Peer-Evaluation Worksheet Literary Analysis Name of person whose paper you now have: __________________________________ Your name (peer editor): __________________________________________________ Read through the entire paper once. Write down any general observations or impressions you have below: What is the essay’s title? Write it below. Then, write a suggestion for a more descriptive or interesting title-- one that goes beyond stating the assignment: Write the thesis statement below (word for word) and label topic, opinion, and evidence. Does it have a clear sense of topic, opinion, and evidence? If not, suggest an alternate thesis below: Does the essay contain carefully-chosen quotes that support the thesis and are cited in MLA style (both in-text citations and a Works Cited page)? Write suggestions for narrowing quotes or citing correctly below: Is the essay written in present tense (YES or NO) and in third person (YES or NO)? Is the essay organized in a logical order based on building an argument instead of retelling the plot? If not, make suggestions for organization in the margin of your peer’s paper. Do the topic sentences accurately introduce what is contained within each paragraph AND relate to the thesis statement? If not, write suggestions for unity in the margin of your peer’s paper. Reread the last sentence of each paragraph, paired with the first sentence of the next paragraph. Is there a clear progression of thought from one paragraph to the next? Write suggestions for better transitions from one paragraph to the next in the margin of your peer’s paper. Circle any weak words that do not seem appropriate to a college-level paper. Also, circle any clichés and suggest alternatives in the margin of your peer’s paper. What do you like best about this essay? What do you think needs the most work in this essay?