Brittney Walker Professor Tucker November 20, 2012 Genre Study: Sonnet for 11th grade Genre Study: Sonnets Genre Study Proposal The genre study the students will be studying will be sonnets. The different sonnets that the students will be studying from will be from different poets including sonnets written by teens. The students that will be doing this unit will be in the 11 th grade. I want the students to know the difference between a sonnet and a poem. A sonnet is a type of poem. Just like a portrait is type of painting, or a novel is a type of book. If a person decides to do a painting, they’ll have to decide whether it is a still-life, a portrait, a landscape, or something else. So, just like deciding to write a poem, a person has to decide whether it is a sonnet, an ode, a limerick, an acrostic, or something else. A sonnet basically is just a poem with fourteen lines. There are some other rules that make it a sonnet, but they can get quite complicated. The sonnet, however, is the most famous and most common type of poem. Some challenges will probably be getting the students to understand the difference between a poem and a sonnet. A sonnet is a type of poem. Sonnets and poems do not mean the same thing, just like portrait and painting do not mean the same thing. A painting doesn't have to be a portrait, and a poem doesn't have to be a sonnet. I will use plenty of examples to illustrate the differences to help the students comprehended the difference. Rational The district demographic area that this unit will be taught in is in Redford Michigan, at Redford High School. The students will be in the 11th grade. As of the census of 2000, there were 51,622 people, 20,182 households, and 13,582 families residing in the township. The population density was 4,597.4 per square mile. There were 20,605 housing units at an average density of 1,835.1 per square mile. The racial makeup of the township was 87.98% White, 8.54% African American, 0.43% Native American, 0.76% Asian, 0.02% Pacific Islander, 0.57% from other races, and 1.70% from two or more races. Hispanic or Latino of any race was 2.02% of the population. Residents with income below the poverty level in 2009 was at 9.2%. According the 2010 US Census, the population of Redford, Michigan decreased to 35524 from 37608 over the past 10 years. The majority ethnicity residing in Redford, Michigan is whites, while the majority ethnicity attending the public schools is African Americans. 55.58% of students in Redford public schools receives, or are eligible to participate in free or reduced lunch programs. In poetry, words are arranged to bring their essence to the front. Poetry is perhaps the most powerful literary method of conveying an idea, an image or an opinion. All writers paint pictures with their words. A really great poem can say more in a few verses than an entire novel. Every tiny haiku is an amazing achievement in poetry. By studying poetry, we can take many of those methods and lessons and apply them to all kinds of writing. I think a lot of people don't care to study poetry because it is difficult. It involves specific devices and forms that are not familiar, so it requires a lot of studying, understanding and appreciation. Poetry is important because it allows people to think of life more symbolically and meaningfully. Poetry gives a person the ability to express themselves through writing. Poetry usually shows many ranges from humorousness to the serious struggles of human lives, depending on the author's feelings. Writing poetry helps people to express things that they could not express otherwise in a prose, haiku, ode, and song lyrics form. Poetry can be written to remember how a person felt about something at a particular time. When reading poetry it's important that people try and feel what the author is trying to express to the world. Trying to relate to the poet is where people find the meaning of the poetry. Some poetry is as plain as day, or some you have to really think about and try to relate to. During this unit students will learn how each poem differs, and what they have in common. The student will learn how to decode the poetry and find meanings from the text. The student will also learn how to analysis the authors tone, and figure out what is being said in the text. The students will learn the history of poetry, and who was the main people writing poetry at that time. CCSS 1) Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text, including determining where the text leaves matters uncertain. 2) Analyze a complex set of ideas or sequence of events and explain how specific individuals, ideas, or events interact and develop over the course of the text. 3) Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative, connotative, and technical meanings; analyze how an author uses and refines the meaning of a key term or terms over the course of a text (e.g., how Madison defines faction in Federalist No. 10). 