20112012 Center for Writing and Rhetoric A Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments Written by CWR Teachers University of Mississippi Center for Writing and Rhetoric 2011-2012 A Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments Table of Contents (Print Version) Page Number 1. WRIT 100/101/102 3 In-Class Activities Short Writing Exercises In-Class Essay Questions and Prompts Reflection Exercises 2. EDHE 105 14 Responses to Speakers and Events Discussion/Essay Questions Relating EdHe Themes to The Immortal Life Grading Guidelines Sample Rubric 3. Common Resources for all Teachers 18 Classroom Guest Speakers: a Roster William Winter Institute Internet Resources List of Events 4. Additional Resources 54 2 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments Chapter 1: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks in WRIT 100/101/102 In-Class Activities In-class Summary Activity (one week of class: MWF schedule) Pip Gordon Day 1: As a class, summarize Part I of The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks in approximately 250 words (the closer to 250 the better). This should be done collectively with the students providing the sentences and a scribe typing them. The teacher should only give minimal suggestions during the composition phase. The teacher’s comments can be more pointed during the revision phase. Composition: 25-30 minutes. Revision: 15-20 minutes. Goal: A clean, well-organized, complete, and coherent summary of Part I that is between 245-255 words long. Homework: Divide the class in half. Half the students should summarize Part II, half should summarize Part III. Students should bring (mostly) polished 250 word summaries to the next class period. Day 2: Divide the class into groups based on which part of The Immortal Life they summarized. The goal by the end of class is to have conglomerated all summaries of each part into two summaries that have the consensus vote of the class as the most thorough. By the end of class, these groups should have produced finished drafts of their assigned parts. (***in Writing 100, with 15 students in the class, you would have 7-8 students summarizing Part II and 7-8 students summarizing Part III. For day 2, I’d break students into groups of 3-4, have them compare summaries and create a consensus of what a good summary should include. This would mean each part has two groups working on it. After the groups of 3-4 have had time to build a consensus--but not necessarily write a new summary from scratch--I’d have those smaller groups team up to compare notes.These larger groups would then be responsible for writing and submitting ONE final 250 word summary of their assigned part. I’d devote roughly 35 minutes to this project, but it could end of taking all of class). Homework for the teacher: compile all three summaries in one master document (making no changes to student work, but rather just copying and pasting them together in the appropriate order into a word document. Day 3: As a class, revise the FULL summary of The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks. The class should have one summary of approximately 750 words (3 pages). This count should be cut by approximately 100 words in the revision process by omitting redundancies, cleaning up excess wordiness and phrasing, and crafting transition sentences that link the three separate parts into a more seamless whole. 3 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments Analysis Activity: Judging a Book by its Cover (and other things) Pip Gordon I’m presenting this as an in-class activity, but it could easily be turned into an analysis assignment with The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks as a class model for an analysis of book covers/movie posters. In class: Have students bring their copies of The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks to class. Discuss in class aspects of the visual presentation of the book: Outside: --the blurb on the back cover --the cover design (any pictures, the color of the book, font type for the title and author) --the design of the whole cover (front, back, and spine) --snippets from critical praise of the book included on the cover Inside: --Title page, arrangement of parts, type of paper (no joke!) --any visual elements --font style (if you feel up to it) --the “praise for” page Questions to consider: --what does the book cover suggests about the content of the book? --what kind of readership do you think the publishers are targeting? --to what extent does the visual presentation seem connected to the content of the book? (for homework, the students will not have the luxury of knowing the content, but this can still be a useful question). --if you had a choice, would you buy this book and read it? Why or why not? (answer here should be based on the cover alone). Homework: assign students a book that is readily available in a bookstore. The goal would be to select books that student probably have NOT read! (I’d go for a mix between popular contemporary stuff like Steig Larson or Jennifer Egan and classics that I know the campus Barnes and Noble has on its shelf, conveniently as “Barnes and Nobles” classics so with a standard presentation with minor variations for different works). The students will spend 10-15 minutes in the bookstore checking out their assigned book (amazon’s “Look Inside” feature might also come in handy). The student is not required to buy the book. After spending time analyzing it, the student will then compose a 300-400 word analysis of the book cover to turn in during the next class. 