Reading, Writing and Reciting Poetry Specific Language Expectations: Reading Writing Oral Language 1.5 Making Inferences 3.2 Reading Unfamiliar Word 2.3 Clarity and Coherence 2.5 Vocal Skills and Strategies 1.2 Developing Ideas 2.3 Word Choice 3.8 Publishing Finished Work Reading 1. interpreting poetry (making inferences, theme & main idea) 2. word solving (making inferences at the word level) 3. literary devices (figurative language, simile, metaphor, personification) Writing 1. Ideas, Word Choice & Organization 2. forms of poetry Oral Language 3. marking up poetry (accents & emphasis) 4. presentation techniques What is Poetry #1 -brainstorms ideas of what poetry is -students share opinions & experiences with poetry -students use ideas to create a “I Can't Write a Poem” Poem What is Poetry #2 -read poets ideas of what poetry is (use as shared reading) T.S. Eliot A poem may appear to mean very different things to different readers, and all of these meanings may be different from what the author thought he meant. For instance, the author may have been writing some peculiar personal experience, which he saw quite unrelated to anything outside; yet for the reader the poem may become the expression of a general situation, as well as of some private experience of his own. The reader's interpretation may differ from the author's and be equally valid-- it may even be better. There may be much more in a poem than the author was aware of. The different interpretations may all be partial formulations of one thing; the ambiguities may be due to the fact that the poem means more, not less, than ordinary speech can communicate. What Inspires Someone to Write Poetry? -power point & brainstorm ideas e.e. cummings A poet is somebody who feels, and who expresses his feelings through words. This may sound easy. It isn't. A lot of people think or believe or know they feel -- but that's thinking or believing or knowing; not feeling. and poetry is feeling -not knowing or believing or thinking. Almost anybody can learn to think or believe or know, but not a single human being can be taught to feel. Why? Because whenever you think or you believe or you know, you're a lot of other people; but the moment you feel, you're NOBODY-BUT-YOURSELF. Poem Reconstruction (R) -students work individually/pairs/groups to reconstruct Bananas – Donna Wasicazko -starting with conventions moving to words/phrases -students come up with a title for the poem - discuss the fact that poetry is the poet’s point of view # 3 The Power of Words (W) -give students “poetic devices” vocabulary ogranizer -Poetry Poker: words on cue cards, shuffle & distribute 10 per student/pair of students, - students create a 5 line free-style poem, may trade 2 cards (station #2) - student generated poem and share with the class Imagery (W) -What is an Image? (An image is a mental picture of an idea. When you see and express likenesses in things that are different, you are making images) ex. The sea roars like a lion. The moon is like a silver dollar. -Building Images #1 -Building Images #2 1. Choose a subject. a dog 2. Ask yourself some questions. What is it like? What does it do? 3. Arrange your words My dog A black furry rug Warming my toes. like a soft fur rug warms my feet 1. Choose a subject. a tree at night 2. Ask yourself questions about your subject. What is it like? spider webs across the moon How are the two branches of leafless tree look things similar? like threads of a web What does it remind me of? they are trapping the moon What feeling do I have I want to break the web and when I think about it? free the moon 3. Arrange your words The tree weaves webs across the moon With strong branches. Like a giant trap. Holding a helpless prey Moon, how can I break the hold And set you free? In groups students choose one of the following subjects for a poem, and build and image for it: Winding road Lightening flashing Railroad tracks Bird’s nest Howling wind Hockey player Falling rain Burning candle Cold spaghetti -Imagery--A concrete representation of a sense impression, a feeling, or an idea which appeals to one or more of our senses. Look for a pattern of imagery. Tactile imagery--sense of touch. Aural imagery--sense of hearing. Olfactory imagery--sense of smell. Visual imagery--sense of sight. Gustatory imagery--sense of taste. -students create a sensory word wall to use throughout the poetry unit - Activity: Imagery through Action Verbs #4 Reading and Interpreting Poetry The Highwayman (R) -students get a copy of the poem and teacher reads aloud -as a class collaboratively interpret the poem -discuss barriers to interpretations (unfamiliar WORDS) - watch http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TkVTTco2Www Voice: Speaker and Tone--The voice that conveys the poem's tone; its implied attitude toward its subject. Marking poetry for reading. Word Solving using Famous Poems (R) -in groups students read poems and circle unfamiliar words and try to solve -share a few lines in poem with unfamiliar words and show their word solving attempts -create a anchor chart for word solving Nothing Gold Can Stay Robert Frost Nature’s first green is gold, Her hardest hue to hold. Her early leaf’s a flower; But only so an hour. Then leaf subsides to leaf. So Eden sank to grief, So dawn goes down to day. Nothing gold can stay. FOG The fog comes on little cat feet. It sits looking over harbor and city on silent haunches and then moves on. The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, And sorry I could not travel both And be one traveler, long I stood And looked down one as far as I could To where it bent in the undergrowth; Then took the other, as just as fair, And having perhaps the better claim, Because it was grassy and wanted wear; Though as for that the passing there Had worn them really about the same, And both that morning equally lay In leaves no step had trodden black. Oh, I kept the first for another day! Yet knowing how way leads on to way, I doubted if I should ever come back. I shall be telling this with a sigh Somewhere ages and ages hence: Two roads diverged in a wood, and II took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference. Carl Sandburg O Captain! My Captain! by Walt Whitman (1819 – 1892) O CAPTAIN! my Captain! our fearful trip is done; How Do I Love Thee? by Elizabeth Barrett Browning (1806–1861) How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace. Sonnet 18 by William Shakespeare Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? Thou art more lovely and more temperate: Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May, And summer's lease hath all too short a date: Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines, And often is his gold complexion dimm'd; And every fair from fair sometime declines, By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimm'd; But thy