Making Sense of the World Mr Deem’s Year 8.3 Poetry Collection The news media and poets have different purposes and different ways of looking at the world. But both seek to make sense of the world around us through their use of language. That’s what we explore this term. How long does it take you to write a poem? It has taken me 5 years Introduction to poetry I ask them to take a poem and hold it up to the light like a color slide or press an ear against its hive. 3 months and a day to write this poem I say drop a mouse into a poem and watch him probe his way out, or walk inside the poem’s room and feel the walls for a light switch. 22 daydreams 31 false starts 13 and a ½ bottles of home-made wine 10 farts I want them to waterski across the surface of a poem waving at the author’s name on the shore. 10 hiccups 64 sneezes 3 long distance phone calls But all thy want to do is tie the poem to a chair with rope and torture a confession out of it. a day trip to Barry 91 trips to ‘The Tenby’ 50 casual conversations a daily and expensive counseling session extensive visits to the British Museum 5 notebooks, 6 biros and a perm and 43 assaults on people who ask how long does it take you to write a poem. - by Penny Windsor They begin beating it with a hose to find out what it really means. - by Billy Collins. “I come from a land where poetry is like a tree which watches over man and where a poet is a guard who understands the rhythm of this world. He travels with history and feels the rhythm of history. By heeding this rhythm, he realizes the gaps and distances that separate man from man. I see this separation between men as a darkness which science cannot dispel despite its transformative power. Only poetry can illuminate this darkness.” This quote comes from Ali Ahmad Said, or Adonis, a Lebanese poet regarded as the most influential poet from the Arab world. Here are a couple of his poems. The Passage I sought to share the life of snow and fire. But neither snow nor fire took me in. So, I kept my peace, waiting with flowers, staying like stones. In love I lost myself. I broke away and watched until I swayed like a wave between the life I dreamed and the changing dream I lived. Tree of Life The tree by the river is weeping leaves. It strews the shore with tear after tear. It reads to the river its prophecy of fire. I am that final leaf that no one sees My people have died as fires die – without a trace. The Highwayman by Alfred Noyes I THE wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees, The moon was a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas, The road was a ribbon of moonlight over the purple moor, And the highwayman came riding— Riding—riding— The highwayman came riding, up to the old inn-door. He'd a French cocked-hat on his forehead, a bunch of lace at his chin, A coat of the claret velvet, and breeches of brown doe-skin; They fitted with never a wrinkle: his boots were up to the thigh! And he rode with a jewelled twinkle, His pistol butts a-twinkle, His rapier hilt a-twinkle, under the jewelled sky. Over the cobbles he clattered and clashed in the dark inn-yard, And he tapped with his whip on the shutters, but all was locked and barred; He whistled a tune to the window, and who should be waiting there But the landlord's black-eyed daughter, Bess, the landlord's daughter, Plaiting a dark red love-knot into her long black hair. And dark in the dark old inn-yard a stable-wicket creaked Where Tim the ostler listened; his face was white and peaked; His eyes were hollows of madness, his hair like mouldy hay, But he loved the landlord's daughter, The landlord's red-lipped daughter, Dumb as a dog he listened, and he heard the robber say— "One kiss, my bonny sweetheart, I'm after a prize to-night, But I shall be back with the yellow gold before the morning light; Yet, if they press me sharply, and harry me through the day, Then look for me by moonlight, Watch for me by moonlight, I'll come to thee by moonlight, though hell should bar the way." He rose upright in the stirrups; he scarce could reach her hand, But she loosened her hair i' the casement! His face burnt like a brand As the black cascade of perfume came tumbling over his breast; And he kissed its waves in the moonlight, (Oh, sweet, black waves in the moonlight!) Then he tugged at his rein in the moonlight, and galloped away to the West. II He did not come in the dawning; he did not come at noon; And out o' the tawny sunset, before the rise o' the moon, When the road was a gypsy's ribbon, looping the purple moor, A red-coat troop came marching— Marching—marching— King