Elements of Fiction Literary Terms & Techniques in American Short Fiction Elements of Fiction PRETEST CHOOSE THE CORRECT LITERARY TERM FROM THE CHOICES PROVIDED. 1. Which of the following is an element of plot? • A. Symbolism • B. Setting • C. Conflict • D. Mood 2. The attitude of a writer toward a subject or an audience, generally conveyed through his or her choice of words, is called • A. Symbolism • B. Mood • C. Denouement • D. Tone 3. The occasion of greatest tension, the decisive moment or the turning point in the plot of a story is referred to as the story’s • A. Resolution • B. Climax • C. Conflict • D. Tone 4. The main idea or an underlying meaning of a story that may be stated directly or indirectly is the _____________ of the story. • A. Symbol • B. Conflict • C. Setting • D. Theme 5. The central, main or leading character or figure in a story is the • A. Antagonist • B. Foil • C. Protagonist • D. Denouement 6. When words are used in such a way that their intended meaning differs from their actual meaning or when a situation ends up in quite a different way than what was anticipated, an author is using which of the following literary techniques? • A. Symbolism • B. Irony • C. Mood • D. Tone 7. Authors often use ______ to create suspense by giving readers clues or hints about what will happen later in a story. • A. Symbolism • B. Tone • C. Foreshadowing • D. Irony 8. The atmosphere or distinctive emotional quality of a story is referred to as • A. Tone • B. Mood • C. Setting • D. Conflict 9. ______________ refers to the perspective from which a story is told or its mode of narration. • A. Point of View • B. Symbolism • C. Irony • D. Protagonist 10. The process by which an author reveals or develops the personality of a participant in a story is called • A. Point of View • B. Irony • C. Mood • D. Characterization 11. A literary device used to introduce a reader to background information integral or crucial to the plot of a story is called • A. Denouement • B. Exposition • C. Climax • D. Falling Action 12. The final outcome of a complex sequence of events or the resolution of the conflict in a story is called • A. Falling Action • B. Climax • C. Rising Action • D. Denouement 13. Using an object, action or word to stand for an abstract idea or concept is called • A. Symbolism • B. Tone • C. Irony • D. Plot 14. A literary element that involves a struggle, either internal or external, between two opposing forces is called • A. Plot • B. Tone • C. Irony • D. Conflict 15. Which literary element includes the historical moment in time and geographic location in which a story takes place and describes the main backdrop and mood for a story? • A. Setting • B. Mood • C. Tone • D. Plot Identifying the Elements of Plot, Setting, Conflict, Character and Foreshadowing in “A Sound of Thunder” Ray Bradbury’s groundbreaking science fiction short story RAY BRADBURY (1920-2012) -Celebrated American science fiction writer -One of the most important writers of the 20th century -Author of The Martian Chronicles and Fahrenheit 451 -The film The Butterfly Effect was based on an idea Bradbury first articulated in his short story “A Sound of Thunder” “We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out.” - Ray Bradbury ELEMENTS OF PLOT A story’s plot is composed of the chain of events that lead to an ultimate resolution of the central conflict in the story. ELEMENTS OF PLOT • Exposition—background information about characters and setting at the beginning of a story • Rising Action—a related series of incidents or events moving the plot of a story toward the point of greatest interest or tension • Climax—the moment of greatest tension or the turning point in a story • Falling Action—the actions following the climax of a story, which lead to the resolution of the central conflict • Denouement/Resolution—the final outcome of the story CONFLICT A conflict is a literary element involving a struggle between two opposing forces, typically a protagonist and antagonist; however, a conflict may be external or internal. TWO TYPES OF CONFLICT 1. An internal (or psychological) conflict occurs when a character experiences opposing emotions or desires. 