IVC Scholarship Essay workshop
Presented by Transfer Center Staff
IVC Scholarship Program
 Types of Scholarships:
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Endowments: To honor a loved one, faculty and others will set
up a scholarship in their name and decide what type of student
they want their money to go to
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Corporations: Businesses and banks sponsor scholarships to
assist students working towards specific goals
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IVC Departments and Student Government (ASIVC): Money
collected from purchasing an ASIVC sticker and from
departments on campus often go toward scholarships for
students in certain majors, with specified GPAs, who show
leadership and activity involvement, etc.
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Foundations: Organizations that exist to collect donations and
pass them along to those in some type of need
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Some scholarships are need-based, some are GPA-based, and
some are based on other characteristics
General Guidelines for Applying
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Visit the IVC website to access the application:
http://financialaid.ivc.edu/scholarship/Pages/defaul
t.aspx
Please complete the application form from the
college website. Fill in the required information
and submit by 11:59 p.m. (PST), Friday, February
16, 2016.
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HANDWRITTEN APPLICATIONS WILL NOT
BE ACCEPTED.
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Decide whether you will be a continuing or
transferring student.
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An ASIVC/ASG activity card must be purchased
for ASIVC scholarship consideration – cost is $10
from the Bursar’s Office by the Cafeteria.
Minimum Qualifications
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Must have completed 12 units at IVC at the time of application.
Must have finished at least 6 units in Fall 2015 semester and be
enrolled in 6 units in Spring 2016 semester at IVC.
Must have a minimum 2.0 GPA to be eligible.
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When you are answering the questionnaire, if you are not currently
enrolled at IVC, or are not continuing in the fall and not transferring to a
4-year school in the fall, you will not be eligible for an award.
Essay Questions
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Compose essay in a word document and then copy and paste – otherwise you will
be timed out and lose your essay!
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1. Summarize your life experiences and any hardships that have
impacted your path to higher education.
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2. Please describe your interest in your intended major, how your
interest in the field developed and your educational and career
aspirations.
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3. How will your educational experience be affected if selected to
receive a scholarship from the Irvine Valley College Scholarship
Program.
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4. Discuss your community service activities and their impact on
your life and others.
Tips on Writing the Essays
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Create a thesis
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Your time to shine!
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Determine the objective of your essay and
write one sentence that expresses it Your
whole essay should revolve around that.
Highlight your accomplishments but only those
that relate to your thesis
Honesty is the best policy
Stand out from the crowd
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What makes you unique or different from the
others applying?
Share a personal story that conveys who you
are, your personality, your journey to where
you are now
Tips on Writing the Essays
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Make your words count
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Quality, not quantity
Be clear and concise
Back up your thesis with specific examples
Proper grammar and spelling will make it easier for the
committee to follow your essay and not be distracted by
mistakes
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Note: The committee is instructed to not downgrade your essay for writing,
grammar, or language errors as the content is what you are ranked on
Tips on Writing the Essays
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Other tips
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It is ok to elaborate on challenges and
difficult circumstances, but show the
committee what you have accomplished
despite your circumstances and your
potential as a result
Proofread and have someone else
proofread it
Revise as needed
Do not plagiarize
Recycle other personal statements (if you
have one) if they seem to answer the
questions asked (UC, Common App, etc.)
Don’t miss the deadline – February 16th!
How the Committee Will Evaluate Your Essays
Know Your Audience
Your audience (the
scholarship committee)
will be made up of about
30 faculty, staff,
administrators, and
community volunteers. In
some cases, the donor(s)
will also read your
answers.
Letters of Recommendation
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This year, two letters of recommendation are required. You will provide
recommender emails on the application and hit “send”. They will receive a
request to provide your letter.
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Help your recommenders write you the best letter possible!
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Ask them in advance before you email your request – at least 2 weeks before the
deadline
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Provide them with a copy of your transcript, resume, and essay
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Remind them of anything specific about you that they can comment on such as:
your leadership skills in your group project, your excellent performance in their
class, your initiative, problem solving skills, or any other strengths you want them
to point out with specific examples to illustrate them.
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Pick those who can speak highly of you and know you well!
Receiving Your Award
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At the end of April you will receive a letter informing you if you have been selected to
receive a scholarship.
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If you are receiving a scholarship, we encourage you to attend the IVC Scholarship Awards
Ceremony . Please mark your calendar for this event once invited.
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After the Awards Program, you will receive a letter explaining the steps for receiving your
scholarship(s). These steps have been abbreviated below:
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Please remember to send a thank-you notes to your donors.
Meet the spring unit and GPA requirements as stated in the Continuing/Transferring Section. If
transferring, provide documentation of acceptance. The IVC Financial Aid Office will verify this
information, and disbursements will be mailed to the Transfer institution. OSHER Scholarships are not
eligible for transfer to four year institutions.
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Applicant agrees to allow Scholarship Information to be shared with third party donors.
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Applicant agrees to have name posted in scholarship program.
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If you change your address after submitting your scholarship application, you must notify
the Admissions and Records Office and the Financial Aid Office.
Questions?
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Remember - if you have questions about the scholarship
application, please stop by the Financial Aid Office in the
Student Services Center, call them at 949-451-5287 or email financialaid@ivc.edu. You can also contact the
Foundation Office, Denise Sonnenberg, at 949-451-5661.