MOVING FORWARD MONDAY March 9 LEARNING TARGETS: 2) I can identify background information about the writer. 3) I can make inferences about a piece of art. TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) They Say, I Say: Presentation Schedule 2) Golding Background 3) Cover analysis 4) Read aloud! HOMEWORK DUE WEDNESDAY: Chapters 1-2 of The Lord of the Flies. Reading check. THEY SAY, I SAY PRESENTERS PERIOD 2 TUESDAY: ALYSA WEDNESDAY: CALEB THURSDAY: JOHNNY FRIDAY: TAYLOR PERIOD 4 TUESDAY: BRODY WEDNESAY: LILY THURSDAY: YODER FRIDAY: AMANDA Reading and Assessment Paths V V+ I did not read my entire reading assignment, so I was not as successful on my reading quiz. I can earn back some credit by completing THREE annotations. I read the book, so I was successful on my reading quiz. Reading the Book = More Powerful Student (and less work) VI did not read my reading assignment. I will explain why I did not read and what I plan to do earn back some credit on this quiz. I will earn back some credit by completing a total of SIX annotations. THOUGHTFUL TUESDAY! March 10 TODAY IN-CLASS: LEARNING TARGETS: I can define figurative language. I can identify figurative language. 1) They Say, I Say: Presenter 2) Review of Literary Elements: Figurative Language (simile, metaphor, personification) 3) Super Silent Reading Time 4) Exit Slip HOMEWORK DUE WEDNESDAY: Chapters 1-2 of The Lord of the Flies. Reading quiz tomorrow! WORKING OUR MINDS WEDNESDAY! March 12 LEARNING TARGETS: 2) I can summarize the text from a character’s point-of-view 3) I can identify figurative language. TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) They Say, I Say: Presenter 2) Reading Quiz on Chapters 1-2 3) Partner Work: Simile, Metaphor, Personification Annotations HOMEWORK DUE FRIDAY: Chapters 3-4 of The Lord of the Flies. Reading quiz on Friday! CHAPTERS 1-2 READING QUIZ: Show what you know! Learning Target: I can summarize the text from a character’s point-of-view You are Piggy and you are writing in your diary (pretend that diaries are available on the island). What have you experienced since you landed on the island? In your diary entry, include an explanation of a conflict, the significance of the conch, and your (Piggy’s) opinion about some of the boys. (Minimum of 5 sentences) THINKING THEMATICALLY THURSDAY! March 12 TODAY IN-CLASS: LEARNING TARGETS: 1) They Say, I Say: Presenter 2) Four Corners Activity I can identify and response to an essential question for the unit using my background knowledge. 3) Journal #1: Based on one of the statements we discussed today, develop your opinion (claim) on the topic and incorporate one piece of specific evidence from your background knowledge that supports the claim. 4) Super Silent Reading & Finish Vocab Chart (share vocab words) HOMEWORK DUE FRIDAY: Chapters 3-4 of The Lord of the Flies. Reading quiz on Friday! IT IS HUMAN NATURE TO HELP OTHERS IT IS HUMAN NATURE TO BULLY OTHERS. LEADERS ARE BORN, NOT MADE. FREEING OUR MINDS FRIDAY! March 13 LEARNING TARGETS: TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) They Say, I Say: Presenter I can define an allegory. 2) Finish Journal #1 3) Reading Quiz on Chapters 3-4 4) Background information on leaders HOMEWORK DUE MONDAY: Chapters 5-6 of The Lord of the Flies. Reading quiz on Monday! READING CHECK: PART II (Chapter 4) Learning Target: I can develop a claim based on a sentence. What type of leader is Ralph or Jack? Your response should include: CLAIM EVIDENCE INTERPRETATION COUNTERARGUMENT/REBUTTAL EXIT Journal #1: Based on one of the statements we discussed today, develop your opinion (claim) on the topic and incorporate one piece of specific evidence from your background knowledge that supports the claim. IT IS HUMAN NATURE TO HELP OTHERS. IT IS