4 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments Short Writing Assignments Plagiarism/Intellectual Property Ashley Gutierrez Homework: Read the “Avoiding Plagiarism” section of A Writer’s Reference; selected chapters from Immortal Life (that deal with the Lacks family not getting any kind of recognition/repayment for Henrietta’s cells—there are several) Writing: o Explain what plagiarism is, based on your reading and your own experiences with it. How is academic plagiarism the same thing or similar to violating intellectual property rights? Why is it important that an author or researcher not plagiarize? o In your opinion, and using examples from Immortal Life to back up your argument, explain whether or not what Dr. George Gey and the other researchers did was “plagiarism.” Your assessment will need to be based both on your definition of plagiarism and defended with examples from both Immortal Life and The Writer’s Reference. The Writing Process Ashley Gutierrez Prep-work: Discussions and activities about the writing process, especially peer-review and research methods Homework: Read sections about the writing process from A Writer’s Reference; Read sections from Immortal Life that deal with Skloot’s process, especially the forward, endnotes, and chapters where Skloot appears as a central character Writing: o Explain, based on your own experience and A Writer’s Reference, what the writing process is. What are the “steps” and why are they important? Why is each step necessary—what does each step allow the writer to do or know about his/her work? o What was Rebecca Skloot’s writing process? Base your response/discussion on specific passages from the text. How did she go about research? How did she know what sources to include? What was her “peer review” process like? What struggles did she encounter across her many drafts? o Consider how Skloot’s “rhetorical situation” changed her writing process (audience, genre, stance, purpose, medium, etc.) The Argumentative Situation Ashley Gutierrez Prep Work: Discussions on how to evaluate arguments both in content and in structure, discussion of ethos, pathos, and logos Homework: Read section A-3 (Evaluating Arguments) in A Writer’s Reference, pick a chapter (or several chapters) from Immortal Life and outline it (them) Writing: In short paragraphs, determine how Skloot appeals to ethos, pathos, and logos in the chapter(s) you chose. Where do these appeals succeed? Fail? Using section A-3 as your guide, determine where Skloot falls prey to logical fallacies. Explain what she should have done to fix these fallacies. 5 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments Contextualizing The Immortal Life within a Horrifying Tradition (Research, Summary, and Analysis) Chip Dunkin At the heart of The Immortal Life is the problematic intersection of African- Americans and scientific/medical study. Skloot mentions the Tuskegee Experiments and the Mississippi Appendectomies—two particularly gruesome “research projects” in which African-Americans were lied to and forced to suffer in the name of white scientific progress. Do some online research on the “Tuskegee Experiments” and “Mississippi Appendectomy” and write a one-paragraph summary of each project. Then, think about the similarities and differences between these two brutal and dehumanizing projects and the case of Henrietta Lacks. Finally, write two paragraphs in which you compare and contrast the treatment of Lacks and her family with the treatment of these other African-American victims of the past. Use specific examples from your research and The Immortal Life to contextualize Lacks’s story within the historical context of racism and modern medicine. Thinking about the Boundaries of Biography (Freewriting + Class Discussion) Chip Dunkin Generally speaking, we hold historians, biographers, and commentators to a certain standard of objectivity. We like to think of these writers of nonfiction as disinterested, unbiased observers who push aside (or hide) their own feelings and emotions and produce chronicles of unvarnished truth. Skloot makes it very clear early in The Immortal Life, however, that she is by no means a disinterested observer/reporter, but rather an emotionally attached participant in the Lacks’ struggles. At one point, she even calls herself a “character in [Henrietta’s] story” (7). Freewrite for twenty minutes about your thoughts and feelings on Skloot as an author, and attempt to answer the following questions: Is it appropriate to call Rebecca Skloot a “biographer,” or does her intense involvement in the Lacks family’s fight for recognition and redemption make her something else? Can we call Skloot an “objective” chronicler of events? Does it matter? 6 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments In-Class Essay Questions and Prompts Guy Krueger 1. How would you describe Skloot’s portrayal of the Lacks family (e.g., positive, negative, objective, etc.)? Why? Point to examples from the text to support your perspective. What role does her portrayal play in how we read the text? 2. Is it acceptable to break rules or even laws in the name of medical research that may cure diseases such as cancer? Why or why not? Use the text to support your response. 