ISHMAEL An Adventure of the Mind and Spirit Guided by Daniel Quinn and Experienced by All of Us How are we studying Ishmael? Each day, in class, we will be covering approximately 15 pages of text. We will be reading the text aloud, together. This works pretty well with Ishmael particularly because most of the book is structured around a conversation. Thus, after Ishmael (the gorilla) poses questions, you will have an opportunity to think about how you would respond (prior to the pupil’s response). Personal reflection has utility, makes you think—especially if you have the unique privilege of hearing others thoughts in contrast with your own and the pupil’s perspectives from the novel. The pages you read in class will be new for everyone except for three of you—the discussion leaders. You will each be assigned, in advance, a section to prepare. You will have a discussion partner to help you regulate and lead effectively. While you will have myriad responsibilities and some options (culminating to a well-planned discussion), ultimately your main objective is to read your portion aloud with a partner and pause to pose questions and/or allow the class to process what just came to pass. Thus, and again your main objectives within this project are to… -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------READ YOUR PORTION OF THE TEXT ALOUD, COMBINE WITH PRACTICED, PRE-PLANNED QUESTIONS while ENGAGING THE CLASS AND ENGAGING WITH THE READING -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Let’s say you have your group. You have the date you’re presenting. You’re excited! Now, what are you responsible for? The short version of your responsibilities: MUST-DOs I. Real, Live (yet practiced) Reading & Discussion MAYBE-DOs for the “A”verachievers: IV. World Building II. Thought-provoking questions V. Feeding Time III. Visual(s)/Illustration(s) 1 Longer Versions: I. Real, Live (yet practiced) Discussion What: You and your group both must read the text before hand and plan-out discussion questions. You will be engaging with one another as well as the rest of the class. While others must participate, a conversation between you and your partner will have to occur. Though you’ve already processed the text, everyone else will be hearing it for the first time. So, clearly, you and your group will have license to voice your thoughts first. How? You might practice this conversation by reading the text once together (out of class) and “playing-out” your discussion before you “go live” in front of the class. Since you will have read it, thoughtfully, already you will know what tone lines carry and how to deliver certain quotes. The reading will be smoother since you’ve practiced once through. If you know of a spot you struggled with or a portion you had to reread, you will have the prescience (foresight) to pause, or tell others to reread the paragraph silently. This is “considerate” and will allow others the necessary processing time to help engage in your discussion. You should sticky note areas where you might need to do this so you can keep track of (the preplanned) necessary pauses or interruptions. If… Now, the “live” version might be a bit different than the one you had practiced, but that’s good! That means you’re reacting to others and one-another. Nonetheless, at least you will have the fall-back plan and comfort of mobilized schema. I can’t stress this step enough: The A discussion will have practiced pauses, questions, and discussion points realized with your partner before-hand. The resultant knowwhat-your-doingness will be clear.* We’ll be happy. OBJECTIVE within the “I. Real, Live (yet practiced) Discussion” is Preplan thought-provoking, erudite, and relevant discussion *Fear not, you will have a planning sheet to aid you with this process, later in this packet. 2 II. Thought-provoking Questions While you and your group will have devised questions and answers for your portion before hand, the class needs to participate in your live discussion. Thus, you must create discussion questions for this purpose. When you craft questions, you should use the following parameters to dictate your discussion: 1. Get-it questions (1, 2 or 3) Knowledge/Comprehension*: these questions make sure people understand what’s going on. You might choose to use these after reading something that you had difficulty interpreting, first time through. Listeners will be using skills like remember, recall, paraphrase, and interpret. Example: Why can’t we stop our destruction? We can’t b/c we are compelled to go on destroying the world in order to live (p. 25) 2. Figure it out questions (1, 2 or 3) Application/Analysis*: these are