4) Write informative/explanatory texts to examine and convey complex ideas, concepts, and information clearly and accurately through the effective selection, organization, and analysis of content. a. Introduce a topic; organize complex ideas, concepts, and information so that each new element builds on that which precedes it to create a unified whole; include formatting (e.g., headings), graphics (e.g., figures, tables), and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension. b. Develop the topic thoroughly by selecting the most significant and relevant facts, extended definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples appropriate to the audience’s knowledge of the topic. c. Use appropriate and varied transitions and syntax to link the major sections of the text, create cohesion, and clarify the relationships among complex ideas and concepts. d. Use precise language, domain-specific vocabulary, and techniques such as metaphor, simile, and analogy to manage the complexity of the topic. e. Establish and maintain a formal style and objective tone while attending to the norms and conventions of the discipline in which they are writing. f. Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the information or explanation pre Lesson 1 Purpose: The purpose of this lesson is to introduce what a sonnet is. The purpose is also, to know the different forms of sonnets; as in the Petrarchan sonnet (Italian), and the Shakespearean sonnet (English). The student will learn the history of sonnets, where they come from, and the main poets in different eras Preparation: Each student will be given a binder. The binder will have each sonnet that will be studied. The folder will also have ever worksheet, every word of the week terms, a biography of each poet that we will be discussing, glossary, and the guidelines, rubric for the student’s own sonnet poem, and portfolio. Each student will be given a journal to keep for class and home entries. 2 journal entries will be a requirement for the portfolio due at the end of the unit. At the end of the week an formative assessment on the Words of the Day will be given. Procedure: Week 1 Day One Students will be given their “Sonnet’s Binder”, and a journal. On the board have some questions that the students should answer in their journals. Questions: Have you ever read a Sonnet? If so what was the poet’s name? What do you know about Sonnets? Where do you think Sonnets originated from? What do you want to learn about Sonnets? After students have done their journal entries, ask for volunteers to read their journal entries out loud. Have each student open up their books to the introduction portion in the binder. Read the introduction out aloud. The introductions will cover sonnets origins, what exactly a sonnet is, and the different forms. Introduction: Elizabethan Sonnets During the Elizabethan Age, an educated person was expected to write poetry and to be able to recite from memory the classical poems of Greece and Rome. A favorite type of poem written in English was the sonnet. Shakespeare did not invent the sonnet; Petrarch, a fourteenth century poet did, but Shakespeare has been associated with it for a long time because of the 154 sonnets he wrote. These are considered some of the English-speaking world’s most beautiful lines. When the term Elizabethan sonnet is used, it refers to sonnets constructed like those Shakespeare wrote. Most sonnets consisted of single, fourteen-line poems, but sometimes Elizabethan poets would write whole narratives in sonnet form. Like many types of poetry, a sonnet follows a set of rules. The rules for the structure of an Elizabethan or Shakespearean sonnet are as follows: There are 14 lines altogether. o There are three sets of four lines, called quatrains. o There are two lines at the end called a couplet. Each line contains ten syllables with every other syllable accented beginning with the second syllable. This meter is called iambic pentameter. The sonnet has this formal rhyme scheme: abab cdcd efef gg The sonnet also has a thematic structure. o One option is that the first two quatrains set up a problem, the third quatrain begins to answer the problem, and the ending couplet solves the problem. The couplet can be considered a sort of punch line. o Alternatively, the poet introduces his topic in the first quatrain and covers two or three aspects of the topic in the quatrains. He wraps up his discussion in the couplet. o The poet can introduce a topic in the first quatrain, present two opposite views in the second and third quatrain (ie set up an antithesis), and choose between them in the couplet. o Finally the poet can put events in chronological order with a finale. The students will then be put in groups to work cooperatively. The students will look at an example of a sonnet called “The Sea Love”, written by a 10th grade English class. I will read the poem out loud. I then will select a student to read the sonnet aloud once more, then silently to themselves. Students will be asked to do discuss what they feel like the poet is saying in the sonnet. What stands out to them? The Sea of Love Today I saw that girl upon the rock. At the time I was in my little boat, When I realized that it could not float. I tried to take off my red and white sock, But then I saw the girl swim to the dock. I want to give her the poem I wrote, But it was eaten today by the goat. He looked at my sock, and ran in the flock. In the night we danced under the bright star, That brought me and my love under a tree, And all Mary did was talk about me. Our love did carry us so very far, That I walked right into the cold water, And steam came out of the hole in my heart. Written By 10th grade English Class Homework: Work of the Day work sheet Thematic Structure Define: Paraphrase definition: Create a sentence: Quatrains Define: Paraphrase definition: Create a sentence: Couplets Define: Paraphrase definition: Create a sentence: Day 2 Journal entry will be a free verse