Quoting Made Easy
Most of your essay is in your own
words, but you use quotes to:
•Back up your own thinking
•Illustrate your own thinking
•Prove that your analysis or
conclusions are correct
You can actually follow a very simple pattern:
• The intro generally will not have a quote in it
– it will be entirely your own words
• After that, you’ll start every paragraph with
your own words
• Then, for possibly the second or third
sentence of each paragraph, you can use a
well-integrated quote to illustrate or prove
the topic sentence of that paragraph
•And finally, you can close off each paragraph with a
reflection of your own showing how that quote
worked to support your point.
Let’s back up a bit:
How do you know what to quote?
Rule One: quote sparingly
• Limit the majority of quotes to one sentence or less
•If you have something that is longer, break it up with
signal phrases and author tags, so the reader knows
why you are quoting it.
“Xxx xxx xxxx,” the author wrote, offering
justification for his actions. “Xxx xxx xxxx,”
he added (page #).
Rule 2:
quote just the good stuff
• memorable statements
•especially clear explanations stated by
authorities
•controversial arguments in the
speaker’s or writer’s own words
•Note: If it is important but not memorable or lacks
clarity, you should summarize it or paraphrase it in
your own words rather than directly quote it.
For example:
• The following is a quote by Martin Luther
King, Jr., made during his “I Have a
Dream” speech.
“
We will not be satisfied until justice
rolls down like waters and
righteousness like a mighty stream.”
Let’s check it:
 “We
will not be satisfied until justice rolls down
like waters and righteousness like a mighty
stream.”
Is
Is
it brief? Not too long and not too short?
it memorable? Does it stand out as
something quote-worthy?
Now, where and when should
we use it?
•Only quotes that directly support
some aspect of your thesis should be
used.
 All
quotations must be tied to text! Do
not simply sprinkle them in like confetti.
With which of these theses/topics
should we use this quote?
1. MLK’s experience as a preacher allowed
him to reach out to people of all races and
inspire them to fight for civil rights.
2. MLK’s use of powerful rhetoric, figurative
language and imagery attracted many to
listen to his message of equal rights for all.
3. MLK’s organizational strategies, learned
during the Selma, Alabama, bus boycotts,
made the March on Washington a success.
Here’s the quote used in context.
Midway into his famous “I have a Dream” speech
before 100,000 rapt listeners on the Washington
Mall, King explained his dissatisfaction with the civil
rights gains to date. He detailed a litany of unjust
public behavior towards African-Americans, ranging
from police brutality to disenfranchisement at the
voting both. “We will not be satisfied until justice rolls
down like waters and righteousness like a mighty
stream,” he sang out in his preacher’s voice (304). It
was this stunning metaphor of running water and
others like it that catapulted King into national
respect and prominence.
Now, remember the topics for
Bless Me Ultima?
• Loss of innocence
• Morality
• Identity
For which of these topics would
you use the following quotes?
•
•
•
“She understood that as I grew, I would have to
choose to be my mother’s priest or my father’s
son." (41)
“But how could the blessing of Ultima be like the
whirlwind? Was the power of good and evil the
same?” (55)
"'Hell, Andy,' Gene said softly, 'we can't build our
lives on their dreams. We're men, Andy, we're not
boys any longer. We can't be tied down to old
dreams-'" (p. 68).
Stop here.
Let’s review:
What to quote and when to quote it
Rules for quoting:
• Use shorter quotes of 1 sentence
or less.
• Choose quotes that are…
…memorable
…concisely written
…supportive of your thesis
• Well-integrated into the essay
Well-integrated?
What does this mean?
• It means that the quotes are not
all alone in the middle of your
paragraph.
• Do not use quotes in an essay
without explaining why they are
important!
A well-integrated quote is a lot like
a sandwich:
• On top you have a sentence that is your
own thought and summary, setting the
context for the quote that you intend to
use to prove or illustrate your point.
• Then you have the quote (with author
tag/signal phrase) to back up your
thought.
• Then on the bottom you have a
sentence of your own that reflects
back on the quote.
How do we do it?
Answer these questions.
• Who said this?
• In what context?
• What does it mean?
• How can we use this to support the thesis?
• When you can answer these, you will be able to
INTRODUCE, CONTEXTUALIZE, & INTEGRATE the
quote into your argument. Smooth integration is the
mark of a mature writer and makes a paper flow.
For example:
King brought the crowd to a cheering roar like the sound
of a great waterfall when he asserted that the promise of
Abraham Lincoln’s “Emancipation Proclamation” had not
yet been fulfilled. “One hundred years later, the Negro is
still anguished in the corners of American Society and
finds himself in exile in his own land,” he stated (303).
King noted that the purpose of the giant gathering on the
Mall was to illustrate the exact conditions across the
South that make the Negro feel like exiles.
For example:
King brought the crowd to a cheering roar like the sound
of a great waterfall when he asserted that the promise
of Abraham Lincoln’s “Emancipation Proclamation”
had not yet been fulfilled. “One hundred years later,
the Negro is still anguished in the corners of
American Society and finds himself in exile in his
own land,” he stated (303). King declared that the
purpose of the massive gathering on the Mall was to
illustrate the exact conditions across the South that
still make the Negro feel like exiles, sometimes little
better than slaves.
CONTEXT
QUOTE
REFLECTION TO THESIS
Integrating Quotations
Smoothly into Text
There are three main ways to TIE quotations
smoothly into text:
T
tags that precede or follow the quote and tell who
says it
=
"You brute. You brute," Holden mutters as he leaves
the compound where he and Ameera have spent many
happy hours.
Orwell confides, "Secretly, of course--I was all for the
Burmese."
Integrating Quotations
Smoothly into Text
There are three main ways to TIE quotations
smoothly into text:
I
=
introduce the quote with contextual information
As Holden leaves the compound where he and
Ameera have spent many happy hours, he mutters,
"You brute. You brute."
Integrating Quotations
Smoothly into Text
There are three main ways to TIE quotations
smoothly into text:
E = embed the quote within its context or reflection
Holden mutters, "You brute. You brute," as he leaves
the compound where he and Ameera have spent many
happy hours.
Orwell was "all for the Burmese" and hated working as
an agent of the British Empire in Burma .
Let’s try it!
• Here’s our quote:
“There where the lonely wind of the llano
sang to the lovers’ feat of your birth, there
in those hills is your innocence” (71).
Let’s try it!
• Here’s our quote integrated with a TAG:
“There where the lonely wind of the llano
sang to the lovers’ feat of your birth, there
in those hills is your innocence,” Ultima
whispered into Antonio’s dream (71).
Let’s try it!
• Here’s our quote introduced with context:
Antonio’s dream becomes a quest to find
his innocence. His mother and the priest
tell him when he will lose it, but only
Ultima offers hope that it is always out
there. “There where the lonely wind of the
llano sang to the lovers’ feat of your birth,
there in those hills is your innocence” (71).
Let’s try it!
• Here’s our quote embedded within context:
When Antonio seeks his innocence, Ultima
comes to him and speaks of “the lonely
wind of the llano [which] sang to the lovers’
feat of your birth,” and declares that “there
in those hills is your innocence,” something
Antonio thinks may already be lost (71).
Now you try it!