slightly more complicated. Both of these words connote “breakdown” in order to use. They apply, problem solve, subdivide, classify, pick-apart. Sounds like: Why is….significant? How is….related to…? How does ….compare/contrast with…? What evidence can you list for….? Example: Why is it significant that the narrator only has the “impression” of being captive? (p. 25) 3. So what questions (1, 2 or 3) Synthesis/Evaluation*: this level of question assumes you know enough about the topic to evaluate it or make it into something new and super-relevant. These should be the “thinkers” because they take what’s in the book and make it personal or important to us. Sometimes, they can be more tangential. Sounds like: What solutions would you suggest for…? What could you predict/infer from….? What do you think about….? How would you decide…..? Example: What do you think about the idea that “Whether we’re being lied to or not, we still have to Get up…go to work and pay the bills…”? Wait-time: Also, remember for question-types Figure it out and So what, people will likely have to think of responses first, before participating. If it’s a complicated question, it’s hard to have an answer immediately. Thus, you should say things like, “Respond to the following question” or “Take a moment to think about this.” Consider this, if you really write a question that you think will elicit a “hmmmmm” or “huh?” OBJECTIVE within the “II.Thought-provoking Questions” is Craft questions which check for understanding and make the book relevant to us 3 III. Visual(s)/Illustrations After reading and planning your discussion, create a visual which enhances our reading. Thus, you must engage with the visual during the presentation. You need to use it to “do” something. More on this later.* This component has room for interpretation and creativity. Everything else below are avenues for execution. New ways of synthesizing encouraged…would love if you pitched your idea before-hand. Your visual may— Aid with understanding because it… Depicts a character reaction Realizes a scene Is designed to be utilized as a discussion tool Makes an argument through Illustrating a way of looking at things or one-side of something “Defamiliarizing”- realigning perspective so we can see things in a new way Creating an impact through a series of “slides” Makes relevant by Showing/illustrating a real-life concept or something that we all experience Makes palpable since it Makes a 2-D or 3-D version of a metaphor or a quote in the book Tries to make a concept “feelable” (beyond abstract thought) and thus helps with understanding Specific Examples: Demonstrate your understanding of the differences between Leavers and Takers by illustrating one idea through two different projections. Maybe….road kill? For instance… (don’t bring in real road kill). Pictorially highlights constitution, evidencing “taker” culture Urging: What I’m asking you to do here is similar to “The Burning of L.A.” project…because of its purposeful construction Your internal dialogue should NOT sound like this: “What do I want to make for a visual? I know, a collage. Or maybe…I’ll clip an ad from a magazine; I could make a drawing, or I’ll use wordle. No, glogster. Which one’s easiest?” It SHOULD sound like this: “What effect do I want my visual to have? What do I want it to do? I know! I’d like my visual to ______________! Okay, now that I know what purpose I want the visual to serve, what is the best way I can get that done? (i.e. know the ends before you trudge down a path. Whatever “it” becomes will turn out better with a goal in mind first.) Caveats: This may not be something you downloaded or played from the internet. No YouTube videos. This cannot be designed to kill-time: enriching and enhancing things only, made from your blood, sweat, and tears. *Also, you cannot say “This is our visual. It’s a palm leaf. It represents Ishmael because he eats palms sometimes. That is a useless use of a visual. OBJECTIVE within the “III. Visual(s)/Illustrations(s)” is Design Visual which enhances our collective experience and understanding of the novel 4 We’ve made it to the “Maybe-do” portion of the project! So far, this presentation should sound like a presentation. However, ideally, it should “read” more like an experience. We, together, want to have a unique experience with Ishmael. Think coffee-shop talk with contemplative or rain-forest atmosphere, for instance. The awesome presentation will make us “feel” as well as think and pay attention. Here’s how you may do that: IV. World Building Use your imaginations. Create Ishmael’s world and/or reflect the tone of a concept in a chapter, using the