HUMAN NATURE TO BULLY OTHERS. LEADERS ARE BORN, NOT MADE. MOVING OUR MINDS MONDAY March 16 LEARNING TARGETS: I can identify figurative language. I can explain the effect of figurative language for the speaker’s purpose. I can identify a speaker’s claim, evidence, interpretation. TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) They Say, I Say Presentation Order 2) Review Reading Check on Chapters 3-4 3) Review figurative language practice via visualization 4) Reading Check on Chapters 5-6 5) Collecting Evidence: “Banality of Heroism” & Kid Nation HOMEWORK DUE THURSDAY: Chapters 7-8 of The Lord of the Flies. Reading check. MOVING OUR MINDS MONDAY March 16 TODAY IN-CLASS: LEARNING TARGETS: I can identify figurative language. I can explain the effect of figurative language for the speaker’s purpose. I can identify a speaker’s claim, evidence, interpretation. 1) They Say, I Say: Presentation Schedule 2) Review figurative language practice via visualization 3) Reading Check on Chapters 5-6 4) Collecting Evidence: “Banality of Heroism” HOMEWORK DUE THURSDAY: Chapters 7-8 of The Lord of the Flies. Reading check. ANALYZING FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE STEP #1: Quote-Weave STEP 2: Your interpretation will be something like the following: When __(background)___, the narrator says, “__(quote)__” (Golding #). Simile: This simile is a comparison between ____ and _____. The simile helps the reader better visualize/understand ________. (or) In the scene in which (background)_, the narrator describes _(IND)___: “ ___(quote)______” (Golding #). Metaphor: This metaphor is a comparison between ____ and _____. The metaphor helps the reader better visualize/understand ________. Personification: ____ is being personified as _____. The personification helps the reader better visualize/understand __. SIMILE: HELPS THE READER VISUALIZE STEP #1: (quote-weave) “Piggy’s hair still lay in wisps over his head as though baldness were his natural state and this imperfect covering would soon go, like the velvet on a young stag’s antlers” (Golding 64). STEP #2: The narrator talks about Piggy’s hair and a young stag’s antlers. SIMILE: HELPS THE READER VISUALIZE STEP #1: When the narrator was describing Piggy’s body after he has been on the island for awhile with the other boys, the narrator says, “Piggy’s hair still lay in wisps over his head as though baldness were his natural state and this imperfect covering would soon go, like the velvet on a young stag’s antlers” (Golding 64). STEP #2: The narrator compares Piggy’s hair to the velvet on a young stag’s antlers to help the reader better visualize how Piggy’s hair is already receding, like the way the hair on a young stag disappears as it gets older. PERSONIFICATION: HELPS THE READER VISUALIZE STEP #1: The narrator describes Jake looking at the forest “He passed his tongue across dry lips and scanned the uncommunicative forest” (Golding 48). STEP #2: The narrator gives the forest a human quality. - WHAT IS BEING PERSONIFIED - WHAT IS THE HUMAN QUALITY PERSONIFICATION: HELPS THE READER VISUALIZE STEP #1: The narrator describes Jake looking at the forest: “He passed his tongue across dry lips and scanned the uncommunicative forest” (Golding 48). STEP #2: The narrator personifies the forest as “uncommunicative” to help the reader visualize how quiet the forest is in this scene. THINKING TOGETHER TUESDAY March 17 TODAY IN-CLASS: LEARNING TARGETS: I can identify figurative language. I can explain the effect of figurative language for the speaker’s purpose. I can identify a speaker’s claim, evidence, interpretation. 1) They Say, I Say: Presenter 2) Review figurative language practice via visualization 3) Vocabulary List: Options! 