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Exam Essays – Common Mistakes

Among At-Risk Students

Robin Boyle, St. John’s Law School

Assistant Dean for Academic Success & Professor of

Legal Writing

October 22, 2011

LSAC Academic Assistance Topical Workshop

“Finding a Way Through: Working With Students Who Have

Learning Disabilities”

My experience:

Teaching LRW for 18 years

Directing ASP for 6 years

Contracts I (Conditional Admissions Program) for 4 years

Legal Analysis Practicum (At-Risk 1L) 1 year

Agency Practicum (At-Risk 2L) in progress

Why Focus on At-Risk Populations?

Prevalence of learning disabled students (although not all LD students are on the lower end of GPA range).*

Not all at- risk students have diagnoses.

Not all students with diagnoses inform me.

Even if I’m informed, not all LD present the same way on exams.

* See Leah Christensen, Legal Reading and Success in Law School:

The Reading Strategies of Law Students with ADD, 12 The

Scholar: St. Mary’s L. Rev. on Minority Issues 173 (2010).

About the LAP (1L course)

36 students enrolled in total:

17 students below 2.1 (Academic Probation) – mandatory enrollment

10 students b/w 2.1 & 2.2 (Required to receive AS services)

– mandatory enrollment

Offered to @ 30 students whose GPA were b/w 2.2 and

2.49 – of those students, 9 opted in

In 1

st

year/2

nd

semester LAP course

Predominant problems

Not providing enough text

Going off on tangents – stream of consciousness

Haven’t mastered IRAC (“I didn’t get it 1 st semester”)

Need more careful case reading & statutory reading

Strategies to Remedy

Provided weekly writing assignments

Focused on IRAC

Explained different purposes (not just exams –

“If a memo, then . . . If a brief, then . . . ”)

Course topics

Close Case & Statutory Reading

Outlining

Rule Synthesis

Application of Law to Fact – Analogy/Distinction

Essay Exam Writing

Learning Styles*

See Robin A. Boyle, Law Students With ADD: How to Reach Them,

How to Teach Them, 39 John Marshall L. Rev. 349 (2006)

Emphasis

Organization of Legal Analysis:

Intro (thesis paras)

Divide by sub-issues

Rules – with and without statutes, synthesis of case holdings

Application to facts with detail (not skipping steps)

Stating counterarguments

Stating conclusions without ambiguity

Writing Assignment Topics

Assignment #1 Common law:

Contracts case: Sidway v. Hamer – (uncle who promised nephew not to drink/gamble until age 21 - $) produce case brief, summarize for a course outline, write essay on hypothetical fact pattern.

Statutory Analysis

Assignment #2

New York Vehicle & Traffic Law –

Definition of Motor Vehicle in Sec. 125 (vehicle propelled by any power other than muscular power, then exceptions . . .)

Two fact questions – how would the court decide (actual cases)?

In each question – was there a “motor vehicle”?

Practice Separating by Issue

Assignment #3 -

Restatement 2d Sec. 90 (Promise Reasonably Inducing

Action or Forbearance)

1) A promise which the promisor should reasonably expect to induce action . . .

2) on part of the promisee . . .

3) does induce such action . . .

4) is binding if injustice can be avoided

Two hypo fact patterns given – essay answers required

Rule Synthesis

Assignment #4

Covenant not to Compete – two fictitious cases and a fact pattern

Goal was to divide by sub-issues

Synthesize rules

Apply in detail

More Rule Synthesis

Assignment #5

Topic: Emotional Distress

Restatement 2d of Torts

4 Summaries of cases

Hypothetical facts

Goal: Write an essay using IRAC

Course Materials

Distributed Succeeding in Law School, by Herb Ramy

Handouts

Results of First Year LAP course

Students who attended class and turned in assignments showed improvement in their Spring GPAs to a statistical significance level in comparison to those in their GPA cohort who did not participate.

Suggestions – try to get buy-in from students (relevant topics, offer course credit, offer course grade)

Improvements seen from 1L to 2L

More text in their essay answers.

Some students are using good organization to essays.

Some students are reading cases and Restatement very well.

Some 1Ls improved GPAs and are not required in 2L course.

Agency Practicum

Course text: J. Dennis Hynes & Mark J. Loewenstein,

AGENCY, PARTNERSHIP, AND THE LLC (Abridged 7 th ed.

Lexis Nexis).

Two sections – 9 in Day

9 in evening

Most of the students are required to take course (GPA’s under 2.2).

Agency Practicum (2L’s)

Common Problems with essays and exam answers

Issue statements lack legal terms

Rushes past the rule (reduced to bullet outline, parenthetical)

Doesn’t delve into the next level of rule (repeats the general rule)

Lacks meaningful application of law to fact

Brushes past counterargts

Mentions cases that were not covered in class

HW for Agency 2Ls

Writing short essays to hypothetical problems

Submitting course outline of first two chapters (I spotted over-inclusive and under-inclusive outlining)

Drafting contract provisions from the point of view of 3 different parties

Self-Assessment survey (what percentage of time last semester did you spend on briefing cases? What did you learn from meeting with your professors about exam-taking skills?)

In-class work

Provided an open-book mid-term

Reviewed in class the exam & assigned re-write as HW

Because it was doctrinal course, spent more class time discussing cases than in LAP course (1 st year).

Small class size allowed for students to spend time on their questions about assigned readings and other topics

Integrating ASP skills

Learning styles assessments (online Building Excellence)

Time Management

Test Anxiety discussed

Individualized feedback – electronic commenting

One-on-one conferences

Any Questions -

Contact – boyler@stjohns.edu

(718) 990-6609

 Thank you!!

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