2. An external conflict occurs when a character finds herself or himself struggling against outside forces that hamper that character’s progress. EXTERNAL CONFLICT An external conflict occurs when a character finds herself or himself struggling against outside forces that hamper that character’s progress. This type of conflict typically occurs between a protagonist and antagonist. SETTING The setting is the environment in which a story or event takes place. Setting can include specific information about time and place [e.g. Boston, Massachusetts, in 1809] or can simply be descriptive [eg. a lonely farmhouse on a dark night). From The Writer’s Craft, 2014. FORESHADOWING Foreshadowing is a way of indicating or hinting at what will come later in a story. It is a literary technique that writers often use to create suspense. From The Writer’s Craft, 2014. Identifying Elements of Plot, Setting, Conflict and Character in “A Sound of Thunder” First Step: • Follow along with the text of Bradbury’s “A Sound of Thunder.” • While you are listening and reading, use your highlighter to note key elements of the plot and make quick annotations (brief notes) in the margins of your text about the sequence of events in the story. • Identify the protagonist and antagonist in the story. Label each one in the margins of your text. Identifying Elements of Plot, Setting, Conflict and Character in “A Sound of Thunder” Second Step: • Review the graphic organizer that illustrates the elements of plot (exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, and denouement/resolution). • With a partner, discuss which events/information fit into the categories associated with the elements of plot. • After discussing each element with your partner, record these events in the appropriate spaces of your graphic organizer and glue or staple your completed graphic organizer into your Writer’s Notebook. Identifying Elements of Plot, Setting, Conflict and Character in “A Sound of Thunder” Third Step: • In your Writer’s Notebook, answer the following questions: • 1. Who are the protagonist and antagonist in the story? Describe their conflict. • 2. Describe the major settings for the action of the story. List some of the words that Bradbury uses to describe those settings. • 3. Describe an instance of foreshadowing in the story. How does it help to create suspense? FORESHADOWING Lesperance explains to Eckles the danger that small changes in the past could have catastrophic effects on the future foreshadows the changes that occur at the end of the story. The persistent warnings to Eckles and others to stay off the path suggest that he or another character will eventually step off the path. Thematic Reflection The theme is the main idea or message that an author is attempting to get across in a story. In “A Sound of Thunder,” the theme appears to be the idea that small actions can have major consequences. Write at least one full page in your Writer’s Notebook reflecting on the relationship between our actions and their consequences or create a piece of short fiction with the same theme as “A Sound of Thunder.” Identifying Symbolism and Allegory in Hawthorne’s “Young Goodman Brown” and King’s “The Man in the Black Suit” Understanding Short Stories on a Figurative and Literal Level Symbolism Using an object, action or word to stand for an abstract idea or concept Allegory -a story in which the characters and events are symbols that stand for ideas about human life -most common example is the fable -story not meant to be taken literally, but figuratively Meaning: Literal v. Figurative LITERAL FIGURATIVE • actual and exact meaning of a word or event • When speech or writing is not literal, it is figurative, like when you say you have a ton of homework. [From Vocabulary.com.] • The “dictionary definition” of a word • Taking words in their usual or most basic sense without metaphor or allegory • Synonym: metaphorical • “a meaning that is different from the basic meaning” Merriam-Webster • Not literal Allegory • Look at this short clip from the film Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, in which Hermione reads the allegorical “Tale of the Three Brothers.” • Video Link • What ideas can be represented by characters or events from this story? NATHANIEL HAWTHORNE -1804-1864 -Shares distinction as America’s original ‘goth’ with Edgar Allan Poe (root, Gothic) -author of The Scarlet Letter -Dark Romanticism: pessimistic literature which views human nature as prone to self-destruction (often involves the supernatural, the sinister, and dark imagery) Symbolism and Hawthorne’s “Young Goodman Brown” First Step: Understanding the Story • As you read and listen to the story, answer the Reading Comprehension Questions. They are written in the order of the story. • This counts as one of your Reading Comprehension/Critical Reading Quizzes. Potential Symbols in “Young Goodman Brown” The Path The Wilderness Faith’s Pink Ribbons The Old Man’s Serpent-Headed Staff **What about the Old Man himself, or even “Goodman” Brown? Symbolism and Hawthorne’s “Young Goodman Brown” Second Step: Identifying the Symbols • Re-read the story and use your highlighter to mark where at least two (out of three) symbols appear in the text. • On each of your 2 symbolism