poem on the theme of love. When the students are done, ask for a few volunteers to share their work. After the students get done sharing their poems have the students turn to the Words of the Day page in their binders. We will go over the words of the day in class. Each student will find the definition, paraphrase the word, and use it in a sentence. When the students are done with their worksheet I will call on a student to give me their answers to the questions. Explain to each student why it’s important to study these words of the day’s, because at the end of the week there will be some type of assessment. We will then go over the words importance to sonnets, and show examples using “What Makes up a Sonnet?” page in the binder. After this the students will turn to the “Poetry Project” page in their binders. At the end of this unit each student will be writing their own sonnets, and submitting a portfolio. Read the instructions aloud. Words of the Week Repetition Personification Hyperbole Imagery Contraction Iambic Pentameter Line Figurative Language (Simile and Metaphor) What Makes Up a Sonnet? Repetition: "So long as I live I'll remember this So long as I dream, I'll dream of your kiss." Personification: "love is running out the door" Simile: "Our love had run down just like our old car." "She looks like bacon" Hyperbole: "My love for you is as high as the sky" Imagery: "crushed heart" "times of passion" "You in the meadow" Simulated Archaic Language: "the fight would becometh very wild" Contraction: "will ne'er be dead" "I shan't say no." Iambic Pentameter Line: "You have the nice and pretty female look." "Your love for me is running out the door." POETRY PROJECT: WRITING A SONNET Objectives: To select a theme for your poem To compose the sonnet following the correct rhyme scheme and keeping with your theme To write primarily in iambic pentameter 1. Choose a subject for your sonnet. Some likely subjects are love, friendship, growing up, love lost, or a sport or anything that is important to you. 2. Decide upon a theme or message on your general subject that you wish to communicate in your poem. 3. Plan your structure. The problem-then-solution structure is one possibility, or plan your content flow in another logical manner (see “Elizabethan Sonnets” worksheet). 4. Write the sonnet with care to respect the required rhyme scheme for your fourteen lines. Keep in iambic pentameter as much as possible. Even if you don’t have a pure string of iambs, keep a strict ten syllables per line. A useful website to help with your rhyming are http://www.rhymezone.com/. 5. Decide on a title for your sonnet. It could hint at the subject or be a statement of your theme. 6. Your poem may have a clever twist, particularly in the ending, but keep your tone and treatment of your subject serious. 7. Refection on the process of writing the sonnet. What is the rose and thorn of this procedure? What was the best and worst part of writing this sonnet? GRADING RUBRIC Fourteen lines of poetry (or more) Sonnet format Logical structure Two examples of figurative language (such as metaphor, simile) Appropriate title Proper usage of quatrains and couplets Rhyming Scheme Reflection included TOTAL ______/14 ______/5 ______/5 ______/8 ______/1 ______/5 ______/4 ______/1 ______/45 pts Day 3 Begin class with Words of the day, after students are done go over each word. When finished have students turn to the “History of Sonnets” in their binder. Have students read out loud. When the students are done have them write in their journals about their reflections. Have them write about what they have learned about the history. Have a few volunteers to read what they wrote. Homework: Complete the “Rhyming Page” in the binder. Rhyming Page Directions: Shakespearean sonnet rhyme pattern is abab, cdcd, efef, gg. Write a word for each letter below to rhyme with the same letter in the column. For example: A) Little B) Time A) Brittle B) Rhyme A__________________ B__________________ A__________________ B__________________ C________________ D________________ C________________ D________________ E_____________ F_____________ E_____________ F_____________ G___________ G___________ Words of the Day: Octave Aseslet Volta Petrarchan Shakespearean A Short History of the Sonnet Invented in Italy in the thirteenth century, the sonnet was brought to a high form of development in the fourteenth century by Francesco Petrarch (1304–74), Italian poet and humanist best remembered now for his sonnets dedicated to an idealized lady named Laura glimpsed in a church, and with whom he fell in love at first sight, or so the legend goes. Laura’s true identity is unknown; supposedly, she married someone else and, being ideally virtuous as well as beautiful, was permanently unavailable. There’s no evidence Petrarch ever talked to her. The uses Petrach made of the conventions of courtly love for a beautiful, unattainable lady became known as “Petrarchan conventions.” Some of these are that love is excruciatingly painful; the angelically beautiful and virtuous lady is cruel in rejecting the poet’s love; and love is a religion, the practice of which ennobles the lover. Christian and classical imagery coexist. The god of Love, Cupid, is unpredictable, powerful, and cruel. The eyes are the “windows to the soul,” and love usually begins at first sight. The poet is subject to extremes of feeling and internal conflict—the “war within the self.” Life is short and art, fortunately, is