Laura Redebaugh ED 282-02 Open-Mind Portraits of Fausto Strategy: I will be using the Open-Minded Portraits Strategy. At this point, the students are preparing to write their literary essays on the deeper meaning of text. They have been focusing on analyzing the actions and thoughts of the characters in the novel, and this strategy concentrates on this. The Open-Minded Portraits strategy makes the students analyze the actions, words, and thoughts of a character in order to find the deeper meaning of the text. Audience: The classroom is a 7th grade writing course. There are 24 students in second hour and 15 students in third hour. I will be teaching my lesson with both hours. Both classes are made up of a mostly Hispanic population, with a mix of Caucasian and AfricanAmerican students. There are more boys than girls in the class, but not by a large margin. There are about five students with special needs, mostly students with ADHD. Most students have English as their first language, with the exception of one student, who has Spanish as his first language. There are also multiple bilingual students that speak both English and Spanish. I am also making the assumption that the students will be able to pinpoint pivotal points in the text and graphically represent the thoughts of the main character in this moment. The students have prior knowledge about finding the deeper meaning behind the text and thinking about what the character is thinking about. I am making two accommodations in order to meet the needs of this diverse group of students. One accommodation is to make a copy of the assignment and lesson to give to the special education aide so that she can further assist her students in their workshop. Another accommodation is that I will provide an example of the assignment and show it to the class so that it is easier for them to understand the instruction, which will be helpful for the entire class. Length of Lesson: about 40 minutes Step 1. Classroom Management 2. Orientation 1 3. Read “The No-Guitar Blues” 4. Orientation 5. Make a Portrait of a character 6. Choose a Pivotal Point in the Story 7. Design the “thinking” page 8. Write Explanation of Picture 9. Share the completed open-mind portraits 10. Closing Expected Time 1 minute 1 minute 10 minutes 5 minutes 2 minutes 1 minute 10 minutes 2 minutes 5 minutes 2 minutes 1 Materials Needed: Teacher A completed example of an Open-Minded Portrait Document Camera One Open-Minded Portrait worksheet (double-sided) for each student A Copy of “No-Guitar Blues” Student Pencil Journal Lesson Objective: Students will illustrate the deeper meaning of the text through the thoughts of the protagonist. Grade Level Content Expectation (GLCE): R.NT.07.03 analyze the role of antagonists, protagonists, internal and external conflicts, and abstract themes. W.PR.07.02 apply a variety of pre-writing strategies for both narrative (e.g., graphically depict roles of antagonist/protagonist, internal/external conflict) and informational writing (e.g., position statement/supporting evidence, problem statement/solution, or compare/ contrast). Assessment: The students should be able to identify pivotal points in the story and illustrate the character’s thoughts at this moment in the story, as well as the deeper meaning of the text. I will be able to assess this by walking around the class as they are creating their open-minded portraits and also at the end of the lesson, where some will share their openminded portraits with the class on the document camera. What is Happening in the Lesson Classroom Management (1 minute) The students will be sitting at their desks during the lesson My behavior expectations for them are that they pay actively participate in the lesson and raise their hands when they have a question I will manage time by watching the clock. My mentor teacher will hand out materials as I am explaining the lesson. What is Being Said in the Lesson T: Ok, today we’re going to be reading a story called “No-Guitar Blues” and completing an activity on it. I want you all to raise your hands when you have a question. If I am raising my hand that means that I am trying to get your attention. 2 I will raise my hand when I want to get the students’ attention I will maintain the teacher’s routine of writing the schedule on the board so that students know what to expect today. Mini-Orientation (2 minutes) I will explain to the students that they need to take notes on the story I’m going to read. Read Short Story (10 minutes) I will be reading the story “No-Guitar Blues” by Gary Soto. I’m going to be pausing at four points throughout the story to allow the students to take notes. T: Take out the paper you have in your journal for notes on Story #4. While I’m reading the story, I’m going to pause at times and I want you to write down some notes on the story during that time. Make sure to focus on taking notes on the main character. Pause #1 T: Who is the main character of this story? (Bloom’s: Knowledge) ESR: Fausto ESR: (raises hand) How do you spell that? T: (writes “Fausto” on the board) T: Ok, now take a minute to write down some notes on the story and make sure to take notes on Fausto and his family Pause #2 T: What is Fausto going to do? (Bloom’s: Comprehension) ESR: He’s going to give someone their dog back, but he’s going to pretend that it was on the highway so they get scared and give him money T: Very good, now take a minute to write down some notes on what has happened so far in the story Pause #3 T: Go ahead and write down some notes on the story so far. Focus on Fausto and how he felt about tricking the man and his wife T: This next section is the last section of the story. Pause #4 T: Take a minute and write down some notes on the rest of the story 3 Orientation (5 minutes) I will explain an open-minded portrait