3. On page 54, Skloot writes about one of her early calls to the Lacks family, “Years later I'd understand how a young boy could know why I was calling just from the sound of my voice: the only time white people called Day was when they wanted something having to do with HeLa cells. But at the time I was confused – I figured I must have heard wrong.” Write a response in which you analyze what Skloot means. Also include your thoughts on why she says she understood years later. Use the text to support your response. 4. How have Henrietta Lacks, her immortal cells, and her family’s tribulations effected change in research on human subjects, both directly and indirectly? Use the text to support your response. 5. What role does education play in The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks? How might the Henrietta’s story be different if the Lacks family had been more educated and knowledgeable about cells and medical research? Use the text to support your response. 6. On page 271, Paul Lurz, the director of performance and improvement at Crownsville Hospital Center says, "Sometimes learning can be just as painful as not knowing." What is Lurz telling Deborah when he says this? In your opinion, would Deborah be better off not knowing some of her family’s past? Why or why not? Use the text to support your response. Sheena Boran 1. In response to Van Valen’s argument that HeLa cells should no longer be classed as human, Robert Stevenson states: “Scientists don’t like to think of HeLa cells as being little bits of Henrietta because it’s much easier to do science when you disassociate your materials from the people they come from” (216). However, Skloot’s goal in this book seems to be to attach human faces to a scientific issue, and her book chronicles the competing forces attempting to humanize and dehumanize the HeLa cells. Should we attempt to connect human stories to scientific research, or would this interfere with objectivity? 2. You almost certainly know someone who has benefited directly from research conducted using HeLa cells. If you learned that tissue removed from your body during a routine procedure at some point in the past had gone on to significantly benefit science and research, would you feel that you should somehow be retroactively compensated? Which do you think is more important – 7 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments your right to control your own tissue, or contributing to science and research for the greater good of humanity? 3. Skloot weaves together four separate narratives in this book – a biography of Henrietta Lacks, the scientific biography of the HeLa cells, the history of the Lacks family, and the story of her own research. How does each narrative contribute to the effect of the entire book? How would the overall effect of the book have been different if Skloot had left out the history of the Lacks family? the story of her own research? 4. Can there be justice for the Lacks family? Should they be compensated? Is it possible to relate the Lacks case to that of John Moore or Ted Slavin, or is this situation unique? Keith Boran 1. Although there is some dispute over who coined the name Helen Lane as the source of the HeLa cells, many believe it originated from an interview Dr. George Gey gave to Collier’s magazine in 1954. If this is true, why would Gey use a false name? Be sure to cite specific examples from the text to support your answer (pp. 105-109). 2. Rebecca Skloot withstood some major setbacks in her research. Give two specific occurrences when Skloot overcame adversity to finish her work to tell the story. What do the two occurrences have in common? What can we learn about the writing process from Skloot’s experience? 3. What were the true intentions of Dr. Sir Lord Keenan Kester Cofield’s attempt to breach the Lacks family’s privacy? Why was he so willing to help the family for free? Be sure to be specific in your answer and explanation by including information from the book (pp. 225-231). Mallory Blasingame 1. In “A Few Words About This Book,” Skloot writes of her efforts to “capture the language with which each person spoke and wrote,” claiming that this decision was spurred by one of Henrietta’s relatives, who told her, “If you pretty up how people spoke and change the things they said, that’s dishonest. It’s taking away their lives, their experiences, and their selves.” Describe and analyze Skloot’s use of the “original language” of her subjects. What effect do these decisions have on your reading of the text? Do you find that the end result feels “honest”? Why or why not? Support your claims with specific textual evidence. 2. The Lacks children differ in their responses to the revelation that their mother’s cells have been used for others’ scientific and financial benefit. Describe at least two of the siblings’ reactions. With whom do you most agree or empathize? How does Skloot’s characterization of the sibling contribute to this impression? Using specific textual evidence, explain the reasoning behind your claim. 8 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments 3. Should Henrietta or her family (and, by extension, others like her) have been compensated for the use of her cells? Why or why not? Use specific textual evidence to provide context and support for your argument. 4. After having read the book, do you agree with Skloot’s claim that, unlike others who have written about Lacks, she is not exploiting her or her family? Why or why not? Use specific textual evidence to support your argument. 