classroom as your oyster: make us feel like “pupils”; surround us by Mother Culture; put us in an airplane (this will make sense when you get to this portion of the novel). Do what you can in order to create an experience rather than a discussion. Almost everyone remembers a fort, den, tree house, or hidden corner…These safe, tailored places are memorable. Make the class feel like this by constructing a space. The world building component is different from your visual. While your visual may contribute to the classroom’s aura (i.e. world building) AND your imagined “world” can and should be very visual, they are not one in the same. The main difference is that the visual is meant to be engaged with during the discussion whereas the physical environment may just “exist”—it does not necessarily need to be addressed. It creates ambiance. Makes the mood right. You don’t have to do this, but the “A” presentation will. It’s going above and beyond. If you choose to do this, you must devise a way to set-up before hand (if that kind of preparation is necessary). If not, just don’t count on the first 5/10 minutes of class for “set-up” time. OBJECTIVE within the “IV. World Building is Make the class experience your portion of the novel through using the class to depict an environment -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- V. Feeding Time I’m not in the mood for some good discussion over muffins, donuts, and coffee? Said no one. Ever. So, why not make it like a coffee shop? If we all commit to a day, we can all maximize our happiness. Like communism…hence, in-class reading will feel less…compulsory? Extra props for making the food related to the content of Ishmael in some creative way (that will contribute to “world building”). This ultimately becomes one more venue of setting the mood for comfortable, open, and thought-provoking discussion while also having the opportunity to reflect the tone of a chapter. OBJECTIVE within the “V. Feeding Time” is Feed us. 5 YOU’VE MADE IT….almost What should the listeners be doing? A Listeners (23-24 points): You are here: You have your notebook out in the beginning of class You have a writing implement in your hand Your journal/notebook is open You often write thoughts and musings down as we are reading, but you still follow along You contribute meaningful and thoughtful comments at least three times per week You respond meaningfully and fully for the “journal moment” at the end of class You prevent infectious disease: you do not pack up until the bell rings or you are dismissed. If you have a bodily need, like you have to go to the bathroom or you want more food, you act like an intelligent person… And thus, you illustrate engagement by flooring the gas pedal whilst here. B Listeners (20-22 points): You are here: You have your notebook out in the beginning of class Your journal/notebook is open A writing implement is in your hand when you are told to have one in your hand, but you still follow along You write thoughts and musings down (when you have a passion) as we are reading You contribute meaningful and thoughtful comments at least twice per week You respond meaningfully and fully for the “journal moment” at the end of class You prevent infectious disease: you do not pack up until the bell rings or you are dismissed. If you have a bodily need, like you have to go to the bathroom or you want more food, you act like an intelligent person… And thus, you illustrate engagement by turning your wheels whilst here. C Listeners (17-20 points): You are here: You have your notebook out in the beginning of class Your journal/notebook is open A pencil is in your hand when you are told to have one in your hand You doodle too often You contribute comments at least once per week You respond meaningfully during the “journal moment” at the end of class…but you’re pretty much one of the first five people done and staring You prevent infectious disease: you do not pack up until the bell rings or you are dismissed. You have your phone on your desk (because you’re really important), and I consistently feel the need to stare at you meaningfully to put the phone away. You rarely notice. It’s because you’re really important though. If you have a bodily need, you need to be reminded to act like an intelligent person… 6 Stuff that will impact your grade detrimentally: Packing up while someone is speaking. I strongly dislike that. While tangents are actually awesome, they have to be meaningful. Don’t give yourself a proverbial “check” for participation by contributing something asinine. Stuff which will get you to 25/impact your grade (and person points) positively: We look forward to what