6+1 Rubric For Beginning Writers Ready To Begin Exploring Expanding Extending Established IDEAS IDEAS IDEAS IDEAS IDEAS Imitation writing conveys little meaning Outline of real life object shows up in early drawing Drawings may not be completely recognizable Detail not present in picture or text An oral reading by the author is needed to understand ORGANIZATION — Letters are scattered across page — No coordination of written elements in evidence — Lines/pictures/letters are randomly placed on paper Lines/pictures/letter are grouped haphazardly — No sense of order One or more idea is present in the most general way The text and pictures cover multiple topics Drawings show shading, texture, and color but may stand alone from text Text is simple letters Reader gets the general idea, but needs author to explain in more detail ORGANIZATION The paper has no title Letters/words are usually under pictures as captions Simple clues for sequencing emerge in pictures/early text The arrangement of pictures makes sense Left to right; top to bottom orientation is evident No transitions are present The writing makes sense in a general way; pictures are still an important part of the idea Most of the text and pictures are on the same idea Lists and simple details are present Pictures and illustrations centralize thoughts and have elements of detail. Text and picture are understandable to the reader ORGANIZATION The writing works by itself to explain a simple idea or story The writing and pictures are on one general topic Key details begin to surface The writing generally makes sense with bits of extraneous information here and there Pictures and text work harmoniously to create a richer treatment of the topic ORGANIZATION The simple title restates the topic There is a sense of beginning but just Stops at the end Arrangement of pictures and text shows simple logic There is basic order with a few missteps Pacing is uneven; more text at the beginning than the middle or end Sentence parts are linked with conjunctions (but, and, or) The title tries to capture the central idea The writing starts out strong and includes an obvious conclusion such as “The End.” Like pieces of information are grouped to make sense Ideas follow one after the other in sequence or order Pacing is even through the beginning, middle and end. Obvious transitions link one sentence to the next The reader is unsure what was attempted The text is copied from originals; nothing is original No awareness of audience in evidence Simplest of drawing/lines No distinguishing marks are present that make it the author’s own work VOICE Text/picture are a routine response to assignment The author copies some text but also adds a bit of their own The text is ordinary VOICE The drawings may hint at individuality Very little of the writer is in evidence The Culham Writing Company, 2004 This work is a peek of the writer’s own way of looking at this topic Touches of originality found in text and pictures Now you feel it, now you don’t BIG letters, exclamation points, underlining, repetition (very, very), and creativity in pictures used to show emotion Summary statements: “I was scared.” hide the writer. VOICE The writer takes standard topic and turns it out differently from the others The writer takes it up a notch. The writing speaks to the reader in specific places Language choices add energy The writing reveals how the author feels about the topic in a general, safe way The text stays on focused and on specific topic Elaboration through details in the text create meaning for the reader The writer shows understanding of the topic through personal experience or selected pieces of information Illustrations (if present) enhance the key ideas in the writing but the text could stand alone and be quite clear ORGANIZATION VOICE The topic/idea is clear and coherent An thoughtful, effective title is present There is a clear beginning, middle, and end Important ideas are highlighted within the text Everything fits together nicely Where the writing is going and how it gets there makes sense to the reader The text slows down and speeds up to highlight the ideas and show attention to pacing Key transitional words connect one sentence to the next VOICE The writer “owns” the topic The author’s own DNA and fingerprints are all over the piece The writer is mindful someone will be reading the text The flavor and tone can be named: funny, sad. kind, generous, mean. Willing to risk outweighs the need to be safe 6+1 Rubric For Beginning Writers WORD CHOICE Scribbling and random lines mark the page Mock letters may be present There may be strings of letters across page The real and imitation letters are combined to shape words Can use environmental print such as his/her name SENTENCE FLUENCY Imitation words and letters are reproduced across the page It’s hard to figure out how the elements go together Pictures and text are not coordinated across the page There is no overall sense of flow to the piece Author must ‘read” piece aloud to hear rhythm that is intended but not actually written CONVENTIONS Letter are written in string (prephonetic spelling: Letters are formed irregularly; there is no use of capitals and lower case with intent Spacing is uneven between letters and words WORD CHOICE Traditional letters are present along with nonstandard letters Grouping of letters begin to form words Some basic words are tried Name, date, words from the board are copied correctly Pictures are used when simple words aren’t enough SENTENCE FLUENCY Punctuation is not present Grammar is evident only with oral reading, not evident in writing Words are combined to make short, choppy phrases Awkward word patterns break reader’s flow Writer stumbles as it is read aloud; may have back up and reread Only parts can be read aloud; the rest needs writer interpretation Words are unreadable to the untrained eye (quasi-phonetic spelling: KnT, sD, Wt) Doesn’t discriminate between upper and lower case letters Spacing between letters and words is evident The writer experiments with punctuation The grammar of oral language is present The Culham Writing Company, 2004 Traditional letters are present and correct WORD CHOICE Simple words done well; imprecise use of bigger words Generally uses words or phrases that are the first ones that come to mind Some repetition of words bogs the reader down Colorless words and phrases are used throughout SENTENCE FLUENCY Words, labels or lists stand alone CONVENTIONS WORD CHOICE Basic subject/verb pattern occurs in simple sentences (I jumped.) Sentence beginnings are the same and create a sing song pattern Longer sentences go on and on Complex phrasing is clumsy Challenging to read aloud, but it can he done Spelling of high use words is inconsistent (phonetic spelling: kitn, sed, wot, etc.) Upper and lower case letters are used correctly Capitals mark the beginning of sentences End punctuation marks are generally present and correct There is evidence of correct grammar in the writing Bigger words are tried and are mostly correct The writer tries some creative phrasing There is very little repetition of words A word or phrase here or there stand out as nicely done SENTENCE FLUENCY CONVENTIONS Specific words (i.e. Raisin Bran not cereal) are combined with generic ones Several simple and basic compound sentences are done well The sentences start differently The beginnings of sentences and proper nouns have capitals The writer uses punctuation at the end of the sentence, for words in a series, and might try to use quotation marks Text may be long enough for one indented paragraph Correct use of verb tenses, and subject/verb agreement is present The writer is successful in reaching stretching with words The images paint a picture in the mind of the reader Careful choice t use just the right words or phrase Figurative language works reasonably well Favorite words are used correctly and with Creativity SENTENCE FLUENCY Longer expressions attempted with some success in rhythm and cadence Spelling is correct or close on high use words (KITEN, SAED, WANT, etc.) Nice use of everyday words and phrases Some sentences read smoothly while others still need work A couple of awkward moments, but otherwise it is smooth to read aloud CONVENTIONS WORD CHOICE There are multiple sentences leading to a paragraph or two Several sentence patterns including complex are attempted and done reasonably well Different sentence beginnings and lengths add pleasing rhythm to the writing Logical links lead reader from one sentence to the next and create a sense of rhythm. The piece is a breeze to read aloud CONVENTIONS High use words are spelled correctly and all others are easy to read even though not 100% correct The writer applies basic capitalization rules correctly Punctuation marks are used effectively to guide the reader through the text One or more paragraphs with indenting is present Standard grammar in evidence Conventions are applied consistently and accurately for developmental age level