Persuasive Speech Pick one of the topics from the list below. You will research and write a persuasive speech. The goal of writing a persuasive essay is to persuade or convince the reader to believe something. Writers do this through the use of logical arguments and emotional appeals. A persuasive speech is a speech intended to convince the audience to do something. Whether you want to get people to vote, stop littering, or change their minds about an important issue, persuasive speeches are an effective way to sway an audience. There are many elements that go into a successful persuasive speech. But, with some preparation and practice, you can deliver a powerful speech. I find that the best persuasive topics are controversial, so don’t be afraid to ruffle a few feathers. It doesn’t matter to me which side you choose because either side is defendable. Whichever side you choose, focus only on your side of the argument. Do not waiver in your case. You persuade your audience with logical or emotional arguments. http://www.ereadingworksheets.com/writing/persuasive-essay-topics/ Writing a persuasive speech needs extra-special planning and consideration to be successful. In my experience, this is not the type of speech that can be flicked out without thought. There may be brilliantly competent speakers who can do it but the rest of us, me included, have to put the time in to achieve what we want to. Rough Draft for your Persuasive Speech/Topic Briefing: You will write a rough draft for your upcoming speech on the topic we discussed in class on July 2nd. The rough draft/topic briefing will be due on Wednesday at 11:59pm just like the regular 8.1 Assignment would have been. Your final persuasive speech needs to be thorough, will be at least 10 minutes, and should be around 6 pages double-spaced. (Due on July 23rd before your final exam) For your Rough draft you will write the following: Topic Briefing & Rough Outline: In this informal written "presentation," you will introduce the topic you will be discussing for your persuasive speech due to be presented in class on July 23rd before your final exam. Your topic must address an issue about which there are multiple points of view. It needs to address a controversy or significant problem. Pick a topic about which you interested and be prepared to do extensive library and internet research to further investigate so that you can persuade the class through an educated persuasive speech. You will fill out the worksheet below for this assignment: http://speakingcenter.uncg.edu/resources/speakingchange/pdfs/creatingaPersuasive.pdf The worksheet needs to be completely filled out but please just copy and paste it into your word processing program or follow the format when typing. No handwritten worksheets will be accepted. The outline for this assignment is informal. However, for next week's assignment (due July 15th - Wednesday at 11:59pm) you will need to have the outline polished and it should look similar to the example below: http://www.roch.edu/people/lhalverson/sample_persuasive_speech_outline.htm Writing a Persuasive Speech: A student’s aim should first be to speak coherently, and then second, to make a strong persuasive argument. You should have a solid understanding of the audiences perception of the topic that you have selected It is what is perceived that makes the difference. Perception will also make or break your speech. If you have ever sat and watched politicians speak, you have undoubtedly noticed that they not only have a way with words but they have a good understanding of what is going on in the minds of most people. They play on perception – the audiences perception of a certain subject, person, group or social issue. You must learn how to quickly play on the audience's perception or your speak will tank. So perception is key. You should know the obstacles that people face with agreeing or disagreeing with the topic on which you are speaking and face them head on in your speech. You will need to discern a way to eradicate all opposition. You have to be able to convince your audience that there is no opposition if they see things your way. This is the core of a persuasive speech. Once you have presented the obstacles (or opposition) and your strategy for getting rid of those obstacles then you will need to come to a conclusion. Your conclusive paragraph will need to link all of your ideas succinctly and smoothly so that your audience is revved up to be on your team when it comes to your stance and topic. Enthusiasm is essential in writing the persuasive speech for without it you do not have a persuasive speech at all. To write a persuasive speech you need to: Come up with a controversial topic, one that will spawn heated debates regardless of your position. Research the topic thoroughly. Know the pros and cons of the topic. Understand the perspective of your audience. You should have a stronghold on how the audience views the topic that you are writing about so that you can better relate to them. Grasp the obstacles that your audience face or have with the topic. It is through understanding these obstacles that you can tackle them. Present your strategy for eradicating the obstacles. You must know how to diffuse the tension that surrounds the obstacles by having a plan for complete eradication. Pull it all together to make a proper conclusion. The conclusion is what hooks your audience. It