handouts (Symbol Graphic), draw a graphic representation of one of the symbols you have identified. • Write down a portion of the line in which the symbol appeals in the text. Symbolism and Hawthorne’s “Young Goodman Brown” Second Step: Understanding the Symbols • After you have created a graphic representation of each symbol and identified its location in the text, write down your opinion about what you believe the symbol represents. • Tape, staple or glue your handouts into your Writer’s Notebook. Symbolism and Hawthorne’s “Young Goodman Brown” Third Step: Thematic Reflection #2 • Create at least one fullpage entry in your Writer’s Notebook that explores the idea of a journey into darkness in your own life. OR • Create your own allegory. Be sure to pay attention to how your symbols or characters will represent your ideas about human life/morality. Indirect and Direct Characterization in Stephen King’s “The Man in the Black Suit” Revealing personality through express statements and by implication CHARACTERIZATION The process by which an author reveals or develops the personality of a participant in a story Direct v. Indirect Characterization DIRECT CHARACTERIZATION INDIRECT CHARACTERIZATION • Direct Characterization occurs when the author tells the audience what the personality of a character is. • Indirect Characterization occurs when the author gives clues or hints about the personality of a character through five basic methods (STEAL): • Example: “The patient boy and quiet girl were both well mannered and did not disobey their mother.” • Explanation: The author is directly telling the audience the personality of these two children. The boy is “patient,” and the girl is “quiet.” • Speech: What does the character say? How does the character speak? • Thoughts: What is revealed through the character’s private thoughts and feelings? • Effect On Others: What is revealed through the character’s effect on other people? How do other characters feel or behave in reaction to the character? • Actions: How does the character behave? • Looks: What does the character look like? How does the character dress? Characterization in “A Sound of Thunder” • Direct Characterization • “Sh!” Travis jerked angrily. “He hasn’t seen us yet.” • What character trait is expressly revealed? • Indirect Characterization: – “’ . . . Traveling you back in time sixty million years to bag the biggest game in all of Time. Your personal check’s still there. Tear it up.’ – Mr. Eckels looked at the check. His fingers twitched.” – What character trait can we infer? Characterization in “Young Goodman Brown” • Direct Characterization: • “Goodman Brown recognized a very pious and exemplary dame.” • What character trait is expressly revealed? • Indirect Characterization: – “On the Sabbath day, when the congregation were singing a holy psalm, he could not listen because an anthem of sin rushed loudly upon his ear . . . “ – What character trait can we infer? Stephen King -Born 1947 (still alive, of course) -Author of 55 novels and almost 200 short stories -Considered a master of horror and suspense, as well as the modern-day Edgar Allan Poe -”The Man in the Black Suit” is King’s homage (tribute) to Hawthorne’s “Young Goodman Brown.” Activities for your Writer’s Notebook • In your Literature Circles, each group member should have a different role for each section of the reading. There will be three sections. • There are four roles so you will not be performing all of the tasks; however, no more than two group members can perform the same task simultaneously. • At least one group member must serve as a summarizer for each section. • Each group member must add at least one indirect and one direct example of characterization per section to their Characterization Charts. Point of View and Irony in Shirley Jackson’s “The Lottery” Exploring Perspective and Plot Twists Point of View the perspective from which a story is told or its mode of narration Multiple Perspectives and Points of View • Objective Point of View The writer tells what happens without stating more than can be inferred from the story's action and dialogue. The narrator never discloses anything about what the characters think or feel, remaining a detached observer. • Third Person Point of View The narrator does not participate in the action of the story as one of the characters, but lets us know exactly how the characters feel. We learn about the characters through this outside voice. Multiple Perspectives and Points of View • First Person Point of View The narrator participates in the action of the story and what the narrator is recounting might not be the objective truth. We should question the trustworthiness of the accounting. • Narrator uses