Challenges ELA A10 Hunger Games Book Review Name: _____________________________ CCA10.4h Write a review (e.g., evaluating a literary work) that: o includes thoughtful explanations and specific references to the text itself o expresses opinion about the value or worth of the subject in order to help audience decide o explores strengths and weaknesses of work and includes passages from text as examples o justifies opinion o addresses what makes the text interesting, exciting, engaging, believable, unforgettable, and significant o does not retell plot but recognizes theme (general observation about life or human nature) of the text and the relevance of literary techniques (e.g., setting, characters, point of view, basic conflicts, plot development, and use of literary elements such as figurative language and sound). Tentative Timeline March 26-27: Planning March 27-28: Typing up first draft March 31 & April 1: Self and peer revision April 1: Final day in the computer lab. The final copy is due on Thursday, April 3 (negotiable) Before writing activities: 1. What is the theme of The Hunger Games? How do you know? Remember that theme is a statement speaking of the larger truth the novel is addressing. For example, the theme of “The Little Red Riding Hood” might be “innocence can lead to deception;” the theme of “The Three Little Pigs” might be “good planning can lead to success” (ideas taken from Grace Flemming’s “Finding a Theme of a Book”). 1|Page Challenges ELA A10 2. How do some of the literary techniques (setting, characters, point of view, basic conflicts, plot development, etc) tie into the theme of the novel? They need to be reinforcing your idea of what the theme is. They should be proving your point. 3. What is your opinion about the value or worth of The Hunger Games? Should it be taught? Is it a good read? Would you recommend it? Why? 4. What makes the book interesting, exciting, engaging, believable, unforgettable, and significant? 5. Develop a working thesis. Your thesis might change slightly (or even a lot) after you finish writing your review, but you need to develop a working thesis. This is stating what your essay is about and what you are going to talk about. It needs to include the author’s name and book title. An example might be: Suzanne Collins’ The Hunger Games is a valuable text that all students should read due to its theme on ________.” or Suzanne Collins’ The Hunger Games’ obsession with violence and petty teen romance are enough cause to label this read a ‘two thumbs down.’ 2|Page Challenges ELA A10 6. Develop an outline. Look at the sample outline provided by Ms. Thue and use it as a guide for creating your own outline. I. II. III. IV. V. Introduction a. Hype about The Hunger Games and why we should read it b. However, at the core of the book (what takes the stage) is silly romance c. Working thesis: Suzanne Collins’ The Hunger Games has the potential to be a must-read due to its important theme on power and inequality, but, unfortunately, it is watered-down through the petty teenage romance. It has the makings of perfection a. Theme: power and inequality i. Overall plot ii. Setting iii. Totalitarianism/ Fascism b. Creating awareness of larger global themes that teens are so often oblivious of However, it is watered down through petty teen romance a. Peeta and Katniss (and Gale) i. The whom-should-I-pick love triangle so reminiscent of Twilight (and we all know how educational of a read that was) ii. Information about how much of the book is spent on love musing iii. Katniss’ words b. What do teens remember/discuss about the book? i. Hearing teens discuss who Katniss will wind up with as opposed to why Panem is messed up Teenagers don’t need another romance novel a. Even though the book is compelling and has these important themes, what really takes the stage is the romance. b. There is not enough information/specifics given about the setting for teens to really capture the dystopian theme c. It takes a careful and deep reader to get past the drama of feelings to how can we compare this to our world? and What is totalitarianism? Conclusion 3|Page Challenges ELA A10 a. The book has the makings for a great literary read b. However, romance takes the stage a. If you want a book to read for fun, go for it, but if you’re looking for a compelling read on a dystopian world that forces you to think (as opposed to mildly suggesting it), grab Orwell’s 1984. The Hunger Games will never make it as a classic due to these childish themes. Your Outline: You can type it up (I would). Self-revision: Read through your essay out loud. This can help you to catch silly errors. Compare your essay to your outline. If your argument has drastically changed, consider writing up a new outline so you can see at a glance how you have structured your argument. This can help you see if it is organized. Have you included textual evidence from the novel? (You need to!) Double check that you have included the points given on the first page of this handout in your essay (e.g. that you addressed the theme; that you justified your opinion). Look through the persuasive techniques; which did you use? How are your transitions? Have you used words and phrases such as: “However,” “In addition,” “Therefore,” etc.? Do you transition both BETWEEN and WITHIN your paragraphs? Have you used proper MLA formatting? (Double spaced, name/class/teacher/date on the left, title, size 12 Times New Roman or Arial or Calibri font) Explain what you found when you did your self-revision: (Five or more things) You receive a mark out of 25 based on the effectiveness of you self-evaluation. 4|Page Challenges ELA A10 Peer revision: Have a peer fill out this section about your paper. Peer: _________________________ Person’s sheet you’re evaluating: _____________________________ PHYSICAL APPEARANCE: Has your peer used correct MLA formatting? If not, state what they need to change. TITLE: Is the title informative and specific? An example of a good, informative title might be: “Why Suzanne Collins’ The Hunger Games Leaves You Hungry for More,” or “The Read of the Century: A Review of Suzanne Collins’ The Hunger Games” CONTENT: Read through the essay and answer the following questions: 1. What is the main argument of this review? 2. Were you convinced of his/her opinion? 3. Did he/she use textual evidence from the book that was relevant and helped to prove a point? 5|Page Challenges ELA A10 4. In areas where citations are integrated, are there smooth transitions? Are the quotes introduced and explained? Are any simply left on their own? 5. Did he/she justify her/his opinions, or were you left with questions? 6. Does the essay avoid simple recall of the plot summary into the theme, setting, point of view, and/or otherwise? GRAMMAR/MECHANICS: Re-read and circle any grammatical or mechanical errors that you find. Look for sentence structure errors (comma splices, run-on sentences, fragments), and punctuation errors (semi-colons, colons, commas, quotation marks). If your peer repeats an errors a few times, state the error below and how to fix it: 6|Page Challenges ELA A10 OVERALL CRITIQUE: Give three positive remarks and one suggestion for improvement. Peer receives a mark out of 25 based on his/her peer evaluation. 7|Page Challenges ELA A10 8|Page Challenges ELA A10 Date: ______________________________ Name: _____________________________ Book Title: __________________________ Book Review Rubric Criteria & Qualities Poor Good Excellent Point Value Most of the required All of the required information Up to 10 points Introducing the text and Required information is not information is included or the is included and the setting the context of included or it is presented in a required information is information is in a succinct and the text choppy or rambling manner. presented like a list. fluent form. There is a basic flow from one The report flows from general Up to 30 points The review appears to have no section to the next, but not all ideas to specific conclusions. Body: direction, with subtopics the sections or paragraphs Transitions tie sections Flow of the composition appearing disjointed. follow in a natural or logical together, as well as adjacent order. paragraphs. There is no indication the Up to 30 points The author provides author has arrived at any firm The author makes succinct and concluding marks about the conclusions about the text, precise conclusions based on text, but they are not Critique or argument and any opinion is vague or the text. References to the supported by the text. Few confusing. Few quotations text or direct quotations are quotations or direct references from or direct references to included in the composition. included. the text are included. There is no recognizable voice There is a voice, although it is Up to 10 points in the text or the voice not consistently head There is a clear and suitable Voice changes form one section to throughout the piece. The voice that continues the next If there is a voice it is voice may not be at the throughout the piece. not at the appropriate register suitable register. There are several syntax Up to 20 points There are some sentence There are few syntax or diction errors. Word choice and Mechanics and Syntax errors and some errors in errors. It is a clean piece of diction are not always diction. writing. appropriate. Final Grade Score: ________ 9|Page