is essential when writing that you take into consideration the above steps for writing a persuasive speech. If you fail to do so, you just might miss something crucial when putting together your speech. For instance, if you have no enthusiasm or passion about your topic then more than likely your audience will not be interested in what you have to say. Here are a few references on persuasive speeches to help you get started: http://www.ereadingworksheets.com/writing/writing-persuasive-essays/#introductoryparagraphs http://www.ereadingworksheets.com/writing/persuasive-essay-worksheets/ http://grammar.yourdictionary.com/style-and-usage/steps-for-writing-a-persuasive-speech.html Public Speaking 101: http://www.au.af.mil/au/awc/awcgate/kline-speak/b33ch1.htm http://www.usnews.com/education/blogs/professors-guide/2010/02/24/15-strategies-for-giving-oralpresentations http://www.speaking.pitt.edu/student/public-speaking/index.html Persuasive Speech The Persuasive Speech usually takes place towards the end of the semester, so it is assumed that you will have improved your ability to do the presentation as well as improved in the ability to research your topic. • Impact the belief or behavior of your audience • Significant and contemporary issue with meaning and influence for the lives of your audience • Take a position on a substantive topic • Impact the belief or behavior of your audience • Significant and contemporary issue with meaning and influence for the lives of your audience • 6 + sources - 4 of them credible & at least 3 different types of supporting materials Setting a Goal The goal of writing a persuasive speech is to change or move the audience toward accepting your position on the topic. An essential part of that is knowing exactly what it is you want to achieve. There are degrees of change. Do you want a little, or a lot? Most wanted response or MWR What you decide is called your most wanted response or MWR. A realistic MWR is reached through analysis of your audience in relation to your topic. Example: My topic is "obesity in children". I am speaking to mothers whose children all attend the same kindergarten. There is concern among the staff over the number of children who are over weight for their age. The children mostly come from homes where both parents work. Food is bought already made up for a variety of reasons including time saving, convenience and a lack of knowledge of preparing it any other way. 'Treat' food (sweets, cake etc.) is also used to pacify and/or to reinforce good behavior. Fussy or picky eating is allowed principally because the effort and time required to change already established patterns is difficult to find. The problem is compounded by lack of exercise. In setting the goal (MWR) for the speech I need to decide what approach will achieve the best results. Do I want to influence the mothers to open their minds to the idea that allowing a child to establish habitual unhealthy eating patterns is detrimental to their children's growth and development? Or do I want them to stop using treat and pre-prepared foods immediately and only offer home cooked healthy options instead? The first approach is softly-softly. The second is direct or hard hitting. Audience Analysis Who is your audience? How you persuade, and your MWR (goal) is most effectively established when you understand who you are talking to. In relation to your topic area are they: 1. Hostile - actively don't want to hear what you have to say for many reasons which may include prejudice, fear, ignorance, inertia, cultural difference, differing values/beliefs ... 2. Neutral - no decided opinion or beliefs and therefore no investment toward maintaining the current state or moving toward a new one. This is the middle ground. 3. Motivated - actively seeking to change. These people are already aware of the 'problem' and are looking for solutions. They want to hear what you have to tell them and are likely to be already and convinced of the rightness of your solution. What else do you need to know? Aside from their anticipated baseline attitude, (hostile, neutral, motivated), toward your speech topic, what else do you know about them? Find out their: General Age Gender Shared fears, concerns or problems Cultural background(s) Shared interests, beliefs, values, goals, hopes, desires What obstacles there are to adopting the change you desire The more you can find out, the more you can tailor writing a persuasive speech (including tone and language choice), and your MWR to fit. For instance, going back to the obesity in children example above, we could decide that given what we've found out about the audience, the hard-hitting approach would generate too many obstacles to overcome. Therefore we will be writing a persuasive speech with a non-threatening MWR that has mothers accepting a pamphlet on children's healthy snack choices to take home. Keep it local Where possible draw your examples from local material. The reason is that we are more likely to care or respond when we actively know who or what is involved firsthand. We identify, and the more we identify the more invested we are in finding a solution. The situation becomes real to us and we care. Evidence and empathy Writing a good persuasive speech means finding credible evidence to support your argument. Seek out reputable, reliable, quotable sources to back the points you make. Without them your speech