Week 1 http://thefoxisblack.com/2011/10/19/recovered-books-dracula-by-bram-stoker/ There will be more open-ended than multiple choice questions. Please be sure to familiarize yourself with each poem we read. Themes Symbols Important lines Author’s intent Poetic Movements Defining characteristics of Romanticism, Victorianism, and Modernism Take a seat and prepare any questions you have for me before we begin the exam. Brainstorm Outline Organize your first draft. If a significant percentage of students missed a certain question it is more likely that it was undertaught than understudied. Some questions will be thrown out First drafts will be due tomorrow. This will count as a √+/- in the homework/classwork category so finish your first draft tonight. This draft must be at least 1.5 pages typed or 2 pages handwritten. Final product must 4-6 pages Your Name Mr. Hauser American Lit, 11A/B 2/15/12 (Center Title) Begin first paragraph blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah. Skip no spaces when you format your heading. Each line should touch the ones above and below. Hit [ctrl-a] or “select all” then hit [ctrl-2] to double space. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. Copy the URL of the website you are using. Head to easybib.com paste the URL of your website in the big box at the top. Click “Cite This” Look for more information it asks for. Click “Create Citation” at the bottom. In the box “Citation Added,” copy the citation and paste it into your “Works Cited” page that follows your draft. Take today to read through at least 3 of your classmates’ papers. As you read, circle words you think might be misspelled if you’re not certain. Make notes about sentence fragments or grammar errors in the margins. In letters to your classmates, address the following issues. What he or she did well. Be specific! Consider: 1. 1. What he or she needs to improve. Consider: 2. 1. Sentence fluency, word choice, strength of evidence or analysis, organization Recommendations. Consider reminding them to: 3. 1. 4. 5. Sentence fluency, word choice, strength of evidence or analysis, organization Check the rubric, Check the template, check the book for better evidence Remind them that they are strong capable writers. Sign your name Please: 1. Staple the rubric for the poetry paper to your final draft 2. Leave the draft and rubric on the swivel chair 3. Take your seat 4. Prepare for a freewrite What makes a good ghost/horror story in terms of plot, settings, and objects. plot: religious stuff, suspense, insanity, (sur)realism, believable, horrific emotions, characters are irrational locations: night, darkness, lonely, forests, deserts, abandoned buildings Objects: dolls/ventriloquist dummies, blades, blood, clowns, crosses – religious paraphernalia • a deserted (or sparsely inhabited) castle or mansion in a state of ruins or semi-ruins • labyrinths/mazes, dark corridors, and winding stairs filled with dusty cobwebs • these castles or mansions have hidden tunnels/staircases, dungeons, underground passages, crypts, or catacombs • if set in a broken down modern house, the basement or attic becomes the place of terror • limited lighting such as moonlight (usually a full moon), candles, flashlight, lantern; often the light disappears: clouds hide the moon, candles go out, flashlights/lanterns are dropped and broken • if electric lights exist, they usually mysteriously go out • the setting is usually threatening natural landscapes, like rugged mountains, dark forests, or eerie moors, exhibiting stormy weather • dark secrets surrounding some tormented soul who is left to live in isolation • ominous omens and curses • magic, supernatural manifestations, or the suggestion of the supernatural • a damsel in distress • the damsel’s rescuer; usually a lover • horrifying (or terrifying) events or the threat of such happenings What elements of Browning’s poem do we see on that list? Please… 1. Take your seats 2. Take out your copy of Dracula 3. Take out your notebooks and start a heading titled “Chapters 1 & 2” Why does the hotel landlady beg Jonathan not to continue his journey? What is special about that night? What does she give him as protection? 2. What does Jonathan find strange about his carriage ride through the mountains? Describe the behavior of the driver and other passengers. 