4) Collecting Evidence: Read and annotate “Banality of Heroism” & Kid Nation HOMEWORK DUE THURSDAY: Chapters 7-8 of The Lord of the Flies. Reading check. WORKING WISELY WEDNESDAY March 18 TODAY IN-CLASS: LEARNING TARGETS: I can define symbolism. I can identify figurative language. 1) They Say, I Say: Presenter 2) Journal #2 3) What is symbolism? I can explain the effect of figurative language for the speaker’s purpose. 4) Rereading Practice: Chapters 3-6 Analyzing figurative language & symbolism HOMEWORK DUE THURSDAY: Chapters 7-8 of The Lord of the Flies. Reading check. THINKING TOGETHER THURSDAY Period 1March 19 TODAY IN-CLASS: LEARNING TARGETS: 1) I can define and identify symbolism. I can define and identify select character archetypes. They Say, I Say: Presenter 2) Journal #2 & Evidence for Journal #2 3) What is symbolism and archetypes? Archetypes/Symbolism Search! 5) Reading Check for Chapters 7-8 HOMEWORK DUE MONDAY: CHAPTERS 9-10. Reading Check. THINKING TOGETHER THURSDAY March 19 LEARNING TARGETS: TODAY IN-CLASS: I can define and identify symbolism. 1) They Say, I Say: Presenter I can define and identify select character archetypes. 2) What is symbolism? What are archetypes? 3) Reading Check for Chapters 7-8 HOMEWORK DUE MONDAY: CHAPTERS 9-10. Reading Check. FINDING SYMBOLS WITH FRIENDS FRIDAY! March 19 LEARNING TARGETS: Mike fkshskdj I can define and identify symbolism. I can define and identify select character archetypes. TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Finish reading check for chapters 7-8 or read for Monday! 2) Archetype/Symbolism Search and Draw! 3) Kid Nation! Collecting more evidence. HOMEWORK DUE MONDAY: CHAPTERS 9-10. Reading Check. Journal Activity #2: Let us think more deeply about the first part of our first essential question for this unit: Is it human nature to be good or bad? What does it mean to be “good”? How do you know what is good or bad? Where did you get these ideas? SYMBOL: Reserve half a page in your notebook for this chart. A word or object that stands for another word or object. The object or word can be seen with the eye or may not be visible. SYMBOL METAPHORIC SIGNIFICANCE DOVE Purity and love (weddings and Christmas); peace (Bible – Noah’s Ark); friendship (turtle doves)… WATER Danger/Safety (nat. disaster or resource); Purity (baptism); Serenity (religious); Health (survival); Replenishment; Birth or Renewal ARCHETYPES: Reserve a page in your notebook for a big chart! ARCHETYPE Hero/Protagonist Villian/Antagonist Scapegoat Outcast Loyal Companions Christ Figure DEFINITION EXAMPLES EXAMPLES FROM LOTF HERO/PROTAGONIST • Restores harmony and/or justice to a community. • The hero character is the one who typically experiences an initiation, who goes through the community's ritual (s). VILLIAN/ANTAGONIST • Represents evil incarnate. • He or she may offer worldly goods, fame, or knowledge to the protagonist in exchange for possession of the soul or integrity. • This figure's main aim is to oppose the hero in his or her quest. SCAPEGOAT An animal or more usually a human whose death, often in a public ceremony, amends some sin within the community. OUTCAST • This figure is banished from a community for some crime (real or imagined). • The outcast is usually destined to become a wanderer. • Ex: Harry’s Uncle – Sirius Black LOYAL COMPANIONS These individuals are like the noble sidekicks to the hero. Their duty is to protect the hero. Often the retainer reflects the hero's nobility.’ CHRIST FIGURE • Usually a character who is in agony or self-sacrificing. • Performs “miracles” in a general sense; disappears in their mid 3; spends time alone in a wilderness; forgiving DO NOW UNDER JOURNAL #2 1) CLAIM: WHAT DEFINES COMPASSION? (or) WHAT MAKES PEOPLE COMPASSIONATE? 