English 110: Critical Reading & Writing Syllabus Spring 2012 Sarah Llewellyn Middletown High School, rm. 1076 Period 2 A Days Office Hours: Mon. 2:30-3:30 AHS (and Wed. by appointment); Wed. 2:30-3:30 MHS Introduction to E110: The first year writing course’s objective is to establish a critical reading, writing, and thinking foundation for all incoming university students. Your time in this classroom will groom you for other university classes as well, presenting you with a variety of ways to read and write. You will also learn more about how you read and write, rather than how to alter yourself to meet your teacher’s expectations. As an introductory course, you will better understand your reading and writing strengths, and how to use them to your advantage, and your weaknesses, and how to overcome them. We will hone your critical reading skills by decoding a variety of genres, including narrative, informative, and argumentative, as well as learning to recognize each piece’s purpose and audience. Reading a variety of styles will improve your skills in the diverse classes you will each find yourselves in at the university level. Identifying a writer’s purpose and audience will not only build your understanding of the piece, but will also enhance your own writing. We will sharpen your critical writing skills by first examining various writing styles, but then by learning to create those styles yourself. We will learn the conventions of writing, but within the context of your writing because each of you will present a unique set of grammatical and writing concerns. Last, we will appreciate writing as a process where you will continue to revise your work and strengthen your writing craft. And last, we will polish your critical thinking skills by participating in class discussions about academic writings related to the study of English and other disciplines. You will be responsible for preparing for and conducting the discussions. Required Texts & Supplies: The Allyn & Bacon Guide to Writing. Concise 5th ed. John D. Rampage, John C. Bean, June Johnson. New York: Pearson, Longman, 2008. Print. Faigley, Lester. The Little Penguin Handbook. Boston: Pearson, 2012. Print. The Arak Anthology. 15th ed. Newark, DE: University of Delaware, 2008-2009. Print. Flash drive and spiral bound notebook and Grading: In compliance with the Appoquinimink School District Grade and Grade Reporting Policies, grades for this course will be calculated as 70% Product & 30% Process. A = 90 - 100% B = 80 - 89% C = 70 - 79% D = 60 - 69% Grade sheets will be available upon request: It may take up to 48 hours for me to meet your request. Disclaimer: Grade sheet will reflect latest grade reported on home access, not a current up to the minute grade. Llewellyn E110 Syllabus 2011-2012 1 Late Policy: Process assignments may NOT be handed in late. Product assessments must be turned in on the due date. A product assignment is only accepted a maximum of one day late. You will receive ½ credit for handing in product assignments late. Product v. Process: Grade will be determined as follows: Product: o Essays (includes outlines and first drafts of Personal Narrative, Summary/Response Essay, Annotated Bibliography, & Informative Essay) o Research paper assignments (checkpoints including reference cards, note cards, outlines, and drafts) Process: o Classwork & Homework (includes participation, brief writing assignments, journal entries, grammar instruction, participation, etc.) o Essays (includes final drafts of Personal Narrative, Summary/Response Essay, Annotated Bibliography, & Informative Essay) o Research paper and presentation Each essay grade will include involvement in the peer and teacher conferencing seminars. If you choose to revise an essay, your new grade will be averaged with your original grade if the paper was deemed revised. Revision: We will examine the revision process in the first few class meetings of the year in order to dissect the distinction between revising (looking at content), editing (looking at organization, thesis, sentence structure), and proofreading (grammar and word choice). We will then apply the steps – revising, editing, and proofreading – together to the first essay as practice; later you will complete the process on your own as your comfort level with revision grows. Each essay will include a peer revision, and later a teacher conference if you request to improve your grade; each peer revision will occur the day we discuss our writings in class and each improved draft you turn in will be due a week after the essay is returned to you. When you choose to revise, please keep the following in mind: 1. You will need to turn both the rough draft and the revised draft in; 2. Correcting surface errors will not count as a revision of the paper (need to review