eternal summer shall not fade, Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest; Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade, When in eternal lines to time thou growest; So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this gives life to thee. Uphill by Christina Rossetti Does the road wind up-hill all the way? Yes, to the very end. Will the day's journey take the whole long day? The ship has weather’d every rack, the prize we sought is won; The port is near, the bells I hear, the people all exulting, While follow eyes the steady keel, the vessel grim and daring: But O heart! heart! heart! O the bleeding drops of red, Where on the deck my Captain lies, Fallen cold and dead. I love thee to the level of everyday’s Most quiet need, by sun and candle-light. I love thee freely, as men strive for Right; I love thee purely, as they turn from Praise. I love thee with the passion put to use In my old griefs, and with my childhood’s faith. I love thee with a love I seemed to lose With my lost saints,—I love thee with the breath, Smiles, tears, of all my life!—and, if God choose, I shall but love thee better after death. From morn to night, my friend. But is there for the night a resting-place? A roof for when the slow dark hours begin. May not the darkness hide it from my face? You cannot miss that inn. Shall I meet other wayfarers at night? Those who have gone before. Then must I knock, or call when just in sight? They will not keep you standing at that door. Shall I find comfort, travel-sore and weak? Of labour you shall find the sum. Will there be beds for me and all who seek? Yea, beds for all who come. Poetry Graffiti (R) -students choose 2-4 lines from a favourite poem and write them as a piece of graffiti with the poets name -they can illustrate the poem with chalk on construction paper Figurative Language (W/R) Figurative Language--The use of words to suggest meanings beyond the literal. There are a number of figures of speech. Some of the more common ones are: Metaphor--Making a comparison between unlike things without the use of a verbal clue (such as "like" or "as"). Simile--Making a comparison between unlike things, using "like" or "as". Hyperbole--Exaggeration Personification--Endowing inanimate objects with human characteristics The Sound of Poetry (W/R) Sound--Do the words rhyme? Is there alliteration (repetition of consonants) or assonance (repetition of vowels)? How does this affect the tone? - Onomatopoeia – Tigger Onomatopoeia youtube video (station #4) - Alliteration Rhythm and Meter--Rhythm is the pulse or beat in a line of poetry, the regular recurrence of an accent or stress. Meter is the measure or patterned count of a poetry line (a count of the stresses we feel in a poem's rhythm). The unit of poetic meter in English is called a "foot," a unit of measure consisting of stressed and unstressed syllables. Ask yourself how the rhythm and meter affects the tone and meaning. Poetic Forms Structure--The pattern of organization of a poem. For example, a sonnet is a 14-line poem usually written in iambic pentameter. Because the sonnet is strictly constrained, it is considered a closed or fixed form. An open or free form is a poem in which the author uses a looser form, or perhaps one of his or her own invention. It is not necessarily formless. Found Poetry (W) -students write a found poem to accompany their masks -students write a non-fiction found poem from a news article (station #3) -students can use the Found Vocabulary graphic organizer Personal Poetry -I Am poem as a class (using adjectives & self-despcriptors) -students write 3 of the following: All About Me, All I Want, Life Lessons, Name Poem, Wishes and Fear Poetry: Literacy Stations # Station 1 Guided Reading 2 Found Poetry in the News 3 Poetry Poker 4 Onomatopoeia 5 Personal Poetry I AM I am ……………………………………………………………………………………… I wonder ………………………………………………………………………………… I hear ………………………………………………………………………..................... I see …………………………………………………………………………………….. I want …………………………………………………………………………………… I am …………………………………………………………………………………….. I pretend ………………………………………………………………………………….. I feel ………………………………………………………………………………………. I touch …………………………………………………………………………………….. I worry …………………………………………………………………………………….. I cry ………………………………………………………………………………………... I understand ………………………………………………………………………………... I say ………………………………………………………………………………………... I dream……………………………………………………………………………………... I try ………………………………………………………………………………………… I hope ……………………………………………………………………………………… I am ………………………………………………………………………………………... I Am I am (two special characteristics you have) I wonder (something you are curious about) I hear (an imaginary sound) I see (an imaginary sight) I want (an actual desire) I am (repeat the first line of the poem) I pretend (something you pretend to do) I feel (a feeling you have about something) I touch (something you imagine you touch) I worry (a worry that is real to you) I cry (something that makes you very sad) I understand (something you know is true) I Am Rubric I say (something you believe in) I dream (a dream/goal you have) Level 1 I try (something you make an effort to do) I hope (something hope for) -uses no rare or Wordyou Choice I am (repeat Poetic the firstDevices line of the poem) unique words –some words used correctly I AM I am a trustworthy friend and a faithful daughter, I wonder what will happen to this world of ours, I hear the pain of those struggling, I see the glorious flowers blossoming around me, I want peace in all the places of war and despair, I am a trustworthy friend and a faithful daughter, I pretend to be a rock star while I drive in my car, I feel the soft fleece of my pillow while I dream, I touch the waves of the ocean with the tip of my toe, I worry about the homeless walking the streets, I cry when I remember moments with my Grandpa. Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 I understand that change happens -uses few rare -uses several 5 -uses whether many I’m ready or not, we need to take pride who we are, or uniqueI say that rare or unique rareinor unique I dream of walking the dusty streets of Africa, words words used words used the good in thosecorrectly around me, -uses mostI try to find correctly I hope for a future of stability and love, words correctly I am a trustworthy friend and a faithful daughter. Unity -many different -attempts to tie -clear theme -strong theme By: Ms. Shave Emotion/ Statement themes/ideas no sense of unity -no evidence of passion about issue; topic includes emotion in writing. -poem is visually appealing/ impactful themes/ides to create unity -writer is not passionate about issue; topic includes emotion in writing. -poem is visually appealing/ impactful identified identified -clear writer is passionate about issue; topic includes emotion in writing. -poem is visually appealing/ impactful -clearly writer is very passionate about issue; topic includes emotion in writing. -poem is visually appealing/ impactful Peer Evaluation Your Name _______________ Poet:______________________ Level 1 Word Choice - min 3 words identified as rare or unique, does not enhance the poem Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 - min 3 rare or unique words used with some effectiveness. -minimum of 5 rare or unique words used correctly - min. 7 rare or unique words used correctly Found Poetry: "Found" poems are created by taking pieces from original poems and rearranging them into a new form. These poems change the themes and messages of the original poem into a new, more personal piece of writing. Words may be dropped, but not added. You may choose to use a whole sentence, or strictly one or two words. The tense of the words however, are not altered. Name: ______________________ Found Poetry Rubric Word Choice Poetic Devices Unity Emotion/ Statement Level 1 -uses no rare or unique words –some words used correctly Level 2 -uses few rare or unique words -uses most words correctly Level 3 -uses several 5 rare or unique words used correctly Level 4 -uses many rare or unique words used correctly -many different themes/ideas no sense of unity -no evidence of passion about issue; topic includes emotion in writing. -attempts to tie themes/ides to create unity -writer is not passionate about issue; topic includes emotion in writing. -clear theme identified -strong theme identified -clear writer is passionate about issue; topic includes emotion in writing. -clearly writer is very passionate about issue; topic includes emotion in writing. Culminating Task: Poetry Café Students Produce a Poem and Present at a Poetry Café -peer and teacher assessment of oral presentation -poetry writing rubric Name: _____________________ Poetry Café Poetry Recitation Rubric VOICE ______ Spoke loudly and clearly ______ Used good expression appropriate to subject matter GESTURES ______ Body language communicated message ______ Facial expressions communicated feelings MESSAGE ______ Used powerful and interesting language ______ Sent a clear message to the audience Notes: A poem may appear to mean very different things to different readers, and all of these meanings may be different from what the author thought he meant. For instance, the author may have been writing some peculiar personal experience, which he saw quite unrelated to anything outside; yet for the reader the poem may become the expression of a general situation, as well as of some private experience of his own. The reader's interpretation may differ from the author's and be equally valid-- it may even be better. There may be much more in a poem than the author was aware of. The different interpretations may all be partial formulations of one thing; the ambiguities may be due to the fact that the poem means more, not less, than ordinary speech can communicate. T.S. Eliot A poet is somebody who feels, and who expresses his feelings through words. This may sound easy. It isn't. A lot of people think or believe or know they feel -- but that's thinking or believing or knowing; not feeling. and poetry is feeling -not knowing or believing or thinking. Almost anybody can learn to think or believe or know, but not a single human being can be taught to feel. Why? Because whenever you think or you believe or you know, you're a lot of other people; but the moment you feel, you're NOBODY-BUT-YOURSELF. e.e. cummings I Can't Write a Poem” Poem Line 1: Forget it Line 2: You must be kidding Line 3: Excuse #1 _______________________________. Line 4: Excuse #2 _______________________________. Line 5: Excuse #3 _______________________________. Line 6: Excuse #4 _______________________________. Line 7: Excuse #5 _______________________________. Line 8: Excuse #6 _______________________________. Line 9: Excuse #7 _______________________________. Line 10: Excuse #8 _______________________________. Line 11: Time's up? Uh oh! Line 12: All I have is a dumb list of excuses. Line 13: You like it? Really? No kidding. Line 14: Thanks a lot. Would you like to see another one? I Can't Write a Poem Forget it. You must be kidding. I'm still half asleep. My eyes keep closing. My brain isn't working. I don't have a pencil. I don't have any paper. My desk is wobbly. I don't know what to write about. And besides, I don't even know how to write a poem. I've got a headache. I need to see the nurse. Time's up? Uh oh! All I have is a dumb list of excuses. You like it? Really? No kidding. Thanks a lot. Would you like to see another one? -Bruce Lansky Slippery Soft Fog Love Sway Obvious Desert Distress Ocean Fair Found Smeared Disaster Warning Shriek Tangle Eternal Deliver Bright Sea Breeze Rainbow Intense Pleasure Hope Coast Fruit Black Stare World Alone Deep Misery Earth Music Cliffs Fire Create Shy Man Season Honour Symbol Twist Dream Denial Street Scream Beast Faith Pale Murmur Child Thought Terror Bell Hidden Gentle Forever Mask Harrow Crash Kiss Danger Dreadful Creativity Rose Glory Grip Vast Summer Grace Cold Rage Hell Beautiful Dark War Bird Heaven Bold Crust Spring Smile Eclipse Cemetery Heart Fountain Devotion Reflection Forest Death Frolic Struggle Heaven Light Butterfly Treasure Trap Bleary Voice Happily Forget Grace Curse Clash Fail Sharp Stranger Wish Desire Fragile Cruel Roar Mercy Paint Storm Hate Follow Gold Smoke Winter Quiet Giggle Chaos Shimmer Listen Harmony Courage Lost Lagoon Juggle Mountain Anguish Hate Free Sky Romantic Wild Time Sad Champion Murder Perspective Tide Sour Silver Rain Drown Crave Burn Distant Life higher Frantic Passion evening Praise Imagine soul Poetry Poker Peer Evaluation Name: ___________ ______________ Words Illustration Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 -Difficult to identify theme -Theme is clear - grammatical mistakes and/or confusing phrases interfere with message - Illustration looks rushed, unfinished, and/or disproportional. -Theme does not run through entire poem - grammatical mistakes and/or confusing phrases are present, distracting - Illustration shows evidence of some effort, little messy or disproportional -Theme is clear and very impressive throughout poem -no grammatical mistakes and/or confusing phrases -Illustration has little connection to theme - Illustration shows basic/explicit connection to theme/poem - grammatical. mistakes and/or confusing phrases are present, don’t distract from message - Illustration is neat, incorporated into poem - Illustration demonstrates implicit connection to theme, enhances poem - Illustration shows talent, incorporated into poem, includes artistic techniques learned in class - Illustration shows intricate and implicit connection to theme, enhances understanding of poem Alfred Noyes (1880-1958) The Highwayman PART ONE I THE wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees, The