Jonathan Struck Rafael Hidalgo Bryanna Weed Lisa Vo 2A 9/5/13 Class Picture Summary: The first chapter of this book, Class Picture, gives an introduction to the story; the information given sets the rest of the novel in place. First, the narrator describes the school. Most important being the writing competitions that take place in it. Then, he introduces to us Bill, George, Purcell, Big Jeff, and Dean Makepeace. These are the characters that interact and shape the story with the narrator. All besides Dean Makepeace are the narrator’s competitors for getting a chance to meet the visiting authors through the competitions. Through his descriptions of people, his school, and Troubadour, the reader gets to understand the narrator; notably, his thought process and his position. For example, him not inviting other students to get published in Troubadour because that would be competition to his work. Or, when he talks about literature lovers you can tell he will be bias. He also displays his yearning to meet one of the visiting authors so that he could be accepted; basically, he thinks that by meeting a visiting author he will become well-known like them. The narrator brings up that his school is snobby and they are extremely focused on their subjects. But, he explains that he admires this attitude and that since there are no girls to compete for, other things are feminized and contested for. Quotes: “There was a tradition at my school by which one boy was granted a private audience with each visiting writer” (Wolff 6). This quote is significant because it is basically what the whole book is about. The narrator wanting to meet a famous writer and get an “in”, in the writing community. “That made me wonder if maybe he’d never meant to seem not Jewish- if my surprise was simply the effect of my own narrowness and anxiety” (Wolff 12). This quote is significant because it shows that the narrator is understanding and takes blame, rather than place it. “Bill was a contender” (Wolff 12). This quote is significant because it shows the type of relationship the narrator and Bill have even after the Jewish thing. On Fire Quotes: “I’d sneaked the occasional gasper since eighth grade but at school it became an obsession” (Wolff 30). This quote is significant because it shows how he has self-control and can stop something he is addicted to when he needs to. “Then I almost got caught” (Wolff 30). This quote is significant because when the other kid got caught and kicked out, it gave the narrator the motivation to stop smoking. “I wish they’d kick him out” (Wolff 34). This quote is significant because it shows how little Jeff does not like his brother and that there will be conflicts between the two for the rest of the book. FOCUS 3: Narrative and Point of View Discussion: The narrator is narrow minded. The narrator is not likable. Some aspects of the narrator are admirable. The narrator’s assumptions about himself and others do not ring true. Writing Exercise: Bill- Oh, him? He wasn't a bad guy. It was too bad, him getting kicked out; things could have been better between us. Anyways, yeah, we were friends. He had his secrets, but I had mine too. I think that's why we did well as roommates-we didn't share them between ourselves or with others. We got along fine; we shared some laughs; we were almost friends, but not quite there yet. If I had to sum him up, I’d say he was easy to get along with, passionate, but ignorant. Alyssa Kunz Filemon Chavez Ms. Rosenbaum 2A September 5, 2013 “Frost” Chapter Summary: At the beginning of the chapter, George Kellogg won the audience with Robert Frost. At first, the narrator thinks that George’s poem, entitled “First Frost”, is meant to be satiric, but George tells him that it was meant to be serious. George was worried that Frost thought that he was “having fun at his expense” (Wolff 40). Some of the boy’s felt that George’s poem should not have been picked because they considered it a ‘take-off’. Robert Frost arrived during dinner and read to the boys in the chapel that night. While in the chapel, Frost talks about a quote by Percy Shelley; “…Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of mankind” (Wolff 48). Frost also compliments George on his poem on how he must have had fun writing it. Frost then reads poems to the boys and takes questions at the end. When leaving the chapel, the narrator and George are talking and George tells him that he’s considering not meeting with Frost. The narrator thinks that George is being ridiculous and that he’s missing the chance of a lifetime. The narrator tells George that he would take his place to meet with Robert Frost and this makes George mad. George returns to his room but the narrator heads to Blaine Hall with the rest of the boys, hoping to see Frost there. Frost never shows up, but the boys talk to Mrs. Ramsey and find out that the next Author is supposed to be Ayn Rand. Some of the teachers feel that Ayn Rand should not be a guest. The next day, the narrator meets with George and finds out that George did meet with Frost for half an hour. George told the narrator that Frost advised him that he was wasting his time in school and that he should go to Kamchatka or Brazil. Frost never got to explain why he thought George should go to these places. That night, the narrator went to the library to look up Kamchatka and Brazil but he still could not figure out why Frost thought a young writer should visit these places. 