while showing a blank copy of the worksheet on the document camera. After explaining the worksheet, I will show my own example of an open-minded portrait of the character “Gabriel”, whom was in the short story from my KWL lesson. T: This is called an open-minded portrait (show blank worksheet). On the front of the worksheet, you’re going to draw the face of Fausto. You don’t need to spend too much time on this side. Now, on the other side, (flips page), you are going to choose a pivotal, or important, part of the story to focus on and write it on this line (point to line) (Blooms: Synthesis) Note: This lesson is an anticipatory activity for when they will be writing their literary essay T: What are some examples of important parts in “No-Guitar Blues”? (Bloom’s: Comprehension) ESR: When he wants a guitar T: Yes, what other scene was important? ESR: When he finds the dog ESR: True, what else? ESR: When he gives the dog back to the owner. T: Good, these are all examples of pivotal scenes in the story. T: Next, you are going to draw what Fausto is thinking in that moment in the story. You should draw about 3-4 pictures in this area. After drawing the pictures, I want you to write 2-3 sentences about what you drew down here (points). T: I made an example of an open-minded portrait using the character Gabriel, from the short story we read last week “Spaghetti”. Do you all remember that story, about the lonely boy who found a cat? ESR: Yes T: So here is my example. This is my picture of Gabriel’s face. Please don’t make fun of my drawings; I’m not an artist. In this assignment you don’t have to focus on making your pictures perfect, you just have to make sure you are clearly demonstrating what Fausto is thinking about in that scene. T: And this is the back side of the 4 worksheet (flip over) T: I chose to draw what Gabriel is thinking about in the opening scene of the story, where he is sitting on the stoop of his building thinking about how lonely he is, so I wrote this at the top of the paper “Gabriel is sitting on the stoop” (points at words). T: And these are the pictures I drew for what Gabriel is thinking about while he is sitting on the stoop. (points at pictures while discussing them) In this picture, I’m showing that he was the only one in class with the right answers, and the other students were upset about this. Then, over here I drew pictures on how he was thinking about how he didn’t have a lot of money (points to picture of dollar sign with an x across it). We know this because he was thinking about how he ate a butter sandwich for lunch (points to butter sandwich) and lived in a tall building with crumbling bricks (points to picture of this). Then over here I drew how he saw himself living outside. And over here I drew how he wished for some company, because he was lonely. T: Then, down here I wrote my explanation of my picture on these lines and I wrote When Gabriel is sitting on the stoop h is very lonely and is being very hard on himself. He thinks about how his family does not have a lot of money, how he is the only one in class that has the right answers, and how he wishes for some company. T: So I want you to take this example and create your own (Bloom’s: Synthesis) open-minded picture using the character Fausto. Remember, only spend a couple of minutes on the front, I want you to focus on the back page, and the pictures don’t have to be too detailed. However, make 5 #1 Make a portrait of a character (2 minutes) Students will draw the face of the protagonist, Fausto. I will emphasize that students should not spend too much time on this step. I will tell students when they should be moving on to the next step. Note: Instead of having the students draw the head, I am going to give the students a worksheet with the outline of a head on both sides. #2 Choose a pivotal scene in the story (1 minute) The students should choose an important part of the short story where they have clues as to what Fausto is thinking about in that moment. I will be walking around the room and noting which scenes students are choosing and helping students that need it. I will tell students when they should be moving on to the next step. Note: In the 50 Strategies book, Step 2 is “Cut out the ‘portrait’ and ‘thinking’ pages”, but instead of having the students cut out one face and multiple thinking pages and connect them, I am having the face on the front of the worksheet and the thinking on the back side of the worksheet. Instead of choosing multiple scenes, I am going to have the students choose one scene, to really focus in on the character and also because of time. #3 Design the “thinking” page (10 minutes) Students will draw the thoughts of Fausto in the pivotal scene of their choice. sure that it still looks nice because I’m going to ask some of you to show our pictures and explanation to the class when you are done. ESR: (draw Fausto’s face) ESR: Well I don’t know what he looks like T: Think about clues in the story that might tell us what he looks like. (after 2 minutes) T: You should be moving on to the next page now, remember that the picture on the front doesn’t have to be perfect. (Teacher is circulating around the room assisting and assessing students) ESR: I can’t think of what to write. T: Think about what parts were important in the story. In what scenes do you really know what Fausto was thinking? (Blooms: Comprehension) ESR: I mean...I guess when he was stealing the dog. T: Right, what was he thinking about there? (Bloom’s: Comprehension) ESR: How he wanted the guitar and the dog would pay for the guitar. T: Good, write down that scene and draw what he was thinking right here. (after 1 minute) T: You should be moving on to the drawings by now. T: Wow, Jose. I like how you connected those two ideas. T: Good job, Sarah. 