Week 6 Tuesday February 19th, 2013 English 10 Do Now 2-19-13 Which “hook” strategy is present? Write out the thesis statement (stance plus main reasons). Will this author address the counterargument? Can you believe Lance Armstrong used drugs? What kind of role model is he now? Do you think people will still donate to his charities? Drug testing should not be just for professionals. Student athletes should be drug tested because drug testing keeps competition fair, maintains athletes’ statuses as role models, and it keeps youth from making immature decisions about their body. English 10 Week 6 agenda Tuesday: Deconstruct a sample essay for structure. (Are all the parts of an essay present and in order?) Wednesday: peer review essay for structure Thursday: common grammar mistakes Friday: Final proofreading peer review activity. Final typed essay due online (Edmodo) by midnight Monday Feb 25th Am Lit 2-19-13 Describe the Buchanans as detailed as possible. Elite thinkers: did you catch the very first description of Tom/Gatsby? What details of his first description do you remember? English 10 Do Now 2-20-13 What parts of your essay are you struggling with? Which aspect has been the hardest for you? What are you hoping others might be able to help you with during peer revision? Take out your essay and have it visible on your desk. If you turned it in, come see me for it. Am Lit: Do Now 2-20-13 Turn in Do Nows from last week and yesterday. Staple all Do Nows. NAME and PERIOD on every sheet. Take out Study Guide Question Answers for The Great Gatsby Chapters 1-2. After quiz, take a Chapter 3 Vocab sheet and a dictionary. Get as many definitions as possible before all finish their reading checks. English 10 Do Now 2-21-13 Exercise Directions: Write down the correct word that fits into each of the following sentences. 1. (There, Their) home was very beautiful. 2. Many times (they're, there) is (to, too, two) much work to do in one day. 3. (They're, There) coming to the house on Friday. 4. The test was difficult, but (its, it's) hard for a reason. 5. (You're, Your) library is really big. 6. (They're, There) are Gore and Bush. 7. The envelope is missing (it's, its) contents. 8. Is this possibly (you're, your) signature? 9. In the city (there, their) are (to, too) many tall buildings. 10. (To, Two) shoes make a pair. 11. One cannot be (to, too) kind to others. 12. Jamie placed the book (to, too) close to the heat. 13. The students will take (they're, there, their) registration papers to the office. 14. (It’s, Its) past (you’re, your) bedtime. English 10 2-21-13 Which words did you get wrong the most? Tally up your wrong answers. Pick which two groups you had the most errors in: Their/There/They’re Your/You’re It’s/Its Too/To/Two To prepare for proofreading, you need to complete handouts for the two selected groups from above. After they are graded, you can try to complete the other two for extra credit, but you must get an 80% or greater for credit. Am Lit Do Now 2-21-13 Without looking at your worksheet, define the following terms using complete sentences: omnibus, innuendo, erroneous, convivial. Omnibus: a long motor vehicle for passengers Innuendo: an indirect, derogatory implication in expression Erroneous: mistaken, wrong, has errors Convivial: merry; festive Am Lit Vocab Ch. 3 Obstetrical: medical practice that deals with pregnant women Rivulets: a small brook or stream Caterwauling: a shrill, discordant sound Affectations: a show, pretense or display Subterfuges: a deceptive stratagem or device English 10 Do Now 2-22-13 First, turn in any Do Nows you have from this week or last week. If they are on separate pages, write your NAME and PERIOD on every page and staple them together. Turn in to the US Mail, then take out your pink grammar worksheet from yesterday. We will review and then you will be able to proofread English 10: IMPORTANT Finalized, revised, proofread and polished essay is due beginning of next class TUESDAY! The essay should be in the proper structure (intros with hooks and thesis statement that includes main reasons; body paragraphs with topic sentences, clinchers and transitions; conclusions that restate the thesis) The essay should be grammatically perfect. You can do it! Am Lit Do Now 2-22-13 Make a venn diagram of Egg and West Egg East Egg West Egg Both