George's men came matching, up to the old inn-door. They said no word to the landlord, they drank his ale instead, But they gagged his daughter and bound her to the foot of her narrow bed; Two of them knelt at her casement, with muskets at their side! There was death at every window; And hell at one dark window; For Bess could see, through her casement, the road that he would ride. They had tied her up to attention, with many a sniggering jest; They had bound a musket beside her, with the barrel beneath her breast! "Now, keep good watch!" and they kissed her. She heard the dead man say— Look for me by moonlight; Watch for me by moonlight; I'll come to thee by moonlight, though hell should bar the way! She twisted her hands behind her; but all the knots held good! She writhed her hands till her fingers were wet with sweat or blood! They stretched and strained in the darkness, and the hours crawled by like years, Till, now, on the stroke of midnight, Cold, on the stroke of midnight, The tip of one finger touched it! The trigger at least was hers! The tip of one finger touched it; she strove no more for the rest! Up, she stood up to attention, with the barrel beneath her breast, She would not risk their hearing; she would not strive again; For the road lay bare in the moonlight; Blank and bare in the moonlight; And the blood of her veins in the moonlight throbbed to her love's refrain . Tlot-tlot; tlot-tlot! Had they heard it? The horse-hoofs ringing clear; Tlot-tlot, tlot-tlot, in the distance? Were they deaf that they did not hear? Down the ribbon of moonlight, over the brow of the hill, The highwayman came riding, Riding, riding! The red-coats looked to their priming! She stood up, straight and still! Tlot-tlot, in the frosty silence! Tlot-tlot, in the echoing night! Nearer he came and nearer! Her face was like a light! Her eyes grew wide for a moment; she drew one last deep breath, Then her finger moved in the moonlight, Her musket shattered the moonlight, Shattered her breast in the moonlight and warned him—with her death. He turned; he spurred to the West; he did not know who stood Bowed, with her head o'er the musket, drenched with her own red blood! Not till the dawn he heard it, his face grew grey to hear How Bess, the landlord's daughter, The landlord's black-eyed daughter, Had watched for her love in the moonlight, and died in the darkness there. Back, he spurred like a madman, shrieking a curse to the sky, With the white road smoking behind him and his rapier brandished high! Blood-red were his spurs i' the golden noon; wine-red was his velvet coat, When they shot him down on the highway, Down like a dog on the highway, And he lay in his blood on the highway, with the bunch of lace at his throat. * * * * * * And still of a winter's night, they say, when the wind is in the trees, When the moon is a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas, When the road is a ribbon of moonlight over the purple moor, A highwayman comes riding— Riding—riding— A highwayman comes riding, up to the old inn-door. Over the cobbles he clatters and clangs in the dark inn-yard; He taps with his whip on the shutters, but all is locked and barred; He whistles a tune to the window, and who should be waiting there But the landlord's black-eyed daughter, Bess, the landlord's daughter, Plaiting a dark red love-knot into her long black hair. Bess by Linda Pastan When Bess, the landlord's black-eyed daughter, waited for her highwayman in the poem I learned by breathless heart at twelve, it occurred to me for the first time that my mild-eyed mother Bess might have a life all her own - a secret past I couldn't enter, except in dreams. That single sigh of a syllable has passed like a keepsake to this newest child, wrapped now in the silence of sleep. And in the dream I enter, I could be holding my infant mother in my arms: the same cheekbones, the name indelible as a birthmark. Lightning Tree It’s stark white in this hard winter light. At its base brackish water spreads like exposed film out through marshgrasses & paperbarksa snapped bone, it punctures the skin. On its splintered crown the Great Egret stretches, its knifed beak piercing the cold blue skyan inverted lightning strike fielding its wingsa crucifix – hesitating, as if held by a magnet, then dropping into flight, dragging lightning rod legs. The Bottlebrush Flowers A Council-approved replacement for box trees along the verges of suburban roads, it embarrasses with its too sudden blush – stunning at first, then a burning reminder of something you’d rather forget. And it unclothes so ungraciously – its semi-clad, mangy, slovenly, first-thing-in-the-morning appearance. And while I’ve heard it called a bristling firelick, a spiral of Southern Lights, I’ve also seen honey-eaters bob upside down and unpick its light in seconds. The Orchardist Orange trees cling to the tin walls of his home. A red checked shirt and grey pair of trousers hang over the one-eyed tractor. His oranges are small suns and he is an astronaut floating slowly through their spheres of influence. - Three Poems by John Kinsella Off the Map At night headlamps dazzle the leaves. Truck drivers throbbing on pills climb out of the sleep of farm towns prim behind moonlit lace, bronze Anzacs dozing, leaden-headed, at ease between wars, and out into a dream of apple orchards, paddocks tumbling with mice, bridges that slog the air, black piers, bright water, silos moonstruck, pointing nowhere like saints practising stillness in a ripple of grain. They thunder across country like daredevil boys of the ‘fifties who flourished a pistol in banks, and rode off into headlines and hills and into legends that hang, grey-ghostly, over campfires in the rain. Now kids, barefooted, wade in the warm, hatched tyre-marks of country dust, the print of monsters; cattle stare. All night through the upland spaces of our skull in low gear shifting skyward they climb towards dawn. A lit butt glows, a beer can clatters. Strung out on the hills, new streets that shine in the eyes of farmboys, cities alive only at nightfall that span a continent. Nameless. Not to be found by day on any map. - By David Malouf In a Time of Drought Travelling by bus at sunset on the Warrego Highway the land lies blurred blue-grey like a fugue, the smoke from the numerous fires drifts aimlessly, amnesiac… The sun glowers like a furnace, it is angry with us; it’s too late now to look to the heavens for help; the prophets are hedging their bets; the psalmists have said their piece, packed their bags and gone; the past is as distant now as those economic emperors ruling from foreign palaces… Everything is up for grabs our luck is leaving us and we can’t believe it The High Mark begins with the nod of head or flicker-signal of fingers and a run that gathers in the green day and the grey crowd that rolls on its great humble tides and the run is a thinking to the ball's end-over-end parabola that has sinews toughtensioning for the upward leap, hands now eagle claws, god's hooks, hungering for the leather dove, the run among mere mortal men in time, in place, become the leaps into heaven, into fame, into legend - then the fall back to earth (guernseyed Icarus) to the whistle's shrill tweet. - Bruce Dawe True Believers For though they be punished in the sight of men, yet is their hope full of immortality Wisdom of Solomon At the ground early with the trusty thermos, Seated, if possible, behind the goals, Rugged up against the bleakest of all weathers - These are Solomon’s children, righteous souls, Tried in the furnace of the world’s derision, Whose home-ground hope is still that there they’ll see The scoreboard (with the final siren sounding) Registering some ultimate victory… No torment, then, shall touch them in that moment, The years of rank disaster seem worthwhile - Tears will stand in the eyes of Uncle Clarry, And flint-faced Agnes crack it for a smile, For if faith is truly the substance of things hoped-for, The evidence of things not seen, Then these are they who have received the promise As though their misery had never been. And when their heroes, having wrought great glory Down the centre-line and on both flank and wing, Have clattered up the players-race and left them Standing stunned, with throats too choked to sing - It will seem then that, of necessity, something Of that bright afternoon will never fade: The seventy-metre punt, the lyric ‘gather’ Remembered ever after and replayed On many a Windy Hill where the odds are always Stacked against the visitors from the start (All things are possible for the true believer, In the fond imagination of the heart…). Bruce Dawe Life-cycle When children are born in Victoria they are wrapped in the club-colours, laid in beribboned cots, having already begun a lifetime’s barracking. Carn, they cry, Carn . . . feebly at first while parents playfully tussle with them for possession of a rusk: Ah, he’s a little Tiger! (And they are. . . ) Hoisted shoulder-high at their first League game they are like innocent monsters who have been years swimming towards the daylight’s roaring empyrean Until, now, hearts shrapnelled with rapture, they break surface and are forever lost, their