content, structure, etc. also); 3. Revision does not ensure that you will receive a higher grade. If you choose to engage in the revision process of any essay, you must first meet with your teacher for a conference about the piece. Conferences: This semester we will have conferences about the brief writing assignments as well as conferences about the major essays. Each writing assignment will include a peer conference, where each student is required to participate for a grade. Each writing assignment may entail unique revisions and commentary, and your role as assessor may shift with each assignment. Oftentimes, you will find that some of the errors will mirror previous errors, which will help you see the patterns you need to work on more closely throughout the semester. For the major essays, you are not required to have a formal teacher conference; rather, you have the option to meet with the teacher once you receive your returned essay. For the research paper, the teacher conferences are mandatory; you will meet with the teacher several times throughout the process. For each conference you are required to bring in a draft of your assignment. Llewellyn E110 Syllabus 2011-2012 2 Classroom Behavior: As this is a college course offered at the high school level, you will be given an extraordinary opportunity to share your opinions with other like-minded students who take pleasure in writing and want to engage in a higher level writing course in preparation for college level writing and research. Your participation in this course is valued, so you need to be well-prepared for our class discussions and writing workshops. Furthermore, your conduct in class should be respectable to both your classmates and your teacher; any inappropriate actions or dialogue may result in losing your participation points for that day. Last, if at any point you feel disrespected, please see me before or after class to discuss how to handle the situation. Major Assignments Personal Narrative: The personal essay will act as an introductory tool with many purposes; you will introduce yourself as a person and as a writer. It is key to establish a strong foundation between yourself and your peer since you will work together frequently throughout the semester. Your peer will act as another set of eyes for a very personal act, writing, and in order for you to trust each other you will need a piece to launch that conversation. Your teacher will use the personal narrative to diagnose your strengths and weaknesses and use them to mold the lessons. Last, this piece will act as your first piece of revision; you will first work independently to revise the piece, then with your peer and teacher. Summary/Strong Response Essay: As a college student, you will analyze a variety of writing styles. Your professors will challenge you to go beyond your reading and writing comfort levels, and you will need to have the necessary tools to understand these complex pieces. Completing a summary and response essay will allow you to “interact strongly with challenging texts” (86) so in order to do so we will explore the use of summarizing a variety of texts as well as responding to said texts. In a summary, you will evaluate the important points of a text and extract the main points of the essay; both components of writing you will also need to know how to produce. In a response, you will rehearse evaluating a source for its accuracy and use of rhetoric, as well as learn how to develop your own argument based on the reading. Annotated Bibliography: Learning to explore a question further will help you consider other perspectives, which can then build new ideas associated with your topic. An annotated bibliography “summarizes and briefly critiques the research sources a writer used while exploring a problem” (128), usually beginning with a Critical Preface, a first-person narrative detailing your thought process through your investigation. In order to meet the Critical Preface’s requirements, you need to include a summary of your topic’s main points, how you developed your research questions, how you found your sources, and a short appraisal of the sources. Then you will draw from the Critical Preface’s introduction to your research sources in order to build the Annotated Bibliography, which includes a summary and evaluation of your sources. This assignment will help you retrace your steps, which improves both your reader’s and your understandings of the final product. Informative Essay: Like the Summary/Response Essay and Annotated Bibliography, the Informative Essay can act as a preparatory tool for your research paper. Learning how to develop an informative article or Llewellyn E110 Syllabus 2011-2012 3 essay is essential because this is how you will develop your basic argument and background of any