discuss the relation between the first half of Auden’s poem and image. 10 min. 13 min. Write quote on the board: “Indifference and neglect often do much more damage than outright dislike.” (J.K. Rowling) Have students discuss in small groups. In small groups, students will discuss Rowling’s quote in the context of their own experience, and create an image or a quote that is either cautionary or inspirational. Teacher will tape images and quotes to wall, setting up a “gallery walk”. Students will walk around and gaze at images and quotes Teacher Activity Student Activity Teacher will read Martin Niemoller’s Time 5 Min. quote: First they came for the Socialists, and I did not speak out-- Because I was not a Socialist. Then they came for the Trade Unionists, and I did not speak out- Because I was not a Trade Unionist. Then they came for the Jews, and I did not speak out-- Because I was not a Jew. Then they came for me--and there was no one left to speak for me. Sing along: Blowin’ in the Wind (Bob Dylan) Lesson 8: Agency and Transformation Teacher Activity Lead a “check-in” exercise where students stand in a circle and each one answers in one word each of three prompts: ‘mind’, ‘emotion’, and ‘body’. Student Activity Time 10 min. Teacher Activity Teacher will write on board: “Never criticize someone until you have walked a mile in his/her shoes.” Teacher will play “What it’s Like” by Everlast. Teacher will then ask each student to write on index cards, a one-word response to the quote and or the song. Teacher will then have students pass the card along (a variation on the “popcorn” exercise) until she says “stop”. Teacher will invite students to share some responses (on the cards they are holding). Teacher will then ask students to respond on the card now in front of them: Why does Everlast use opposition in the chorus? Student Activity Time Students will write an individual emotional response to quote/song and then pass on their cards to someone else. Students will read aloud one another’s responses. 15 min. I've seen a rich man beg I've seen a good man sin I've seen a tough man cry I've seen a loser win And a sad man grin I heard an honest man lie I've seen the good side of bad And the down side of up And everything between Teacher will invite students to share responses and generate discussion. Each group is to come up with a Teacher will ask students to consider, in small groups, what events/situations are going on today -- in our society, in our schools! -where people are in need of help, and often met with apathy. Outline terms and concepts such as race, ethnicity, status, gender, difference. scenario exemplifying some injustice or suffering. Teacher will introduce the idea tableaux (youtube exemplar). Teacher will divide students into groups by having them walk around the class and organically group together when she says “get into a group of four”). Explain what a tableau is. Students, in small groups, will create a tableau of their particular scenario. Teacher will play Greenday’s “Minority” and ask students to write, in their journals: Why does the singer/songwriter want to be the “minority”? Do you feel like a minority? Do you want to be a minority? Teacher Activity 10 min. 15 min. Groups will present their tableaux. With each presentation, prompt the rest of the students to voice what they see, and to actively join or take the place of one of the group members in order to create a more positive scenario. Students will pass along index cards and add a response to what’s already written. Students will pass cards once again and report answers. Student Activity 5 min. “Check-out” exercise Students will each come up with one word to describe their response to the lesson’s activity. They will form two lines, one across from the other, and as each student enters the space in between the two lines and walks to the end and back the students on either side will repeatedly utter their word softy. Homework: Students will research and find one person who stood up against injustice. They will write a one-page report about this person and come to class ready to present. Lesson 9: Lasting Impressions Starter: “A word fitly spoken is like apples of gold in pictures of silver.” – King Solomon (Proverbs 25:11). Ask students to respond to this in a free-write. Discuss in pairs. Discuss as a class, the power of words, and of actions. Activity: Draw/Write/Critique: Play Tchaikovsky Symphony no. 6, first or fourth movement. Students will illustrate on index cards, as they listen. Students will then pass on their illustrations and will write a poem inspired by the illustration they have before them. They will then pass on their index cards a second time and write a critique of the poem they now have before them. Distribute copies of The Arrow and Song – Longfellow. In small groups, students will discuss the poem. How are our words and actions like songs and arrows? Each group will examine symbolism and metaphor and come up with two alternative symbols (metaphors!) that relate to the role of the arrow and the song, respectively. Students will then create a new poem incorporating their new symbols. Students will “breathe [their] song into the air,” presenting their refashioned poems. An alternative/extension to the Longfellow poem: Students will literalize the poem’s figurative "breath[ing] a song into the air" by writing down a poetic line that incorporates their new metaphors on an index card, and toss their cards across the room. Students will then add another line to the index card they have “caught”. The poem in progress will then get tossed and picked up again, becoming transformed in the process. In small groups students will create a dramatic interpretation of their poems. Students will respond, on the board, to the phrase: “If I could right a wrong I would __” The class will create a choral montage reading of these words. Closure: Show some examples of haikus (5-7-5). Teacher will show a wordle creation based on students’ “You Learn” and “Dream” poems. Students will jot down the three words that pop out at them. Students will write a haiku inspired by these three words. Lesson 10: Choices Opening: I am master of my fate/I am captain of my soul. (William Earnest Henley) Bring in two wrapped boxes, one in nice wrapping paper, one in crumpled newspaper. Ask students which they would choose and why. Open boxes (jewel in crumpled wrapper; pepper in the other). Discuss reasons for our choices. Activity: Distribute copies of The Road Not Taken-Robert Frost. Read aloud with students (one group per stanza). In pairs, students will discuss theme, imagery, metaphor, and irony. Lead class discussion and analysis of poem. Students will create a choral montage of the poem, wherein each of four small groups represents one stanza. Choice revisited: Students’ individual poem/song selections will be posted on the walls around the classroom. Students will be invited to visit the various poems (gallery walk) and write down one line that they especially like from any of the poems. In small groups, students will create a new poem incorporating the lines each has selected (a variation on a “found poem”). Students will perform their new poems. Closure: Journal prompt: Which road will you take and why? Assignment: Transpose your selected poem into another medium: art, rap, video, spoken word, dance. Lesson 11: Poetry Café Starter: “Making rain” exercise Students and teacher will perform: o o o o favorite poems original poems spoken word songs Lesson 12: Poetry Café Starter: Drum Circle dance circle More performances. On inspiration: Video: Dead Poets Society scene (Carpe Diem) Sing along: Hallelujah (Leonard Cohen) [Student choices] Additional exercise: Metaphor poetry – “I am more like” – choose from list of comparisons (I am like__; I am not like__); add why + action. I.e. I am a tug boat Small but strong and reliable Chugging along at a slow and steady pace I am not a sailboat Tall and proud and elegant Gliding quietly through life