will fail its purpose. Persuasion is a synthesis of emotional as well as intellectual appeal. Emotional content will be dismissed unless it is properly backed. Conversely purely intellectual content will be dismissed if it lacks empathy or feeling. You need both - in equal measure. Balance and obstacles Seek out and address the opposition's arguments, or obstacles in the path of adopting your course of action, fairly and respectfully. Find the elements you share. Openly acknowledge and be clear about them. This builds credibility and trust and as a result your points of departure are more likely to be listened to. Choosing a structural pattern Once you've decided your topic and its angle, done your audience analysis, fixed what you want to achieve (MWR), researched for evidence, and addressed the obstacles, you're finally ready to begin writing. What pattern or model will you use? There is more than one. Have a look at each of the four below to see which best suits your topic, speech purpose and audience. 1) Monroe's Motivated Sequence This is a tried and tested model developed in the 1930's by Allan H Monroe. Monroe's Motivated Sequence follows the mind-flow or thought sequence someone goes through when someone else is persuading him or her to do something. It's a pattern used over and over again by the professional persuaders: marketers, advertisers, and politicians... Monroe's Motivated Sequence in action You can find out more about the steps involved in writing a persuasive speech using Monroe's Motivated Sequence here. And read an example persuasive speech written using the method. 2. Problem/Solution This is a two-step pattern. The first part outlines/explains the problem and the second part provides the solution, which includes meeting the obstacles and giving evidence. 3. Comparison In this pattern the method is to compare an item/object/idea/action against another similar item/object/idea/action and establish why the item/object/idea/action you are supporting is superior. Example: Why a SBI website is better than a Wordpress site if you want to build an online business Reason One Wordpress primarily is a blogging platform and blogging is not a business model Reason Two Wordpress does not supply fully integrated step-by-step instructions to build a sustainable e-business Reason Three Wordpress does not provide its users with constant and fully tested upgrades/updating With each comparison point compelling, relevant evidence is provided and obstacles are met. 4. Using the negative to persuade In this model the reasons why you are against the opposition of your chosen topic are highlighted. Example: The topic is Teenage Binge Drinking and the angle is to persuade parents to take more control 1. Leads to anti-social behavior - mindless vandalism, drunk-driving, unprotected sex etc 2. Impacts on growing brains - an overview of current research 3. Has implications for developing addictions - alcoholism, nicotine... Each negative reason is backed with evidence. One piles on top the other creating an urgency to solve the problem. Your positive solution coming at the end of the speech clinches the argument. Speech outlining in 4 steps The process of outlining a speech is broken down into 4 essential steps. (Click a heading to find out more about each one) 1. Preparation deciding on your topic considering the audience and refining your topic to suit them deciding on the purpose of the speech choosing an organizational method to support your speech purpose 2. Introduction- opening greeting and attention getter defining your thesis statement (a summary of what your speech is about) establishing your credibility an overview and the benefit to the audience 3. Body transition or link between introduction and body main ideas with supporting ideas examples and details 4. Conclusion summary of main points closer or call to action SAMPLE PERSUASIVE SPEECH OUTLINE (Motivated Sequence) Topic: Organ Donation Specific Purpose: To persuade my audience to donate their organs and tissues when they die and to act upon their decision to donate. Thesis Statement: The need is constantly growing for organ donors and it is very simple to be an organ donor when you die. I. INTRODUCTION A. Attention material/Credibility Material: How do you feel when you have to wait for something you really, really want? What if it was something you couldn’t live without? Well, my cousin was five years old when he found out he needed a new kidney. He went on the organ waiting list right away. He was called twice during a six month span that they had a kidney available only to find out that the kidney wasn’t a good match. He had to wait again. The third time was a charm. A small adult was in an accident and his kidney was a good match. This story had a happy ending but so many do not. B. Tie to the audience: One of the people on the waiting list for an organ transplant might be someone you know. C. Thesis and Preview: Today I’d like to talk to you about first, the need for organ donors in our area, second, how you can become an organ donor after you die, and finally, how your family and organ donor recipients benefit from you donation. [Transition into body of speech]: I’ll begin by telling you about the need for organ donors. II. BODY A. People around the world but also right here in Minnesota, Wisconsin, Iowa, and Illinois, need organ transplants and they need our help. 1. The problem is that there is a lack of organs and organ donors who make organ transplantation possible. a. The need is many organs and tissues such as the heart, lungs, liver, kidneys, pancreas, corneas, bone, skin, heart valves, and blood vessels(Iowa Statewide Organ Procurement Organization undated brochure). b. A new name is added to the national waiting list every 16 minutes. That means that 3 people will be added to the list during the time we are in class today. 