2) LIST OF EVIDENCE FROM DIFFERENT SOURCES. Must use The Lord of the Flies for one piece of evidence. MORE LEARNING MONDAY! March 23 LEARNING TARGETS: TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) They Say, I Say Presentation Order for the Week I can identify and explain a symbol or archetype. 2) Symbol/Archetype Search Speed Share 3) Review Reading Check on Chapters 7-8 and rereading 4) Reading Check for Chapters 910 HOMEWORK DUE WEDNESDAY: CHAPTERS 11-12. UNIT TEST ON FRIDAY (INCLUDES THE READING CHECK FOR CH.11-12) THEY SAY, I SAY PERIOD 4 TUESDAY: BRANDON WEDNESDAY: OMAR THURSDAY: ELIZABETH FRIDAY: CODY SYMBOL/ARCHETYPE SEARCH! Draw Write Find Brainstorm List at least 2 symbols or archetypes from the book. Add these to your chart in your notebook. Find a passage from the book that illustrates the symbol or archetype. 1) Use MLA citation to present the passage. 2) Analyze the significance of the symbol or archetype. Draw the symbol or archetype to show its metaphoric significance. READING CHECK FOR CHAPTERS 9-10 You are Ralph. TWEET the TWO most shocking events that happened on the island in chapters 9-10. THINKING TOGETHER TUESDAY! March 23 LEARNING TARGETS: TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) They Say, I Say Presenter I can annotate for a speaker’s claim, evidence, interpretation, exit. 2) Journal #3 3) Close rereading practice with select passages from chapters 7-9 HOMEWORK DUE WEDNESDAY: CHAPTERS 11-12. SKILLS TEST ON FRIDAY (includes chapters 11-12 reading check). Journal Activity #3 Let us consider the second essential question this week: How do social groups impact human behavior? What does it mean to conform? Give specific examples from your life or background knowledge. In what situations can conformity be dangerous and constructive? - TO CHANGE YOUR WAYS TO MEET STANDARD A LARGER GROUP TO CHANGE TO FIT IN TO GROUP ASSIMILATION* TO SWITCH YOUR THOUGHTS - Communism (destructive Democracy (constructive) Assimilation of Native Americans SOCIAL GROUPS What does it mean to conform? Give specific examples from your life or background knowledge. In what situations can conformity be dangerous? - To justify significant culture boundaries. - Adjusting to what is social acceptable - To change how you act pertaining to your enviornment - Come together for one or more purposes - Change what you perceive is ok for a GROUP! WORKING WISELY WEDNESDAY March 23 LEARNING TARGETS: TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) They Say, I Say Presenter I can annotate for a speaker’s claim, evidence, interpretation, exit. 2) Do close-reading sections and review for feedback. HOMEWORK DUE FRIDAY: SKILLS TEST ON FRIDAY. ANY ANNOTATIONS FOR MORE CREDIT ON READING CHECKS. OUR GAME PLAN! BYSTANDER EFFECT! ALI: Victim LELE: Breaking the Cycle (Wait 5 minutes) CRISSY, ALLLIE: videotapers SERENA, ELIZABETH: Counters REST OF CLASS: Observing. Note that a girl is crying. (Don’t tell people to help. Just tell them you see her crying.) 1) Ali sits on the empty table and pretends to cry. 2) Everyone else sit around the perimeter of the cafeteria. Everyone has a role. 3) Three-Finger Symbol! Go back to class. 4) YOU MUSTTTTT!!!!! RETURN BACK TO CLASS!!!!! THEATRICAL THURSDAY! March 25 LEARNING TARGETS: TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) They Say, I Say Presenter I can annotate for a speaker’s claim, evidence, interpretation, exit. 2) Scene Act Out and Viewing: Simon’s Death & Piggy’s Death 3) Review for Skills Test Tomorrow! HOMEWORK DUE FRIDAY: SKILLS TEST ON FRIDAY. ANY ANNOTATIONS FOR MORE CREDIT ON READING CHECKS. SKILLS TEST: LITERARY STUDY PART I: COMPREHENSION QUESTIONS & IDENTIFY SYMBOLS/ARCHETYPES - Multiple-choice and Short Answer PART II: IDENTIFY AND EXPLAIN FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE & CONTEXT OF PASSAGES - Short Answers (study your annotation guide) PART III: DEVELOP A CLAIM FOR AN ESS. QUESTION (evidence, counterargument/rebuttal) FINISH STRONG FRIDAY! March 26 LEARNING TARGETS: TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Final Questions Learning Targets on the Skills Test 2) Skills Test 3) Kid Nation! Collecting More Evidence SPRING BREAK HOMEWORK: REST AND GET READY TO LEARN! (Email Mrs. Delacruz Late Work, Please) HAVE A SAFE BREAK! COME BACK READY TO LEARN! (Email Mrs. Delacruz Late Work) MOTIVATIONAL MONDAY! April 6 LEARNING TARGETS: I can reflect on my learner characteristics. I can reflect on my learning targets. TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) They Say, I Say Presentation Order 1) Learner Characteristics 1) Review of Unit Exam on Human Nature: Corrections due Wednesday 1) Reflection on Learning Targets via Journaling 1) Pre-Seminar Preparation! HOMEWORK DUE WEDNESDAY: Corrections on Human Nature Exam. Staple corrections to original exam. THINKING ABOUT YOUR LEARNING PATH! Take this time in your notebook to reflect on the following learning targets: A) B) C) D) E) F) I can comprehend a literary text (i.e. Lord of the Flies) I can SOAPSTone a text. I can identify the speaker’s claim, evidence, interpretation. I can identify a counterargument and rebuttal. I can identify archetypes in a literary text. I can identify symbols in a literary text. 1) Rate your confidence with each target as: I’m Confident Need some reminders Help 2) Pick TWO learning targets here that you feel that you “need some reminders” or “help” on and record them in your notebook. Write down what you know confuses you about these two targets. Give an example, if possible. THINKING TOGETHER TUESDAY! April 7 LEARNING TARGETS: Learning Targets on Seminar Rubric TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Pre-Seminar: Create questions that relate to our essential questions and the evidence we have collected. 2) Seminar! HOMEWORK DUE WEDNESDAY: Skills Exam Corrections. Please staple your corrections to your original exam. WORKING WELL WEDNESDAY! Period 2 on April 8 TODAY IN-CLASS: LEARNING TARGETS: 1) I can annotate a text for SOAPSTone. I can annotate for the speaker’s claim, evidence, interpretation, counterargument, rebuttal, and exit. Independent Work Time (10 mins): - Finish responses for seminar questions. - Reading and annotating left hand side of “A Decline of Violence” 2) Partner Work Time (10 mins): - Check left hand side annotations for “A Decline of Violence” - Answer active reading questions. 3) Kid Nation: Episode 1 Look for evidence of good leadership. HOMEWORK DUE FRIDAY: Annotations on the LEFT and RIGHT hand side pages 1-3 of “A Decline of Violence”. Finish active reading questions in notebook. WORKING WELL WEDNESDAY! Period 4 on April 8 TODAY IN-CLASS: LEARNING TARGETS: I can annotate a text for SOAPSTone. I can annotate for the speaker’s claim, evidence, interpretation, counterargument, rebuttal, and exit. 1) - Independent Work Time (10 mins): Reading and annotating left hand side of “A Decline of Violence” 2) Small Group Work: a) Check left hand side annotations for “A Decline of Violence” b) Answer active reading questions. c) Create TWO discussion questions and responses. d) Record TWO class-generated questions by visiting other groups. HOMEWORK DUE FRIDAY: Annotations on the LEFT and RIGHT hand side pages 1-3 of “A Decline of Violence”. Finish active reading questions in notebook. THOUGHTFUL DISCUSSION THURSDAY April 9 LEARNING TARGETS: TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) They Say, I Say Learning Targets indicated on rubric. 