long. The poetry will outlive the poet. Sir Thomas Wyatt (1502–42) and Henry Howard, the Earl of Surrey (1517–47), are credited with introducing the Petrarchan model to England in the sixteenth century and adjusting the rhyme scheme and the meter to accommodate the English language. They, like Petrarch, use religious imagery and terms to convey the holiness and intensity of the lover’s passion for the unattainable love-object and make frequent allusions to both classical deities and Christian symbols. This model exerted a strong influence on numerous English Renaissance poets: Spenser, Sidney, Sidney’s brilliant niece Mary Wroth, among others, and of course, Shakespeare himself. Writing sonnet sequences became popular among gentlemen, and these poems were often circulated in manuscript form, evidently including Shakespeare’s. Publication was not generally considered gentlemanly or ladylike. Shakespeare’s 154 sonnets published in 1609 are a “collection” rather than a sequence, although there are some groupings that look like mini-sequences. And they are remarkably various: Shakespeare explores the same theme in different ways but never exactly repeats a pattern. He is keenly aware of Petrarchan conventions and often uses them, but just as often upends them, as in Sonnet 130. The cruel loved one in many of his sonnets is a young man, not a woman, and the “Dark Lady” of sonnets 127–152 is neither virtuous nor ideally beautiful. Shakespeare’s Sonnets represented a kind of apogée of the English sonnetwriting fashion, and, in fact, may have contributed to the vogue’s fading away, since no one could outdo him or even come close to matching his skill and versatility. The sonnet has proved to be a remarkably durable and adaptable form—a “fixed form” that is, paradoxically, enormously flexible. Although no one has ever equaled Shakespeare’s sonnets, nearly every notable poet writing in English has had a go at a sonnet or two. Among the best-known British writers of sonnets are John Donne, Milton, Wordsworth, W.H. Auden, and Dylan Thomas. The form survived the transatlantic crossing. Distinguished American practitioners include Robert Frost, Edna St. Vincent Millay, John Crowe Ransom, as well as significant African-American and Caribbean-American poets, such as James Weldon Johnson, Paul Laurence Dunbar, Countee Cullen, Gwendolyn Brooks, Robert Hayden, Derek Walcott, Marilyn Nelson, and Claude McKay. The sonnet can be a lens through which to look at poetry over the last 400 years. Day 4: Have students write in their journals about the rhyming exercise they did for homework. Did they like it? Was it easy or hard for them to find rhyming words? Do they feel like rhyming is important for a poem? After they complete it have a few students share with the class what they wrote. Go over what meters, and stanzas are. After that, do the “Rhyming Page” with the whole class. Write the Shakespearean form on the board and complete with the class. After all the letters have been filled end. Have students get in groups. Have each group create sentences using the words that were selected by the class, to create a sonnet. Each group will share their sonnets with the class. Homework: Study for their matching test on the Words of the Week. Day 5: Students will be given their test as soon as class begins. Assessment: Students will be given a matching test on the words that was given to them from the “Words of the Day”. The test will have the words from the week, and its definition in mismatch order, and the student has to put them in the correct order. Each question will be worth 1 point. After the students are done with their test they will then pass it to their neighbors to grade. We will go over the answers together. After that is done we will watch a video on iambic Pentameters.(http://www.shakespeareinamericanlife.org/education/schooldays/iambicpentam eter.cfm) The video shows how iambic pentameters works, we will do the same class demonstration in class. Homework: Read the first sonnet on their list. “Composed Upon Westminster Bridge, September 3, 1802” by William Wordsworth. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. Sonnets “Composed Upon Westminster Bridge, September 3, 1802” by William Wordsworth “Death, be not proud” (Holy Sonnet 10) by John Donne “How Do I Love Thee?” by Elizabeth Barrett Browning “Leda and the Swan” by William Butler Yeats “Mowing” by Robert Frost “My mistress’ eyes are nothing like the sun” (Sonnet 130) by William Shakespeare “The New Colossus” by Emma Lazarus “On First Looking into Chapman's Homer” by John Keats 9. “The Oven Bird” by Robert Frost 10. “Ozymandias” by Percy Bysshe Shelley 11. “Putting in the Seed” by Robert Frost 12. “Range-finding” by Robert Frost 13. “Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?” (Sonnet 18) by William Shakespeare 14. “the sonnet-ballad” by Gwendolyn Brooks 15. “When I Consider How My Light Is Spent” by John Milton 16. “The world is too much with us; late and soon” by William Wordsworth 17. “The Oven Bird” by Robert Frost 18. “Those Winter Sundays” by Robert Hayden 19. “If We must Die” by Claude McKay, 20. “I Shall Forget You” by Edna St. Vincent Millay Teen Ink Sonnets 21. “You and Me” by bluemagnet22 22. “The Sport Sonnet” by Sebrina444 23. “The Storm of Change” by Elkay 24. “I remember” by luckeylina 25. “Deevolution” by Lessa Q. Lesson 2 Purpose: To analyze and understand the different sonnets. The purpose is to explore the different