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From your editor, Minal
Dear Author,
It was a pleasure working on your document. As requested, I have formatted the manuscript
according to the guidelines of American Journal of Hematology.
I have suggested extensive revisions for some parts of the manuscript. I strongly
recommend that you submit the manuscript for another round of editing after
accepting/rejecting these changes. This would ensure that all issues are resolved and would
yield a more polished manuscript.
Do go through my changes as well as comments and additional notes in this file.
Please send me your feedback or any questions through your Editage Online account
(http://online.editage.cn/).
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Editor’s Report
I have provided feedback through
ratings for each section, along with
any specific comments. The key
alongside explains my ratings. I hope
you find my feedback useful!
This section required only a few revisions.
Most parts of this section required revision.
The entire section required significant revision. Please
go through my comments/changes carefully.
HOW TO WRITE…
The title
An effective title is concise while being
representative.
RATING
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FEEDBACK ON YOUR DOCUMENT
The title should convey the main objective
or finding of the study. I have
recommended a revised concise title for
The abstract
A good abstract explains the aims of the
research, how these were met, and the main
findings.
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The introduction
This section should set the context for the
study, clearly state the research objective, and
establish the significance of the study.
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The materials & methods
This section should completely describe all
methods, techniques, and instruments used.
This includes ethical considerations.
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The results & discussion
These sections should present the data and
findings in clear and unbiased manner, and
address the objective or research question
stated in the introduction.
your manuscript.
Please include an abstract for the
manuscript.
The “Introduction” section required
significant restructuring to improve the
logical flow of the section. I have
reorganized this section by modifying your
sentences and also by including new
information. Begin this section by
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describing HCT and ES, followed by
description of the lack of consensus of
criteria to define ES. This section should
provide information required to frame the
study objectives in a clear and concise
manner. The concluding paragraph of this
section should outline the study objectives.
Overall, the “Methods” section provides
considerable detail of the study. To further
improve this section, please define all the
study groups (ES, non-ES, MRD, MUD)
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mentioned in the “Results” and
“Discussion” sections.
The “Results” and “Discussion” sections
were well written. However, the results
section should be concise summarizing only
the main findings. The “Discussion” section
can be further improved by deleting text
that pertains to defining study objectives
and by focusing on the interpretation of
results.
Table(s) & Figures
The tables and figures should present data
clearly, should be referenced in and
correspond with the text.
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Please define all the abbreviations used in
the tables in the footnote to the tables.
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A QUICK TIP
GUIDELINE
Provide full-form of all abbreviations at first mention.
EXPLANATION
Typically, unless the journal has a list of standard abbreviations (which can
be used without definition), all abbreviations are defined at their first
mention in the document, with the abbreviation introduced within
parentheses. At subsequent mentions of the term, the abbreviation is
used consistently.
In addition, if an abbreviation is only mentioned once in the manuscript,
the abbreviation is unnecessary and only the full form must be provided.
EXAMPLE
Several abbreviations (MRD, MUD, MSD) were not defined at first
mention.