3. Harker switches from a public carriage to Dracula’s personal caleche (a smaller open carriage). What is it about the caleche driver that seems to make the biggest impression on Jonathan Harker? What are some strange happenings on the ride to the castle? 1. Describe the man who greets Jonathan Harker at Castle Dracula. 2. What does the Count want Jonathan Harker to teach him while at Castle Dracula and why? 3. When Jonathan Harker looks in his shaving mirror, what peculiar thing does he notice about the Count? 4. What surprises Jonathan Harker when he tries to explore the outdoor grounds of Castle Dracula? 1. Jonathan Harker climbs into a carriage to take him to Dracula's castle. But wait, that carriage driver's voice sounds suspiciously like Christopher Lee, which can mean only one thing. DRACULA! AHHHHHHHHHHH! Hold on a second, that also means that Dracula is either very tight or he can't afford to hire any staff around his castle, not even the typical hypnotized servant or whatnot. Which means Dracula plays all and every role needed to keep his castle up and running, these include Chef Dracula, Servant Jeeves Dracula, Cleaning Lady Dracula and of course when he gets time Count Dracula. Please take your seats Take out your notebooks. Turn to page 25 For today: Reading out loud, then individual/group reading Homework: Please have the ch. 3/4 guiding questions ready to hand in tomorrow at the beginning of class Please have out vocab packet 23 and last week’s Reading Log. Also, format a half sheet of paper titled “Chapter 3 Quiz” and putchanaymonnit. Describe anything you remember about Dracula’s ancestry (people he’s related to or deeds they did). 2. What does the count warn about Harker’s falling asleep? 3. To what animal does Harker compare Dracula’s movements down the walls? 4. What prevents the dreamy women from feeding on Harker? 5. What does Dracula provide the dreamy women for dinner? 1. Please format a half sheet of paper titled “Chapter 4 Quiz” and putchanaymonnit. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. What does the Count do with Harker's letter to Mina, his fiancee? What interesting clothing does the Count wear on his excursions from the castle? What happens to the woman who comes looking for her child? Harker finds a pile of what in the Count's dusty old room? Where does Harker find the Count asleep? What prevents Harker from leaving when the Count opens the main doors? How does Harker attack the Count as he lay asleep? Write a paragraph each summarizing the two sets of background information (one for Stoker and the other for Vlad the Impaler) Include details from each in your summaries. THEN answer the question, “Can you imagine Dracula from the novel doing the things mentioned about Vlad? What evidence do you have for your answer? 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. No servants/workers, spooky/eerie/creepy Attila the Hun Wander in the castle, sleep in other rooms Scales the side out his window, face down, lizard Women, three vampire women, seductive “He’s mine!” Grabs her and throws her across the room Squealing and crying of a child Disappear into the moonlight 9. 10. 11. 12. 13. 14. 15. 16. 17. 18. first: I’m almost done working for the count. second: I’m leaving tomorrow, third: I’m in Buda-Pesth on my way home. Throws them out his window to gypsies who give them to Dracula, he burns the one to Mina All his stuff is gone, clothing, writing materials Big (apparently) empty boxes Dracula is wearing Harker’s clothes “Monster! Give me my child!” Eaten by wolves, sent by Dracula Empty of people, treasure/gold, all covered in dust Wolves would eat him No key, Dracula in a crate, looks younger, full of blood 1. 2. 3. Mina (Harker’s fiancee) to her bestie, Lucy Timing: Mirror time Lucy: upper class, socialite 1. Interested in Holmwood 2. Dr. Seward – Runs a Sanitarium – Crazy house 3. Three proposals: Seward, Morris (obsess much?), and Holmwood (eeeeee!) 4. Seward’s Phonograph (Fancy!) 1. Renfield 5. Morris to Holmwood - Bros Austrian neurologist Developed Psychoanalysis How we act influenced by our past Positive and negative experiences shape how we see the world and ourselves As we read: Take notes on GOTHIC elements Differences between DISNEY versions ORIGINAL DISNEY Message to Children? Message to Children? Implications: What does this say about their culture? Implications: What does this say about OUR culture? Please format a half sheet of paper titled “Chapter 8 Quiz” and putchanaymonnit. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. What strange habit has Lucy undertaken? How does Mina solve this problem? What strange items, delivered from Varna, are being deposited at Carfax, in London? Where has Harker been since he left the Count’s? What happens to Renfield in this chapter? Two were dark, and had high aquiline noses, like the Count, and great dark, piercing eyes, that seemed to be almost red when contrasted with the pale yellow moon. The other was fair, as fair as can be, with great masses of golden hair and eyes like pale sapphires. I seemed somehow to know her face, and to know it in connection with some dreamy fear, but I could not recollect at the moment how or where. All three had brilliant white teeth that shone like pearls against the ruby of their voluptuous lips. Imagery: vivid descriptive language that appeals to one or more of the five senses (sight, hearing, smell, taste, and touch). What images do you remember? How did Stoker get you to remember? Everyone will be assigned a chapter. Read through the chapter, find a passage FULL OF IMAGERY, copy it onto printer paper, and create at least two illustrations to accompany the passage Please continue your illustrations of your selections from yesterday. Then… Presentations Posting on the wall Chapter 9 Divide class into eight groups and assign each group a chapter from the novel (through chapter 8). Have students read through their assigned chapters to select examples of Stoker’s use of imagery. Each group is to discuss Stoker’s technique/diction, and then have them select two examples to illustrate. They must also provide a caption for the drawing and indicate the page number. Activity #3 After the groups are finished with their drawings, they will read the passages orally to the class while classmates close their eyes and listen, making note of images that come to mind. Have some students share what they “saw” in their imaginations. Then have the members of the group share the illustration for the passage and tell how Stoker’s words influenced the drawing. Allow any student who claims to have “seen” the image differently to share his/her ideas and defend “I took the book from under his pillow, wrapped it in white paper…pale blue ribbon…knot with sealing wax and for my seal I used my wedding ring. 1. What begins happening to Lucy upon her return home to Hillingham? 2. What action does Van Helsing believe is necessary to keep Lucy alive? 3. Who arrives and offers to help in Van Helsing’s first treatment of Lucy? 4. What specific instruction does Van Helsing give Dr. Seward regarding Lucy before he left for Amsterdam? 5. Who aids Van Helsing in the second transfusion to Lucy? 6. What is in the package that Van Helsing receives from abroad? Please have out your answers from last night’s homework (ch. 10 Qs). Jonathan Harker, Dracula, Mina Harker, Lucy Westenra, Arthur Holmwood, Renfield, Dr. John Seward, Dr. Van Helsing Name Picture – based on physical description from text 3 POSITIVE Adjectives 3 NEGATIVE Adjectives Along with quotations that prove your adjective referenced by page #s Half sheet of paper Title Chapter 11 Quiz 1. What does Mrs. Westenra tell Van Helsing that causes him to break down in tears? 2. Who volunteers his arm for Lucy’s third blood transfusion? 3. What happens as soon as the zookeeper finished telling his tale to the reporter? 4. After he is attacked by Renfield, what act does Dr. Seward witness that “positively sickened” him? 5. How did the wolf get the wounds on his face? 6. Explain what happens to Lucy’s mother. 1. 2. 