themes and ideas of the sonnets. The students will learn terms describing the elements of sonnets. Students will recognize ways in which the poet uses language, structure, and form to create and shape meanings and effects of the sonnets. Preparation: The students will read and understand the first 5 sonnets assigned out of the 20. There will be a binary choice test after this lesson. There will be true and false questions from the first 5 sonnets cover during that week. Procedure: Week 2 Day 6 Read “the sonnet-ballad” by Gwendolyn Brooks, aloud to the class. Begin discussion of the poem by asking students what stands out to them about the poem. Have the student’s journal what they remember, feel, and questions they have, when they read and hear the poem. Then ask the students to share personal experiences, emotions, and beliefs that influenced their reaction. Ask students if the poem recalls memories and how it connects to their own attitudes or perceptions. Then put student in a group and ask them to point out specific words and lines in the poem that triggered their reactions. Work to shift students’ attention to the details and features of the poem by asking them what word, phrase, image, or idea were important to their reactions. Students will share their answers. Homework: Read the second poem on the list “Death, be not proud” (Holy Sonnet 10) by John Donne. Have the students write in their journals about their feelings about the sonnet. What did it say to them, how did it make them feel, and what is the speaker saying in the sonnet. Day 7 Have students write in their journals about the sonnet they read for homework. Then pass out copies of the Sonnet Characteristics Chart. Model the process of recording characteristics for a sonnet, using the Brooks’ poem. Arrange students into five group sand have the read and record data for the poem that they read for homework. When students have completed their analysis of the sonnet, ask them to look over their charts and draw some preliminary conclusions about the sonnet. Sonnet Characteristics Chart Sonnet Title: Number of Lines: Number of Stanzas: Number of Lines per Stanza: Rhyme Scheme: Meter: Other: Observations: Based on your observations, what can you conclude about sonnets? Homework: Have the students read sonnet 3, “How Do I Love Thee?” by Elizabeth Barrett Browning, also read “You and Me” by bluemagnet22 from TeenInk. Have the students write in their journals about their feelings about the sonnets. What did it say to them, how did it make them feel, and what is the speaker saying in the sonnet. Day 8 Have students write in their journals about the first three poems and the one from TeenInk, what they liked about them and why. What they disliked about them and why? What similarities did they have and what differences they had. Have a few students share with the class their entry. Write their responses on the board. Read “How Do I Love Thee?” out loud. Put students in groups and have them answer questions about the poem and its form. The question is what are the language devices employed by the poet and why are they effective? Find any two quotations on love and discuss why you find the words appealing? Read responses out loud. Homework: Read sonnet 4, “Leda and the Swan” by William Butler Yeats, also “The Sport Sonnet” by Sebrina444 in TeenInk, and use the “Sonnet Characteristics Chart” for both sonnets. Day 9 Have the students write in their journals about “Leda and the Swan” and “The Sport Sonnet”. Have them write about their feelings about the sonnets. What did it say to them, how did it make them feel, and what is the speaker saying in the sonnet. Then have a few students share what they wrote. Cover the biography of Yeats, have the students turn to his biography in their binders. Call on students to read it out loud. Discuss the elements of the poem with the students, and discuss the “Characteristics Chart” the students did on the sonnet. Then place students in a group and have them answer these questions, the question that ends the poem, does Leda have access to the god’s knowledge as she experiences his power, it calls to mind the nuances of “knowing.” If Leda “knows” the god sexually, does she also “know” his mind? Share answers with the class. William Butler Yeats 1865-1939 William Butler Yeats's mythology, from which arises the distilled symbolism of his great period, is not always easy to understand, nor did Yeats intend its full meaning to be immediately apparent to those unfamiliar with his thought and the tradition in which he worked. His own cyclic view of history suggested to him a recurrence and convergence of images, so that they become multiplied and enriched; and this progressive enrichment may be traced throughout his work. Among Yeats's dominant images are Leda and the Swan; Helen and the burning of Troy; the Tower in its many forms; the sun and moon; the burning house; cave, thorn tree, and well; eagle, heron, sea gull, and hawk; blind man, lame man, and beggar; unicorn and phoenix; and horse, hound, and boar. Yet these traditional images are continually validated by their alignment with Yeats's own personal experience, and it is this that gives them their peculiarly vital quality. In Yeats's verse they are often shaped into a strong and proud rhetoric and into the many poetic tones of which he was the master. All are informed by the two qualities which Yeats valued and which he retained into old age— passion and joy. Relevant