Writing: The Bridge: Bagrut, Project and Literature By Ann Shlapobersky "Writing is mind traveling, destination unknown." (unknown – at least I couldn’t find it) You can talk, but can you write? When do we write? Why do we write? What do we write? Do we write in sentences? Why don’t we write sentences? Teaching writing Noun/verb combo a…b…c….d… bag, chance, exploratory under the bed, behind the curtain We walk… Sue conceives… Noun expansion The big gray evasive eagle Verb expansion flew cumbersomely above the jagged cliff Topic sentence, supporting details, conclusion Letters Words Phrases (subject) (predicate) Paragraph Technicality of writing - PGS do i need to go to school today to learn new things the teacher teached yesterday but no one remembers because Punctuation we don’t listening. Grammar Structur3 (of sentences/paragraphs) But, we taught it! So, why won’t they write? why won’t they express their thoughts on paper? why won’t they put pen to paper / fingers to keyboard? Writing Requirements Concrete sentences / paragraph structure Clarity of thought Fluid ideas Display an understanding of content Bridging to Writing Provide: specific steps detailed examples rules step-by-step expansion sentence to paragraph to paper Explain the process What’s required to Bridge Task to Literature? Cover page Rationale for the choice of topic Introduction about the topic Summary of information about the topic Conclusion Bibliography Length Requirements: – 4 pointers – 500–750 words (2 – 3 typed written pages 250 words per page) – 5 pointers – 750–1000 words (3 – 4 typed written pages 250 words per page) Bridging Task: What must be decided? Cover page Name of literary text and topic / student’s name/ class Rationale for the choice of topic Why I chose this topic? Umbrella topic: Expansion of historical, social or cultural context Introduction about the topic Introduction to bridging task What am I writing about? more to decide Summary of information about the topic How do I integrate the information I found and read? How do I write a summary of it all? How do I explain how the topic I chose is reflected in the text or how it may have influenced the writing of the text? Conclusion What’s my conclusion? How do I explain how the information I learned about enhances or changes my understanding of the literary text. Bibliography Two sources – four points Three sources – five points While we’re reading – what can we do? Cover page Play / Short Story / Article / Poem Rationale for the choice of topic Pre- Reading Activity: Discussion of themes related to topic (historical, social and author) Introduction about Basic Understanding of the Text: the topic Choose three to five aspects of the topic that you want to learn more about. Write questions if that helps. Name of literary text and topic / student’s name/ class Why I chose this topic?: Umbrella topic: Expansion of historical, social or cultural context Introduction to bridging task What am I writing about? More: While we read – what can we do? Summary of information about the topic Analysis and Interpretation: Locate the answers to the questions and write one paragraph explaining each answer. Write about the topic integrating the information you found and read. Bridging Text and Context: Explain how the topic you choose is reflected in the text or how it may have influenced the writing of the text. Conclusion Summary / Conclusion What I can conclude from what I learned of the topic. Reflection Bibliography How does what I learned enhance my understanding of the literary text? General conclusion of the task Explain how the information you learned about the topic enhances or changes your understanding of the literary text. Two sources – four points Three sources – five points The Task outline I. Cover page a. Name of topic b. Name of literary text c. Name of student/class II. Rationale for the choice of topic (1 paragraph: three – five sentences) a. Why I chose this topic? b. Why does this topic interest me? III. Introduction about the topic (1 paragraph: three – five sentences) a. Opening sentence(s) stating what is the purpose of the paper b. Three to five sentences stating what you will discuss in this paper (these sentences should mirror the questions you asked yourself about the topic) IV. a. Summary of information about the topic (body of paper: 3 – 5 paragraphs) 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. b. Write about the topic integrating the information you found and read. First piece of information I found relating to the topic (or my first question and its answer - 1 paragraph: three – five sentences) Second piece of information I found relating to the topic (or my second question and its answer - 1 paragraph: three – five sentences) Third piece of information I found relating to the topic (or my third question and its answer - 1 paragraph: three – five sentences) Fourth piece of information I found relating to the topic (or my forth question and its answer - 1 paragraph: three – five sentences) Fifth piece of information I found relating to the topic (or my fifth question and its answer - 1 paragraph: three – five sentences) Explain how the topic you choose is reflected in the text or how the topic may have influenced the writing of the text. (paragraph 1) V. Conclusion (2 paragraphs: three – five sentences) a. b. VI. General conclusion/ summary of the task (1 paragraph) Explain how the information you learned about the topic enhances or changes your understanding of the literary text. (1 paragraph) Bibliography a. b. Two sources – four points Three sources – five points Paragraph Topic Sentence Writing is difficult for me and most students. Supporting sentences First of all, we don’t like to display our thoughts on paper. Second, we worry about whether we’ll use the correct grammar and appropriate vocabulary. Third, we may have to write a second or third draft and we’d prefer not to doing that. Concluding sentence We will write this paper if we absolutely have to, so make it interesting. Bibliography ECB Online - http://www.ecb.co.il/ecbonline/resources.html Alternative to the Project: Literature Bridging Task – Ministry of Education (Aug 09) Writing Effective Paragraphs - http://writing2.richmond.edu/writing/wweb/paragrph.html How to Write a Paragraph - http://howtowriteaparagraph.com/index.html Writing Tips: Paragraph – WritingDen http://www2.actden.com/writ_Den/Tips/paragrap/index.htm English-Zone.com – Paragraph Writing - http://www.english-zone.com/index.php?ID=71 How to Write a Five Paragraph Essay - http://www.bookrags.com/articles/4.html How to Write a Paragraph (WikiHowto) - http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Paragraph Ann Shlapobersky - ashlapo@gmail.com