Elements of A type of literature that expresses ideas, feelings, or tells a story in a specific form (usually using lines and stanzas) The Elements of Poetry Poetry is hard to define. Even poets argue among themselves about what makes a poem a poem. There are some common characteristics, however, that we can use to help us differentiate between poetry and prose. It should look like a poem, meaning that lines don’t run to the margins. Some lines are not even sentences. There are usually some musical devices that give the poem a songlike, lyrical quality. Images are conveyed through sensory details and figurative language. The poem has some form to hold it together. Some poems actually have a prescribed form like haikus and sonnets. The poem has some meaning, image or emotion it wants to share with the reader. To critically analyze a poem, we must look at its elements and see what they are doing to the poem. Then we can infer a meaning to it. The following slides will take us through the elements so that we can recognize them, and then we will try to put it all together and analyze the meaning of the poem. Form Form is the structure of the poem. Any type of writing must have something to hold it together. The structure can be created through many means: meter, stanza, rhyme scheme, or set patterns of poetry like sonnet, haiku , concrete, and others. Stanza A stanza in poetry is like a paragraph in prose. The author divides the poem by grouping words into stanzas. We can often see the structure of the poem by the author’s use of stanza. Stanza •A unit of lines grouped together • •Similar to a paragraph in prose Couplet- •A stanza consisting of two lines that rhyme Quatrain - •A stanza consisting of four lines Imagery Imagery is the senses the poem evokes in the reader. Imagery puts the reader in the poem. It helps the reader to “see” the poem. The tools of imagery are Senses : sound, sight, touch, smell, taste, and emotion. Figurative language : metaphor, simile, personification, hyperbole, etc. Compare/Contrast Example: “Continuous as the stars that shine and twinkle on the milky way” Sensory details Sensory details touch the five senses. They make the poem vivid to the reader. Let’s look at the sensory details in the poem “Those Winter Sundays.” Those Winter Sundays Sundays too my father got up early and put his clothes on in the blue black cold, then with cracked hands that ached from labor in the weekday weather made banked fires blaze. No one ever thanked him. I’d wake and hear the cold splintering, breaking. When the rooms were warm, he’d call, and slowly I would rise and dress, fearing the chronic angers of that house, speaking indifferently to him, who had driven out the cold and polished my good shoes as well. What did I know, what did I know of love’s austere and lonely offices? Robert Hayden Trees splintering and breaking Sound Smell Sight Those Winter Sundays Taste Touch cracked Hands ached In “Those Winter Sundays” Hayden has caused us to experience several senses. “…[B]lueblack cold” certainly makes us feel how cold it was. When the father’s hands are described as “cracked hands that ached” we can feel the roughness. He describes the cold “splintering and breaking.” We can hear the trees and ice crack. And then the rooms “were warm” when the boy got up. We know how that feels on a cold day. When the boy fears “the chronic angers of that house” and when he speaks “indifferently to him” we know what emotions the boy is feeling. Hayden has caused us to feel cold, cracked hands and warm rooms. We hear splintering and breaking and feel anger and indifference. These sensory details make the poem come alive to us and help us to feel what the boy felt on those winter Sundays. Figurative Language Figurative language is words not meant to be taken literally. The words are symbolic. We know these images as metaphor, simile, personification, hyperbole, and others. Because the poet is comparing a less familiar object to a common one, the comparison makes the familiar image stronger. Figurative Language Metaphor Direct Metaphor Implied Metaphor Simile Simile Personification Love is Blind Winds of Change I Smell a Rat You’re Ice cold Light of My Life What Is A Metaphor? Apple of my eye Heart of stone The Sweet Smell of Success The World Is a Stage… Bite the Bullet Rolling in Dough Let the Cat Out of the Bag True Definition of Metaphors Makes Comparisons Between Two Unrelated Subjects Expands the Sense and Clarifies Meaning Metaphor/Simile Metaphors and similes compare something in the poem to something familiar outside the poem. Making the connection requires background knowledge for the