5. Choose one of the following passages and provide a three to four page response that 1. contextualizes the passage within the rest of the book (What is happening here? When in the text does this occur?); 2. analyzes the passage’s use of rhetorical strategies (How does the way the information is presented contribute to the reader’s understanding of/reaction to it?); 3. argues for a particular interpretation of the passage (Why is this passage significant? How does it contribute to Skloot’s overall message? Your answers to the previous questions will help shape this argument). You should use specific evidence in the form of direct quotations, paraphrases, and summary to support your evidence. You may draw support from other areas of the book, as well. You will have 50 minutes (or 75 minutes) to plan, compose, and edit your response. a. “Christoph taught Deborah and Zakariyya how to use the microscope, saying, ‘Look through like this...take your glasses off...now turn this knob to focus.’ Finally the cells popped into view for Deborah. And through that microscope, for that moment, all she could see was an ocean of her mother’s cells, stained an ethereal fluorescent green. They’re beautiful,’ she whispered, then went back to staring at the slide in silence. Eventually, without looking away from the cells, she said, ‘God, I never thought I’d see my mother under a microscope--I never dreamed this day would come.’ ‘Yeah, Hopkins pretty much screwed up, I think,’ Christoph said. Deborah bolted upright and looked at him, stunned to hear a scientist--one at Hopkins, no less--saying such a thing. Then she looked back into the microscope and said, ‘John Hopkin is a school for learning, and that’s important. But this is my mother. Nobody seem to get that.’ ‘It’s true,’ Christoph said. ‘Whenever we read books about science, it’s always HeLa this and HeLa that. Some people know those are the initials of a person, but they don’t know who that person is. That’s important history.’ Deborah looked like she wanted to hug him. ‘This is amazing,’ she said, shaking her head and looking at him like he was a mirage. Suddenly Zakariyya started yelling something about George Gey. Deborah thumped her cane on his toe and he stopped in midsentence. ‘Zakariyya has a lot of anger with all this that’s been going on,’ she told Christoph. ‘I been trying to keep him calm. Sometime he explode, but he’s trying.’ ‘I don’t blame him for being angry,’ Christoph said” (266). b. “Lurz opened to Elsie’s page, then quickly closed his eyes and pressed the book to his chest before we could see anything. ‘I’ve never seen a picture in one of these reports,’ he whispered. He lowered the book so we could all see, and suddenly time seemed to stop. The three of us stood, our heads nearly touching over the page, as Deborah cried, ‘Oh my baby! She look just like my daughter! … She look just like Davon! … She look just like my father! … She got that smooth olive Lacks skin.’ 9 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments Lurz and I just stared, speechless. In the photo, Elsie stands in front of a wall painted with numbers for measuring height. Her hair, which Henrietta once spent hours combing and braiding, is frizzy, with thick mats that stop just below the fivefoot mark behind her. Her once-beautiful eyes bulge from her head, slightly bruised and almost swollen shut. She stares somewhere just below the camera, crying, her face misshapen and barely recognizable , her nostrils inflamed and ringed with mucus; her lips--swollen to nearly twice their normal size--are surrounded by a deep, dark ring of chapped skin; her tongue is thick and protrudes from her mouth. She appears to be screaming. Her head is twisted unnaturally to the left, chin raised and held in place by a large pair of white hands. ‘She doesn’t want her head like that,’ Deborah whispered. ‘Why are they holding her head like that?’ No one spoke. We all just stood there, staring at those big white hands wrapped around Elsie’s neck. They were well manicured and feminine, pinky slightly raised--hands you’d see in a commercial for nail polish, not wrapped around the throat of a crying child. Deborah laid her old picture of Elsie as a young girl next to the new photo. ‘Oh, she was beautiful,’ Lurz whispered” (272-273). c. “I stared through my hotel window at a tall, Gothic-looking brick tower across the street with a huge clock at the top. It was a weatherbeaten silver, with big letters spelling B-R-O-M-O-S-E-L-T-Z-E-R in a circle around its face. I watched the hands move slowly past the letters, paged Sonny every few minutes, and waited for the phone to ring. Eventually I grabbed the fat Baltimore phone book, opened to the Ls, and ran my finger down a long line of names: Annette Lacks … Charles Lacks … I figured I’d call every Lacks in the book asking if they knew Henrietta. But I didn’t have a cell phone and didn’t want to tie up the line, so I paged Sonny again, then lay back on the bed, phone and White Pages still in my lap. I started rereading a yellowed copy of a 1976 Rolling Stone article about the Lackses by a writer named Michael Rogers--the first reporter ever to contact Henrietta’s family. I’d read it many times, but wanted every word fresh in my mind. Halfway through the article, Rogers wrote, ‘I am sitting on the seventh floor of the downtown Baltimore Holiday Inn. Through the thermoplane picture window is a huge public clock in which the numerals have been replaced by the characters B-R-O-M-O-S-E-L-T-Z-E-R; in my lap is a telephone, and the Baltimore White Pages.’ I bolted upright, suddenly feeling like I’d been sucked into a Twilight Zone episode. More than two decades earlier--when I was just three years old--Rogers had gone through those same White Pages. ‘Halfway through the “Lacks” listings it becomes clear that just about everybody had known Henrietta,’ he wrote. So I opened the phone book again and started dialing, hoping I’d find one of those people who knew her. But they didn’t answer their phones, they hung up on me, or they said they’d never heard of Henrietta” (66-67). c. “‘Henrietta used to come talk to her mother, took real good care of her grave. Now Henrietta somewhere in here with her,’ Cliff said, waving his arms toward the clearing between Eliza’s stone and the next tree a good fifteen feet away. ‘Never did get a marker, so I couldn’t tell you exactly where she at, but the immediate family be buried next to each other. So she probably round in here somewhere.’ He pointed to three body-sized indentations in the clearing and said, ‘Any one of those could be Henrietta.’ We stood in silence as Cliff kicked at the dirt with his toe. ‘I don’t know what happened on that deal with them cells from Henrietta,’ he said eventually. ‘Don’t nobody say anything about it round here. I just knowed she had something rare, cause she been dead a pretty good while, but her cells still living, and that’s amazing.’ He kicked at the ground. ‘I heard they did a lot of research and some of her cells have develop a lot of curing other diseases. It’s a miracle, that’s all I can say.’ 10 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments Then suddenly he yelled at the ground, as if he was talking directly to Henrietta. ‘They named them HeLa! And they still living!’ He kicked at the dirt again. A few minutes later, seemingly out of nowhere, he pointed to the dirt and said, ‘You know, white folks and black folks all buried over top of each other in here. I guess old white granddaddy and his brothers was buried in here too. Really no tellin who in this ground now.’ Only one thing he knew for sure, he said, was that there was something beautiful about the idea of slave-owning white Lackses being buried under their black kin. ‘They spending eternity in the same place,’ he told me, laughing. ‘They must’ve worked out their problems by now!’” (121-122). “‘HeLa?’ I asked Gary. ‘You’re saying HeLa is her spiritual body?’ Gary smiled and nodded. In that moment, reading those passages, I understood completely how some of the Lackses could believe, without doubt, that Henrietta had been chosen by the Lord to become an immortal being. If you believe the Bible is literal truth, the immortality of Henrietta’s cells makes perfect sense. Of course they were growing and surviving decades after her death, of course they floated through the air, and of course they’d led to cures for diseases and been launched into space. Angels are like that. The Bible tells us so. For Deborah and her family--and surely many others in the world--the answer was so much more concrete than the answer offered by science: that the immortality of Henrietta’s cells had something to do with her telomeres and how HPV interacted with her DNA. The idea that God chose Henrietta as an angel who would be reborn as immortal cells made a lot more sense to them than the explanation Deborah had read years earlier in Victor McKusick’s genetics book, with its clinical talk of HeLa’s ‘atypical histology’ and ‘unusually malignant behavior.’ It used phrases like ‘the tumor’s singularity’ and called the cells ‘a reservoir of morphologic, biochemical, and other information.’ Jesus told his followers, ‘I give them eternal life, and they shall never die.’ Plain, simple, to the point. ‘You better be careful,’ Gary told me. ‘Pretty soon you’re gonna find yourself converted.’ ‘I doubt it,’ I told him, and we both laughed. He slid the Bible from my hands and flipped to another passage, then handed it back, pointing at one sentence: ‘Why do you who are here find it impossible to believe that God raises the dead?’ ‘You catch my drift?’ he said, smiling a mischievous grin. I nodded, and Gary closed the Bible in my hands” (296). d. 11 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments Reflection Exercises Karen Forgette Language Choices Reading: “A Few Words About This Book,” on pp. xiii-xiv, and one chapter in which dialect is prominent. Writing: Paragraph 1: Describe the chapter you chose and comment on Skloot’s decision regarding dialect. Do you agree or disagree with her choice to maintain the dialect? Use examples from the chapter you have chosen to support your reasoning. You might describe how the use of native dialect affects the portrayal of the speakers in the chapter and the reader of the chapter. You might consider how the dialect helps to illuminate the time period and setting or how the dialect affects the way the reader perceives the person who is speaking. Does the dialect make it harder or easier for the reader to understand? Use specific details from the chapters to support your conclusion. Paragraph 2: Describe one of your editorial choices for language in the project you are currently working on. You might discuss your decision to quote directly from a source, some