1) The problem is that 10 people will die each day waiting for an organ transplant (LifeSource: Questions and Answers). 2) The reason is that are only on the average 5,000 donors nationally per year (LifeSource: Statistics). c. You can choose to donate any needed organs or you can specify which organs or tissues you wish to donate. 2.. Organ donation is very important. a. The following poem by Robert Test entitled, "To Remember Me," shows the importance of organ donation. "Give my sight to the man who has never seen a sunrise, a baby’s face or love in the eyes of a woman. Give my heart to a person whose heart has caused nothing but endless days of pain… Take my bones, every muscle, every fiber and nerve in my body and find a way to make a crippled child walk…Take my cells, if necessary, and let them grow so that, someday, a speechless boy will shout at the crack of a bat and a deaf girl will hear the sound of rain against her window (South Dakota Lions Eye Bank, undated brochure). b. Not only is this a problem nationally but also it is a big problem right here at home in the Midwest. 1) Nationally, there are over 62,000 people waiting as of October 7, 1998. As of October 7, 1998, there are 1,422 people from Minnesota, North Dakota, South Dakota, and part of Wisconsin that are on the organ waiting list (LifeSource: Statistics). 2) The sad part is that there have only been 104 donors in the Midwest so far from January 1998 through August 1998 (LifeSource: Newsnotes). [Transition: I’m sure that you can see the need for people like you to donate your organs. The majority of this class has already said they would like to donate their organs when they die. But you might be asking, well, how can I make sure my organs are donated after I die? Let me tell you.] B. This is how you go about making sure your organs are donated. 1. Talk with your family about your decision. They will be involved in the donation arrangements when you die. If they do not know your wishes of becoming a donor, your wishes may never be carried out. 2. Mark your driver’s license so that your license indicates your intent to donate. Each state varies. a. Fill out, sign and carry a uniform donor card with you. b. This donor card says what organs you wish to have donated and also has places for your family members to sign as witnesses after you have discussed your decision with them (Gundersen Lutheran Hospital [LaCrosse, WI] undated brochure). [Transition: You can see that it isn’t difficult to be an organ donor. Now let’s look at what may happen if you choose to donate your organs and what may happen if you choose not to.] C. Organ donation benefits both the donor’s family and the recipients. 1. If you do donate your organs, your family and the people who receive your organs might benefit in a similar way like this family. A seventeen year old died of head injuries in a car accident. His mom decided to donate his organs. His heart went to a prison chaplain, his kidneys went to a mother of 5 children and a Vietnam vet. The Vietnam vet is "energetic" and finally is getting his college degree. The teenager gave life to others and his family feels a sense of satisfaction and comfort that other lives have been touched by his (University of Wisconsin Hospital and Clinics 1991 brochure). 2. The problem arises when you are thinking about becoming a donor but never do anything about it. Then, no one knows your wishes and your organs will not be donated. The consequences of this are more people waiting for organs and there will still be an incredible shortage of available organs. III. CONCLUSION: A. Brakelight/Transition: As you can easily see, donating your organs can be one of the most important decisions you ever make and also the greatest gift you could ever give. B. Summary: I’ve told you about the need for organ donors in our area, how you can become an organ donor after you die, and finally, how your family and organ recipients benefit from your donation. You become a donor by talking to your family and making sure they know you want to be a donor, fill out and sign a donor card, and indicate your wishes on your driver’s license. C. Tie Back to the Audience: What if the person waiting on the list needing an organ transplant was someone you loved? Imagine if you had a brother or sister who had unexpectedly died and you were able to meet the person who received their heart, for example. Think of the satisfaction and possible comfort knowing that your brother or sister provided life for somebody else. D. Concluding Remarks: I’m going to leave you with a short message from Michael Jordan who is a sponsor for the Iowa LifeGift Coalition on Organ and Tissue Donor Awareness and appears in their 1996 brochure. "Please make the decision to become an organ and tissue donor. Remember: Share your life. Share your decision." WORKS CITED Gundersen Lutheran Hospital (Lacrosse, WI): "Life…Pass It On." Undated brochure. Iowa LifeGift Coalition on Organ and Tissue Donor Awareness: "Share Your Life, Share Your Decision." 