moon was a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas, The road was a ribbon of moonlight over the purple moor, And the highwayman came riding— Riding—riding— The highwayman came riding, up to the old inn-door. II He'd a French cocked-hat on his forehead, a bunch of lace at his chin, A coat of the claret velvet, and breeches of brown doe-skin; They fitted with never a wrinkle: his boots were up to the thigh! And he rode with a jewelled twinkle, His pistol butts a-twinkle, His rapier hilt a-twinkle, under the jewelled sky. III Over the cobbles he clattered and clashed in the dark inn-yard, And he tapped with his whip on the shutters, but all was locked and barred; He whistled a tune to the window, and who should be waiting there But the landlord's black-eyed daughter, Bess, the landlord's daughter, Plaiting a dark red love-knot into her long black hair. IV And dark in the dark old inn-yard a stable-wicket creaked Where Tim the ostler listened; his face was white and peaked; His eyes were hollows of madness, his hair like mouldy hay, But he loved the landlord's daughter, The landlord's red-lipped daughter, Dumb as a dog he listened, and he heard the robber say— V "One kiss, my bonny sweetheart, I'm after a prize to-night, But I shall be back with the yellow gold before the morning light; Yet, if they press me sharply, and harry me through the day, Then look for me by moonlight, Watch for me by moonlight, I'll come to thee by moonlight, though hell should bar the way." VI He rose upright in the stirrups; he scarce could reach her hand, But she loosened her hair i' the casement! His face burnt like a brand As the black cascade of perfume came tumbling over his breast; And he kissed its waves in the moonlight, (Oh, sweet, black waves in the moonlight!) Then he tugged at his rein in the moonliglt, and galloped away to the West. PART TWO I He did not come in the dawning; he did not come at noon; And out o' the tawny sunset, before the rise o' the moon, When the road was a gypsy's ribbon, looping the purple moor, A red-coat troop came marching— Marching—marching— King George's men came matching, up to the old inn-door. II They said no word to the landlord, they drank his ale instead, But they gagged his daughter and bound her to the foot of her narrow bed; Two of them knelt at her casement, with muskets at their side! There was death at every window; And hell at one dark window; For Bess could see, through her casement, the road that he would ride. III They had tied her up to attention, with many a sniggering jest; They had bound a musket beside her, with the barrel beneath her breast! "Now, keep good watch!" and they kissed her. She heard the dead man say— Look for me by moonlight; Watch for me by moonlight; I'll come to thee by moonlight, though hell should bar the way! IV She twisted her hands behind her; but all the knots held good! She writhed her hands till her fingers were wet with sweat or blood! They stretched and strained in the darkness, and the hours crawled by like years, Till, now, on the stroke of midnight, Cold, on the stroke of midnight, The tip of one finger touched it! The trigger at least was hers! V The tip of one finger touched it; she strove no more for the rest! Up, she stood up to attention, with the barrel beneath her breast, She would not risk their hearing; she would not strive again; For the road lay bare in the moonlight; Blank and bare in the moonlight; And the blood of her veins in the moonlight throbbed to her love's refrain . VI Tlot-tlot; tlot-tlot! Had they heard it? The horse-hoofs ringing clear; Tlot-tlot, tlot-tlot, in the distance? Were they deaf that they did not hear? Down the ribbon of moonlight, over the brow of the hill, The highwayman came riding, Riding, riding! The red-coats looked to their priming! She stood up, straight and still! VII Tlot-tlot, in the frosty silence! Tlot-tlot, in the echoing night! Nearer he came and nearer! Her face was like a light! Her eyes grew wide for a moment; she drew one last deep breath, Then her finger moved in the moonlight, Her musket shattered the moonlight, Shattered her breast in the moonlight and warned him—with her death. VIII He turned; he spurred to the West; he did not know who stood Bowed, with her head o'er the musket, drenched with her own red blood! Not till the dawn he heard it, his face grew grey to hear How Bess, the landlord's daughter, The landlord's black-eyed daughter, Had watched for her love in the moonlight, and died in the darkness there. IX Back, he spurred like a madman, shrieking a curse to the sky, With the white road smoking behind him and his rapier brandished high! Blood-red were his spurs i' the golden noon; wine-red was his velvet coat, When they shot him down on the highway, Down like a dog on the highway, And he lay in his blood on the highway, with the bunch of lace at his throat. * * * * * * X And still of a winter's night, they say, when the wind is in the trees, When the moon is a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas, When the road is a ribbon of moonlight over the purple moor, A highwayman comes riding— Riding—riding— A highwayman comes riding, up to the old inn-door. XI Over the cobbles he clatters and clangs in the dark inn-yard; He taps with his whip on the shutters, but all is locked and barred; He whistles a tune to the window, and who should be waiting there But the landlord's black-eyed daughter, Bess, the landlord's daughter, Plaiting a dark red love-knot into her long black hair. "All About Me" Poem Line 1: First Name _________________________ Line 2: Four descriptive traits __________________________________________ Line 3: Sibling of... __________________________________________ Line 4: Lover of __________________________________________ Line 5: Who fears... __________________________________________ Line 6: Who needs... __________________________________________ Line 7: Who gives... __________________________________________ Line 8: Who would like to see... __________________________________________ Line 9: Resident of... ___________________________ Line 10: Last Name ___________________________ Cassie Curious, creative, feisty, fun Sibling of Billy, Emma² and Ethan Lover of music, nature and life Fears zombies, tornadoes and being alone Needs lots of patience and love Gives hugs, kisses and some attitude too Would like to see kindness and fairness for all Resident of Barrie, Ontario, Canada LeBlanc “All I Want” Poem All I want is someone to ______________________________________________________ Someone to ________________________________________________________________ All I want is someone to (same as the first line)____________________________________ Someone to ________________________________________________________________ Someone to ________________________________________________________________ All I want is someone to (same as the first line)____________________________________ Someone to ________________________________________________________________ Someone to ________________________________________________________________ Someone to ________________________________________________________________ All I want is someone to (same as the first line)____________________________________ Someone to ________________________________________________________________ Someone to ________________________________________________________________ Someone to ________________________________________________________________ Someone to __________________________________________________________________ All I want is someone to (same as the first line)____________________________________ All I want is someone to laugh Someone to listen, then smile All I want is someone to laugh Someone to get the joke Someone to totally crack up All I want is someone to laugh Someone to lighten up Someone to not take life so seriously Someone to laugh out loud from their toes north All I want is someone to laugh Someone to show me teeth and gums Someone to smile ear to ear Someone to giggle ‘til their jaw aches Someone to roll off their chair All I want is a laugh out loud audience of people Life Lessons Poem Line 1 I'm learning to ____________________________________________________________ Line 2 And I'm learning to _________________________________________________________ Line 3 And I'm learning to _________________________________________________________ Line 4 Not _________________________, when I _____________________________________ Line 5 And I'm learning not to _____________________________________________________ Line 6 And I'm learning not to _____________________________________________________ Line 7 And I'm learning (though it sometimes really hurts me) Line 8 Not to ___________________________________________________________________ Line 9 And I'm learning to _________________________________________________________ Line 10 When I _________________________________________________________________ Line 11 And I'm learning that it's much Line 12 Much easier to be _________________________________ Learning I'm learning to say thank you. And I'm learning to say please. And I'm learning to use Kleenex, Not my sweater, when I sneeze. And I'm learning not to dribble. And I'm learning not to slurp. And I'm learning (though it sometimes really hurts me) Not to burp. And I'm learning to chew softer When I eat corn on the cob. And I'm learning that it's much Much easier to be a slob. by Judith Viorst Name Poem Line 1 - ________________________________________ (your first name) Line 2 - It means ______________________________________________________ (write 3 adjectives that describe you) Line 3 - It is the number _________________________________________________ (any number you want) Line 4 - It is like ________________________________________________________ (describe a color but don't name it) Line 5 - It is ___________________________________________________________ (name something you remember experiencing with family or friends that makes you smile to recall) Line 6 - It is the memory of _______________________________________________ (name a person who is or has been significant to you) Line 7 - Who taught me __________________________________________________ (write 2 abstract concepts, such as "honesty") Line 8 - When __________________________________________ (write about something that person did that displayed the qualities in line 7) Line 9 - My name is __________________________________ (type your first name) Line 10 - It means _______________________________________________ (state something important you believe about life in 1-2 brief sentences) Shawn It means friendly, outgoing, happy, It is the number 500, It is like the morning sky, It is eating Buffalo wings at a buffet, It is the memory of Joe Workshop Heckler, Who taught me perseverance and good humor, When he tried my patience, My name is Shawn, It means I believe in laughing whenever possible. Wishes and Fears Poem I am afraid of ____________________________________________________ I am afraid of ____________________________________________________ I am afraid that __________________________________________________ I am afraid that __________________________________________________ I am even afraid _________________________________________________ I am afraid of ___________________________________________________ I am afraid of spiders I am afraid of lightning strikes I am afraid of ___________________________________________________ I am afraid that the milk has gone I am afraid that _________________________________________________ I am afraid that _________________________________________________ I am even afraid ________________________________________________ I want ________________________________________________________ I want ________________________________________________________ I want ________________________________________________________ I want ________________________________________________________ I even want ____________________________________________________ I want ________________________________________________________ I want ________________________________________________________ I want ________________________________________________________ I want ________________________________________________________ And I want _____________________________________________________ Most of all. bad I am afraid that the well will run dry I am even afraid I might show up ten minutes late I am afraid of final exams I am afraid of making speeches I am afraid that my math may be wrong I am afraid that I'll say a bad word I am even afraid of the dark I want friends who smile back I want fresh fruits and vegetables I want fewer reruns on summer TV I want 50% off sales I even want to read books with happy endings I want to laugh I want to sing I want to dance I want to get the joke And I want to be here Most of all Write at least five alliterative words next to each letter listed below. Write unrelated words or words that form sentences. If you write sentences, include some words that are not alliterative. Examples f frame, fabulous, fragrant, fig, fish b The big bear and the baboon bit bananas and pears. 