writing. Before your audience can understand your argument, there are certain elements of your topic they will need to comprehend first; for instance, you might need to introduce particular jargon or history in order to delve deeper into the argument. How you build this background will determine how logical your argument is to your audience. Research Paper: You will develop a problem-solution research paper over the course of the last few weeks of our semester together. You will choose your own topic, develop an argument based research paper, and build the steps of the research process both in and out of the classroom. Throughout the process we will have class discussions on your progress as well as peer/teacher conferences on the various stages of the process. The steps you take to the final draft will count as process assignments and the final draft will count as your product grade. Reading/Writing Schedule: Date January Week 1 Classwork Introductions Thinking Rhetorically about Good Writing Jan/Feb Week 2 February Week 3 Text Assigned Arak Assignments Due Major Essay: Personal Narrative A& B Ch. 1 pgs. 4-23 For Writing and Discussion: Thinking about Purpose, Audience, and Genre Thinking Rhetorically about Good Writing A& B Ch. 1 Brief Writing Projects: 1 & 2 Thinking Rhetorically about Style and Document Design A& B Ch. 4 pgs. 66-68 For Writing and Discussion: Analyzing Differences in Style Thinking Rhetorically about Your Subject Matter A& B Ch. 2 pgs. 24-49, “Believing and Doubting Paul Theroux’s Negative View of Sports” pgs. 32-33 A& B Ch. 5 pgs. 86-122 For Writing and Discussion: Developing Thesis Statements Out of Questions A & B Ch. 5 “30 Little Turtles” and “Questioning Thomas L. Friedman’s Major Essay: A Summary A Summary/Strong Response Essay February Week 4 Recognizing Functions of a Text and Formulating a Response February Week 5 Recognizing Functions of a Text and Formulating a Response Llewellyn E110 Syllabus 2011-2012 Brief Writing Project: Playing the Believing and Doubting Game For Writing and Discussion: Determining What Is a Good Summary Examining Thesis Statements for Strong Response Critiques 4 Optimism in ’30 Little Turtles’” pgs. 123-127 Feb/March Writing as a ProblemSolving Process – apply Week 6 drafting and revising stages to summary/response essay March Week 7 March Week 8 March Week 9 For Writing and Discussion: Analyzing Your Own Writing Process Practicing a Peer Review (Revise Summary-Response) Composing and Revising Closed-Form Prose – develop best practices for addressing each of the writing steps and later apply each of the steps to your research paper Summarizing and Critiquing Your Sources – during this chapter we will connect the Annotated Bibliography & Research Paper A & B Ch. 12 pgs. 288-323, pgs. 329-331 For Writing and Discussion: Developing a Thesis/Support Structure A & B Ch. 6 pgs. 128, 139-143 For Writing and Discussion: Keeping a Problem Open Summarizing and Critiquing Your Sources A & B Ch. 6 Major Essay: An Annotated “What Is the Bibliography Effect of Online Social Networks on Communication Skills?” pgs. 149151 Evaluating Sources, Blending Summaries/Paraphrases/ Quotes, & Avoiding Plagiarism March Week 10 A & B Ch. 11 pgs. 275-287 Citing & Documenting Sources Writing a Classical Argument –develop a problem-solution thesis and argument for your research paper Llewellyn E110 Syllabus 2011-2012 A & B Ch. 13 & 14 pgs. 334-353 pgs. 354-370 A & B Ch. 9 pgs. 206-233, “Paintball: Promoter of Violence or Healthy Fun?” pgs. 234-237, For Writing and Discussion: Evaluating Different Ways to Use and Cite a Source Avoiding Plagiarism For Writing and Discussion: Identifying Arguable Issues 5 Continue Chapters 13-14 April Week 11 Proposing a Solution – develop a problemsolution thesis and argument for your research paper Continue Chapters 13-14 “Why Uranium Is the New Green” pgs. 237-240, or “No to Nukes” pgs. 241-244 A & B Ch. 10 For Writing and Discussion: Using pgs. 245-251, pgs. Different Strategies to Develop 252-254 & pgs. Support 261-262 (Visual Presentation), “’The Hardest of the Hardcore’: Let’s Outlaw Hired Guns in Contemporary American Warfare” pgs. 267271 April Week 12 Writing a Classical Argument & Proposing a Solution A & B Ch. 9 & 10 April Week 13 Present both sides for an existing question and learn to build reader’s interest A & B Ch. 7 pgs. 152-163, Sample Paper April Week 14 Review previous chapters/sample essays on research A & B 9, 10, 13 & 14 May Week 15 Review previous chapters/sample essays on research Arak A & B 9, 10, 13 & 14 Writing Projects: A Classical Argument & A Proposal Argument (apply to research paper) Major Essay: Informative Essay Research Paper Workshops Research Paper Workshops Arak May Week 16 Llewellyn E110 Syllabus 2011-2012 Research Paper Workshops & Reflections/Presentations 6