Organizing Your Argument Always consider (and empathize with) your audience when thinking about the best way to organize your information. First things first… • Organize your thoughts. In one to two sentences, explain your topic and what your argument is within that topic. This is called your working thesis statement/argument. • Think about where your statement(s) would go in your paper. Do you envision it coming immediately within your composition, or at the conclusion? You don’t want it (or your audience) to get lost in the middle of your essay. The Classical Approach (Thanks, Aristotle) • Introduction (What you are trying to say) – Consider your audience. Tailor your tone accordingly • Main point/thesis statement (What, why, how) – Help your audience see why the issue should be important to them. • Evidence supporting your main point/thesis statement (How you are going to say it) – This is the heart of your paper. • Discussion of other perspectives – acknowledge the opposition – Refute or break down the other side. Do not ignore contrary opinions. • Conclude with some type of call to action – Consider the power of your final lines. You want your audience to remember your main points. Another Approach • Introduce the issue (What you are trying to say) – Consider your audience. Tailor your tone accordingly • Offer reasons and evidence for your main point/thesis statement (How you are going to say it) – This is the heart of your paper. • Discussion of other perspectives – acknowledge the opposition – Refute or break down the other side. Do not ignore contrary opinions. • Draw your conclusion/main point/thesis statement (What, why, how) – Help your audience see why the issue should be important to them. In this organizational approach, your audience feels some agency in the thesis. They (hopefully) come to the same conclusion with you. • Conclude with some type of call to action – Consider the power of your final lines. You want your audience to remember your main points. Now, you need to consider the BEST structure for your paper’s topic. This will also require you to consider the ideal audience and tone. It is a puzzle; think about how each paragraph best fits together. Ask yourself: – Does the thesis statement/argument control the organizational outline? – Are all of my main points relevant to my thesis? – Does my argument progress, or does it seem to stall? Do I contradict myself? – Am I sufficiently supporting my points with researched evidence? – Have I made room within my outline for oppositional viewpoints? When you are ready to construct your paragraphs, think about the “job” you want each one to do. Each paragraph should be supportive, strong, and considerate. Transition appropriately; try to be consistent and coherent in tone. Don’t forget about the power of the topic sentence. – It should be clear and relevant to the preceding paragraph. – It should control the direction of its paragraph. When completing a paragraph, ask yourself the following questions: – Do I have enough evidence to support this paragraph’s topic sentence? – Do I have too much evidence? Will my reader be overwhelmed and confused? – Am I stretching evidence at all? – Can I say, in a nutshell, what the purpose of each paragraph is? Finally, consider the following modes of arrangement for your paper’s information: • Narration (share anecdotal information) • Definition (illustrate terms) • Description (activate those sensory details) • Process (describe sequence of steps) • Cause and Effect (explain why something happened) • Analogy (comparison between two unrelated topics)