Part One “They Say” Step One: Before you began giving your position on a topic, you must introduce what others are saying. Choose sentences from each of the three Points below (or combine them): 1. Introducing Standard Views Choose this if your topic has become so widely accepted that by now it is essentially the conventional way of thinking about a topic. You should use this if you are challenging widely accepted beliefs – analyzing their strengths and weaknesses Americans today tend to believe that ____________________________________________. Conventional wisdom has it that _________________________________________________. The standard way of thinking about topic X has it that _________________________________________. It is often said that ____________________________________________________. One would think that ____________________________________________________. Many people assume that ____________________________________________________. 2. Making what “They Say” Something You Say Choose this to respond to a believe that you once held or that you are ambivalent about I’ve always believed that ____________________________________________________. When I was a child, I used to think that __________________________________________. Although I should know better by now, I cannot help thinking that ____________________________________________________. At the same time that I believe ____________________________________________________, I also believe ____________________________________________________. 3. Introducing something implied or assumed Use this introduction to show sophistication in your writing. Summarizes a point that is not directly stated in what “they say” but it is implied or assumed. Although none of them have ever said so directly, my teachers have often given me the impression that ____________________________________________________. One implication of X’s treatment of ______________________________________ is that ____________________________________________________. Although X does not say so directly, she apparently assumes that ____________________________________________________. While they rarely admit as much, ___________________________________ often takes for granted that ____________________________________________________. Step Two: Her (or His) point is – Next you must summarize (or paraphrase) what others are saying about your topic (You must summarize each main point he makes). You should add these sentences to your introduction after you introduce an author’s point of view on the topic. Choose one sentence and verb per main point. Next add a quote and explain it. Then transition to the next point. Start over. 1. Templates for introducing summaries She advocates ____________________________________________________. They celebrate the fact that ____________________________________________________. ____________________________________________________, he admits. 2. Use the verbs to introduce summaries (and quotations) Verbs for making a claim Argue Assert Believe Claim Emphasize Insist Observe Remind us Report Suggest Verbs for expressing agreement Acknowledge Corroborate Admire Do not deny Agree Endorse Celebrate the fact that Extol Praise Reaffirm Support Verify Verbs for questioning or disagreeing Complain Deny Complicate Deplore the tendency to Contend Qualify Contradict Question Refute Reject Renounce Repudiate Verbs for making recommendations Advocate Exhort Call for Implore Demand Plead Encourage Recommend (Etc.) Urge Warn X acknowledges that ______________________________________. X agrees that ______________________________________. X argues that ______________________________________. X believes that ______________________________________. X denies/does not deny that ______________________________________. *Combine the sentences and verb choices above to write an effective summary about what other people say. Step Three: The Art of Quoting – Add relevant quotes to your essay Quotation Frame – You cannot just insert quotes into your essay. You must introduce the quote and then explain it. This is called framing. (The quote goes in the middle.) Templates for introducing quotations X states, “_______________________________________________.” As the prominent _____________________ puts it, ____________________________________.” According to X, “_______________________________________________.” In her book (essay, film, etc.) ____________________________, X maintains that “_______________________________________________.” Writing in the ____________________, X complains that “____________________________.” In X’s view “_______________________________________________.” X agrees when she writes “_______________________________________________.” X disagrees when she writes “_______________________________________________.” X complicates matters further when she writes “__________________________.” Templates for explaining quotations Basically X is warning ______________________________________. In other words, X believes ______________________________________. In making this comment, X urges us to ______________________________________. X is corroborating the old-age adage that ______________________________________. X’s point is that ______________________________________. The essence of X’s argument is that ______________________________________. How not to introduce quotations – You should not introduce quotations by saying something like: “Orwell asserts an idea that….” Instead write “Orwell’s assertion is___________” Or “A quote by Shakespeare says…” Instead write – Nothing. This is a horrible way to introduce a quote. Transitions Also And Besides Addition Furthermore In addition In fact Indeed Moreover So too Actually By extension In short Elaboration That is In other words To put it another way To put it bluntly To put it succinctly Ultimately After all As an illustration Consider Example For example For instance Specifically Accordingly As a result Consequently Cause and Effect Hence It follows, then Since Along the same lines In the same way Comparison Likewise Similarly Although But By contrast Conversely Despite Even though Contrast However In contrast Nevertheless Nonetheless On the contrary On the other hand Admittedly Although it is true that Granted Concession I concede that Of course Naturally To take a case in point So then Therefore Thus Regardless Whereas While Yet To be sure Conclusion As a result Consequently Hence In conclusion, then In short In sum, then It follows, then So The upshot of all this is that Therefore Thus to sum up To summarize