The Adventures of Tom Sawyer – Literary Analysis Assignment: You will choose one of the topics below, and write a two-three page, wellorganized, detailed essay answering the question. Your essay must include the author, title of the novel and some background information (what the book is about in 1-2 sentences). You should refer back to the text in your body paragraphs, but do NOT overload the reader with quotations (1-2 quotes in the entire essay is enough). Check the Team 2 homework website for a link to the online text. Topics: These are some sample thesis statements for each of the topics – keep in mind that these are just samples, and your position DOES NOT have to be the same as these samples. Feel free to take the opposite side. 1. Tom’s changes throughout the novel. Sample Thesis: Tom’s behavior and treatment of others change drastically from the beginning of the novel to the end. 2. Aunt Polly character analysis Sample Thesis: Aunt Polly clearly has no backbone or control over Tom, and is easily influenced by others. 3. The Great Law of Human Action Sample Thesis: Based on the actions of Tom and Becky and my own life experience, it is clear that the best way to make someone want something is to make that thing difficult to get. 4. Mark Twain’s views of the world - what would he think if he was alive today? Sample Thesis: If Mark Twain did not seem happy with the way the world was run in the 1800s, he certainly would not approve of today’s society. 5. Huck’s view of money Sample Thesis: People in today’s society seem to be completely consumed by wealth, but money cannot buy happiness. Format Introduction: You must include the title and author of the novel, background information and a clear thesis statement. Your thesis statement is the focus (topic) of your essay—i.e. Tom’s witness of Dr. Robinson’s murder forced him to change from an irresponsible kid into a mature young adult. Your thesis is what your essay will prove through the use of examples. Body Paragraphs: Paragraphs must be clearly focused around a topic sentence and provide detailed support for your thesis through the use of textual evidence and specific examples, in addition to your own insights and interpretations. Direct quotations may be used, but do not overload the reader with quotes (1-2 are fine). You will need to explain and analyze these quotes in relation to your topic, as well as provide your own commentary on the quote and why you believe it is significant. You should determine the number of body paragraphs that you believe is necessary in order to thoroughly prove your thesis. In other words – this DOES NOT have to be a five paragraph essay. Your organizers allow you to plan for five paragraphs - make adjustments as needed. Conclusion: Restate your thesis and main points of the essay. No first or second person in this piece (you may use he, she, they, etc.) No contractions in formal writing (unless they are in quotes; don’t = do not) Do not forget to include the title, author and background information in the first few lines (The Adventures of Tom Sawyer; the title must be in italics or underlined) You should show depth of thinking in your essay (i.e. analysis of theme, text support, change in character, etc.) Be sure to use MMS writing standards The Adventures of Tom Sawyer – Essay Topics You may choose from the following topics for your literary analysis. Each topic comes with guiding questions. Your essay should NOT simply be a list of answers to the questions, but use them to help formulate your ideas. You may also use text-to-text connections to help your reader understand your views. 1. At several points during the novel, we have talked about Tom’s character and whether or not he has changed as a person throughout the novel. This essay will ask you to analyze Tom’s character and discuss whether or not he has truly changed as a result of the events that occur in the novel. What was he like before he witnesses the murder scene? How does his treatment of other people change throughout the course of the novel? At the beginning of the novel, would you consider him mature for his age or immature? Does that change by the end of the novel? What other ways does Tom change? (Think about his relationship with friends, girls, Aunt Polly etc.) Your explanation must provide examples of these changes from the text and state the reasons why or circumstances that caused him to undergo such changes. 2. One of the things that define Tom’s character is his relationship with Aunt Polly. Analyze Aunt Polly’s character. Is Aunt Polly wrongly stereotyped as a strict, unfair disciplinarian? Do you consider Tom to be wiser than Aunt Polly? Who do you think Aunt Polly really is? How does she feel about Tom and other boys his age? 3. At several points throughout the novel, Mark Twain makes references to the Great Law of Human Action, which states that, “in order to make a man or a boy covet a thing, it is only necessary to make the thing difficult to attain” ( 13). Analyze this phrase and the way Twain uses it throughout the novel. Consider Tom’s relationships with his friends, and how he uses the law to manipulate them. How does Tom/Becky/Amy use this law throughout the novel? Does this law still apply today? Do you agree or disagree with this law? Perhaps share some real examples of when you used this law, had it used against you, or saw it used on someone else. 4. One of the reasons Mark Twain wrote The Adventures of Tom Sawyer was to poke fun at certain customs and traditions that occurred in his society. He used humor to convey his feelings for the way people lived their lives. Analyze some of the ways Mark Twain uses satire* to mock certain things throughout the story. Also - if Twain were alive today, what would he be like? How do you think he'd feel about society today? How does Mark Twain portray figures of authority? (teachers, parents etc.) Why do you think he portrays them in this way? If Mark Twain were alive today, how do you think he would feel about the world? What are some things today he might choose to mock? In the 1800s, he was a steamboat captain and a writer. What professions would he choose today? (This is not meant to have any impact on your views or beliefs, just an analysis of what Twain would think based on your knowledge of him). Is there someone alive today (celebrity, family member, friend etc.) who reminds you of Mark Twain? *Satire: The use of irony or sarcasm to ridicule or mock something. 