3 Significant Quotes: 1. “The day after John F. Kennedy won the presidency, George Kellogg won the audience with Robert Frost.” (Wolff 39). This quote is significant to this chapter because the chapter is about Robert Frost visiting the school and talking with the winner of the contest. 2. “‘Did you think I was… How did Mr. Frost put it- having fun at his expense?’ ‘Well, I guess you could read it in that way.’ ‘You could?’ ‘It’s possible.’ ‘Oh, jeez.’ He slumped like a puppet, taking no care to hide his distress.” (Wolff 40 – 41). This quote is significant because it lets the reader know that Frost and the students are reading George’s poem in a different way than he intended. 3. “Mr. Frost told me I was wasting my time in school. He said I should go to Kamchatka. Or Brazil.” (Wolff 59). This quote is significant because it shows the reader how Frost feels about school and that Frost feels the young writers should be spending their time elsewhere, out in the world. Focus Eight: Discussion Activities: To the boys at the school, the masters seem like “sure and finished men”. The boys respect their masters and think of them very highly. In the last section of the novel, we can see that Makepeace was very aware that the boys thought of him so highly when he was a master at the school. But when he did not work there, people saw him as just a regular man. Makepeace missed how the boys looked up to him and wished to return. This shows how even the Deans wish to belong (Belonging being a larger them of the novel). I think the theme of Belonging is the most important issue in the novel. The characters’ desire to “belong” is very prevalent throughout the book. The narrator hides things about himself from his schoolmates so that he would belong. We also find out that his roommate Bill White had been hiding things about himself as well. Even Dean Makepeace had been hiding the truth about Hemmingway. Towards the end, the reader can see that Makepeace desires to belong at a school again; “He missed all of that, and knowing the people around him, and being known. He missed a certain shy glance in which he saw respect and warmth and even some wonder. Arch wanted that back, as much as the rest. He wanted it all back” (Wolff 192). Writing Exercise: In the book Old School, one major turning point is when he finds a short story called “Summer Dance”. He comes upon this story when he was in George’s office late one night. He had been writing rejection notes to boys who had submitted stories to be published in the school journal. He took a break and began looking through old editions of Troubadors from other schools. The stories all seemed the same until he came upon one from Miss Cobb’s school. It was entitled “Summer Dance”. He connects with the story within the first few lines where it said “I hope nobody saw me pick up the cigarette off the sidewalk.” He continues reading and he feels as though the author had been writing about his life. He can connect with the narrator in the story from the typing classes to escaping the needy parents, as well as being Jewish. He relates to the story in so many ways that decides to copy the story, changing names and places. He submits the story to the contest and ends up winning. Sarah Smith, Nakeema Thomas, Ravindra Sookchand, Jessica Sturgill Ms. Rosenbaum Dual Enrollment English Due: 09-05-13 Chapters: Ubermensch & Slice of Life Questions: Discuss the way the narrator describes Ayn Rand. How does he feel about her before he meets her? Does his viewpoint change after meeting her? If he fair? What instances of “weakness or ignorance” has the narrator displayed up to this point? What capacity has he shown to learn from his experiences and grow in understanding and depth of character? Mr. Rice did not want to poison the innocents against her. He probably was not too fond of her. The narrator feels that Ayn Rand was “as bad as she was popular” and that she was very popular. The narrator also tried reading a few pages of the fountainhead for laughs, but forgot to laugh. He might have not enjoyed it. Ayn Rand’s book must have left an impact on him because he could not put it down, instead he bought it. The narrator thinks that Ayn Rand was okay, that she had some interesting ideas. Yes the narrators view point changes drastically after meeting Ayn Rand were once he was so enthralled with her idea of being selfish and of being an objectivist. But after hearing her speech to the boys and seeing her he realizes that she is a self-center hypocrite and that all the people in her stories never showed weakness an never have any problem’s. He knew then that Ayn Rand’s stories were just fanciful fiction. Weakness he has shown up to this point and