6 I will be walking around the room and noting the drawings that the students are creating. I will assist students that need it. I will tell students when they should be moving on to the next step. ESR: I can’t think of anything. T: Which scene did you choose? ESR: Where he gives the $20 to the church. T: What do you think Gabriel was thinking about when he gave the money to the church? Why did he do it? (Bloom’s: Analysis) ESR: I guess he was guilty. T: Good, try to show that in your pictures. ESR: How many drawings do you want? T: Try to do 3-4 different pictures. #4 Write 2-3 sentences describing the pictures in the “thinking pages” (2 minutes) Students will describe their drawings in 23 sentences in the lines given at the bottom of the page. I will be walking around the room and reading the explanations. I will assist the students that need it. I will tell students when they should be finishing up their explanations. **Note that I have added this step. Since this class is a writing focused course, I wanted to make sure that a writing component was included, as well as the comprehension and analysis component of drawing the character’s thoughts. #5 Share the completed open-mind portraits (5 minutes) About 3-5 students will come up and share their open-minded picture on the document camera. (After 10 minutes) T: You should be writing your explanation by now. T: Good explanation, Sutton. T: Why don’t you add more, Ricardo? You have a lot of good drawings in your portrait, I think you can write more than that. (After 2 minutes) T: You should be finishing up by now. T: Who would like to share their openminded portraits? ESR: (raise hand) T: Divino, go ahead. ESR: This is how I drew Fausto’s face. (flips page) and this is what I drew that he was thinking. T: Which part of the story did you choose? (Blooms: Comprehension) ESR: I choose to write about when Fausto 7 wanted a guitar. T: Good, that was an important part of the story. Explain your drawings. ESR: Well, I drew a guitar, because he wanted a guitar. And then I drew a tv with music playing, because he wanted a guitar because of the band he saw on tv. Then I drew a dollar with an x through it because he knew that his family didn’t have enough money to buy a guitar. T: Why is this an important part of the story? (Bloom’s: Comprehension) ESR: Well, if he hadn’t wanted the guitar so bad he probably wouldn’t have tricked those people into giving him money so that he could get the guitar. T: That’s true. Good job, Divino. Does anyone else want to show their portrait? ESR: (raise hands) T: Marisol, go ahead and show us your portrait. ESR: Ok, so this is how I drew his face. T: Very good, can you show us the back? ESR: Yeah, this is what I drew on the back. And I chose the part where he found the dog. T: Good, and what did you draw? ESR: Well, I drew the dog here, and the dog had a tag on it and looked really clean, and that was how Fausto knew that the owners were rich, so I drew dollar signs around the owners over here because the owners were rich. And then over here I drew Fausto thinking about the highway because that’s where he was going to say that he found the dog. T: Good, thanks for sharing. Who else wants to share? (ESR: raise hands) T: Ricardo, go ahead. ESR: Here’s his face and here’s the back. I wrote about when he gave the money to the church. I drew the church and the $20. Then I wrote about how he noticed that all the older people saw that he put in $20 and felt bad about only putting in one or two 8 Closing (2 minutes) I will go over the story to make sure the students really understand the character and how his thoughts. Then we will go over how this activity relates to understanding the deeper meaning of the story and how this will guide them while writing their literary essays. dollars. I drew him thinking about the couple with the dog and how they were so nice to him. Then in my explanation I explained my pictures and how he felt so guilty about the dog that he gave the $20 to the church and then he felt better. T: Good job. Thank you, Ricardo. T: Did you guys like this activity? (Bloom’s: Evaluation) ESR: Yeah, it was fun! T: Good, I liked looking at all of your drawings. Fausto is an interesting character. Can you tell me how Fausto changed from the beginning to the end of the story? (Bloom’s: Analysis) ESR: At the beginning, all he could think about was getting the guitar but in the end he didn’t want it. T: Why didn’t he want a guitar anymore? (Bloom’s: Comprehension) ESR: He felt guilty about tricking the couple after they were really nice to him. T: Why is it important to understand the thoughts of the character? (Bloom’s: Analysis) ESR: So that you can understand what’s really happening in the story. T: Exactly. Understanding what is happening in the character’s mind can help further your understanding of the deeper meaning of the text. This story is not just about a boy that wants a guitar, finds a dog, and gives the money he earned from returning the dog to a church. What is the deeper meaning of the story? (Bloom’s: Analysis). ESR: Well, it’s really about a boy that will do anything to get a guitar. He even steals a dog. But then when he steals the dog he feels really bad because the people are really nice. Then he gives the money away to the church because he feels guilty. T: Exactly. Understanding what Fausto is thinking about helps us to understand that the deeper meaning of how he feels guilty about doing anything he can to buy this 9 guitar. So in the future, as you are analyzing a text, you can think about what the character is really thinking about at important parts of the story. This will also be helpful when you are writing your literary essays next week. T: Ok, you may keep your notes and openminded portraits in your journal. Mrs. Stam will now tell you more about your literary essays. 10