3. Why is Van Helsing so determined to keep Lucy alive, even though he knows her chance for happiness is gone? Why might Lucy have torn up her own journal entry about the wolf and her mother? Why does Lucy look more healthy after she dies? Man vs. Himself Man vs. Nature Man vs. Society Man vs. unknown Man vs. Man Identify at least one of each conflict the characters in the story go through in your selected chapter Ch Man vs. Himself 1. Harker struggles for info 2. H. scared of Dracula but wants to work 3. H struggles with sanity/ escape 4. H tries to escape 5. Lucy chooses husband 6. M worries about H Man vs. Nature Man vs. Society Man vs. unknown H. vs. Wolves H. vs. H. vs. Wolves H. vs. Old Lady Superstition Driver vs. Spirits H. vs. Dracula/ vampires D. vs. sunlight Man vs. Man H vs. Drac (blood on chin) Drac steals/ forges letters Wolves eat lady Storm on the sea Gypsies betray H (letter) Count dead? H fights Drac (letters) Renfield = outsider Seward can’t understand R All vs. Drac w/o knowing Seward against R R locked away Seward against R Ch Man vs. Himself 8 9 10 Lucy vs sleepwalkin g Seward struggles with info Lucy vs. health 11 Lucy vs. health 12 Lucy fighting evil urges 13 VH fighting to save L Mina confused 14 Man vs. Nature Man vs. Society Lucy loses strength Lucy vs. sickness Van Helsing vs. nature to save L Wolf attack from zoo VH fighting L’s death L vs. death Mina vs. L’s death Renfield Man vs. unknown Man vs. Man “Dark man” with Lucy Drac starts feeding Lucy’s unknown Seward vs. R sickness Why transfusions? Wound? Mom vs. garlic Renfield breaks out Lucy fighting unknown inside Crucifix to fight ____? Mina scared about H VH vs Drac to save Lucy Mom vs. VH Arther vs. VH in kissing L VH vs. Lucy VH vs. servant M reads journal, now vs. D We’ll start today with the chapter 15 quiz. Please take out a half-sheet of paper and write your name 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. Why does Dr. S. get so angry at V.H. at the beginning of the chapter? What is V.H.’s plan to prove his theory about Lucy? What do Dr. S. and V.H. find when they first open Lucy’s coffin? How does Dr. S. try to explain what they see? What do they see “floating” through the graveyard later that night? What do they do with the child they find that night? What do they find when they return to the coffin the next day? What must they do to “kill” Lucy? How does Dr. S. feel about their plan after a good night’s sleep? How does Arthur initially (at first) react to V.H.’s plan? What is Lucy doing when she arrives again at the cemetery? 2. How has Lucy changed in her vampire state? (not about beauty/health) 3. Who hammers the stake that “kills” Lucy? 4. What happens to Lucy after the stake is driven into her heart? 5. What do Mina and Dr. Seward exchange (give to each other)? 6. How does Mina treat the men at the end of chapter 17? 1. Please title a clean sheet in your notes “Poetic Essay Revisions – Due Friday 4/10” Intro paragraph: What is the topic of your essay and why is it interesting? Consider giving a brief overview of what you'll be analyzing in your essay Historical analysis: What came before in terms of poetry, literature, art, or philosophy? How was your movement unique/different? How did poetry change after (google "influence of ________ poetry")? Why is it still famous? How do we still see it today (try "modern examples of _________")? Poetic analysis: Explore the reasons why your poem is a good exemplar (example of) of your movement. Use quotes from the poem to SHOW. (Remember: Topic sentence, explanation, quote, "This shows that _____ because______," transition) Conclusion: explain again why your movement is worth writing about, summarize the progression of poetic history and how/why your poem fits. 1. 2. 3. How do gender roles in Dracula reflect evolving Victorian gender roles and how do they support traditional gender roles? Does the epistolary writing (journals, letters, etc.) make Dracula more or less dramatic or scary? Is Stoker trying to make us more religious? Is Dracula a religious novel? Lucy – reinforces – Mina – subverts (goes against) tries to act tough, but also faints and cries – very emotional Dracula – subverts hiding from action – business during Lucy struggle Arthur – both focused on marriage helpful – takes care of Jonathan, comforts the others Jonathan – subverts pursues goals – studies shorthand works – teacher Mina – reinforces no job helpless less intelligent focused on men, getting married submits to Dracula cooks, cleans, housework Dracula – reinforces Satanic power – sexual metaphor Independently, please spend a few minutes writing a few things to keep in mind as you prepare to or write an essay. Avoid referencing yourself “I” “my” “me” or your