Background WB Yeats was born in 1865 in Dublin. His parents were John Butler Yeats, a portrait painter, and Susan Pollexfen. His family was upper class, Protestant and of Anglo-Irish descent. His ancestors were church rectors. The Yeats family had aspirations to maintain its wealth and traditions and this shaped WB Yeats and his poetry. At the age of two, Yeats moved with his family to London, where they remained for Yeat’s childhood. He developed an affinity with Sligo because he spent a lot of summers with his mother’s family there. At the age of sixteen, Yeat’s family moved back to Dublin. Yeats was born into a family context that respected culture and art. Besides his father being an artist, his brother Jack B. Yeats became Ireland’s most famous painter. Yeats received tuition at the School of Art in Dublin from 1884 to 1886. There he gained an interest in mysticism and the supernatural. As he reached manhood, much of his education consisted of private tuition and reading. This accounts for the extreme individualism found in his poetry. He became interested in Hinduism and the occult. During his life, he developed interests in theosophy, ancient civilisations, psychic power, spiritualism, magic, eastern religions and the supernatural. He sought symbols for his poetry in these topics. These symbols account for the difficulty of some of his poetry, especially his later work. He became a supporter of Irish Nationalism because of his friendship with John O'Leary, a Fenian, and Maud Gonne, a keen Irish Nationalist. He built up a relationship with Maud through theatre work and developed a futile lifelong love for her. Maud was unusually beautiful. He expressed his frustrated love for Maud indirectly in many of his poems, often through an image of a woman with yellow hair. Yeats frequently proposed marriage to Maud but was rejected every time. In 1903 Maud Gonne married the Irish Nationalist, Major John MacBride who was executed in 1916 following the Easter Rising. This marriage caused Yeats to become bitter at Mc Bride and Gonne over his unrequited love for her. Yeats befriended an aristocratic benefactor, Lady Gregory, in 1896 on a visit to Coole Park in Galway. Lady Gregory, a nationalist playwright, became Yeats’ assistant and mentor in publishing his poetry and founding the Abbey Theatre. Drama and Literature served Yeats as a cultural vehicle to express his views; in Yeats early years, culture transcended politics. The Abbey Theatre produced plays by Yeats and new writers like John Millington Synge. The Abbey Theatre, which briefly became a cultural and political influence like Yeats had dreamed, suffered major criticism from its nationalist Catholic audience. A narrow-minded reaction to the Abbey's production of Synge's ‘Playboy of the Western World’ (1907) closed down the theatre. Yeats grew disillusioned with the ignorance and conservative cultural attitudes of Dubliners. His writings expressed his disenchantment. Yeats' early work reflects three themes: nature, the struggle for Irish independence, and his unrequited love for Maud Gonne. Up to about 1909 Yeats involved himself in the Anglo-Irish Literary Revival when he wrote plays and lyrical, symbolic poems on the myths, folk tales and legends of the Celtic era. He depicted soft focus or pastoral rural settings. He saw poetry both as art and as a form of escapism. ‘The Lake Isle of Innisfree’ (1893) provides evidence of his escapist tendency. Then came the so-called mature and realistic phase of poetry, in which his poems were influenced by his diverse studies, Irish society, Irish rebellion, nationalism and the quest for Irish independence. Maud Gonne, although married to Major John Mc Bride, remained an influence. Yeats eventual acceptance of the role of politics in society was indicated by the poem ‘Easter 1916’. In 1917 Yeats married Georgie Hyde-Lees. She claimed to write under the guidance of spirits, a gift known as automatic writing. Yeats used her spiritual writing as material for his theories and poetry. With her help, he wrote ‘A Vision’, an unusual philosophical work about mysticism and his bizarre concept of cycles of history. The book helped to explain the obscure symbolism of his later works. It presented the dualities often expressed in his later poetry: objectivity and subjectivity, art and life, soul and body. Following the founding of the Free State, Yeats became a senator. He turned to practical politics, serving in the Senate of the new Irish Free State from 1922 to 1928. WB Yeats’ final phase, old age, contains a lot of self-critical and ironical poetry. He criticised his body and his life as well as his poetic craft. In 1923, he received the Nobel Prize for literature. Yeats experienced various illnesses in the last 15 years of his life but he composed poetry until he died in 1939. Yeats died in France and was buried in Sligo. Homework: Read sonnet 5, “Mowing” by Robert Frost, “The Storm of Change” by Elkay, “I remember” by luckeylina, and “Deevolution” by Lessa Q. Have the students write in their journals about their feelings about the sonnets. What did it say to them, how did it make them feel, and what is the speaker saying in the sonnet, and how the modern sonnets differ and are similar to the other sonnets covered. Day 10 Assessment: Begin class with the binary choice test on the first 5 sonnets that was covered. There will be 5 questions that are in true and false form; each question is worth 1 point. After