jargon or some elevated vocabulary you chose to include, some phrases or sentence structure you repeated, or any other decisions you made regarding the language of your project. Explain why you made the decisions you did and what you hoped the reader would gain from your choice. Use specific examples to support your claim. Organization Reading: Chapters 18, 19, and 20 (Note particularly how the chapters shift from the HeLa cell story to the family story of the Lacks and then back to the HeLa cell story.) Writing: Paragraph 1: Describe your thoughts about the shifting storylines. Why do you think Skloot chose to intersperse the chapters in this way? How did you react to the shifting storylines as a reader? Did the shift confuse you or keep you intrigued? How did the shifting affect the pacing of the book? Was Skloot’s technique effective? Use specific details from the chapters to support your conclusion. Paragraph 2: Describe one of your editorial choices for organizing your current project. You might discuss why you chose a specific pattern of organization (for example, chronological, point by point, argument and rebuttal, etc.), why you chose to put a specific paragraph in a specific place, how you balanced anecdote with other types of evidence, or any other decision you made regarding the organization of your project. Explain why you made the decisions you did and what you hoped the reader would gain from your choice. Use specific examples to support your ideas. Audience Awareness Reading: The first full paragraph on page 3 which starts, “Under the microscope, a cell looks a lot like a fried egg,” and five other passages from the book in which Skloot displays her ability to translate science for a general audience. Writing: Paragraph 1: Quote the passages you found, and explain the techniques she uses to bring the science to life. Paragraph 2: Describe how you tried to craft your current project for a specific audience. Describe your intended audience. Then choose three or four passages from your project and explain how you composed those passages to meet the expectations of your audience. Use specific examples from your project to explain your strategy. 12 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments Topic Selection Reading: Booklist interview with Skloot (booklistonline.com/ProductInfo.aspx?pid=3886330), paying particular attention to her discussion of her father’s illness. Writing: Paragraph 1: Explain how her father’s illness may have affected Skloot’s decision to investigate Henrietta’s story. Are there examples in the book that suggest Skloot’s interest in the story has a basis in Skloot’s own life? Paragraph 2: Talk about your own choice of topic for the current project you are working on. Why did you choose the topic? Did you have a personal relationship to the topic? Where was your interest sparked? Point of View Reading: Chapters 35 and 36 (“Soul Cleansing” and “Heavenly Bodies”), paying particular attention to Skloot’s observations of and reactions to the spiritual ritual Deborah undertakes with Gary. Writing: Paragraph 1: Describe how the presence of the author in those chapters affects the story for you as a reader. Does Skloot’s presence add to your understanding or detract from it? How? Why? Explain your reaction citing specific examples from the chapters. Paragraph 2: Describe the point of view in your current project. Did you include a first person anecdote or presence anywhere in your project? Why, or why not? What point of view is predominant in your project? Why did you choose that point of view? How does the point of view you chose for the project affect the reader? Discourse Surrounding The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lack Reading: Visit Skloot’s website at http://rebeccaskloot.com/. View the trailer for the book in which she describes dinner party conversations about HeLa cells. Then browse through her twitter feed and note the ways she tries to keep interest in the topic growing. Writing: Paragraph 1: Describe your reaction to the trailer and the Twitter postings. What techniques does Skloot use to generate and maintain interest? How effective are those techniques? Paragraph 2: Describe the conversations surrounding your current project. Whom have you talked with about the project? What did you gain from those conversations? How have you tried to generate interest in your topic both in the project and in the conversations surrounding the project? How does talking with other people about your project affect your writing? 13 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments 2. Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks in EDHE 105 For each of these assignments, write a thoughtful response of at least 250 words which fully addresses all parts of the prompt. Avoid very short or exceedingly long paragraphs, clichés, and generalizations. Please revise and edit your work before submitting your final draft. Responses to Speakers/Events 1. Before and After Response: For this essay, you will attend a campus event. Before attending the event, write a paragraph about your expectations for the event. What do you think it will be like? Who do you think will be there? What topics do you think will be covered? How do you think you will react to the event? After attending the event, write the second part of the paper describing the event and reflecting on how your expectations were or were not met. Give specific details from the event to support your observations. 