you have to say because you participate often, and it’s reflective and thoughtful. You sometimes improve my (our) quality of life by elucidating something new. You’re just really awesome in general, actually. How are we keeping track of participation? I will be keeping track with the help of the discussion leaders. You (leaders) will swing by at the end of class and make sure the days contributors were noted. The reason this is “more serious” than before is because the majority of your grade is comprised by what’s going on in here. To be fair, this makes the process less subjective. Absence: If you are absent you must answer the discussion questions from the day (they will be posted on my website) in your notebook and hand-in within three school days* If not, you lose three points per day. 7 How are we being graded? What are our (remaining) grades during this marking period? Assignment Your Discussion project Participation Point Value 155 (Rubric below) 150 When will I know what I earned? Input when you, individually, are done Input weekly (25 points a week! See the last page for break-down) Study Guide Completion Input weekly 100 (20 points a week!) Quizzes (3-4) Small Projects/Activities TOTAL 550ish Input as they come…weekly 80 30-50 Input as they come -----------------------RUBRIC FOR DISCUSSION PROJECT----------------------3 5 ! CRITERIA Real, live, yet practiced discussion (35): (35): Questions are well-crafted and appropriate. There is a good balance of the three types of questions. You planned well enough that you know what discussions are important to you, the book in general, or us at-large. You might make some compromises, but ultimately, your inclusion and engagement of the class is intentional Prepared and used questions. (35): You thoughtfully and purposefully planned your visual. The depiction is meaningfully connected to the content of the novel. Used visual in presentation Design Visual which enhances our collective experience and understanding of the novel Preparation/ Management______(35): Worksheet and participation Did not meet expectations (24-15) While the craftsmanship is superb, the visual also serves a clear purpose in your presentation. You utilize it well. You put thought and intention into filling out the worksheet in its entirety. The worksheet informed your delivery TOTAL = _______out of a potential 140 World Building Fine (25-28) Clearly planned Craft questions which check for understanding and make the book relevant to us Visual(s)/Illustration Good (28-30) Partners have cogent thoughts on subjects they bring-up. They read well and consider when people will need wait-time or have a question. The placement of pauses and questioning aids in understanding. You might have looked-up a word or two. In short, you seem überprepared. You’ve deeply planned and reflected. Preplan thought-provoking, erudite, and relevant discussion Thought-provoking Questions Great (31-34) Filled- out THUS- Max score- 90% (10): Make the class experience your part of the novel through using the class to depict an environment You went above and beyond, meaningfully… You went above Feeding Time ______ You went above and beyond, meaningfully… You went above (5): Feed us yummy food. Total: _______/155 8 My name _________________________ Planning Worksheet My group members’ names ____________________________ I. PART PLANNING: I’m reading ___________. My group members are reading the parts of ___________ & ___________. (Options: Ishmael, Narrator, & Pupil [narr. & pupil are one and the same, but we will break them up for this purpose]) II. READING SPEED Question Types: Get it . Figure it out . So what? We anticipate that READING THE TEXT ALONE without stopping at all might take the two of us _________minutes III. Discussion: We plan on stopping to have the following discussions. In this chart you should also write words or ideas that you just want to say (it doesn’t have to be a “discussion”). Perhaps a particular quote stuck with you, or you needed to look up a word/concept. We might benefit from hearing this, but we don’t need to have a discussion about it. You should use this chart for that purpose as well. That’s why there are more blanks than what you need for questions alone. Pg# Stop point Question/Observation Question type (G, F, S) Our Answer Other notes Time we think it will take Where applicable VISUAL COMPONENT: 9 V. TIMING *Total of minutes you perceive your discussion to take ___________ (totals from previous page) VII. WORLD BUILDING (optional) *We plan on doing the following to the classroom: _____________________________________________________________ *Total minutes you perceive your