ignorance was that he allows himself to be blinded by her ides and not see the good that his grandparents were to come and take care of him while he’s sick. He also realizes that he judge them unfairly. His character has grown in how he sees people and e learns to appreciate the kindness they show to him. Summary: Ubermensch begins by the narrator contemplating his submission essay, and knowing he will soon be meeting with Ayn Rand so he grabs a copy of The Foutainhead to get a sense of Rand’s writings. After reading the book he felt as if he had caged power, straining like a dammed-up river to break loose and crush every impediment to free its running. He then returned to school three or four days earlier than most of the students because he wanted to get a jump on his competition story. After reading The Fountainhead four times, he still hadn’t started his paper. He then ended up in the infirmary for almost two weeks with influenza, and had completely missed out on the competition. Come to find out, that Big Jeff had won. Purcell gives the Narrator a long summary of what Big Jeff had wrote about, and that he had won the competition because the blood of an artist runs though Big Jeff’s veins. Ayn and the Narrator talk about her books, and other writers including Hemingway, much to Rand’s disgust. Slice of life then begins with “Who is John Galt?” After, the narrator begins to rant about Ayn Rand, and explains that every time he reads something of hers he can’t help but hear her voice. He explains how shocked he was to find out how Ayn Rand felt about Hemingway, the narrator’s favorite writer. At school, they say you must draw a line between writers and if you like one, you must not like the other, but he had avoided the practice. He had always loved Hemingway’s writings mostly because of the legend of his life. The Narrator always found that he was somehow mimicking Hemingway’s writings, because he looked up to him so much. Dean Makepeace, at the end of the chapter, told all of the boys that Hemingway would be the next visiting writer, and the narrator had a feeling he would writing the winning story. Quotes from Ubermensch: Quote: “I was discovering the force of my will. To read The Fountainhead was to feel this caged power, straining liked a damned up river to break loose and crush every impediment to its free running.” (Wolff, 68) Significance: The significance of this quote, is when the narrator begins to read The Fountainhead, he begins to realize his greater potential. By realizing this, he wants to focus solely on himself and that what he wants will be achieved. Quote: “The Fountainhead made me alert to the smallest surrenders of will.” (Wolff, 81) Significance: After reading The Fountainhead, the narrator takes in Ayn Rand’s value on life. In the process of doing this, he takes simple things, (such as a man fitting another for shoes) as man putting the needs of others over themselves. Quote: “Ah, your meek little hearts are afraid to show themselves. Shame on you! You must never be meek, the meek shall inherit nothing but a boot on the neck. You must be bold! (Wolff 81). Significance: By hearing Ayn Rand say this in person, the narrator’s eyes are now open to see how selfish and narcissistic Rand’s values are. In hearing this, the narrator realizes how he been acting and makes himself revert to his previous values. Quotes from Slice of Life: Quote: “The problem was that I could no longer read Ayn Rand’s sentences without hearing her voice. And hearing her voice, I saw her face; to be exact, the face she’d turned on me when I sneezed” (Wolff 67). Significance: Ayn Rand left a huge impact on the way the narrator views her. From the moment he sneezed all he could think about is the face she gave him, and the tone of voice she used. He is forever scarred. Quote: “This was a spiritual disgust, and it forced on me a vision of the poor specimen under scrutiny, chapped lips, damp white face, rheumy eyes, and all she made me feel that to be sick was contemptible” (Wolff 67). Significance: This quote shows how Ayn Rand has the ability to make someone feel so small when they are already feeling down. The word contemptible means to deserving contempt, despicable. It helps to tie the whole quote together. Quote: “her revulsion was as naked as a child’s and it continued to show itself in the cold, offended tone she used with him” (Wolff 68). Significance: This is how Ayn Rand reacted to the narrator’s sneeze, and how it impacted him so badly. She is not a forgiving person, since she continued to speak in a harsh offended tone. He was baffled. Writing Exercise: In Old School, the narrator has several friends that he encounters throughout the course of the book. One of his friends, Jeff Purcell (or Little Jeff as the narrator calls him) is one character that when compared to the narrator, can be seen as an opposite to the narrator. The personalities of the two characters range on the opposite ends of the spectrum. The narrator can be perceived as a shy type of person who only wants to have some sort of social strength. Purcell