first-person pronoun “I” • Omniscient and Limited Omniscient Points of View A narrator who knows everything about all the characters is all knowing, or omniscient. • A narrator whose knowledge is limited to one character, either major or minor, has a limited omniscient point of view IRONY A meaningful contradiction between appearance and reality, between expectation and outcome, or between meaning and intention. Three Types of Irony • Verbal Irony – Occurs when someone says something that deliberately contradicts what that person actually means • Situational Irony – Occurs when something happens that contradicts our expectations • Dramatic Irony – Occurs when the reader or audience is aware of a contradiction that a character does not know Identifying Point of View in “The Lottery” “There was a great deal of fussing to be done before Mr. Summers declared the lottery open. There were the lists to make up--heads of families, heads of households in each family, members of each household in each family. There was the proper swearing-in of Mr. Summers by the postmaster, as the official of the lottery; at one time, some people remembered, there had been a recital of some sort, performed by the official of the lottery, a perfunctory, tuneless chant that had been rattled off duly each year; some people believed that the official of the lottery used to stand just so when he said or sang it, others believed that he was supposed to walk among the people, but years and years ago this part of the ritual had been allowed to lapse.” Recognizing Irony in “The Lottery” "They do say," Mr. Adams said to Old Man Warner, who stood next to him, "that over in the north village they're talking of giving up the lottery." Old Man Warner snorted. "Pack of crazy fools," he said. "Listening to the young folks, nothing's good enough for them. Next thing you know, they'll be wanting to go back to living in caves . . . Used to be a saying about 'Lottery in June, corn be heavy soon.' First thing you know, we'd all be eating stewed chickweed and acorns. There's always been a lottery," he added petulantly. "Bad enough to see young Joe Summers up there joking with everybody." "Some places have already quit lotteries," Mrs. Adams said. "Nothing but trouble in that," Old Man Warner said stoutly. "Pack of young fools." WHAT OTHER EXAMPLES OF IRONY DID YOU OBSERVE? Discussion: Contemporary Connection • Reaping in Suzanne Collins’ novel The Hunger Games may have been inspired by “The Lottery.” • Watch the clip from the reaping clip from the film. • What similarities and differences can you recognize? Thematic Reflection #16 • OPTION ONE: In what way might our life be a lottery? • We don’t choose the culture or society into which we are born; we don’t choose the parents or guardians who raise us, and we may not choose important elements of our life like our religion or political viewpoint. • Do we shape our world or does the world shape us? Explain your answer. • OPTION TWO: Man Warner justifies the events of the story based on superstition and tradition. What are some actions and beliefs in contemporary American society that are justified primarily by tradition and superstition? Using Mood and Tone to Create Tension Donald Barthelme’s “Game” DONALD BARTHELME 1931-1989 One of the original founders of the University of Houston Creative Writing Program Newspaper reporter for the Houston Post Winner of National Book Award TONE Tone is an attitude of a writer toward a subject or an audience. Tone is generally conveyed through the choice of words or the viewpoint of a writer on a particular subject. • Observe the tone of another short story by Donald Barthelme “The School.” – “And the trees all died. They were orange trees. I don’t know why they died, they just died. Something wrong with the soil possibly or maybe the stuff we got from the nursery wasn’t the best. We complained about it. So we’ve got thirty kids there, each kid had his or her own little tree to plant and we’ve got these thirty dead trees. All these kids looking at these little brown sticks, it was depressing.” • The use of adjectives “dead” and “depressing” sets a gloomy tone in the passage. As trees signify life here, their unexpected “death” from an unknown cause gives the above passage an unhappy and pessimistic tone. – From LiteraryDevices.net MOOD The atmosphere of a literary piece, which engages a reader’s emotions. Mood can be developed through setting, theme, tone and diction (choice of words). Journal Activity: Identifying Mood and Tone in “Game” • Select three quotations from the story and write them in your journal. • Explain how Barthelme’s choice of words (diction) establishes the mood and/or tone in each of the quotations you choose.