2) Seminar 3) Post-Seminar HOMEWORK DUE FRIDAY: Annotations for “A Decline of Violence”. Post-Seminar (if not completed in-class). FUN WITH WRITING FRIDAY! April 9 LEARNING TARGETS: TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) They Say, I Say I can reflect on my writing skills. 2) Top 3 Not Yet! and Sample Essay Analysis HOMEWORK DUE MONDAY (end of class): Revision to “Joining the Conversation” Essay uploaded to turnitin.com. MOVING OUT MONDAY! April 13 LEARNING TARGETS: TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Overview of the Week I can reflect on my writing skills. 2) Review of Works Cited Requirements 3) Lab Time to Work on Works Cited and upload Final Draft to turnitin.com. HOMEWORK DUE MONDAY (end of class): Revision to “Joining the Conversation” Essay uploaded to turnitin.com. THINKING TIMELY TUESDAY! April 14 LEARNING TARGETS: I can reflect on my writing skills. TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Review of Essential Question Essay Timed Writing Requirements 2) Lab Time to finish timed writing for essential question HOMEWORK DUE FRIDAY (end of class): Completed outline via notes in your outline packet or typed notes. OUR GOALS FOR LAB TIME TODAY! In your packet: while computer loads… 1) Writing Goal 2) Essential Question (any question related to human nature) On a word document: 1) Macro-claim (based on essential question) 2) First body paragraph: Finish as much as you can! 3) Print and give to Mrs. Delacruz before you leave! WORKING WISELY WEDNESDAY April 15 LEARNING TARGETS: I can reflect on my writing skills. TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Writing Review #1: Strong macro-claim versus micro-claim. 2) Grammar Bootcamp Daily #1. 2) Writing Conferences & Class Film: Pay It Forward HOMEWORK DUE FRIDAY (end of class): Completed outline via notes in your outline packet or typed notes. ARE LEADERS BORN OR MADE? MACRO: In most situations, leaders develop their skills and are not naturally born with skills to be an effective leader for social groups. MICRO #1: In literature, it is clear that the best leaders develop because of their situations. MICRO #2: In real-life situations, it is also arguable that effective leaders develop based on their contexts. ARE LEADERS BORN OR MADE? MACRO: In some situations, leaders clearly have natural skills to be effective; however, in situations when a group is in danger, leaders can also develop without natural skills. MICRO #1: In some situations, it is clear that leaders have natural skills that make that effective for their social groups. MICRO #2: However, there are situations in which people might be in danger that compels a leader to develop, even if he or she does not have previous experience being a leader. HOW DOES SOCIETY IMPACT HUMAN BEHAVIOR MACRO: Society has a significant impact on people’s behavior, especially in situations in which a group pressures an individual to act just like everyone else. MICRO #1: Society does have a significant impact on people’s behavior. MICRO #2: Especially in groups, an individual will act according to group norms, just so that he or she can fit in. Part I: Identify Independent Clauses STEP #1: What is an independent clause? STEP #2: Identify if the following are INDs or DCWs 1) Knowing I had to read carefully. 2) Bradbury is a sciencefiction writer. 3) Because we are good students. 4) Whenever we read. 5) The burned books. 6) The best students read. PART II: Make corrections to each of the following sentences. 1) Mrs. Delacruz loves learning with sophomores and sophomores secretly like learning too. 2) The Lord of the Flies a tragedy has a dark message about human nature. 3) The class film will be a counterargument, to Goldings novel. 4) As we watch the film we should look for archetypes. 