can be viewed as a person who is proud of his background, but can be seen as contempt of others. How the two characters view writing is another way to contrast them. The narrator has a high value for writing. He looks at writers such as Robert Frost and Ernest Hemingway with respect. Purcell however does not appreciate writing as much as the narrator does and would at times argue against them. A final viewpoint to observe is how the characters act throughout the novel. The narrator rarely interacts with other people besides his friends and is a person who tends to stay under the radar. Purcell is a very outgoing type of person who is willing to rebel against established rules and curfews. Overall, the personality, thoughts and actions of Jeff Purcell can make readers easily categorize him as a complete foil to the narrator. Purcell is a rebellious and sometimes snobbish character that makes the narrator question himself: “why am I friends with him?” The fate of Purcell makes the narrator look better by default. Jordan Hinkle, Michael Smith, Lindsey Whittington Ms. Rosenbaum Dual Enrollment English – 2A 9/5/13 In “The Forked Tongue” the narrator talks about Purcell skipping chapel daily and refusing to go. He was worried for him, and believed that eventually Purcell would be kicked out of school if he missed a certain amount of days. He simply did not care because a diploma from the school would open no doors for him that were not already open. This brought up the upcoming due date of the next story deadline and tells about how his fellow students are coming along. Before the narrator would start his story he wanted to finish writing Troubadour. Finally on the last night, he put it to rest and started on his story. He sat for hours and still did not have clue on what he would write about. He then came across a story in the library and began reading and became very interested. He started writing the same story but with his personal experiences like it was his own piece of work. In “When in Disgrace with Fortune” the narrator finds out from Mr. Ramsey that his story had been picked by Ernest Hemingway. A few days after the news was out, the narrator was told to report to the dean’s office. When he walked in he saw the headmaster, Mr. Ramsey, Mr. Lambert, and the president of the Student Honor Council. They explained why he was called in and it was for plagiarizing his story. They told him that his bags were already packed and that Mr. Ramsey would drive him to the train station. Once they got there, Mr. Ramsey waited with him, gave him a pack of cigarettes and sent him on his way. “One must, above all, endure”(Wolff 107). This quote is significant because all the students knew that the greatest of living writers would soon be among all of them. “Krebs acquired the nausea in regard to experience that is the result of untruth or exaggeration… In this way he lost everything” (Wolff 110). This quote is from one of Hemingway’s stories and it is significant because the narrator would type out all his stories to try and get the feel of writing of writing a great story. “I hope nobody saw me…bus pulled up” (Wolff 122). This quote is from “Summer Dance”, the story that the narrator got caught for plagiarizing. “You can tell your boy…sermon for today” (Wolff 136). This quote is from the interview with Hemingway that was put in the school newspaper. This article is him talking about the narrators story. “I hope nobody saw me pick up the cigarette butt” (Wolff 143). This quote is significant because it was the first line he saw when the headmaster put the story in front of him. “took out In Our Time…smoking car” (Wolff 152) This quote s significant because when he was in school he had to quit smoking but since he got kicked out, it does not matter whether or not he smokes. Focus Five Metaphor – “There are a lot of cats in this story” (Wolff 113). This metaphor helped shed a light on this story by using a term that people used a long time ago. The cats they are referring to is like dudes, so by using this term he is making it sound more like the times that he grew up in. Simile – “…their shirt collars seemed to float like lights on a hazy sea” (Wolff 115). This was a simile that was comparing the shirt collars of the students to lights on a hazy sea. It adds more detail and imagery for the readers so they can picture the image that he was trying to paint in our head. Metaphor – “Now darling don’t be such a stick” (Wolff 116). This is a metaphor that is comparing the guy to a stick, as if she were calling him stubborn. It makes the reading more interesting and giving it more of an old time feel by using an old time expression. Figurative language is used in the pages 119-121 during the editorial meeting. The first example of figurative language used in these three pages was “Bulldog Buckles”, which was said by Bill. Bulldog buckles was an example of alliteration. Alliteration is the occurrence of the same letter. Speaking with a “forked tongue” is an example of a mixed metaphor. A mixed metaphor is a combination between two or more