2. Finding the Significance: Attend a campus lecture. During the lecture, write down three to five quotes which seem particularly meaningful to you. After the lecture, study those quotes and choose the one that seems the most significant. Write a paper describing how the quote functioned in the context of the lecture. Then describe why you found the quote so meaningful. You might describe a connection to your own experience. You might consider why the quote is significant to your community or the world at large. You might describe an alternative or negative interpretation of the quote. 3. Companion Interview: Attend a campus event with a classmate or friend. After the event, interview your companion about his or her interpretation of and reaction to the event. Some questions you might consider asking include: How would you summarize or describe the event? What was the most meaningful or interesting part of the event? What was the least meaningful or interesting part? Would you attend a similar event in the future or recommend it to your friends? Why, or why not? Were you surprised by the audience’s reaction to the event? Then, write a paper in which you first summarize the interview, using quotes and/or paraphrasing, and then describe how your reaction relates to your companion’s reaction. What was similar in your reactions? What was dissimilar? How would you account for the differences/similarities in your interpretations? 4. Relating an Event Specifically to the Common Reading Text: Attend a campus event or lecture related to The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks. As you attend the event or listen to the lecture, think about the major themes of the book. Which theme seems most related to this event or lecture? After the event, find a passage from the book relating to that theme. Then, write a paper in which you describe the passage, explain where it appears in the book, and identify its relationship to the theme. Then, in the second part of the paper, explain how the event or lecture 14 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments relates to that passage and theme. Incorporate specific details from the lecture or event to support the connection you draw. Discussion/Essay Questions Relating the Themes of EdHe to The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks Theme of Learning: 1. In one sense, The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks is about Rebecca Skloot’s education. The book opens with Skloot sitting in a community college biology class. Trace Skloot’s journey throughout the book, examining at least five instances in which she seems to progress (or regress) in her learning about HeLa cells. How is she challenged intellectually? How does she react emotionally? Compare Skloot’s learning process with one of your own learning experiences. When did you struggle to learn something new? What intellectual strategies did you employ? Describe an experience from your own life in which you refused to give up on learning a difficult concept. Why? 2. The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks also chronicles Deborah Lacks’ education about her mother. Trace Deborah Lacks’ journey throughout the book, examining at least five instances in which she seems to progress (or regress) in her education about HeLa cells. How is she challenged intellectually? How does she react emotionally? Compare Deborah Lacks’ learning process with one of your own learning experiences. When did you struggle to learn something new? What intellectual strategies did you employ? Describe an experience from your own life in which you refused to give up on learning a difficult concept. Why? Theme of Careers: 1. The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks touches on the impact of so many workers, from the lab assistant to the Nobel Prize-winning physician to the local store owner who teaches math to the neighborhood children. Select three of the individuals from the book whose careers/jobs intrigued you. Describe their role in the book and their attitudes toward their own careers. Then describe your own career ambitions and how they are similar to or different from the careers of these individuals. Theme of Crossing Cultural Boundaries: 1. Skloot’s research for the book required her to cross cultural boundaries, such as race, class, religion, and gender. The Lacks family’s own search for information about Henrietta was affected by similar cultural boundaries. Describe three instances in the book where cultural boundaries kept individuals from discovering new information. Then describe an experience from your first year at Ole Miss that required you to cross an uncomfortable boundary. What similarities in all of these experiences do you see? What differences? 15 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments Grading Guidelines An A paper responds to all questions/prompts, demonstrates a clear purpose and recognition of audience, contains specific details and examples, demonstrates critical thought and recognition of a larger context, demonstrates depth, and is free of distracting errors. A B paper responds to all or nearly all questions/prompts, demonstrates a clear purpose and recognition of audience, contains some specific details and examples, demonstrates some critical thought and recognition of a larger context, demonstrates some depth, and is relatively free of distracting errors. A C paper responds, for the most part, to the questions/prompts; has a unifying idea but may stray off topic; demonstrates some recognition of audience; uses details and examples, but lacks specificity; attempts to use critical thought and/or recognize a larger context but may be superficial; and contains some distracting errors. A D paper fails to respond to the questions/prompts; lacks focus, details, and examples; relies too heavily on summary; and contains numerous, distracting errors. An F paper fails to meet the minimum requirements of the assignment. 