Stephen A. Bernhardt
Professor Stephen A. Bernhardt
Kirkpatrick Chair in Writing
Department of English, UD
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What is at issue in writing instruction?
What do we know about how students respond to writing instruction?
How have universities addressed issues of undergraduate writing?
What should we do if we hope to improve the writing of our graduates?
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Frequent and guided
Varied in purpose, audience, and situation
Short and long, planned and spontaneous, formal and informal, personal and objective, graded and ungraded, exploratory and determinate
To learn as well as to do; to perform as well as to demonstrate learning
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Writing is a way of learning.
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Writing is thinking made visible.
(We don’t know what we think until we see what we say.)
A Lesson from WAC
(Writing across the Curriculum)
We want students to become good writers, but we also want students to be good learners.
Faculty don’t necessarily need to be writing teachers—they can use writing to promote learning.
Is writing the best way to learn?
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Not for broad recall of content--note taking and study questions do better.
Writing encourages selection, analysis, and transformation.
Writing tends to encourage students to pick out a subset of relevant connected bits and ignore the rest.
Geisler, Cheryl. Academic Literacy and the Nature of Expertise
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Writing across the curriculum stresses writing to learn, emphasizing learning logs, reflection and synthesis, and frequent, informal writing.
Writing in the disciplines works to help students become professional—to become members of a discipline.
Both make a lot of sense…
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Literate, critical, thoughtful readers and writers
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Resourceful students, comfortable in various communication situations
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People who can plan, manage, solve problems, and deliver results
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Team players, collaborators, helpers
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People who make good use of communication technologies
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Writing constructs professional identity-writing is a way of being (and becoming ) a civil engineer or an accountant.
Writing well means working within expectations and constraints of highly socialized genres.
Outsiders to a discipline are unable to say what is at issue—what the questions and concerns are that motivate the discipline.
To see students engage with disciplinary knowledge
To set students upon trajectories toward their chosen professions.
To help students gain identity as members of a discipline or profession.
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Crisis mentality: we are in a downward spiral of illiteracy
Transience : writing is a problem to be fixed by a remedial course or tutoring
Transparency : writing merely records what is already thought—writing is transparent transcription
Transference : Writing is a generalizable skill that ports easily to new settings.
Universities resist writing in the disciplines
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Academic specialization is the strong force.
Reward systems run counter to demands of working with writing.
Faculty may not know how writing is practiced outside the academy.
Faculty unprepared to teach writing.
Faculty tend to reproduce themselves.
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Difficult to get students to engage with writing tasks and “service” courses.
Difficult to structure tasks in writing classrooms that have situational complexity.
Difficult to transfer—what is taught in writing courses does not seem to transfer to other classes or work situations.
On Creating a Culture of Writing
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Staffing : teaching relies on large staffs of part timers, adjuncts, TAs.
Structure : writing programs have trouble finding a home.
Economics : large lecture classes preclude working closely with students as they write.
Change : even well-conceived initiatives crumble over time.
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There’s something about research universities . . .
Average faculty salary negatively correlates with student satisfaction and learning
At schools with strong research orientations, students display decreased satisfaction with faculty and the overall quality of instruction, decreased leadership skills, and decreased selfreported growth in public speaking skills and other measures of student development.
Astin, UCLA Higher Education Research Institute
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Sociology students did not enter the frame of original fieldwork: observation, gathering data—”just another paper”
Nelson, “This Was an Easy Assignment: Examining
How Students Interpret Academic Writing Tasks”
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Business students tended not to apply the specific evaluative criteria presented and discussed in class.
Walvoord & McCarthy, Thinking and Writing in College
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Students consistently had difficulty, across all disciplines:
„ gathering sufficient specific information
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„ constructing the audience and the self stating a position
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„ using appropriate discipline-based methods managing complexity and organizing the paper
Walvoord & McCarthy: Thinking and Writing in College
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“Even within one discipline, chemical engineering, different courses may represent distinct forums where different issues are addressed, different lines of reasoning used, different writer and audience roles assumed, and different social purposes served by writing.”
Herrington, Anne J. Writing in Academic Settings: A Study of the
Contexts for Writing in Two College Chemical Engineering Courses.
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Difficult to provide real contexts for communication in classrooms
Even case studies go only so far
Need real audiences and purposes— real situations that call for writing
It is hard to perform in a classroom
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Writing is evidence of work—a measure of performance—an end product.
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Writing is a socializing activity—a way of a form of discipline and control.
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In classrooms, the evaluative function is always present.
Such forces work against clear, open,
“normal” communication.
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Writing is the one skill students most want to improve—mentioned >3X as often as any other skill.
Students are most engaged with courses that assign writing.
Writing increases the time students spend on the course, the extent to which they feel intellectually challenged, and their level of interest.
Writing instruction is best during junior and senior years—organized around a substantive discipline.
Light, Richard J. Making the Most of College
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Sp01; 880 UD students (44% response)
300 institutions
Top: Beloit, Elon, Sweet Briar, and
Centre colleges
UD quite comparable to peers
UD students enthusiastic about their experiences; respond favorably to academic emphasis at UD
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Academic Challenge at UD
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Seniors tend to read, write, present, and participate more in class than freshmen.
Students relax and socialize a bit more than they prepare for class (11-15 hours/wk).
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Each year, UD students write a few papers of 5-20 pages and several short papers (very few >20 pages).
Students say they often work on papers and projects that call for integration, application, and evaluation of information.
UD students use email to communicate with profs with high frequency.
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13 papers first year; 17 sophomore; plus numerous response papers
Writing gave first year its depth—writing helped transition from high school
Freshmen: lots to say, no form, no discipline
87% of freshmen: "detailed feedback" is the most important element of writing instruction.
Sommers, The Harvard Writing Project
More writing in humanities and social sciences after sophomore year
Evident growth in argumentative skills
Juniors began identifying themselves more as scholars, as originators of ideas.
Need sustained approach in disciplines—need disciplinary tool belt
Sommers, The Harvard Writing Project
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From seeing texts as sources of information to be learned or memorized toward reading within rhetorical frames, where authors have purposes or motives, are taking action, and acting within a sphere of activity.
Students come to recognize intertextuality and the social dimensions of text.
Subject’s work in a lab situation alongside graduate students contributed to her awareness and ability to interpret journal articles.
Haas, Christina. Learning to Read Biology
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Writing within
“Communities of Practice”
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Formation of a disciplinary or professional identity
A tool kit: shared practices, ways of working, artifice, constructs, methods
Collaborative projects, research and problem solving
Establishing
Communities of Practice
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Intellectual apprenticeships
Legitimate peripheral participation
School to work trajectories
Lave and Wenger, Situated Learning
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Taking advantage of our university
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Commitment to undergraduate education
Problem-based learning
Life, Pathways, Capstone courses
Mentored and collaborative research
Internships, community service, and field work
Rich communication technologies
The University as a work environment
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Well conceived First Year Comp: E110
Established Writing Center
Innovative Writing Fellows
Strong student demand for advanced courses
Writing intensive courses in place
Supportive faculty and administration
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Over-reliant on marginalized labor
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Dependent on “fix by requirement”
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Behind the growth curve of writing programs in rhetoric and professional communication
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Under-resourced in the disciplines: few faculty with research interests in communication
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Without resources committed to Writing in the
Disciplines or Writing across the Curriculum
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Clearly identify the target outcomes we desire
Provide instructional support to faculty
Set disciplinary standards and develop tailored, discipline-centered approaches
Professionalize the teaching of writing
Assess programs and learning outcomes
Create formal institutional support
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