5) When we watch the film we should record major plot developments. CLASS FILM: Evidence for Human Nature Essential Questions CHARACTERS/ARCHETYPES PLOT DEVELOPMENT ESSENTIAL QUESTION THINKING THROUGH FILM THURSDAY April 15 LEARNING TARGETS: I can reflect on my writing skills. TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Writing Outline: Corrections for Labels (claim, evidence, interpretation, exit) 2) Grammar Bootcamp Daily! 3) Class Film: Pay It Forward HOMEWORK DUE FRIDAY (end of class): Completed outline GRAMMAR BOOTCAMP DAILY #2 1) What are the two parts that make an IND? 2) IND, fanboys IND 3) DCW, IND. 4) IND1 – DCW – IND1 5) IND fanboys DCW. FEELING LIKE LEARNING FIRDAY! April 17 LEARNING TARGETS: TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Writing: Evaluate claim statement. I can reflect on my writing skills. 2) Grammar Bootcamp Daily #3 = Mini-Quiz 3) Writing Conferences & Class Film: Moonrise Kingdom HOMEWORK DUE MONDAY: Find ONE credible source. Email to self to print at school. Grammar Daily #3 and Quiz! DIAGRAM SENTENCES STEP #1: Diagram each of the sentences on your partner’s paper. UNDERLINE the INDs. CIRCLE the DCWs. STEP #2: Give them a score out of 4 points. ¼ 2/4 ¾ 100% MOVING TO THE LIBRARY MONDAY! April 20 LEARNING TARGETS: I can select an independent reading book. TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Overview of Independent Reading Project 2) LLC Presentation by Mrs. Pigoni HOMEWORK DUE WEDNESDAY: First body paragraph. Bring printed version to class. No turnitin.com submission needed. THINKING TOGETHER TUESDAY! April 21 LEARNING TARGETS: 1) Jam out to some sick music I can identify the requirements of a body paragraph. TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Writing: Review body paragraph organization. 2) Grammar Bootcamp Daily #4 3) Writing Conferences & Class Film: Moonrise Kingdom HOMEWORK DUE WEDNESDAY: First body paragraph. Bring printed version to class. No turnitin.com submission needed. GRAMMAR DAILY #4 1) We are studying Chicago history, and we are learning how to be good readers and writers. a) IND, fanboys (coordinating conjunction) IND b) IND, DCW c) IND1, DCW, IND1 d) DCW, IND e) IND fanboys DCW 2) Even though I am not a Sox fan, I appreciate U.S. Cellular field. a) IND, fanboys (coordinating conjunction) IND b) IND, DCW c) IND1, DCW, IND1 d) DCW, IND e) IND fanboys DCW GRAMMAR DAILY #4 3) Chicago, often known as the Windy City, is one of the most diverse cities in the United States. a) IND, fanboys (coordinating conjunction) IND b) IND, DCW c) IND1, DCW, IND1 d) DCW, IND e) IND fanboys DCW 4) Our class worked hard and survived grammar boot camp! a) IND, fanboys (coordinating conjunction) IND b) IND, DCW c) IND1, DCW, IND1 d) DCW, IND e) IND fanboys DCW GRAMMAR DAILY #4 5) I reviewed my grammar bootcamp rules, knowing it would help me become a better writer. a) IND, fanboys (coordinating conjunction) IND b) IND, DCW c) IND1, DCW, IND1 d) DCW, IND e) IND fanboys DCW WORKING WELL WEDNESDAY! April 22 LEARNING TARGETS: TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Writing: First Body Paragraph Revisions I can reflect on my writing skills. 3) Writing Conferences & Class Film: Pay It Forward HOMEWORK DUE FRIDAY: Revise first body paragraph and write second body paragraph. STEP #1: EVALUATE CLAIM GRADE THE CLAIM BASED ON THE FOLLOWING CRITERIA: 1) The claim answers ONE of the essential questions. 2) The claim does not use the word “I”. 