1996 brochure. Iowa Statewide Organ Procurement Organization: "Be an organ donor…it’s the chance of a lifetime!" undated brochure. LifeSource:Newsnotes. October 1998. Accessed November 2, 1998. <www.lifesource.org/newsnotes.htm>. LifeSource: Questions and Answers. April 1998. Accessed November 2, 1998. <www.lifesource.org/public.htm >. LifeSource: Statistics. October 1998. Accessed November 2, 1998. <www.lifesource.org/statistics.htm >. South Dakota Lions Eye Bank: "No Greater Gift…Than Yourself To Others." Undated brochure. University of Wisconsin Hospital and Clinics: "A Circle of Life: The Gift of Organ and Tissue Donation." 1991 brochure. SAMPLE OUTLINE FOR A PERSUASIVE SPEECH By Tom Wingard Introduction Attention Material Are you getting a bit tired of that three inch spare tire around your waist? Are you becoming increasingly lazy, fat? Thesis/ Overview I'd like to show you that we're all in need of exercise. Now is the time to get started so that we can enjoy the health and psychological benefits the rest of our lives. Motivation Transition I'm assuming that none of you will argue that exercise is harmful. You'll agree that exercise is beneficial. However, I'm not so sure all of us are actually exercising. I'd like to tell you, then, not how to exercise, but to persuade you to go out and get some exercise (First, I'd like to tell you why I'm so concerned about our inactivity.) Thought Pattern: PROBLEM-SOLUTION Body Problem: I. Lack of exercise is harmful to our health. A. Cardiovascular disease, the nation's leading cause of death, is caused by inactivity. 1. Clogged arteries and veins are a result of inactivity. (example) 2. Excess fat also caused by inactivity leads to a higher incidence of heart disease. (explanation and example) (Statistically, then, you will die at an earlier age if you do not exercise.) (Internal summary) Transition (Now some of you might be wondering why I'm preaching to a bunch of 20 year olds.) B. College students are not as healthy as we are often lead to believe. 1. 2. C. High school seniors are in better health than we are. (survey) We are on the threshold of decline as our level of activity drops. (explanation) This change is correlated with the changes in our lifestyles that occur between high school and college. 1. 2. 3. Most of us have less time to run around because we are studying more. (explanation) Many of us have given up the sports we used to play competitively. (example) Now that we're in college we have less motivation to exercise. (explanation) Internal summary (The point here is that exercise for us must come from within. But, statistically that hasn't been happening.) Transition (This point becomes increasingly significant as we realize that this stage in our lives is a primary force in determining our future behavior.) D. Internal summary Transition Our inactivity now may lead to inactivity later. 1. Our choices in brand of beer will be carried on through the coming years. (analogy) 2. By being inactive now we are getting ourselves into a rut of being inactive. This rut can be avoided, but it is difficult. (explanation) (I have shown you that by not exercising we are decreasing our life spans, and at this particular time in our lives we are especially vulnerable to becoming out of shape. This may carry with us for years, until it is too late. (A fair question to ask here is: "What is so great about exercise? If it's such a pain in the ass, it's not worth living a few more years." To this I would respond that it isn't such a pain.) Solution II. Exercise is not a large investment, but the yield is very high. We should all exercise to take advantage of this. A. To exercise, you don't have to lift weights for hours on end or join the wrestling team. Exercise can take as little as 15 minutes a day. (statistic) B. One advantage of being healthy is that your body needs less sleep. This may more than make up for the time it takes to exercise. (explanation) C. Studies show exercise clears your thoughts so that you can be more efficient. (Testimony) D. Also, you'll feel better. 1. When hurrying to class you won't get winded so easily. (example) 2. You won't get sick as easily since exercise increases the body's resistance. (testimony and explanation) E. More important, however, are the effects on your body you don't feel. 1. Increasing your cardiovascular strength Internal summary/ transition 2. increases your heart's stroke efficiency. (testimony) Researchers at San Diego State have found that increases in exercise slow the onset of senility. (testimony) (If none of these facts impress you, keep in mind that exercise might make us look better and this might make girls take a little more notice of us.) Conclusion Attention material Just as none of us wants to be called a fat slob by our mothers, none of us wants to die earlier than we should. Underview So, we should all get into the habit of exercising regularly right now. If all of us now begin a routine of staying in shape, keeping in mind that it will make us healthier, give us a better state of mind, and body, we can make the future years of our lives more rewarding. Last Thought And why wait for tomorrow? Start today! More Samples: http://www.sagepub.com/edwards/study/materials/outlines/77593_per.pdf http://libguides.indstate.edu/content.php?pid=16937&sid=1558490