Abbreviation rules Lessons for copyeditors By Jeff South VCU School of Mass Communications General rules Save space Make reading easier 2 Months without dates Always capitalize and write out: The election is in November. School starts in August. He hopes to graduate in December. It will start in January 2000. The battle ended in October 1866. If there’s just a month and a year, no comma! 3 Dates Abbreviate months of > 5 letters: Jan. 5, 1997 Feb. 28, 1864 Don’t use ordinal numbers like: Aug. 10, 2000 Feb. 2nd Sept. 9, 1999 Aug. 23rd Oct. 14, 1784 Dec. 12th Nov. 1, 1965 Dec. 22, 1696 4 Dates Write out months of 5 or fewer letters: March 30, 2000 April 5, 1974 Don’t use ordinal numbers like: May 26, 1998 March 10th June 12, 1863 May 1st July 31, 1997 June 23rd (But July Fourth is OK!) 5 Now you try! June 3rd June 3 They will visit in Oct. They will visit in October. December 7, 1941 Dec. 7, 1941 He graduated in May, 1997. He graduated in May 1997. 6 Now you try! Nov. 12th Nov. 12 January 1999 Correct. Which months are never abbreviated? March, April, May, June, July 7 Copy-edit The tax was scheduled to expire on January 15, 1999, but in August 1998, legislators passed a bill to extend the levy until July 1st, 2005. The tax was scheduled to expire on Jan. 15, 1999, but in August 1998, legislators passed a bill to extend the levy until July 1, 2005. 8 Days of the week Simple rule: Always write them out! Monday Tuesday Wednesday... 9 Places Write out states when they stand alone: She is from New Jersey. He was born in Alaska. Killer bees invaded Texas. 10 Places Abbreviate the state if: It’s preceded by a town or city The state has 6 or more letters Don’t abbreviate: Alaska, Hawaii, Idaho, Iowa, Maine, Ohio, Texas, Utah Check AP Style for state abbreviations AP doesn’t use the postal code abbreviations! 11 Places He is from San Mateo, Calif. The game will be in Morgan, W.Va. They met in Austin, Texas. She lives in Hilo, Hawaii. 12 Omit the state if... You write for a publication covering that state: A tornado flattened Hopewell today. The new city manager is from Norfolk. It’s a widely known city (See “Datelines” in the AP Stylebook.) The 1998 Olympics were in Atlanta. A hurricane hit Miami last year. 13 Always include the state if... The town straddles the state line: The meeting was held in Bristol, Va. There could be some confusion: After growing up in Springfield, Ill., he worked in Springfield, Va. 14 Now you try! They flew to San Francisco, Calif. They flew to San Francisco. She taught in Knoxville, Tennessee. She taught in Knoxville, Tenn. Anchorage, Alaska, is a beautiful place. Correct. 15 Now you try! A winter storm hit Ogden, UT. A winter storm hit Ogden, Utah. He is from Fairfax. Correct. The mine collapsed near Allentown, Pa. Correct. 16 Streets and addresses If it’s an exact address, abbreviate everything you can (the direction & “street,” “boulevard” and “avenue”): 901 W. Main St. 2005 Grove Ave. 70 Monument Blvd. If there’s no street address, spell out: He lives on Floyd Street. The building is on Monument Boulevard. 17 Streets and addresses Always write out “road,” “drive,” “circle” and “court.” 1067 Staples Mill Road 10215 Windbluff Drive 18 Now you try! 945 West Franklin Street 945 W. Franklin St. … on First Street in Richmond. Correct. It’s at 10532 West Broad St. It’s at 10532 W. Broad St. 19 Now you try! The city has condemned homes at 98 Cedar Rd., 7853 E. Hill St. and 309 Commerce Avenue. The city has condemned homes at 98 Cedar Road, 7853 E. Hill St. and 309 Commerce Ave. What’s your address? 20 Names and titles On first reference, use a person’s full name On subsequent references, use the last name only (for adults; for kids, use the first name) Generally, no courtesy titles (Mr., Mrs., Ms.) unless there’s confusion Use courtesy titles in a direct quote 21 Now you try! Mr. Tom Ferguson will speak. Tom Ferguson will speak. “Mrs. Allen will accompany me,” the candidate said. Correct. The Smiths both ate the shrimp, but only Mr. Smith got sick. “He was up all night,” Mrs. Smith said. Correct. 22 Names and titles If used directly before a name, abbreviate: Gov. Mark Warner Dr. Terry Oggel Lt. Gov. Tim Kaine Rep. Robert Scott Sen. John Warner Formal titles accompany only the full name. Example: Sen. Barbara Boxer, not Sen. Boxer. 23 Names and titles Don’t abbreviate: Superintendent Albert Williams Commonwealth’s Attorney David Hicks Professor Paula Otto Attorney General Mark Earley President Eugene Trani Chairman Yasser Arafat Formal titles accompany only the full name. Example: Delegate Viola Baskerville, not Delegate Baskerville. 24 Which titles to abbreviate? Professor No. District Attorney No. Governor Yes: Gov. President No. 25 Which titles to abbreviate? Lieutenant Governor Yes: Lt. Gov. Senator Yes: Sen. Congressman No, and try not to use it anyway. U.S. Representative Yes: U.S. Rep. 26 Names and titles the Rev. Always includes “the” the Rev. Billy Graham 27 Names and titles For state and federal legislators, put political party ID after name Use “R” or “D,” then a hyphen ... Then the state abbreviation (for members of Congress) or the city (for state legislators) 28 Names and titles Examples of state and federal legislators, on first reference: U.S. Sen. Edward Kennedy, D-Mass., … U.S. Rep. Newt Gingrich, R-Ga., … State Sen. John Watkins, R-Chesterfield, ... Delegate Emily Couric, D-Charlottesville, ... You can also write: Democratic Sen. Edward Kennedy of Massachusetts ... 