3) The claim is an opinion that can be supported by evidence from specific sources and background knowledge. A = You answered yes to all three criteria B = You answered yes to two out of three of the criteria C = You answered yes to one out of three of the criteria D/F = There is no claim. THE GRADE: __________ YOUR EXPLANATION FOR THE GRADE BASED ON THE CRITERIA: _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ STEP #2: ANNOTATE FOR… (Body Paragraphs) SUBCLAIM EVIDENCE #1 INTERPRETATION #1 TRANSITION WORD EVIDENCE #2 INTERPRETATION #2 COUNTERARGUMENT REBUTTAL EXIT STEP #3: PARAPHRASE, SUMMARIZE & MLA IN-TEXT CITATION CHECK THAT IF THE WRITER PARAPHRASED OR SUMMARIZED, CITATIONS WERE PROVIDED. • PARAPHRASE: Rephrase statements using your own words. - MUST STILL USE MLA IN-TEXT CITATION. • SUMMARY: 5 W’s of a passage - MUST STILL USE MLA IN-TEXT CITATION. * IF THERE IS NO PAGE NUMBER, JUST USE THE SOURCE NAME* STEP #4: QUOTE-WEAVING & MLA INTEXT CITATON • Option 1: Speaker’s Tag: When _______(background)_________, he says, “___________” (Golding #). • Option 2: Complete Thought: ________(IND)___________: “____________” (Golding #). • Option 3: Incomplete Thought: ___________(DCW) ________ “___________” (Golding #). STEP #5: CONTRACTIONS NO CONTRACTIONS ISN’T = IS NOT CAN’T = CANNOT HE’S = HE IS STEP #6: PARALLEL STRUCTURE • SAME VERB TENSE THROUGHOUT • SAME TO-, TO-, TOPATTERN • KEEP A PATTERN! THINKING TIMELY THURSDAY! April 23 LEARNING TARGETS: I can use a semi-colon correctly. TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Writing: Requirements for intro paragraphs and conclusion paragraphs. 2) Grammar Daily #5 3) Writing Conferences & Class Film: Moonrise Kingdom HOMEWORK DUE FRIDAY: Revise first body paragraph and write second body paragraph. Bring an ELECTRONIC COPY TO CLASS GOLDEN RULE: SEPARATE IND vs DCW THE SEMI-COLON Rule #1: IND1;IND2. Trevor struggles to challenge the bullies; this is an example of his attempt to be compassionate. Rule #2: IND1; DCW,IND2. NEW IND We have been working hard; however, we still have much to learn. Practice #5: Semi-Colons Directions: First, underline all the IND and circle all the DCW, if there are any. Some of these sentences need semi-colons. Add semi-colons as necessary. For sentences with no mistakes, write NO CHANGE. 1) We learned about MLA format however, we can still practice. 2) Montag’s attempts to break the cycle of his society he knows there will be grave consequences. 3) We will be writing perfect paragraphs; our claims will focus on how characters demonstrate human nature. 4) Katniss in The Hunger Games is the protagonist; Aibeleen is the protagonist of The Help. Practice #5: Semi-Colons 1) We learned about MLA format; however, we can still practice. 2) Montag’s attempts to break the cycle of his society; he knows there will be grave consequences. 3) We will be writing perfect paragraphs; our claims will focus on how characters demonstrate human nature. 4) Katniss in The Hunger Games is the protagonist; Aibeleen is the protagonist of The Help. CLASS FILM: Evidence for Human Nature Essential Questions CHARACTERS/ARCHETYPES • 3 ARCHETYPES PLOT DEVELOPMENT • 5 EVENTS ESSENTIAL QUESTION • 2 QUESTIONS + CORRESPONDING RESPONSES THINKING TIMELY THURSDAY! April 23 LEARNING TARGETS: I can use a semi-colon correctly. TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Writing: Requirements for intro paragraphs and conclusion paragraphs. 2) Grammar Daily #5 3) Writing Conferences & Class Film: Moonrise Kingdom HOMEWORK DUE FRIDAY: Revise first body paragraph and write second body paragraph. Bring an ELECTRONIC COPY TO CLASS FUN FOR THE MIND FRIDAY! April 23 LEARNING TARGETS: I can write an introduction and conclusion to my essay. TODAY IN-CLASS: 1) Review writing requirements and Monday Due Date! 2) Work Time! HOMEWORK DUE MONDAY: FINAL COPY OF ESSAY WITH WORKS CITED. UPLOAD TO TURNITIN.COM IN THE LAB TODAY… READING & ANNOTATING 1) Print your credible source. 2) Read and annotate for SOAPSTone. WRITING 3) Use your credible source as a possible attentiongetter or extra piece of evidence within your essay. 4) Write the introduction and conclusion of your essay. 5) Write the Works Cited for your essay.