5. Right at the end of the novel, Huck Finn makes the statement that “being rich ain’t all its cracked up to be. It’s just worry and worry and sweat and sweat, and a-wishing you was dead all the time” (210). You saw a similar view expressed by the Socs when you read The Outsiders (Cherry compared it to a rat race). Analyze this view. Think about the phrase “money doesn’t always buy happiness.” Do you agree/disagree with it? Why does Huck feel this way? How do you think you would feel after acquiring a treasure such as Huck did? Do you think people in general are overly obsessed with money and possessions? Why/why not? Graphic Organizer Thesis:________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________ Points of Example Elaboration/Specific Evidence (This should be the bulk Discussion (Minimum of 2 per of your paragraph) POD) Adventures of Tom Sawyer Organizer Assignment -Write a 2-3 page paper on one of the topics from Tom Sawyer. Do not use 1st person – “I” or “me” Do not use contractions – don’t, won’t etc. Include a heading and a title Include 2 quotations Typed – double spaced, 1 inch margins, size 12 characters, clear font, 1 inch margin Handwritten – white lined paper, blue/black ink or pencil, skip a line, one side written on only, Write neatly, clearly, in complete sentences with transitional words and phrases Proofread and edit your work Introduction (Paragraph One) Title of the novel (underlined) __________________________________________________ Author_________________________________ Background information – what was the book about?___________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________ Thesis Statement - Write a thesis statement (The subject is) What is the topic of your essay? You will prove your thesis using points of discussion, examples and quotes. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph Two (Body Paragraph One) Topic Sentence – What is the 1st point of discussion to support your thesis statement? _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Example 1– Add examples or quotations from the book to support your 1st point. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Elaboration – Provide details and rich vocabulary to explain your example. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Example 2 - Add examples or quotations from the book to support your 1st point. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Elaboration – Provide details and rich vocabulary to explain your example. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Example 3(optional)- Add examples or quotations from the book to support your 1st point. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _____________ Elaboration – Provide details and rich vocabulary to explain your example. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph Three (Body Paragraph Two) Topic Sentence – What is the 2nd point of discussion to support your thesis statement? _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Example 1– Add examples or quotations from the book to support your 2nd point. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Elaboration – Provide details and rich vocabulary to explain your example. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Example 2 - Add examples or quotations from the book to support your 2nd point. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Elaboration – Provide details and rich vocabulary to explain your example. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Example 3(optional)- Add examples or quotations from the book to support your 2nd point. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Elaboration – Provide details and rich vocabulary to explain your example. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph Four (Body Paragraph Three) Topic Sentence – What is the 3rd point of discussion to support your thesis statement? _____________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ Example 1– Add examples or quotations from the book to support your 3rd point. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Elaboration – Provide details and rich vocabulary to explain your example. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Example 2 - Add examples or quotations from the book to support your 3rd point. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Elaboration – Provide details and rich vocabulary to explain your example. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Example 3(optional)- Add examples or quotations from the book to support your 3rd point. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Elaboration – Provide details and rich vocabulary to explain your example. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 5 Conclusion – Restate your thesis (the subject is) and two points using different words. Thesis restatement_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Point 1 restatement____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Point 2 restatement____________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Clincher______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ Name ___________________________________ Per. _______ Date: Rubric for Tom Sawyer Assessment – Teacher Completes Ideas Organization Voice Word Choice Sentence Fluency Conventions 4 -Well Above Proficient/Exceptional 3-Proficient for Grade Level 2- Below Proficient Offers an extensive, creative, well-thought out analysis of the topic chosen. Uses the text to support ideas. Offers a well-thoughtout analysis of the topic chosen. Uses the text to support ideas. Although ideas are present, they are unclear or underdeveloped. The support for these ideas may be brief or repetitive 33-36 24-32 22-23 Either ideas are not clearly given or little attempt is made at analysis. The support is irrelevant or not well developed 0-21 Very disorganized and not easy to follow. Most paragraphs were not well constructed and did not contain related information, topic, or concluding sentences. Strong transitions help to link words and ideas. All paragraphs include a topic sentence, supporting details with explanation, and a concluding sentence. Clearly organized, although an occasional lapse may occur. Most paragraphs include a topic, supporting details with explanation, and a concluding sentence. Paragraphs include related information but were typically not constructed well. May be missing a topic or concluding sentence. 15-16 The voice expresses interest and complete understanding. It engages the reader. 12-14 The voice expresses interest but needs to show more understanding. 10-11 The voice needs to express an understanding. 0-9 The voice does not express understanding. 7-8 Proper use of nouns, verbs, and adverbs create a clear message. Strong vocabulary makes the voice stronger. 5-6 Proper use of nouns, verbs, and adverbs, but more precise vocabulary is needed. 4 Too many general words are used. More clear, concise vocabulary is needed. 0-3 General, overused, or inappropriate words make this essay hard to understand. 7-8 All sentences are skillfully written allowing ideas to flow smoothly. There is little to no repetition of phrases. 5-6 Some sentence problems exist. May contain some choppy or rambling sentences. Repetition occurs. 0-3 Inconsistent control of sentence structure. Little to no sentence variety. Very difficult to follow. 15-16 12-14 4 Ideas do not flow smoothly. Multiple instances of repetition occur. Contains several choppy or rambling sentences. 10-11 The essay has several errors that may confuse the reader. 10-11 The number of errors confuses the reader and makes the essay hard to read. 0-9 The essay has a few minor errors. 15-16 Score: 1-Well Below Proficient/Struggling The essay has some errors in punctuation, spelling, or grammar. 12-14 0-9 Rubric for Tom Sawyer Assessment– Student Completes Ideas Organization Voice Word Choice Sentence Fluency Conventions 4 -Well Above Proficient/Exceptional 3-Proficient for Grade Level 2- Below Proficient Offers an extensive, creative, well-thought out analysis of the topic chosen. Uses the text to support ideas. Offers a well-thoughtout analysis of the topic chosen. Uses the text to support ideas. Although ideas are present, they are unclear or underdeveloped. The support for these ideas may be brief or repetitive Either ideas are not clearly given or little attempt is made at analysis. The support is irrelevant or not well developed 22-23 Paragraphs include related information but were typically not constructed well. May be missing a topic or concluding sentence. 0-21 Very disorganized and not easy to follow. Most paragraphs were not well constructed and did not contain related information, topic, or concluding sentences. 0-9 The voice does not express understanding. 33-36 Strong transitions help to link words and ideas. All paragraphs include a topic sentence, supporting details with explanation, and a concluding sentence. Clearly organized, although an occasional lapse may occur. Most paragraphs include a topic, supporting details with explanation, and a concluding sentence. 15-16 The voice expresses interest and complete understanding. It engages the reader. 7-8 12-14 The voice expresses interest but needs to show more understanding. 5-6 10-11 The voice needs to express an understanding. 4 0-3 Proper use of nouns, verbs, and adverbs create a clear message. Strong vocabulary makes the voice stronger. 7-8 All sentences are skillfully written allowing ideas to flow smoothly. There is little to no repetition of phrases. Proper use of nouns, verbs, and adverbs, but more precise vocabulary is needed. Too many general words are used. More clear, concise vocabulary is needed. General, overused, or inappropriate words make this essay hard to understand. 5-6 Some sentence problems exist. May contain some choppy or rambling sentences. Repetition occurs. 4 Ideas do not flow smoothly. Multiple instances of repetition occur. Contains several choppy or rambling sentences. 0-3 Inconsistent control of sentence structure. Little to no sentence variety. Very difficult to follow. 15-16 The essay has a few minor errors. 12-14 The essay has some errors in punctuation, spelling, or grammar. 10-11 The essay has several errors that may confuse the reader. 0-9 The number of errors confuses the reader and makes the essay hard to read. 0-9 15-16 Score: 24-32 1-Well Below Proficient/Struggling 12-14 10-11