Notes on Leaves of Grass by Walt Whitman First Section Song of Myself Section 1: introduction of the speaker – first person point of view; establishes how the persona feels about himself and those around him, specifically Americans ; Idea of “universality” - truths that exist everywhere; Section 2: imagery used extensively specifically the sense of smell – atmospheric observantion – alliteration and consonance Section 3: imagery used in the sense of hearing; repetition beginning to be used in this section with line 44 Section 4: catalogue “ing” ; listing what he sees and who he meets; cataloguing his actions Section 5: he addresses himself and his soul; he connects himself to God and all humanity Section 6: interaction between him and a child – child asks a very simple question “what is grass?” connects humanity to nature; alive and dead – regardless of life or death Section 7: we are lucky to be alive, but as well we are lucky to die; connection of all humanity; repetition and cadence “For me…” Whitman begins to move away from transcendental thinking and begins to explore/examine particular instances. Section 8: observation of babe in the cradle – stream of consciousness; more than one sense going on Section 9: barn doors – stream of consciousness; more than one sense Section 10: observation of man hunting; happens upon an Indian couple getting married; slave in the woodshed Section 11: 28 men swimming/ “bathing” 29th swimmer is a lonesome woman 28 year-old; wealthy; longs for companionship; the bathers are unaware – free indirect discourse – Song of Myself – “I’m Awesome”; section 1 Song of Myself 13 lines long: I am fabulous, beautiful, radiant Beyond comprehension and reason; quietly 2 lines of you are awesome spending my days in the sun. basking away the 1-3 lines of what relaxes you stress. Petite brunette with the latina walk, stiletto heels. Lucy and Ricky, babalooing down 3 lines describing yourself the hall. 1 line explaining your parents 2 lines of what you hope to do before your death 2 lines explaining that you are going to observe life and your surroundings I am fabulous, and you will know this, too Because everything I say is perfection, exceptional, Great. Section 12 All about the jobs that people do – their crafts Whitman specifically speaks of people who work with their hands and are athletic; men who produce using physical labor Section 13 Whitman describes a black man who drives a cart – physically strong and impressive man; he admires that the man is in complete control of his horses. Whitman uses the word “caress” specifically when observing this man – he states that he “caress”es life with his gaze and perhaps with his words; he states that he can get more out of a gaze of an ox than he can reading words; again Whitman emphasizes that true reading is in the observation of nature Section 14 Whitman describes animals in this section – he finds meaning in everything, even a goose squawking; but he gets frustrated about explaining simple things; He explains being outdoors; first person point of view; he describes “Me” as a person who does not ask for much from anyone else Section 15 More jobs! He describes people in relation to their occupations and role in society; ex. “contralto” – singer; “jour printer” – daily newspaper printer; “quadroon” – nanny slave in New Orleans; “lunatic” – who is just as respectable as any other job Whitman is optimistic and naïve; he takes bad and good the same Everyone fits into a community and have equal status – he never elevates one status over another; even the president doesn’t get special treatment; but he contradicts himself… he begins to judge people but goes out of his way to criticize those people who judge the prostitute- he judges only those who judge; he exclaims that he likes everyone and they all like him. Section 16 Whitman believes that he is strung together from a bunch of different parts and sections He is a compilation of a lot of opposites: old and young, foolish and wise, mother and father, average people and elite, south and North – written before the civil war; Whitman sees the real danger of civil war; he mentions American states before addressing Asia and Europe He loves his diversity and by the end of this section he turns idea in to nature – of, course. Section 17 Whitman wants us to believe that all people share his ideas, that nothing he says is really original If we don’t take his words as our own, then we will never believe that we are all connected; Everything in nature is our own including the grass that we walk on The grass here also refers to the “leaves” in the title Section 18 (1855) Later editions of Song of Myself; this section is almost entirely about war and battle images Whitman states that all people share war, songs, water, laws… About war – Whitman states that the songs are for the defeated as well as the victorious – he ignores winners and losers Section 19 Whitman states he would make a bad coach – ‘cause he wouldn’t be able to cut anyone Whitman invites everyone to enjoy time with him – slaves, thief, people with venereal disease – STD Fate meal – “this is…” repeated several times – Biblical imagery of the last supper Whitman places himself in Jesus’s place – why? Whitman claims that he has the same purpose as nature; He tells the reader – audience a secret – which is contradictory considering he claims to share all with all Section 20 Suspicious tone – he begins to name all the mysteries of life He attempts to address the skeptics who believe that life is only a trick Shakespearean allusion, possible here, to Macbeth’s famous speech that life is just “sound and fury signifying nothing” He claims to be a non-conformist – doing as he pleases He is unconcerned about death Section 21 He claims to be a poet of both body and soul He begins to question the traditional ideas of heaven and hell; he claims to have created heaven here on earth He loves women and mothers He believes in being proud and confident, not humble He switches topics and begins to discuss the night, earth, and the sea – the earth has loved him and he loves the earth In 1855 edition, the section ends with this controversial line which was later removed – “Thruster holding me tight and that I hold tight! We hurt each other as the bridegroom and the bride hurt each other!” Yes, it’s what you think it’s about… he’s having sex with the earth very violent sex Section 22 Whitman describes the sea, and yes, he is going to have sex with the sea… “Dash me with amorous wet…I can repay you” In the sexual instances, Whitman is being metaphorical about his union with nature – he is not actually having sex with nature Section 23 Whitman declares that he will contribute greatly to the “unfolding of ages” En Masse – French term meaning in mass – democratic word He praises scientists; but states that science is not enough – you can not live from just facts He cares about life more than science He does not approve of people who repress their sexuality He helps fugitives conspire in their revolt Section 24 In the middle of the poem, he finally declares that he is the speaker of the poem He defines himself as American and “rough” He uses Greek term “kosmos” that means earth here He takes pride in sensuality and loves to eat, drink, and “breed” – although he never had children…don’t forget that he never had children – speaker and poet are different people. He calls to unlock the doors and then remove the doors from the jambs – comedy Confirms his beauty of democracy and calls to hear “forbidden voices” Whitman gives voices to people who don’t have voices He shows he has a “rough” nature by talking about sex openly – he says “copulation” (the sexual act) is not “rough” to him – he is not disgusted by it He loves his body even the smell of his armpits He will worship his body, his beard, blood, sweat, breast, and semen He treats nature like a body and worships it. He compare the wind to “soft – tickling genitals” Erotic – yes Again, he states that we learn more from nature than books Nature makes him humble and aware that he is not “master” of the world Section 25 Whitman loves the sunrise He states that his voice can not describe spiritual truths He can not express things he understands He is a prophet Section 26 Whitman states that he does not want to speak in this section so, of course,… He makes a list – catalogue of sounds – natural sounds moving to speech He hears happy, sad, strict and tender voices Voices are musical instruments and make a symphony This symphony is an “orchestra” of sounds that take him to the edge of death In the end, he feels confused by reality Section 27 Whitman begins to question existence He states that life as a “quahaug” - clam – would be just as interesting Touch is the most important physical sense for Whitman Section 28 The famous “crisis” – Whitman attacks himself - some critics think this section is about masturbation He feels that touch is too much at this point Sexually suggestive phrases: “treacherous tip of me,” “stiffening limbs,” “red marauder,” and “I went myself first to the headland…my own hands carried me there.” He feels suffocated by the sense of touch – overpowers him and creates an enormous release of energy You should get what this is about – orgasm and ejaculation Section 29 This section turns into one about growth and nature “sprouts” “fertilization” He is left with a sharp “ache” Section 30 Nature contains truth Truth is shown “soggy clods” of earth become “lovers and lamps” He compares people to plants Section 31 Whitman talks about the leaves of grass Another list of natural things – he explains how they are better than any machine Whitman states that nothing can escape him He makes another list of things Section 32 This is dedicated to animals and how animals are not stressed and don’t feel guilt He is made “sick” by people “discussing their duty to God” He attacks materialism and materialistic people Animals bring him peace He then focuses on a stallion and in his imagination he gallops faster than a stallion Section 33 On his horse, Whitman takes us from place to place He compares his vision to a ship leaving port He travels all over America – cities, farms, deserts, rivers Repetition of the word “where” He then travels through the universe And then through our bodies He changes topics and talks about the battlefield – and then….. back to sex, of course… He mentions heroic actions So he states “I am the man…I suffered…I was there.” He puts himself in the shoes of the runaway slave and fireman He participates in battle and admires himself Section 34 Tells a battle of Mexican-American War 412 Americans were murdered