1) b __________________________________ 11) n __________________________________ 2) c __________________________________ 12) p __________________________________ 3) d __________________________________ 13) q ___________________________________ 4) f __________________________________ 14) r ___________________________________ 5) g __________________________________ 15) s ___________________________________ 6) h __________________________________ 16) t ___________________________________ 7) j __________________________________ 17) v ___________________________________ 8) k __________________________________ 18) w ____________________________________ 9) l __________________________________ 19) y ____________________________________ 10) m __________________________________ 20) z ____________________________________ Activity A: Writing Metaphors To complete this activity, you will write metaphors comparing one noun to another unrelated noun. First, write metaphors on the lines below. Example: Hair is a broom. Love is the wind. Then, answer the questions: Who? What? Where? When? Why? Or How? Example: Shoes are hats (Where?) at the other end. Heart of ______________________________________________________________________________ Mountains of ______________________________________________________________________________ War is _____________________________________________________________________________ Love is ______________________________________________________________________________ Tears are ______________________________________________________________________________ The ocean is a ______________________________________________________________________________ Kiss of ______________________________________________________________________________ Heaven is a ______________________________________________________________________________ Cigarettes are ______________________________________________________________________________ Hate is _____________________________________________________________________________ School is ______________________________________________________________________________ Activity B: Writing Similies Complete the similies by adding nouns on the lines below. Example: Night is like a blanket. Then expand some of your similies by answering: Who? What? Where? When? Why? Or How? Example: The breeze is like a whisper (Where?) in the morning. Television is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Summer is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Sleep is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Night is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Day is like ______________________________________________________________________________ School is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Time is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Red is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Fire is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Friendship is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Love is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Anger is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Activity C: Personification Naming Human Actions Personify things, ideas and qualities by writing a human action next to each object listed below. Example: The moon winked. My refrigerator laughed. Then, expand some by answering: Who? What? Where? When? Why? or How? Example: Dirty clothes got up and walked (where?) into the laundry room. The sun smiles (when?) in the morning. Oceans ______________________________________________________________________________ Wave ______________________________________________________________________________ Cats ______________________________________________________________________________ Wheels ______________________________________________________________________________ Garbage ______________________________________________________________________________ Math ______________________________________________________________________________ Machines _____________________________________________________________________________ Computers ______________________________________________________________________________ Staplers ______________________________________________________________________________ Flashlights ______________________________________________________________________________ Sound ______________________________________________________________________________ Mosquitoes ______________________________________________________________________________ Rewrite each sentence on the line below it to show a picture. Do not use the following verbs: am, is, are, be, been, was, were, being, seem, seemed, feel, felt. Keep the same meaning, as in the first example, or give an illustration, as in the second one. Example: Original Sentence: The students were cold. Original Sentence: He is excited. Rewritten: The students shivered in class. Rewritten: He leaves today for Hawaii. He is lucky. ______________________________________________________________________________ I am happy. ______________________________________________________________________________ The bus was hot. ______________________________________________________________________________ They were angry. ______________________________________________________________________________ Summer is fun. ______________________________________________________________________________ I feel great. ______________________________________________________________________________ My life is good. ______________________________________________________________________________ They were tired. ______________________________________________________________________________ You were jealous. ______________________________________________________________________________ I am lost. ______________________________________________________________________________ They are brothers. ______________________________________________________________________________ http://teacher.scholastic.com/writeit/PDF/selfevaluation.pdf self-evaluation of poetry writing # Station Date Done 1 Guided Reading 2 Found Poetry in the News 3 Poetry Poker 4 The Power of Poetry 5 The station I enjoyed the most was __________________________. I liked it because _________________________________________. The station I like the least was ______________________________. I disliked it because ______________________________________. Station #2 Found Poetry in the News Goal: To create an original “found” poem, using powerful words and phrases from a current news article, to demonstrate your understanding of the article. Materials Needed: -newspapers or magazines -sticky notes -your Writer’s Notebook You Need To: 1. Search through the newspaper or magazines for an article that interests you. 2. Read the article completely and flag passages (powerful words or phrases) that create an image in your mind or that feel powerful. 