incompatible metaphors, which produces a ridiculous effect. Another use of figurative language is alliteration. This alliteration has “s” in the beginning. This alliteration is “sanctum sanctorum”. “Apparently abandoned” is another use of figurative language, which is alliteration. “What vein of acid knowledge had he struck” is personification. The narrator gave knowledge a physical trait. Summaries One for the Books The narrator was in search for a job, particularly a reporter, but no paper would even hire him as a copyboy with his qualifications. He landed a job busing table and got a half a bedroom apartment. Once he got settled in he was on a mission to meet the girl (Susan Friedman) who wrote the original copy of “Summers Dance” and have dinner with her. The narrator got a hold of her and let her in on the whole story about how he stole her short story and decided to visit her in person. Once they finally met both of them were caught off guard, they did not expect what they saw. After the dinner, Susan paid the bill and the narrator tried his best to convince her to get back into writing, but Susan’s opinion towards writing was a lot different from the narrator. She believed that writing makes people selfish and does not do any good. Then she left the narrator half-drunk but in deep thought about what she had said. Bulletin Thought the narrator had been kicked out of the school, he was not forgotten. The boys who were currently attending the school still sent the narrator bulletins informing him of upcoming games, concerts, and reunions. In one of the bulletins, there was a memorial written for Dean Makepeace that told the reader of both the dean’s death and marriage. He married on of the schools secretaries not too long before dying of a heart attack. Dean Makepeace was thought of as a child. This helped the Ramsey's out in their marriage. Without him, their marriage never would have lasted as long as it did. Quotes One for the Books “For a writer there is no such thing as an exemplary life” (Wolff 156). The narrator’s life has always been this crazy mess. In this chapter while he is explaining his life after his incident at his school, in which this quote perfectly summarized the chapter. He’s never had a constant in his life, especially as a writer. “You don’t write? Not for years. That’s sad. Not at all” (Wolff 163) The narrator is nervous about meeting the girl he plagiarized the story from. However he thought her story was amazing enough for her to keep writing. Writing is still a big part of his life. You can see how people have moved on and he has not. “It just cuts you off and makes you selfish and doesn’t really to any good” (Wolff 163). This quote was said by Susan in response to the narrator telling her that she should continue writing. It’s ironic because the narrator getting kicked out of school came from writing and copying her paper. In a way this quote is describing the narrator’s life and personality. Bulletin “Memory is a dream to begin with, and what I had was a dream of memory, not to be put to the test” (Wolff 169). The significance of this quote is that the narrator remembers his past of the school, and how it was for him while he attended. Things did not go the way he had probably envisioned it would and because of this it makes him angry to look back. Although he liked the school and was proud to be a part of it, the fact that he got kicked out makes him angry and bitter. “For a moment I considered going on to the elevator, but there are limits to anyone’s cowardice and instead I waited until he finished his business at the desk” (Wolff 170). This quote was significant in the way that he was able to stand up to his fears. He rejected going back to the school for a visit and now Mr. Ramsey was in front of him. For the narrator staying and waiting meant that he had changed and was now going to stop hiding from his past and now face it. “I didn’t know I was waiting for it, though I must have been” (Wolff 168). The significance behind this quote was that although the narrator was kicked out of the school, he was still hoping to get a letter of invitation. In his heart he truly wanted to be invited, but he couldn’t power himself to actually go. Focus Six: Symbols Writing Exercise My favorite movie would have to be Kicking and Screaming because it was funny and very entertaining. It appealed to me because I play soccer and practically anything that relates to soccer can catch my attention. The symbol in this movie is the coach figure. In the movie, the main character, Phil, has dealt with his father and his competitiveness. Once Phil became a coach of his son’s soccer team, he soon began to realize that he was acting a lot like his father used to. When he had this realization, he changed his way to being a better coach to his players, and most importantly, his son. Discussion Activity One of the narrator’s favorite writers was Hemingway because of the reliability to his stories. Another reason he enjoyed Hemingway’s writing was because of the characters and how they sometimes reflected him and