This is a vignette – just like the 28 bathers Their enemies didn’t honor the treaty and instead massacred them in the morning Outrages tone Section 35 Whitman now describes the War of 1812 at sea He speaks from the perspective of a sailor Ship starts to take on water The British surrender Section 36 The sea battle continues Even after the British surrender, the American ship is sinking They move everything to the British ship Dead bodies all over The ship’s surgeon uses a saw to remove a limb from a sailor He is disturbed by this vision Section 37 He becomes sad and “fit” is “mastering” him He dreads being confined and begins to talk about Prisoners and convicts He becomes a prisoner This section is about society’s outcasts Section 38 He snaps out of his depression and refuses to dwell on bad ideas He compares himself to Jesus Christ rising from the grave He salutes students – “eleves” – in this section Section 39 Native Americans He calls them “savages” He believes that Native Americans have more freedom than civilized men But he calls them “lawless” “Simple” and “naïve” Section 40 He compares himself to the sun and earth and says that he is better than they He gives people hope He is strong and can accomplish manual labor He gives comfort to dying people He is able to make women pregnant He cares for depressed and suffering people Section 41 Whitman switches to talking about wisdom He states he has more wisdom than most people calling them “hucksters” and stating that he has more value in a “drop of his seminal wet” He states that he will understand all the religions of the world himself He believes that the ground is worthy of worship He is hostile to preachers and clergy who tell people what to worship Section 42 He asks everyone to listen to his “Song” Repetition of the word “Ever” He does not like elitists, people who think they are better than others He chooses to look at things close at hand rather than the things far away to which religion focuses Section 43 Whitman pities priests – he states he doesn’t hate them just that he doesn’t like them He has a personal faith that combines all faiths into one He is a non-conformist and can’t actually practice it; He identifies with atheists, skeptics, and pessimists He doesn’t know what comes after death, but he knows that he is “alive” Death is the only thing that does not fail Section 44 He addresses eternity; Everyone is equal He feels sorry for anyone who was treated poorly and makes reference to The Book of Lamentations He believes he is the most progressive man in the world Section 45 He starts to think about youth again, and yes…sex He has lovers coming to him at all hours of the night He thinks growing old is graceful He describes the universe and how it extends in every direction “outward and outward and forever outward” The universe has to forever expand He states we have a final “rendezvous” with God Walt is not concerned with what happens after death Section 46 Whitman thinks he has the best part of the universe and that all he needs is a raincoat and rain boots He does not wish to be a teacher just someone to point out the road in the universe; you have to actually walk the path on your own “you must find out for yourself” Even if he did see all the known world, he would still want to travel through it He compares the journey through the universe as a swimmer “holding a plank by the shore.” Section 47 He becomes a teacher Whitman describes a boy turning into a man by avoiding “conformity or fear” He will follow you – reader – on your path He believes in nature and work – not just making money He praises people who work outdoors and manually: farmers, woodsmen, mechanics, mothers, etc… Section 48 The body and soul are equal: the self is more important than God People should walk around with sympathy, poor people can have whatever they want, a man can be a hero at any job He thinks that people should not be inquisitive about God but rather about people God is everywhere and in everything He leaves these words for other people to find Section 49 “What, you think I’m afraid of you?” – he is addressing death He compares death to rebirth – he watches death from a “door” and the relief people feel passing to death He states that dead bodies are good fertilizer He is hardened to death because he has seen death thousands of times “O grass of graves” He looks at the moon “autumn forest” Section 50 He repeats the idea “”steady and central” and describes his own death There is no death or chaos in the universe Happiness is the connection between and among all things Section 51 He begins to worry about the future – and ignores the past and present He states he needs to say everything he must before he goes to bed He does what he tries to avoid – he contradicts himself “Do I contradict myself? Very well then…I contradict myself; I am large…I contain multitudes.” He invites people to walk with him after dinner He invites the reader to speak since he has been doing all of the talking Section 52 He sees a hawk – the Hawk tells him to finish the poem! Whitman then sees himself transform into the hawk Ending day is a metaphor for death Ties with the idea of dead people in the dirt Whitman states that soon if he is needed, one need only to look under ground He states that he can be found further up on his journey