the students are done have them pass them to the front of the classroom and then past them back out to a different student to grade. Then have the students to take out all their “Characteristic Chart” and discuss their observations that students have found. Have students read through their observations and ask students to suggest what the 5 sonnets have in common and how they differ. Work toward a class description that fits all the poems; then find two more detailed definitions, based on the differences you noticed. Have the students turn to the page of the “Formal Names for the Sonnets” in their binder. With the poetic forms identified, read “My mistress’ eyes are nothing like the sun” (Sonnet 130) by William Shakespeare to the class. Have the students return to the observation chart to confirm the kind sonnet the poem is. Formal Name for Sonnets Sonnet Form Rhyme Scheme Italian or Petrarchan abbaabba cde cde abbaabba cc dd ee abbaabba cdcd ee Spenserian abab bcbc cdcd ee English or Shakespearean abab cdcd efef gg Lesson 3 Purpose: To continue developing an appreciation for poetry and the views expressed by poets. To recognize that poems do raise universal questions, which is worthwhile contemplating. Preparation: Students will be covering sonnets 6-10 during this week. Students will be given a multiple choice assessment to check for understanding of the unit. Procedure: Week 3 Day 11 Have class write in their journals about “My mistress’ eyes are nothing like the sun” (Sonnet 130) by William Shakespeare. How it made them feel, what is the poet expressing, and how does the poet feel. Have the students return to the observation chart to confirm the kind sonnet the poem is. With the form of the poem confirmed, turn to the poem’s message by asking students what stands out to them about the poem. Ask them what they remember, feel, question, and see when they read and hear. Ask students to share personal experiences, emotions, and beliefs that influenced their reaction. Ask students if the poem recalls memories and how it connects to their own attitudes or perceptions. Ask students to point to specific words and lines in the poem that triggered their reactions. Work to shift students’ attention to the details and features of the poem by asking them what word, phrase, image, or idea was important to their reactions. Be sure that students notice the contrast and opposition that are important to the poem’s meaning. If students need a focused exploration of the ideas, ask them to go through the poem and create a shared list of things that the speaker describes that the described lady’s features are and are not. Homework: Have students read the 7th sonnet on the list, “The New Colossus” by Emma Lazarus, and have them do a “Characteristic Chart”. Day 12 Have students write in their journals about their thought and opinions on “The New Colossus” by Emma Lazarus. When they’re done have a few students share their writing. After that ask students to look at Lazarus sonnet as a model for their own writing. Write the first line of the poem on the board: “My mistress’ eyes are nothing like the sun.” On a different area of the board, rewrite the first line of the poem with some of the words removed and with the number of beats written below: ______________________ is/are nothing like _______________ 4 beats 2 beats Ask students to brainstorm nouns or noun phrases that can fill in the first blank. As students share ideas, list the alternatives on the board. To get students started, you can share some options of your own such as “My mother’s pies,” “The football game,” “McDonald’s fries,” and “My P. E. class.” The options do NOT need to rhyme with the original. The goal is to match the rhythm. Compare the brainstormed items to the original phrase, removing any items from the list that do not match the rhythm. Use this process to discuss the metrical differences between phrases that match and those that don’t. Explain that students can change the verb to match the meaning of their poem. If desired, brainstorm a list of options (e.g., is, are, was, were). Next ask students to brainstorm a list of words, this time for the second blank. Get started by sharing some possible answers such as “a ham,” “my chair,” “the tape,” and “her cake.” Focus students’ attention on brainstorming based on the meter, without worrying about how the noun phrases match up to the items that they have brainstormed for the first blank. Once the students understand the activity, give them the rest of the session to work on their own sonnets, imitating “The New Colossus.” Remind students that in addition to matching the rhythm of the original poem, their work should also match the rhyme scheme. Homework: 8. Read sonnets,“On First Looking into Chapman’s Homer” by John Keats,“The Oven Bird” by Robert Frost, and “Ozymandias” by Percy Bysshe Shelley, fill out the “Characteristic Chart” for each sonnet. Day 13 Have students’ journal about the three poems they read for homework. How it made them feel, what is the poet expressing, and how does the poet feel. Have a few students read out loud what they wrote. Put students into a group and give them a list of sonnets that the class discussed. Each group will have to select 4 sonnets and complete this “Sonnet Search Sheet”. After each group is finish each group will share with the class. SONNET SEARCH SHEET – EXAMINING SONNET SAMPLES Title and Author Year What’s the sonnet about? Your thoughts on the poem’s