3. Write the words /phrases on their own sticky note. 4. Read through the sticky notes. You may need to drop words or add word endings. Take this poem through the steps of the writing process: 5. thinking (how do you want to organize them? Try several different arrangements) 6. writing (put them on paper in a particular order) 7. self-revising (read it yourself to see if it has impact you are looking for, make any changes) 8. self-editing (look for any spelling, grammar, punctuation errors and correct 9. peer revising/editing (use a student in your group to examine you poem) 10. good copy (print you poem on poster sized paper and use pictures or border to decorate). WHEN YOU ARE FINISHED READ SOME POETRY FROM THE BACK BOOK SHELF. Evaluation: Your work will be evaluated using the following Criteria: Writing Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Communication of main idea of the article The message was unclear and difficult to understand. The message was somewhat confusing to understand. The message was clear and easy to understand. The message was creatively presented, clear and easy to understand. Word Choice Word choice was simple with little variety. Some variety in word choice used. Visual Presentation Visual presentation has limited appeal. Ineffective use of fonts, colour, & graphics. Visual presentation has some appeal. Somewhat effective use of fonts, colour, & graphics. Advanced use of word choice used appropriately Visual presentation was appealing with effective use of fonts, colour, and graphics. Advanced use of word choice created vivid pictures. Visual presentation was very appealing with effective use of fonts, colour, and graphics. Station #3 Poetry Poker Goal: To generate ideas to create an original poem. Materials Needed: -poetry poke word cards -your Writer’s Notebook You Need To: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. Randomly OR look through the word cards and select 10 words. Use the words to write lines of poetry (you will need to add words and can change the form of the word eg. floats to floated). Rearrange and organize the lines to create a poem Proof read your work to be sure words are spelled correctly and are creating the message you hope to deliver. Print, write or type your poem in good copy form. Be sure you include a symbol or picture on your good copy. WHEN YOU ARE FINISHED READ SOME POETRY FROM THE BACK BOOK SHELF Evaluation: Your work will be evaluated using the following Criteria: Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 -Difficult to identify theme -Theme does not run -Theme is clear Words - grammatical mistakes and/or confusing phrases interfere with message Illustration - Illustration looks rushed, unfinished, and/or disproportional. -Illustration has little connection to theme through entire poem - grammatical mistakes and/or confusing phrases are present, distracting - Illustration shows evidence of some effort, little messy or disproportional - Illustration shows basic/explicit connection to theme/poem - grammatical. mistakes and/or confusing phrases are present, don’t distract from message - Illustration is neat, incorporated into poem - Illustration demonstrates implicit connection to theme, enhances poem Level 4 -Theme is clear and very impressive throughout poem -no grammatical mistakes and/or confusing phrases - Illustration shows talent, incorporated into poem, includes artistic techniques learned in class - Illustration shows intricate and implicit connection to theme, enhances understanding of poem Station #4 Onomatopoeia Goal: To create an original poem using onomatopoeia. Materials Needed: -Onomatopoeia handout -your Writer’s Notebook -sound word lists -Onomatopoeia picture books You Need To: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Read the Onomatopoeia handout to find the definition of onomatopoeia. Read the poems that use onomatopoeia and highlight or underline the onomatopoeic words or phrases. Read over the one of the lists of Sound Words. Complete the activity on the back of the Onomatopoeia handout . Write a good copy of your poem on lined paper. WHEN YOU ARE FINISHED READ SOME POETRY FROM THE BACK BOOK SHELF Evaluation: Your work will be evaluated using the following Criteria: Writing Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Level 4 Poem appears to be thoughtless and rushed. The poem is creative, but appears to be rushed. Poem is thoughtful and creative. It is evident that the poet put thought into their words and conveyed their ideas. -many different themes/ideas no sense of unity -attempts to tie themes/ides to create unity -clear theme identified -strong theme identified Word Choice Word choice was simple with little variety. Some variety in word choice used. Advanced use of word choice used appropriately Advanced use of word choice created vivid pictures. Layout The poem is distractingly messy or very poorly designed. The poem is acceptably attractive though it may be a bit messy. The poem is attractive in terms of design, layout and neatness. The poem is exceptionally attractive in terms of design, layout and neatness. Meaning Unity Onomatopoeia: the formation of a word by using sounds that resemble or suggest the object or action to be named; a sound effect word like bang or knock, knock Fossils At midnight in the museum hall The fossils gathered for a ball There were no drums or saxophones, But just the clatter of their bones, A rolling, rattling, carefree circus Of mammoth polkas and mazurkas. Pterodactyls and brontosauruses Sang ghostly prehistoric choruses. Amid the mastodontic wassail I caught the eye of one small fossil. “Cheer up, sad world,” he said, and winked— “It’s kind of fun to be extinct. — Ogden Nash, 1845 Do you know what a mastodon is? SOUNDS OF POVERTY Empty stomachs that growl and rumble with gnawing hunger, throats that cough and croak and thirst for a squirt of water. Plop, glug and pong of sewers buzz of houseflies and drones, low lub-dub of weak hearts snap and crack of broken bones. The creak of dilapidated walls and rattle of crumbling doors, the thump of termite-windows tottering on ramshackle floors. Clinking coins and rustling notes out of our pockets, may one day stamp out sickness and poverty and make suffering fade away - Jacinta Ramayah, Malaysia Read these poems and highlight or underline the onomatopoeic words or phrases in these poems. The Rusty Spigot The rusty spigot sputters, utters a splutter, spatters a smattering of drops, gashes wider; slash splatters scatters spurts finally stops sputtering and plash! gushes rushes splashes clear water dashes. -Eve Merriam What is a spigot? Look it up, the poem will make more sense. Activity: Writing with Onomatopoeia A. From the list below, select a thing or place that has many sounds. a concert television breakfast, lunch or dinner a test a refrigerator a restaurant sleep a vacation firecrackers a radio a musical instrument microwave popcorn your house our classroom a vacuum cleaner a holiday a car, plane or train a football game an argument a party the movie theatre B. Write a list of sound words that the thing or place makes. C. Write a poem describing the place or thing using the onomatopoetic words on a piece of lined paper. To hear the effect of onomatopoeia, write more than one poem and vary the number of onomatopoetic words you use in each poem. Station #5 Personal Poetry Goal: To generate ideas and make powerful word choices to create poems that reveal your inner-self. Materials Needed: -form poems -your Writer’s Notebook You Need To: 1. Read the sample poems on the form poem organizers. 