16 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments Sample Rubric for EdHe Henrietta Lacks Assignments ____Competent/Credible/Complete If the writing is scored partially effective or higher in categories 1-3, the writing is competent and you will earn a grade of “C.” (70-79) 1. Purpose Does the writing contain a unifying and controlling purpose, a central idea, which is maintained throughout the paper according to the requirements of the assignment? Does the writing address all aspects/questions contained in the assignment prompt? Ineffective Partially Effective Effective Exceptional 2. Conventions and Mechanics Does the writing follow the conventions of standard English grammar, punctuation, and usage? Ineffective Partially Effective Effective Exceptional 3. Research Does the writing introduce and integrate source material (as appropriate to the assignment) through quotation, paraphrase, and summary to enhance credibility? Does the writing follow standard (MLA, APA, etc.) documentation guidelines? Ineffective Partially Effective Effective Exceptional ____Skillful/Persuasive If the writing scores an average of “effective” on the CCC category above, and, in addition, scores partially effective in categories 4-6 below, then the writing is skillful and you will earn a grade of “B.” (80-89) 4. Evidence/Development Does the writing develop appropriate, logical, and relevant supporting detail and/or evidence, including specific, concrete detail/evidence to support the central idea? Ineffective Partially effective Effective Exceptional 5. Exploration Does the writing introduce and explore a broader significance and/or larger context for the topic/issue? Ineffective Partially effective Effective Exceptional 6. Audience Does the writing exhibit language and tone appropriate to the intended audience? Ineffective Partially effective Effective Exceptional ____Distinctive If the writing meets all of the Competency and Skillful/Persuasive effectiveness standards and, in addition, demonstrates a mastery of one or more features of superior writing (complexity, originality, seamless coherence, extraordinary control, sophistication in thought, recognizable voice, compelling purpose, imagination, insight, thoroughness, and/or depth) the writing is distinctive and you will earn a grade of “A.” (90-100) _____Ineffective If the writing demonstrates minimal attention to the assignment prompt and format but does not meet competency standards, you will earn a grade of “D.” (60-69) If the writing fails to demonstrate attention to the assignment prompt and format and fails to meet competency standards, you will earn a grade of “F.” 17 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments 3. Common Resources for All Teachers Lorem ipsum 4. Additional Resources The CWR Teaching Center, located in Room 107 of Somerville Hall, supports your teaching efforts and is a resource we hope you will use often. Staffed by the CWR Instructional Designer and the CWR Core Instructors, it serves a space for you to air your classroom challenges, explore your teaching ideas, and celebrate your classroom successes. In addition to coordinating workshops, the Teaching Center will also support you with technology issues in using e-portfolios and teaching multimodal assignments. You can also schedule the instructional designer to come to your class as you try new assignments. The CWR Teaching Center is located just inside the front entrance of Somerville Hall. The Instructional Designer may be contacted by calling 662-915-8819 or by emailing cwr@olemiss.edu. The CWR library has copies of Multimodal Compositions: Resources for Teachers,” an edited collection (Gail E. Hawisher and Cynthia Selfe, Editors) available for loan. See Glenn Schove, administrative coordinator, if you want to borrow it. Another helpful article in the same book is by Cynthia Selfe, Stephanie Owen Fleischer, and Susan Wright’s “Words, Audio, and Video: Composing and the Processes of Production.” New Dimensions in Computers and Composition series. Cresskill, NJ, Hampton Press, 2007. Print. The instructional faculty of the JD Williams library has designed an online resource guide for WRIT 101 classes. The site, WRIT 101 Library Resource Guide, can be accessed at through the library’s home page . There are many resources listed on this page that benefit and support the teaching of WRIT 101 classes. We encourage you to check it out. A note to teachers: This page, Additional Resources, is a place for us to share resources that have helped us in our teaching. If you would like to share a resource, please send a digital copy of your file or the link to web addresses to Alice Myatt, Associate Director, at amyatt1@olemiss.edu. 19 CWR 2011-2012 Resource Guide: Integrating The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks into Writing Assignments