reading to take ___________ = 40 and 45 min. V. FLEXBILITY *Let’s say your first discussion blows our minds…it takes A LOT longer than you think. Make a check mark next to the two parts in your chart which you might be willing to gloss-over for the sake of letting a discussion ride-out. Draw a star next to the one part that you are absolutely unwilling to compromise VI. VISUAL *We would like a visual to serve the following specific purpose: ___________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ *We are doing this because we want to … _____________________________________________________________ VIII. FEEDING TIME (optional) *If you are feeding the class, what are you bringing? What’s the reason behind this? _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ *We plan on using the visual during the following portion ____________________________Be sure you put this in the chart This is a basic sketch or idea for our visual: IX. PARTICIPATION *At the end of your presentation answer the following—who participated meaningfully? Please. Please do me the huge favor of making sure I write the check mark. _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ x. YOUR GRADE What grade do you feel you earned on this project and why? (Answer at the end of the day and hand to me on separate paper.) 10 Ishmael Schedule of Dates Stuff that’s happening between now and diploma time Monday Tuesday Wednesday May 1 -Model presentation *Daney (pg. 24-37) Thursday 2 -Daney Presentation (pg. 38-53) Friday 3 -Mother Culture Activity 8 Block Odd 1st Half: -Study Guide DUE -Quiz - Presentation (pg. 95-110) 2nd Half: - Activity (ABCs) -Pg. 113-117 15 Keystones - Presentation (pg. 151-168) 9 Block Even No Class 10 - Presentation (pg. 117-130) 16 Keystones - Presentation (pg. 169-184) 17 Keystones -Daney Presentation (pg. 187207) 21 School Closed-Election Day 22 Keystones -Study Guide DUE (up to 207) -Quiz -Daney Presentation (pg. 233248) 24 Block Even Keystones No Seniors-Awards Assembly & Prom! Have fun! 28 -Close Ishmael -Enrichment Activity -Study guide DUE (complete) 29 -Review 23 Block Odd Keystones 1st Half: Daney Presentation (pg. 248263) 2nd Half: -Activity -Distribute Finals SG 30 -Review April 29 -Read pgs 1-24 -Complete study guide for pgs 1-24 April 30 -Read pgs 1-24 DUE -Complete study guide DUE -Discuss beginning of the novel -Intro to Project 6 - Presentation (pg. 54-70) 7 - Presentation (pg. 70-91) 13 - Presentation (pg. 130-148) 14 Keystones -Study Guide DUE -Quiz - Activity 20 Keystones -Daney Presentation (pg. 211-229) 27 School Closed-Memorial Day 31 Last Senior Day! -Fun NOTES: -Study guide checks will happen on Wednesdays (usually). The “activities” will be flexible—based on what would best suit the class. -Page number due dates DO NOT CHANGE! If, for some reason, we become too engrossed in discussion and don’t finish what we planned to in class, it is homework due the next day. This is not unreasonable. - If you are absent, you must get the notes and answer the discussion questions within three days of your absence. It is your responsibility to ask for it. 11 Reading Break Down Monday, April 29 pg. 1-24—Introduction of Ishmael…you did (or are doing) this independently, in class and for homework. Wednesday, May 1: pg. 24-37— ………………………………__________Daney__________________________________________ Thursday, May 2: pg. 38-53— ……………………………...…____________Daney____________________________________________________ Monday, May 6: pg. 54-70— ………………………………..._____________ __________________________________________________________ Tuesday, May 7: pg. 70-91— …………………………………_____________________________________________________ _________________ Wednesday, May 8: pg. 95-110— ………………………………._____________ ________________________________________________________ Friday, May 10: pg. 117-130—— ……………………………….._____________ _________________________________________________________ Monday, May 13: pg. 130-148— …………………………………____________________________________________________ ________________ Wednesday, May 15: pg. 151-168— …………………………….____________________________________________________ _________________ Thursday, May 16: pg. 169-184— ……………………………. _____________________________________________________ _________________ Friday, May 17: pg. 187-207— …………………………………__________Daney_________________________________________ Monday, May 20: pg. 211-229— …………………………………___________ Daney __________________________________________________ Wednesday, May 22: pg. 233-248— …………………………….__________Daney_________________________________________ Thursday, May 23: pg. 248-263— …………………………………__________Daney__________________________________________ 12