reader “you” directly. Good (snappy) title Correct format (Times New Roman, 12, MLA Heading) Paragraphs 5-8 sentences Each paragraph has its own topic stay on topic Evidence/support from text (#) First sentence is catchy (hook) Strong thesis (What’s the point about the topic) Keep thesis in mind as you write Conclusion paragraph Proper spelling grammar (get a dictionary) autocorrect, google, read aloud, re-read, peer edit Strong vocabulary (good/bad – excellent/awful) DON’T PLAGIARIZE! Intro: Hook (Ask a question, Make a general statement, Quote about topic, interesting fact) explain the topic, background info Thesis – particular view ABOUT your topic Body Paragraphs Topic sentence – tell the reader what that paragraph is about supporting details, exploring topic of this paragraph Support from text (#) Explanation of why this example supports thesis Transition sentence – tells the reader this topic is done and bring them to the next topic Conclusions: Restate your thesis Summarize evidence/ what you talked about Final thought – ask a question, point the reader to different/related ideas, answer the “so what?” question (provide suggestions for reader’s life) Please have out a piece of paper or two and something to write with. To what extent does Dracula show the evolution of gender roles in Victorian England? Intro: Indent paragraphs Hook (Ask a question, Make a general statement, Quote about topic, interesting fact) explain the topic, background info Thesis – particular view ABOUT your topic 1. 2. Does the epistolary writing (journals, letters, etc.) make Dracula more or less dramatic or scary? Is Stoker trying to make us more religious? Is Dracula a religious novel? Body Paragraphs Topic sentence – tell the reader what this particular 1. 2. paragraph is about (which piece of evidence will you discuss?) supporting details, exploring topic of this paragraph Support from text (#) Explanation of why this example supports thesis Transition sentence – tells the reader this topic is done and bring them to the next topic Does the epistolary writing (journals, letters, etc.) make Dracula more or less dramatic or scary? Is Stoker trying to make us more religious? Is Dracula a religious novel? Prompt: Is your dog awesome? A good dog needs to be friendly. They are excited to see you, and don’t bite strangers. Wrigley is always happy to see you, and has never bitten anyone. This shows that my dog is awesome because he is the friendliest dog on the block. Friendliness is important, but so is the ability to do funny tricks. Funny tricks are great at parties. People like to see a dog play dead and roll over. My dog knows all kinds of tricks. He can even salsa dance! Only great dogs can salsa dance. Please turn in your body paragraphs from yesterday to the spinny chair. Then, write an MLA heading for this course on a clean sheet of paper. To what extent is Dracula an example of a gothic novel? Please take out a sheet of paper. Your header should include: Your Name Today’s Date 12A Dracula Ch. 15-17 Quiz 1. 2. 3. What does Dr. Vincent, at the hospital, believe made the marks on the children’s throats? What do Van Helsing and Dr. Seward find when they open Lucy’s coffin that night? What do Dr. Seward and Van Helsing discover when they return to Lucy’s tomb the following afternoon? Please take your seats and have your notes out from chapters 15-17. The Quiz will be passed out shortly. Head to www.classicreader.com Click the “Short Stories” tab Browse to one of the following authors by selecting theLouis first letter ofBierce their Sir last name. Edgar Allan Poe Robert Ambrose Arthur Conan Stevenson Doyle Nathaniel Hawthorne Oscar Wilde H. P. Lovecraft W. W. Jacobs Stephen King Saki (H. H. Munro) Ann Lemoine Anne Rice H. G. Wells Edith Wharton As you read through any short story by your chosen author, keep a list in your notes of gothic elements the author is employing. Make sure to take down (copy in your notes or cut and paste in an email) any quotes that show these gothic elements. Due Tomorrow: A short piece (2 paragraphs) on a commonality of elements between Dracula and the story you chose. What is the atmosphere created by this element? How is this element used in each piece of writing? Why is this element spooky, scary, or otherwise compelling?