how Hemingway used it to talk about his life through a character. The narrator relates to the character so much he states “You saw everything Nick did, precise, almost fussy descriptions that most writers would’ve left out.” Throughout the book we understand that the narrator believes he is misunderstood and feels the need to hide his Jewish background. When he came upon this story it was like they were talking about him and this was his way to tell his classmates what his life was really like. Relating to the story in so many ways, he believed that that story was his. Mikala Armioia McKenzie Liskey Edgar Granados Terrell Williams 05 September 2013 “Master” 2A Discussion Activity In Old School Mr. Ramsey said, “Finally, one does want to be known” which opens up why Dean Makepeace held his secrets. This exact line is what slowly unpeels the reasoning of why the narrator did as he did. It applies to the narrator because he defends his inner Jewish roots because of how he sees them as outsiders. Even in the face of his roommate who is Jewish, he never reveals it for a second. But the narrator breaks out of his guarded shell while plagiarizing “Summer Dance”. The narrator “Finally [wants to be known]”. Even knowing the risks the narrator submits his story that he stole and revealed a piece of his inner Jewish roots as a boy with a Jewish name in the story. The narrator wanted to be known, he no longer wanted to hold secrets that plagued him so. Even at the cost of his very privileged school and university, he gave it all up just to be known. The narrator’s story is similar to that of Dean Makepeace in the way they both lied. Makepeace had the story of his time in the war spent with Hemingway and earned some respect that he didn’t deserve. The narrator knew he was Jewish and held in his beliefs to fit in with the school knowing how Jewish people were treated during that time. The resignation they had was both different Makepeace was sent out by himself and the narrator was kicked out for plagiarism. Both of them had the opportunity to come back to the school just in different ways. Makepeace could have returned as the dean and the narrator had the chance to come back and speak to the incoming students. Writing Exercise When the narrator steals the story, I believe that he does not have an unconscious desire to be expelled from school or exposed as fraud. However, when this happens the narrator appears to not be concerned because he does nothing to fight it, or defend himself. When he was first caught by Goss and Ramsey, the narrator attempted to claim the writing as his own, but he slowly draws back and admits that it is not his. I also believe that his expulsion can be considered a good thing because he did become a great writer without being at the school. The narrator shows that you can do great things all by yourself. Summary The beginning of the chapter starts with the story of Dean Makepeace and his unknown relationship with Earnest Hemingway. The story originally told about how they were both injured in the war and met later on. He was portrayed as a hero and students never really questioned his decisions. The chapter also talks about his early teaching and how he was unsure about how far he wanted to take that opportunity. His relationship with his wife was interesting they stopped living together and hardly had contact with each other. He did however send her loans whenever she was in a tough spot. When she was killed he was not told until two months after and proceeded to cremate her body. He did not want to send a student home for violating the honor code. He felt like a hypocrite because he, himself, once violated the honor code. After he resigned, he went to live with his sister. He only lived with her for a few weeks at a time. He spent a lot of his time making trips. He went many places including, visiting the columbarium where Helen’s ashes were buried. He regretted quitting his job, but he didn’t know how to undo what he had already done. He wrote Ramsey a letter telling him that he had made a terrible mistake and would come back if given the chance. Arch then wrote the headmaster asking for a job at the school. The headmaster replied and said that he hoped that arch would decide to come back. Quotes “He knew that his limp interested the boys, but he didn’t talk about it because he disliked recalling his panic and incompetence,” (Wolff 180). o The significance of this quote is that it gives insight in the inner secrets, lying by omission. “The masters themselves – none of whom actually made it to Europe during the war, though some had been in uniform – treated him from the beginning with a respect it would have taken anyone else years to squeeze out of them,” (Wolff 180). o Arch withheld his lies knowing and breaking the honor code that he held so dear, this reveals Makepeace’s inner shame and reveals why he left at the expulsion of our narrator. “Unrecognized, he had become a ghost, even to himself,” (Wolff 191). o Arch let all his silence take over and made him the false literary deity that they all held.