DEFINITION ESSAY SCORING RUBRIC NAME _________________ SUPERIOR CONTENT /25 ORGANIZATION /15 STYLE /20 VISUAL/PICTURE /10 GRAMMAR/MECHANICS /10 CITATION FORMAT /10 WORKS CITED /10 GOOD INCONSISTENT INADEQUATE ___Strong topic with great depth ___Meets all prompt requirements ___Good topic ___Meets most prompt requirements ___Superficial topic ___Meets some prompt requirements ___Weak Topic ___Meets few prompt requirements ___Strong introduction which is inviting and highly interesting ___Provides reasons, elaborated details/facts beyond the obvious ___Uses varied or subtle transitions between ideas/paragraphs ___Uses effective examples, explanation or elaboration ___Uses logical arrangement of ideas ___Includes a strong conclusion; readdresses topic in interesting way ___Recognizable introduction ___Reasons, details/facts are general/obvious ___Uses good transitions ___Uses good examples or explanations ___Ideas may wander ___Includes a solid conclusion ___Attempts an introduction ___Reasons, details, facts are brief and not explained ___Uses ineffective or ordinary transitions ___Uses few weak examples and very little explanation ___Arrangement of ideas is stilted or random ___Weak conclusion which merely restates topic ___Abrupt beginning w/o introduction ___Reasons, details/facts are unclear or unrelated ___Rarely connects ideas ___Uses inaccurate, confusing or no examples/explanation ___Little or no attempt to establish order ___Ends abruptly with incomplete conclusion ___Is engaging ___Uses accurate, precise vocabulary appropriate for audience/purpose ___Uses active and precise verbs ___Uses figurative language, imagery, and/or striking language ___Is fluent, easy to read, using an effective variety of sentence beginnings, structures and length ___Uses and IDENTIFIES one cumulative sentence with 20 words ___Uses and IDENTIFIES one periodic sentence with 30 words ___Is occasionally engaging ___Uses accurate but general word choice ___Uses a mix of active and general word choice ___Uses a mix of active and general verbs ___Uses familiar words and some striking language ___Is generally fluent with occasional choppiness and awkward construction ___Uses a cumulative sentence with 15-20 words ___Uses a periodic sentence with 20-30 words ___Is somewhat bland ___Word choice may include errors in word usage ___Most verbs are imprecise and colorless ___Uses basic words and phrases ___Uses mostly simple sentences that begin and end the same way; may have many choppy or rambling sentences ___Uses a cumulative sentence with 5-15 words ___Uses a periodic sentence with 5-20 words ___Is bland ___Inaccurate or repetitive or inappropriate word choice ___Uses passive, imprecise colorless verbs ___Uses vague/limited language or frequent clichés ___Repetitive sentence structure; uses many fragments, run-ons ___No apparent cumulative sentence ___No apparent periodic sentence ___Uses an image that helps define the term. ___Image is relevant and effective ___Is correct ___Is usually correct ___Uses an image but seems somewhat irrelevant ___Image isn’t really effective in the definition ___Some evidence of proofreading ___Is occasionally correct ___No image apparent ___Is nearly error free ___Uses an image that superficially defines the term ___Image is connected and somewhat effective ___Has few errors ___Is correct ___Has few errors ___Inconsistent ___Inadequate/unacceptable ___Inadequate proofreading ___Is rarely correct DEFINITION ESSAY SCORING RUBRIC NAME _________________