metaphor/simile to be meaningful to the reader. Metaphor Direct Metaphor Comparing two unlike objects or ideas My love is a rose I item becomes the other item… Metaphor, Continued Indirect metaphor - An indirect comparison between two unlike things. “My love has a rosy bloom” I item has characteristics of the 2nd item Look at the metaphors in the poem, “frost.” Frost How does The plain Transparency Of water Sprout these Lacy fronds And plumes And tendrils? And where, Before windowPanes, did They root Their lush forests, Their cold Silver jungles? The author of this poem compared the frost on a window to the lacy fronds, plumes, and tendrils of a fern. In the last stanza she has expanded the comparison to “crystal forests” and “silver jungles.” Let us picture that in our minds. Can we “see” the frost on the window? Why are Metaphors Significant in Poetry? Symbolism Concise Language Makes Language Livelier Writers Use Them Without Stating Obvious Gives Words New Meaning Simile A comparison using like or as “Life is like a box of chocolates” Personification Giving human qualities to an inanimate object “The moon smiled down on the lovers” Personification When an author uses personification, he gives human characteristics to a non-human object. Look at the human characteristics used by Howard Nemerov in his poem “The Vacuum.” Also notice how personification reveals the speaker’s attitude toward housekeeping. The Vacuum The house is quiet now The vacuum cleaner sulks in the corner closet, Its bag limp as a stopped lung, its mouth Grinning into the floor, maybe at my Slovenly life, my dog-dead youth. I’ve lived this way long enough, But when my old woman died her soul Went into that vacuum cleaner, and I can’t bear To see the bag swell like a belly, eating the dust And the woolen mice, and begin to howl Because there is old filth everywhere She used to crawl, in corner and under the stair. I know now how life is cheap as dirt, And still the hungry, angry heart Hangs on and howls, biting at air. Hyperbole/ Exaggeration The poet uses hyperbole to overstate something to reveal the truth. In a poem called “Sow” Sylvia Plath describes how much the sow eats. She writes, “Of kitchen slops and, stomaching no constraint,/ Proceeded to swill/ The seven seas and every earthquaking continent.” How much did the sow eat? Idiom An expression where the literal meaning of the words is not the meaning of the expression. It means something other than what it actually says. Ex. It’s raining cats and dogs. Music The poet uses musical devices to make the poem song-like. In fact, some poems are/were songs. The musical devices we will discuss, and be responsible for, are onomatopoeia, rhythm, rhyme, letters, repetition, pause, and enjambment. Sound Techniques Rhyme Scheme Alliteration Onomatopoeia Music The poet uses musical devices to make the poem song-like. In fact, some poems are/were songs. The musical devices we will discuss, and be responsible for, are onomatopoeia, rhythm, FREE VERSE POETRY Does NOT have rhyme. Free verse poetry is very conversational sounds like someone talking with you. A more modern type of poetry. BLANK VERSE POETRY from Julius Ceasar Written in lines of iambic pentameter, but does NOT use end rhyme. Cowards die many times before their deaths; The valiant never taste of death but once. Of all the wonders that I yet have heard, It seems to me most strange that men should fear; Seeing that death, a necessary end, Will come when it will come. Pattern Some poems are written in a set form like sonnets, haikus, pantoums, limericks, concrete, etc. These patterns sometimes require a regular rhyme scheme or meter; or number of syllables or lines. Meter Meter is the set pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables in a line of poetry. The main meter patterns are Iambic -- U/ (one foot) Trochee - /U Anapest -- UU/ Dactyl -- //U Iambic Iambic is the most common pattern of meter since it is the way we generally talk . It is the unstressed/stressed syllable pattern. Here is an example of iambic lines: Sweet day, so cool, so calm, so bright, (/U|U/|U/|U/) The bridal of the earth and sky; (U/|U/|U/|U/) The dew shall weep thy fall to night, (U/|U/|U/|U/) For thou must die.