minds rippling out like streamers In the pure flood of sound, they are scarfed with light, a voice like the voice of God booms from the stands Ooohh you bludger and the covenant is sealed. Hot pies and potato-crisps they will eat, they will forswear the Demons, cling to the Saints and behold their team going up the ladder into Heaven, And the tides of life will be the tides of the home-team’s fortunes -the reckless proposal after the one-point win, the wedding and honeymoon after the grand final. . . They will not grow old as those from more northern States grow old, for them it will always be three-quarter-time with the scores level and the wind advantage in the final term, That passion persisting, like a race-memory, through the welter of seasons, enabling old-timers by boundary fences to dream of resurgent lions and centaur-figures from the past to replenish continually the present, So that mythology may be perpetually renewed And Chicken Smallhorn return like the maize-god In a thousand shapes, the dancers changing But the dance forever the same – the elderly still loyally crying Carn. . . Carn . . . (if feebly) unto the very end, having seen in the six-foot recruit from Eaglehawk their hope of salvation. - Bruce Dawe The Beach At daybreak, a jogger, indenting the wet shingle with the cuneiform marks of his passage. Clambering over the sullen rocks of the headland, a boy and a long-haired dog which splashes through the shallows, dutifully fetching thrown driftwood. Then a spartan swimmer, leathery from salt and sun, braving the chill waves. Low tide, and fisher-folk are already burleying for worms. Then the early lovers, honeymoon-driven, hand-in-hand, savouring the boom of ocean, compulsive as a dance-band, then the families: parents strolling like Egyptian priests, toddlers staggering with seismic joy, small children racing ahead to gather suddenly around funny things to be touched with a tentative toe or mumbled over, wide-eyed (‘Mmnnh…Errhh…’), the parents glancing sideways at each other (Worth it? Every bit of it…’). Far out, the indistinct, appearing and disappearing dots of surfers. After breakfast the crowds arrive, seeking the best spots of sand, loaded with Eskies, blankets, rugs, towels, umbrellas, trannies, sun-screen creams, sun-glasses, books, the impedimenta of culture. Life-savers man the towers now, below the parade of fashion begins, the skin-game; from the beach-house young bloods study form… Under the boisterous surface of the day, the sparkle and laughter, larger darknesses, like kelp, move in. - by Bruce Dawe Ode to Breakwalls Breakwalls are like an upturned middle digit against nature, fixed prisms surfers crave. On common water they jostle and fidget before tacking into waves, seeking caves. Refraction of the swell is the attraction. The surfboard riders voice their predilection as the inside low tide hang glide section barrels, before the next set provides action. These locked rocks, this compacted cereal. Man made refractor of the ethereal, warping waves collapsing on flanks of banks. Surfers paddle out as their local cranks while off the breakwall fishermen angle observing the scene as their lines dangle. - by Michael Byrne Offshore Breeze Many summers ago on a scallop of sand edging the bay a mother nursed her baby under a striped umbrella a girl gathered shells to hear the sea’s breath a father swam where the water was a deep dark blue and a boy lolled in green shallows on the blown-up tube of a truck tyre the rubber smell dissolving into memory Waves frisked the black ring shorewards white legs splayed in homage to the sun Suddenly the breeze turned launching the boy on his cushioned ride out beyond the father’s stretch out towards the deep sea channel Mother and girl screamed the baby squalled in a squabble of gulls the father began his anxious trek around the bay returning hours later unshaven like a shipwrecked sailor tube around his neck footprints slurred the boy asleep in his arms - by Jennifer Chrystie Break, break, break Break, break, break On thy cold, gray stones, O Sea! And I would that my tongue could utter The thoughts that arise in me. O well for the fisherman's boy That he shouts with his sister at play! O well for the sailor lad, That he sings in his boat on the bay! And the stately ships go on To their haven under the hill; But O for the touch of a vanish'd hand, And the sound of a voice that is still. Break, break, break At the foot of thy crags, O Sea! But the tender grace of a day that is dead Will never come back to me. - Alfred, Lord Tennyson Sand-strewn Caverns Sand-strewn caverns, cool