exploration of topic Patterns Explore the patterns in the various sonnets you examined. With your group, develop a list of at least six rules for sonnets. Don’t worry about being “right,” just make sure that you base your conclusions on actual observations. Write your six rules and how you figured them out in the space below. Be prepared to explain your findings to the class! Homework: Read Putting in the Seed” by Robert Frost Range-finding,” by Robert Frost, and “Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?” And have the students fill out the “Characteristic Chart” Day 14 Have the students write about the sonnets they read for homework in their journals, and have them share with the class. Ask a student to write the rhyme scheme of the Shakespearean sonnet on the board, vertically: abab cdcd efef gg. Number the lines. Explain the process by which the students will create a sonnet. First, come up with two pairs of rhyming one-syllable words for the first quatrain (day/dark pray/spark, for example) and place them at the ends of the first 4 lines. Work with the students to compose iambic pentameter lines to precede each of the end rhymes. One person is the scribe who writes the lines on the board. The lines may be nonsense at first, but the group can work to tweak them into making sense (In the process, the end rhymes may be altered). The same process is applied to the second quatrain, the third, and the couplet. Once there are 14 lines on the board, ask students to collectively edit the result. Read the group sonnet chorally. Have students start writing individual sonnets of their own, drawing on their journal entry. Homework: Read “When I Consider How My Light Is Spent” by John Milton,“The world is too much with us; late and soon” by William Wordsworth, “The Oven Bird” by Robert Frost. Day 15 Assessment: Students will be given a multiple choice assessment on the sonnets that were previously covered. After the assessment is given, the students will pass it to the front to be collected. Then I will past them back out to another student to be graded. We will go over each answer. After this is done discuss the final project once more. Explain that each sonnet written by the students will be put together in a book, and at the end of the unit shared at family night. Explain what should be in the portfolio and due dates. Give them the “Sonnet Plan Worksheet” to get them started with their sonnets. Name ___________________________________ Date ___________________ Block ______ SONNET PLAN WORKSHEET My theme or personal message will be _______________________________________________ My stanzas will contain this: Q1. _________________________________________________________________________ Q2. _________________________________________________________________________ Q3. _________________________________________________________________________ Coup _______________________________________________________________________ Homework: Read “Those Winter Sundays” by Robert Hayden, “If We must Die” by Claude McKay, “I Shall Forget You” by Edna St. Vincent Millay. How it made them feel, what is the poet expressing, and how does the poet feel. Portfolio Required Material: 3 journal entries from your journal ___/6 Selected Material: Any material you select to be in there (Free verse poem, journal entry, worksheet, or another sonnet found online) ___/4 Sonnet: The sonnet you created for the final “Sonnet Project” ___/6 Reflection: Reflection on the unit, “The Thorn and the Rose,” What you did like and didn’t like. ___/4 Lesson 4 Purpose: To create their own sonnets from everything they’ve learned and experienced. Preparation: Students will have 3 days to complete their sonnets. They will have two workshop days to complete it, and to start their portfolio. Procedure: Week 4 Day 16 Have the students fill out the “Characteristic Chart” for the sonnet that they read for homework. Have the students share what they wrote in their journals about the sonnets. Give them the rest of the time to finish their sonnets. Homework: Finish their sonnets Day 17 Workshop Day finish up sonnets and start portfolios. Day 18 Workshop day, we will be doing “Author’s Chair”. Each student will sit in the authors chair and read their sonnets. Afterward each student will give the author feedback using the “Sonnet Peer Edit Sheet”. Poet’s Name _____________________________ Editor’s Name__________________________ Sonnet Peer Edit Sheet Using an editing pen or pencil, mark up the following: 1. Count the number of syllables in each line and write the number to the left of the line. 2. Circle any words that violate the iambic pentameter rhythm of the line. 3. Check that the sonnet has the correct rhyme scheme and make notes if there are any errors. Q1, Q2__________________________________________________________________________ Q3, Coup_________________________________________________________________________ 4. Theme: Write the sonnet’s theme __________________________________________________ Does it stick to the message? y/n Comments __________________________________________ 5. Structure: Does the poem flow? y/n Does it have a title? y/n Comments: ______________________________________________________________________ Day 19 Work on revisions, and portfolios. Day 20 Family and Friends Day, The students will share all their hard work with their family and friends. Assessment: Everything must be turned in to get full credit for the portfolio.