29 Now you try! U.S. Sen. Joseph Lieberman, Dem.-Conn., is the vice presidential nominee. U.S. Sen. Joseph Lieberman, D-Conn., is the vice presidential nominee. Former U.S. Rep. Richard Cheney, R- Wyoming, is Bush’s running mate. Former U.S. Rep. Richard Cheney, R-Wyo., is Bush’s running mate. 30 Military titles See AP Stylebook Many titles are abbreviated Use titles only with full name 31 Military titles Abbreviate Gen. Col. Maj. Lt. Sgt. Adm. Cmdr. Pvt. Pfc. Spell out Warrant Officer Petty Officer Seaman Ensign Airman Partly spell out Staff Sgt. Lance Cpl. Rear Adm. 32 Now you try! the Reverend Jerry Falwell the Rev. Jerry Falwell Adm. Elizabeth Cross Correct. Prof. Ted Smith Professor Ted Smith former Senator Robert Dole, R-Kansas, ... former Sen. Robert Dole, R-Kan., ... 33 Periods in abbreviations Use periods if the abbreviation spells an unrelated word: c.o.d. - not cod (like the fish) U.S. - not US (like “Give US liberty!) U.N. - not UN (like UN-American) 34 Speaking of U.S. and U.N. Write out United States and United Nations when they are nouns Abbreviate them when they are adjectives In the United States ... … the U.S. Army … the U.N. peacekeepers at the United Nations today ... 35 Pop quiz! A (US / U.S. / United States) embargo A U.S. embargo A (UN / U.N. / United Nations) treaty A U.N. treaty Andrew Young served as (US / U.S. / United States) ambassador to the (UN / U.N. / United Nations). Andrew Young served as U.S. ambassador to the United Nations. … in the (US / U.S. / United States). … in the United States. 36 Periods in abbreviations Otherwise, no periods North Atlantic Treaty Organization > NATO American Medical Association > AMA Virginia Commonwealth University > VCU Federal Bureau of Investigation > FBI 37 Periods or not? The Virginia Education Association is known as the V.E.A. No periods: VEA The speed limit is 65 mph. Correct as is. No periods: mph The students used 35 mm cameras. Correct as is. No periods (and no hyphen either – just a space). Class started at 8 am. Need periods: at 8 a.m. 38 a.m. and p.m. Why does a.m. take periods? Because it does, so does p.m. 6 a.m. 7:45 p.m. 39 Academic degrees Lowercase when written out Uppercase and use periods when abbreviated master’s degree or M.A. medical degree or M.D. bachelor of arts or B.A. doctor of philosophy, doctoral degree, doctorate or Ph.D. 40 Copy-edit The United Nations resolution, passed at 3 A.M., called on the U.S. to intervene in Kosovo. The U.N. resolution, passed at 3 a.m., called on the United States to intervene in Kosovo. 41 Copy-edit Phil Oswald, Ph.D., published an article on UN treaties that were opposed by the U.S. Phil Oswald, Ph.D., published an article on U.N. treaties that were opposed by the United States. 42 Organizations Spell out first reference: Public Relations Society of America Abbreviate subsequent references: PRSA Some organizations can be abbreviated on first reference: NAACP, AFL-CIO, FBI 43 Organizations When an abbreviation is unfamiliar, use a shortened name of the organization Bureau of Foreign and Domestic Commerce > the bureau Office of Instructional Technology > the office 44 Now you try! Central Intelligence Agency CIA (or the agency) National Organization to Reform Marijuana Laws NORML (or the organization, the group) Drug Enforcement Agency DEA (or the agency) School of Mass Communications 45 the school Symbols Always write out cents (not ¢) and percent (not %) Always use numerals with cents and percent 5 cents, 50 cents, 92 cents, 1 cent 1 percent, 20 percent, 100 percent 46 Symbols Use $ if it accompanies a number: $3 … $10.99 … $2 billion Round sums, like clock hours, carry no zeros or punctuation: Average gasoline prices rose from $1 to $1.65. Spell out casual uses of money: The homeless man asked for a dollar. I gave him my two cents. 47 Now you try! The Washington Post costs $0.50. The Washington Post costs 50 cents. We paid several dollars for the book. Correct. That doesn’t make cents. That doesn’t make sense. The plane cost 1 million dollars. The plane cost $1 million. 48 Symbols Use “&” only when it’s part of a group’s name: Dow Jones & Co. Florida A&M 49 Miscellaneous Abbreviate time zones: Eastern Standard Time > EST No periods in call letters WCVE, WRVA Always spell out Fort and Mount Mount Vernon, Fort Pickett, Fort Worth, Mount Trashmore 50 Miscellaneous Abbreviate “Saint” when it is part of a proper noun (river, city, school, a holy person’s name) St. Paul, Va.; St. Lawrence River; St. Catherine’s School Never abbreviate Christmas 51 Miscellaneous Abbreviate Co. (company), Corp. (corporation), Ltd. (limited) and Inc. (incorporated) when they appear at the end of a company’s name: Reynolds Inc. Philip Morris Co. Circuit City Corp. 52 Now you try! Merry Xmas Merry Christmas Fort Lee Correct: Fort Lee. Mount Saint Helens Mount St. Helens 53 Now you try! Weyerhaeuser Company Weyerhaeuser Co. Westvaco Corporation Westvaco Corp. W.R.I.C. WRIC 54