The Odyssey Compare/Contrast Essay YATES 2011 Adapted from http://home.illicom.net/~sdunlavey/Odyssey%20compare_contrast%20essay.html As the final assignment in our unit on The Odyssey, I would like you to write a compare/contrast essay analyzing the similarities and differences between Homer's epic and the movie adaptation. Please focus your analysis on how the filmmakers adapted their work from Homer's. You need to list both similarities and differences, but really try to get down to the WHY of it all. WHY did he change certain things? WHY were others lifted directly from the original text? HOW did the filmmakers adapt Homer's vision of Odysseus’ hero’s journey to create their own Odysseus? Please start with an attention-getting introduction including a thesis statement. Then organize your argument around your thesis statement using a TBTY style format, putting like things together and being sure to elaborate on your points. Finish with a conclusion that summarizes your argument, restates your thesis, and provides a final thought. Similarities Differences Why/ How Directions: list specific examples of similarities between the Odysseus’ journey in the text and Odysseus in the movie version of the Odyssey Choose 3 from your notes Directions: list specific examples of differences between the Odysseus’ journey in the text and Odysseus in the movie version of the Odyssey Choose 3 from your notes Directions: Explain why you think the director created these similarities and differences. Discuss your 6 similarities and differences here 1 4 1 2 3 2 5 4 5 3 6 6 This essay should be two to four pages in length, typed, and double-spaced. When you use specific examples and citations from the book (and you should) please provide the page number in parentheses. Be sure to proofread carefully! Assignment rUBRIC Poor (1) Essay demonstrates an incomplete writing process: rough draft and final draft Fair (2) Essay demonstrates the some portions of the writing process: typed rough draft, final draft Good 3) Essay demonstrates most sections of the writing process: notes, graphic organizer pre-write, typed rough draft, and a final draft. Thesis Poor Thesis neither states position, nor does it provide specific points to be discussed in the essay. OR There is no identifiable thesis. Fair Thesis states position, but does not provide specific points from the text or film to be compared or contrasted. Good Thesis states position and provides specific points from the text and film for either comparison or contrast, but not both. Compare Contrast Poor All of the comparisons and differences are not supported by quotes or discussion. OR All comparisons and contrasts are minor details from the text and film that do not warrant much discussion. Fair Some of the comparisons and differences are minor details from the text that are loosely connected to quotes or discussion. Good Both comparisons and contrasts go beyond the obvious differences and similarities between the text and film. The essay has either in-depth discussion or quotes to support comparisons and differences Excellent Both the comparisons and contrasts go beyond the obvious differences and similarities between the text and film. Both indepth explanation and quotes are used to support comparisons and differences. Final Draft Poor Essay demonstrates little knowledge of the text and film and provides no analysis. The essay does not provide adequate development although diff/sim. are stated. Fair Essay demonstrates some knowledge of the text and film that provides little analysis. The points of development and the overall essay can be better organized. Good Essay demonstrates a general knowledge of the text and film that provides evidence of some analysis that may lack depth. The essay is organized in a logical sequence. Excellent Essay demonstrates knowledge of both the film and the text that provides evidence of cogent analysis with well-developed paragraphs. The overall essay is both well organized and cohesive. Writing Process Excellent (4) Essay demonstrates all sections of the writing process: notes, graphic organizer pre-write, typed rough draft with teacher comments, and a final draft. Excellent Thesis states position and provides specific points from the text and film that will be compared and contrasted in the essay.