and deep, Where the winds are all asleep; Where the spent lights quiver and gleam, Where the salt weed sways in the stream, Where the sea-beasts, ranged all round, Feed in the ooze of their pasture-ground; Where the sea-snakes coil and twine, Dry their mail and bask in the brine; Where great whales come sailing by, Sail and sail, with uncut eye, Round the world for ever and aye . . . - by Mathew Arnold Municipal Gum Gumtree in the city street, Hard bitumen around your feet, Rather you should be In the cool world of leafy forest halls And wild bird calls. Here you seem to me Like that poor cart-horse Castrated, broken, a thing wronged, Strapped and buckled, its hell prolonged, Whose hung head and listless mien express Its hopelessness. Municipal gum, it is dolorous To see you thus Set in your black grass of bitumen – O fellow citizen, What have they done to us? Oodgeroo Noonuccal Altjeringa Nude, smooth, and giant-huge, the torsos of the gums hold up the vast dark cave as the great moon comes. Shock-headed black-boy stands, with rigid, thrusting spear, defiant and grotesque against that glistening sphere. In clenched, contorted birth black banksia agonise; out of the ferns and earth, half-formed, beast-boulders rise; because The Bush goes back, back to a time unknown: chaos that had not word nor image carved on stone. Roland Robinson THE LAST OF HIS TRIBE He crouches, and buries his face on his knees, And hides in the dark of his hair; For he cannot look up to the storm-smitten trees, Or think of the loneliness thereOf the loss and the loneliness there. The wallaroos grope though the tufts of the grass, And turn to their coverts for fear; But he sits in the ashes and lets them pass Where the boomerangs sleep with the spearWith the nullah, the sling, and the spear. Uloola, behold him! The thunder that breaks On the tops of the rocks with the rain, And the wind which drives up with the salt of the lakes, Have made him a hunter againA hunter and fisher again. For his eyes have been full with a smouldering thought; But he dreams of hunts yore, And foes that he sought, and fights that he fought With those who will battle no moreWho will go to the battle no more. It is will that the water which tumbles and fills Goes moaning and moaning along; For an echo rolls out from the sides of the hills, And he starts at a wonderful songAt the sound of a wonderful song. And he sees through the rents of the scattering fogs The corroboree warlike and grim, And the lubra who sat by the fire on the logs, To watch, like a mourner, for himLike a mother and mourner for him. Will he go in his sleep from these desolate lands, Like a chief, to the rest of his race, With the honey-voiced woman who beckons and stands, And gleams like a dream in his faceLike a marvellous dream in his face? - by Henry Kendall LAST OF HIS TRIBE Change is the law. The new must oust the old. I look at you and am back in the long ago, Old Pinnaroo lonely and lost here, Last of your clan. Left only with your memories, you sit And think of the gay throng, the happy people, The voices and the laughter All gone, all gone, And you remain alone. I asked and you let me hear The soft vowelly tongue to be heard now No more for ever. For me You enact old scenes, old ways, you who have used Boomerang and spear. You singer of ancient tribal songs, You leader once in the corroboree You twice in fierce tribal fights With wild enemy blacks from over the river, All gone, all gone. And I feel The sudden sting of tears, Willie Mackenzie In the Salvation Army Home. Displaced person in your own country, Lonely in teeming city crowds, Last of your tribe. - by Oodgeroo Noonucal The Eagle He clasps the crag with crooked hands; Close to the sun in lonely lands, Ring'd with the azure world, he stands. The wrinkled sea beneath him crawls; He watches from his mountain walls, And like the thunderbolt he falls. - by Alfred, Lord Tennyson Sweater Weather: A Love Song to Language Never better, mad as a hatter, right as rain, might and main, hanky panky, not toddy, hoity-toity, cold shoulder, bowled over, rolling in clover, low blow, no soap, hope against hope, pay the piper, liar liar pants on fire, high and dry, shoo-fly pie, fiddle-faddle, fit as a fiddle, sultan of swat, muskrat ramble, fat and sassy, flimflam, happy as a clam, cat's pajamas, bee's knees, peas in a pod, pleased as punch, pretty as a picture, nothing much, lift the latch, double Dutch, helter-skelter, hurdy-gurdy, early bird, feathered friend, dumb cluck, buck up, shilly-shally, willy-nilly, roly-poly, holy moly, loose lips sink ships, spitting