(U/|U/|) (from “Virtue” by George Herbert) Trochee Trochee is the reverse of an iamb. It is a stressed/unstressed pattern like in this line: Piping down the valleys wild, (/U|/U|/U|/) Piping songs of pleasant glee, (/U|/U|/U|/) On a cloud I saw a child, (/U|/U|/U|/) From “Songs of Innocence” by William Blake Anapest Anapest is a meter pattern that sounds like hoof-beats. UU/|UU/ A tutor who tooted the flute (/|UU/|UU/|/) Tried to teach two young tooters to toot. Rhyme Scheme Having a certain rhyme scheme also is a way to give structure to poetry. Look at the rhyme scheme in the poem “Cross” by Langston Hughes. See how it holds the poem together. Also notice the use of stanzas. Why did Hughes put these words in the stanza? Cross Langston Hughes My old man’s a white old man And my old mother’s black. If ever I cursed my white old man I take my curses back. If ever I cursed my black old mother And wished she were in hell, I’m sorry for that evil wish And now I wish her well. My old man died in a fine big house. My ma died in a shack. I wonder where I’m gonna die Being neither white or black? Pattern Some poems are written in a set form like sonnets, haikus, pantoums, limericks, concrete, etc. These patterns sometimes require a regular rhyme scheme or meter; or number of syllables or lines. Look at the following examples: Rhythm Rhythm is the beat of a poem. It is the pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables. End rhymes: the last word in the lines rhyme Internal rhymes: occurring within the poem. Exact rhymes: the words rhyme exactly (e.g., tapping and rapping) Approximate rhymes: sounds that are similar but not exactly the same (e.g., bat Counting-Out Rhyme Silver bark of beech , and sallow Bark of yellow birch and yellow Twig of willow. Stripe of green in moosewood maple, Colour seen in leaf of apples, Bark of popple. Wood of popple pale as moonbeam, Wood of oak for yoke and bran-beam, Wood of hornbeam. Silver bark of beech, and hollow Stem of elder, tall and yellow Twig of willow. -Edna St. Vincent Millay Rhyme Exact rhyme are words that have the exact same-sounding ending, like cat and hat Slant rhyme words sound similar, but aren’t exact, like one and down. A rhyme scheme is the pattern of rhyming words. Look at the following poem and identify the rhyme scheme. RHYME Words sound alike because they share the same ending vowel and consonant sounds. (A word always rhymes with itself.) LAMP STAMP Share the short “a” vowel sound Share the combined “mp” consonant sound END RHYME A word at the end of one line rhymes with a word at the end of another line Hector the Collector Collected bits of string. Collected dolls with broken heads And rusty bells that would not ring. INTERNAL RHYME A word inside a line rhymes with another word on the same line. Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and weary. From “The Raven” by Edgar Allan Poe NEAR RHYME a.k.a imperfect rhyme, close rhyme The words share EITHER the same vowel or consonant sound BUT NOT BOTH ROSE LOSE Different vowel sounds (long “o” and “oo” sound) Share the same consonant sound Rhyme Scheme A rhyme scheme is the pattern of rhyming words. Look at the following poem and identify the rhyme scheme. Rhyme Scheme Heavy is my heart, Dark are thine eyes Thou and I must part Ere the sun rise A B A B Rhyme Scheme- The pattern in which end rhyme occurs • Example: Continuous as the stars that shine (A) And twinkle on the milky way, (B) They stretched in never-ending line (A) Along the margin of a bay: (B) Ten thousand saw I at a glance, (C) Tossing their heads in sprightly dance. (C) Repetition Poems also create music through the repetition of words and lines. Example: “gazed and gazed” Look at the poem “One Perfect Rose” by Dorothy Parker. One line is repeated three times. Notice how the meaning of the line changes by the third repetition. One Perfect Rose by Dorothy Parker A single flow’r he sent me, since we met. All tenderly his messenger he chose; Deep-hearted, pure with scented dew still wet – One perfect rose. I knew the language of the flowerlet; “My fragile leaves,” it said, “his heart enclose.” Love long has taken for his amulet One perfect rose. Why is it no one ever sent me yet One perfect limousine, do you suppose? Ah no, it’s always just my luck to get One perfect rose Refrain •The repetition of one or more phrases or lines at certain intervals, usually at the end of each stanza •Similar to the chorus in a song Letters Repetitive initial consonant sounds in a poem are called alliteration. Repetition of other consonant sounds is called consonance. Repetitive vowel sounds are called assonance. The following poem has many examples of each. See how many you can find. Also notice what other element of poetry you can find. Alliteration Repetition of the initial consonant sound “She sells seashells at the sea shore” ALLITERATION Consonant sounds repeated at the beginnings of words If Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers, how many pickled peppers did Peter Piper pick? Assonance •The repetition of a vowel