2. Choose at least 3 of the poems to complete. 3. Complete the graphic organizers and use a dictionary/thesaurus to help choose grade7/8 words. 4. Write out each poem in your Writer’s Notebook. 5. Re-read your poems to be sure that you are creating the images and giving the messages you are intending to. 6. Exchange poems with someone in your group and peer evaluate each other’s work using the rubric. Be sure to give constructive feedback. WHEN YOU ARE FINISHED READ SOME POETRY FROM THE BACK BOOK SHELF Writing Level 1 Meaning Poem appears to be thoughtless or rushed. Work is very repetitive and ideas are impersonal or unoriginal. Difficult to visualize image or emotion The poem is creative, but appears to be rushed. The poem is not written in its proper form. The poem is somewhat written in its proper form. Word Choice/Imagery Form Level 2 Some use of image, idea, or emotion Level 3 Level 4 Poem is thoughtful and creative. A couple of phrases or ideas may be revisited, but the overall product is carefully written. Clear sensory images are used to portray ideas or emotions It is evident that the poet put thought into their words and innovatively conveyed their ideas and emotions. Vivid, detailed images and intensely felt emotion make the poem come alive. The poem is complete and follows its intended form. The poem is written in its proper forms with a few mistakes. Activity A: Writing Metaphors To complete this activity, you will write metaphors comparing one noun to another unrelated noun. Frist, write metaphors on the lines below. Example: Hair is a broom. Love is the wind. Then, answer the questions: Who? What? Where? When? Why? Or How? Example: Shoes are hats (Where?) at the other end. Heart of ______________________________________________________________________________ Mountains of ______________________________________________________________________________ War is _____________________________________________________________________________ Love is ______________________________________________________________________________ A school of ______________________________________________________________________________ Tears are ______________________________________________________________________________ The ocean is a ______________________________________________________________________________ Television is ______________________________________________________________________________ The moon is ______________________________________________________________________________ Kiss of ______________________________________________________________________________ Heaven is a ______________________________________________________________________________ House of ______________________________________________________________________________ Cigarettes are ______________________________________________________________________________ Hate is _____________________________________________________________________________ School is ______________________________________________________________________________ Life of ______________________________________________________________________________ Shoulders are ______________________________________________________________________________ Hands are ______________________________________________________________________________ The army of ______________________________________________________________________________ Shoes are ______________________________________________________________________________ Activity B: Writing Similies Complete the similies by adding nouns on the lines below. Example: Night is like a blanket. Then expand some of your similies by answering: Who? What? Where? When? Why? Or How? Example: The breeze is like a whisper (Where?) in the morning. Television is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Summer is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Sleep is like ______________________________________________________________________________ The moon is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Night is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Day is like ______________________________________________________________________________ School is like ______________________________________________________________________________ A dream is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Time is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Red is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Fire is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Friendship is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Love is like ______________________________________________________________________________ The ocean is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Anger is like ______________________________________________________________________________ Activity C: Personification Naming Human Actions Personify things, ideas and qualities by writing a human action next to each object listed below. Example: The moon winked. My refrigerator laughed. Then, expand some by answering: Who? What? Where? When? Why? or How? Example: Dirty clothes got up and walked (where?) into the laundry room. The sun smiles (when?) in the morning. Oceans ______________________________________________________________________________ _ Wave ______________________________________________________________________________ _ Cats ______________________________________________________________________________ _ Wheels ______________________________________________________________________________ _ Garbage ______________________________________________________________________________ _ Math ______________________________________________________________________________ _ Machines ______________________________________________________________________________ _ Computers ______________________________________________________________________________ _ Staplers ______________________________________________________________________________ _ Flashlights ______________________________________________________________________________ _ Sound ______________________________________________________________________________ _ Mosquitoes ______________________________________________________________________________ _ Hands ______________________________________________________________________________ Hats ______________________________________________________________________________ Eyes ______________________________________________________________________________