image, nip in the air, hale and hearty, part and parcel, upsy-daisy, lazy days, maybe baby, up to snuff, flibbertigibbet, honky-tonk, spic and span, handyman, cool as a cucumber, blue moon, high as a kite, night and noon, love me or leave me, seventh heaven, up and about, over and out. –by Sharon Bryan Ooly Pop a Cow My brother Charles brought home the news the kids were saying take a flying leap and eat me raw and be bop a lull. Forty miles he rode the bus there and back. The dog and I met him at the door, panting for hoke poke, hoke de waddy waddy hoke poke. In Cu Chi, Vietnam, I heard tapes somebody's sister sent of wild thing, I think I love you and hey now, what's that sound, everybody looks what's . . . Now it's my daughters bringing home no-duh, rock out, whatever, like I totally paused, and like I'm like . . . I'm like Mother, here hands in biscuit dough, her ears turning red from ain' nothing butta, blue monday, and tutti frutti, aw rooty! - David Huddle Homage: Doo-Wop There's so little sweetness in the music I hear now, no croons, no doo-wop or slow ones where you could hug up with someone and hold them against your body, feel their heart against yours, touch their cheek with your cheek - and it was OK, it was allowed, even the mothers standing around at the birthday party, the rug rolled back in the living room, didn't mind if you held their daughters as you swayed to the music, eyes squeezed shut, holding each other, and holding on to the song, until you almost stopped moving, just shuffled there, embracing, as the Moonglows and the Penguins crooned, and the mothers looked on not with disapproval or scorn, looked on with their eyes dreaming, as if looking from a thousand miles away, as if from over the mountain and across the sea, a look on their faces I didn't understand, not knowing then those other songs I would someday enter, not knowing how I would shimmer and writhe, jig like a puppet doing the shimmy-shimmy-kokobop, or glide from turn to counterturn within the waltz,not knowing how I would hold the other through the night and across the years, holding on for love and dear life, for solace and kindness, learning the dance as we go, leering from those first, awkward, shuffling steps, that sweetness and doo-wop back at the beginning. - by Joseph Stroud Dying quietly These children die quietly; No headlines screaming across the page, No rage from politicians blaming others, No mothers appearing on our screens, Seen waving banners asking why Did her child and forty thousands others die Today. The way they die is quietly, Not for the want of a miracle cure; Pure water, food, simple medications are all they’re needing So proceedings will not be taken out; Without a voice No choice but to die Unheard. The words must come From others. - by Pat Moon Soft Riots/TV News 6pm july 4 theyre marching on the american consulate be / cause theres nowhere else to go its cold in the city wind off the water trains on time marching marching for marching for reasons in adelaide a man takes off his coat in melbourne a man sits down and sighs in sydney a man changes channels in brisbane its windy southwest change max 65 THE CAMERAMEN ARE READY the spotlit streets spit back cats cars action action action action a spearhead of radicals bearing red flags urged on and led by other students a drawing of the prime minister was also burned a petition police wielding batons kicked and punched 1000 independence day ball with 99 arrested and constable green hit by a stone & allowed to leave I tell ya jude you cant beat the sheriff che che che che che guevara che che guevara che che che guevara che che guevara che angelic hip christ holding bulletholes to his poems: crucified dead & buried after three days he didnt rise / no rock rolled back who live out your lives who live out your lives in darkness in darkness a match three butts ashes all on a box of pins the police were unable to find a motive for the killing. they suggested three alternatives: READY up against the wall they pin the target to your chest & share your last cigarette up against the wall clawing at AIM spotlights arclight gutteral swing bark blinding the wire ripping through your outstretched fingers tearing at your machinegun gut gut to shredding clothes a shirt flagged above bones the wire flashing with the sun wire barbs gas sssh ing when i shut my eyes its dark in my brain zzzoooooooooooomm shot reversed to full screen panoramic wall strung by the hungry prisons of FIRE Click goodnight melbourne lights out adelaide brisbane shut your eyes sydney see you in the morning. - by Richard Tipping