sound in two or more words in the line of a poem • • Example: “Which is the bliss of solitude” ASSONANCE Repeated VOWEL sounds in a line or lines of poetry. (Often creates near rhyme.) Lake Fate Base Fade (All share the long “a” sound.) ASSONANCE cont. Examples of ASSONANCE: “Slow the low gradual moan came in the snowing.” - John Masefield “Shall ever medicine thee to that sweet sleep.” - William Shakespeare CONSONANCE Similar to alliteration EXCEPT . . . The repeated consonant sounds can be anywhere in the words “silken, sad, uncertain, rustling . . “ Pause When we read poetry, we must be careful to read it with the punctuation the author provided. Our tendency is to pause at the end of each line when we should pause at the punctuation marks. When pauses come in the middle of the line, we call it a caesura. When the line continues to the next line we call it enjambment. The next slides show examples of each. Enjambment We Real Cool by Gwendolyn Brooks We real cool. We Left school. We Lurk late. We Strike straight. We Sing sin. We Thin gin. We Jazz June. We die soon. Notice that the enjambment forces you to pause before the end of the line. The word we is emphasized and gives the poem a syncopated rhythm, similar to the rhythm in jazz. This is appropriate since the poem is about the period of the 30’s when Prohibition was in effect and jazz was king. Caesura The Tide Rises, the Tide Falls By Henry Wadsworth Longfellow The tide rises, the tide falls, The twilight darkens, the curlew calls; Along the sea sands damp and brown The traveler hastens toward the town. And the tide rises, the tide falls. This is only the first stanza of the poem, but you can see how effective the caesura is in creating the sound of the waves. Onomatopoeia A word whose sound imitates its meaning More onomatopoeia “The bee buzzed by my ear “ “The clock ticked down the final hour” “The engine purred while awaiting the green light” Onomatopoeia We are familiar with onomatopoeia even if we don’t understand the word. When two cars collide, what sound do they make? Crash! That is onomatopoeia – words that make the sound they are imitating. Here is a poem by Eve Merriam appropriately titled “Onomatopoeia.” See how many sounds are heard. Onomatopoeia The rusty spigot sputter, utters a sputter, spatters a smattering of drops, gashes wider; slash, splatters, scatters, spurts, finally stops sputtering and plash! gushes rushes splashes clear water dashes. POINT OF VIEW IN POETRY POET • The poet is the author of the poem. SPEAKER • The speaker of the poem is the “narrator” of the poem. Mood- the feeling a poem creates for the reader Tone - the attitude a poet takes toward his/her subject Contrast Poets use contrast to further show images. Antithesis strengthens the differences of the image. In the next poem Ms. Piercy describes the ambivalence of the speaker’s love relationship by writing these contrasting images: “…cold and hot winds of our breath,/ as we make and unmake in passionate/ diastole and systole the rhythm/ of our unbound bonding…” Symbol •A word or object that has its own meaning and represents another word, object or idea • • Example: The daffodils represent happiness and pleasure to the author. Here are Some Specific Types of Poems you MAY want to try writing… Types of Poetry ALLITERATION- The repetition of a consonant sound Windshield wipers wipe the windshield Wipe the water off the pane This way That way This way That way This way That way In the rain Mary Ann Hoberman Types of Poetry BIO POEM- An eleven line poem about yourself. Line Line Line Line Line Line Line Line Line Line Line 1- Your First Name 2- 4 Traits that describe you 3- Sibling of…(Three people or ideas) 4- Lover of…(Three items) 5- Who feels (Three items) 6- Who needs (Three items) 7- Who gives (Three items) 8- Who fears…(Three items) 9- Who would like to see…(Three items) 10- Resident of (Your city, street, or State) 11- Your last name Types of Poetry DIAMONTE- A Diamonte Poem is shaped like a diamond. It too has a set pattern. Opposites are also used. Noun Adjective, Adjective Verb, Verb, Verb Noun, Noun, Noun, Noun Verb, Verb, Verb Adjective, Adjective Noun Cocoa Tree Tropical, Gnarly Growing, Producing, Flowering Pods, Beans, Buds, Apples Dropping, Crunching, Baking Delicious, All-American Apple Tree CINQUAIN A five line poem containing 22 syllables Two Syllables Four Syllables Six Syllables Eight Syllables Two Syllables How frail Above the bulk Of crashing water hangs Autumnal, evanescent, wan The moon. Types of Poetry CONCRETE POEM- Also called picture poetry, is formed to look like what you are writing about. CONCRETE POEMS Poetry Is like Flames, Which are Swift and elusive Dodging realization Sparks, like words on the Paper, leap and dance in the Flickering firelight. The fiery Tongues, formless and shifting Shapes, tease the imiagination. Yet for those who see, Through their mind’s Eye, they burn Up the page. HAIKU Haiku poetry is a very short, centuries old form of Japanese poetry, that usually deals with nature, that has a specific pattern. The pattern is: 5 Syllables 7 Syllables 5 Syllables Snow is falling down Our snow days are all used up That means I’ll see you -Antal 2008 I AM POEM I AM POEM- A 3 distinctive stanza poem about yourself that follows a specific pattern. FIRST STANZA I am (two special characters you have) I wonder (something you are actually curious about) I hear (an imaginary sound) I see (an imaginary sight) I want (an actual date) I am (the first line of a poem repeated) SECOND STANZA I I I I I I pretend (something you actually pretend to do) feel (a feeling about something imaginary) touch (an imaginary touch) worry (something that really bothers you) cry (something that makes you very sad) am (the first line of the poem repeated) THIRD STANZA I I I I understand (something you know is true) say (something you believe in) dream (something you actually dream about) try (something you really make an effort about I hope (something you actually hope for) I am (the first line of a poem repeated) LIMERICK A Limerick is a funny little poem containing five lines. The last words of the 1st(A), 2nd(A), and 5th(A) lines rhyme with each other, and the last words of the 3rd(B), and 4th(B) lines rhyme with each other. A clumsy young fellow named Jim(A) Was never informed how to swim.(A) He fell off a dock(B) And sunk like a rock(B) And that was the end of him.(A) LYRIC A short poem Usually written in first person point of view Expresses an emotion or an idea or describes a scene Do not tell a story and are often musical (Many of the poems we read will be lyrics.) NARRATIVE POEMS A poem that tells a story. Generally longer than the lyric styles of poetry b/c the poet needs to establish characters and a plot. Examples of Narrative Poems “The Raven” “The Highwayman” “Casey at the Bat” “The Walrus and the Carpenter” PANTOUM A pantoum is an old Malaysian form of poetry that repeats certain lines. You start off with 8 original lines and repeat certain ones to complete 16 lines. Look at the pattern in the next poem. Deserted House Robert King Questions linger in the tall grass. Over the long abandoned house The clouds pile up, filling the sky the night birds veer and dart away without an answer to the grass reflected in broken windows or the last sunlight slanting low. and we are alone by the house. The clouds pile up, filling the sky The night birds veer and dart away. over the long abandoned house Questions linger in the grass with the last sunlight slanting low and we are alone by the house reflected broken windows. without an answer to the grass. PERSONIFICATION POEM Poetry that assigns human characteristics to non-human things. DINNER Knife was the first to speak. He was known mostly for his sharp cutting remarks. Chairs sat down underneath the table. Napkins folded themselves into their laps. Teapot, unable to stand the tension, began to boil. Cup held one hand on her hip Knowing she could hold her own Fork and spoon huddled off to the side next to the plate. They knew plate could handle whatever was dished out. Terry Garrison SIMILE & METAPHOR POEM A poem that contains the use of simile and metaphor. SHAKESPEAREAN SONNET A fourteen line poem with a specific rhyme scheme. The poem is written in three quatrains and ends with a couplet. The rhyme scheme is abab cdcd efef gg Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day? Thou art more lovely and more temperate. Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May, And summer’s lease hath all too short a date. Sometimes too hot the eye of heaven shines, And often is his gold complexion dimmed; And every fair from fair sometimes declines, By chance or nature’s changing course untrimmed. But thy eternal summer shall not fade Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st; Nor shall Death brag thou wanderest in his shade, When in eternal lines to time thou grow’st So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this gives life to thee. SONNET The sonnet is the requirement of every experienced poet. You must write one! It is fourteen lines of rhymed iambic pentameter. The first 12 lines pose a problem, ask a question, or set up a situation. The couplet at the end solves the problem, answers the question or settles the situation. The End