APRIMERONSCANSION BasicFeet Thebasicunitusedforcountingaccentsinpoetryiscalledafoot.Eachfoothaseithertwosyllablesinitorthreesyllablesin it.Therearefourbasicfeet,twofortwo-syllableunitsandtwoforthree-syllableunits:thenamesareGreekbecausewe traceonesystemofpoeticscansionbacktotheGreeks.Herearethefourbasicfeet: Theiambicfoot(iam)consistsoftwosyllables,thefirstofwhichisspokensofterthanthesecond: _/ _/ _/ suggest pretend René(nameofapersoncalledRené) Thetrochaicfoot(trochee)consistsoftwosyllables,thefirstofwhichisspokenlouderthanthesecond: /_ /_ /_ problem rather Robert(nameofapersoncalledRobert) Theanapesticfoot(anapest)consistsofthreesyllables,thefirsttwoofwhicharespokenmoresoftlythanthethird: __/ __/ __/ interrupt understand apprehend Thedactylicfoot(dactyl)consistsofthreesyllables,thefirstofwhichisspokenlouderthanthesecondandthird: /__ murmuring /__ ruminate /__ Henderson(nameofapersoncalledHenderson) Thefollowingfeetaresometimesusedwhenscanningalineofpoetry: Thespondaicfootconsistsoftwosyllables,bothloud.Thereisnounaccentedsyllableinaspondee: // // seagull penguin Thepyrrhicfootconsistsoftwosyllables,bothsoft.Thereisnoaccentedsyllableinaphyrric: __ __ inthe ashe Therearetwomorefeetinadditiontotheabovesix,buttheyareusedinfrequentlyinscansion.Theyareboththreesyllablefeet. Theamphibrachfootconsistsofthreesyllables,oneloudsyllablesandwichedbetweentwosoftsyllables. _/_ _/_ whatever ambitious Theamphimacerfootconsistsofthreesyllables,onesoftsyllablesandwichedbetweentwoloudsyllables: /_/ /_/ twentytwo Pentecost BasicMeters.Anumberoffeetinalineofpoetryconstitutesameter.Thereis,theoretically,aninfinitenumberoffeet possibleforanylineofpoetry,butpoetrytendstobewritteninshortratherthanlonglines,sowetraditionallystopour linecountsateight.Thefollowinglistrepresentsthebasiceightmeters,eachdependentuponthenumberoffeetinthe line: monometer=alineofpoetrywithonlyonefoot dimeter=alinewithtwofeet trimeter=alinewiththreefeet tetrameter=alinewithfourfeet pentameter=alinewithfivefeet(Shakespeare'sfavorite) hexameter=alinewithsixfeet(theFrenchloveit) heptameter=alinewithsevenfeet octameter=alinewitheightfeet Handydefinitionstoremember: Footisaunitofmeter. Meterisrhythm. 1 ThefollowingdiscussionofANTITHESISisfrom JohnBarton,PlayingShakespeare,page55 Wecan’tgofarwrongifwejustkeeprememberingShakespeare’sadvicetotheplayersfrom Hamlet: Speakthespeech,Iprayyou,asIpronouncedittoyou,trippinglyonthe tongue…Benottootame,neither.Butletyourowndiscretionbeyourtutor. Suittheactiontotheword,thewordtotheaction.”(3.2.) It’sallthereisn’tit?Nottoolittle,nottoomuch.I’malwaysstruckbythesentence‘Suittheactiontotheword,theword totheaction’.I’mnotsure,butIthinkShakespeareisherepartlyexpressinginElizabethantermswhatwe’vebeen expressingbytheword‘intention’.‘Intention’equals‘Whatareyoudoing?’and‘Action’equals‘Thatwhichyouaredoing’. Sosuittheactiontotheword,thewordtotheaction. ThatsentenceofHamlet’sremindsmeofavitalpointaboutShakespeare’slanguage.IfIweretoofferonesinglebitof advicetoanactornewtoShakespeare’stext,IsuspectthatthemostusefulthingIcouldsaywouldbe,‘Lookforthe antithesesandplaythem.’‘Suittheactiontotheword,thewordtotheaction’isagoodexampleofadoubleantithesis. Wecaneasilyoverlookitbecausewedon’tuseantithesisverymuchtoday,particularlyinoureverydayspeech.Yet Shakespearewasdeeplyimbuedwiththesenseofit.Hethoughtantithetically.Itwasthewayhissentencesoverandover foundtheirshapeandtheirmeaning. ‘Antithesis’isinawayabadwordforsomethingverypractical.Itsoundsobscureandlearned.Perhapsitwouldbebetter touseaphraseofShakespeare’sandtalkof‘settingthewordagainsttheword’.Inthesentencewe’vejustheard,‘inthe mindtosuffer’issetagainst‘totakearms’,and‘byopposing’issetagainst‘endthem’.Sothatiswhatyouhavetodo:set onewordorphraseagainstanother.Ifanactordoesn’tpointupantitheses,hewillbehardandsometimesimpossibleto follow. SHAKESPEARE’SIMAGERYfromSimplyShakespearebyTobyWiddicombe(pp.46-88) Imageryconsistsoftwoqualitiesinherentinalllanguagebutmostfrequentlyfoundinpoetryandindramaticlanguage. Thefirstcomprisesliteralstatementsthatappealtoanyorallofthefivesenses:sight,hearing,touch,taste,andsmell. Thesecondcomprisesfigurativelanguage,non-literalstatementswhichaskustoseesomethinginsomeneworunusual ways. LiteralAppealstotheSensesfromMACBETH.Firsttheliteralappeals: AppealtotheSenseofSight WhenMacbethshoutsatBanquo’sghost:“Nevershake/Thygorylocksatme”(3.4.50)weseeaghostwithbloody,mattedhair. AppealtotheSenseofHearing WhenLadyMacbethsays,afterherhusbandmurdersDuncan:“Iheardtheowlscreamandcricketscry”(2.2.16),wehearthemtooinour minds. AppealtotheSenseofTouch WhenMacbethshoutsatBanquo’sghost:“thybloodiscold”(3.4.95),wefeelthatsensation. AppealtotheSenseofTaste WhenMacbethtoastshisguestsatthebanquet,“Idrinktothegeneraljoyo’the’wholetable”(3.4.90),ourtastebudsarearoused. AppealtotheSenseofSmell WhenLadyMacbethinhermadnesstriestoremovethestainofherguiltforDuncan’smurderbywashingoffDuncan’snonexistentbloodfrom herhands,shegrotesquelycomplains:“Here’sthesmellofthebloodstill”(5.1.49).Wesmellthatbloodtoo. FigurativeLanguage. Analogy.Thedescription(usuallydevelopedatsomelength)ofanideabycomparingitwithanotherideathatismore familiar.Thedistinctionbetweenananalogyandasimileisthatinananalogytheframeworkofthecomparisonis emphasized.InAsYouLikeIt,Jaquescomparesthelifeoftheindividualtothatofanactorplayingmanyroles. 2 Hyperboleisanexaggerationforthesakeofeffect.Itisnotmeanttobetakenliterally.Sometimeswesay:“Idon’t understandawordyoujustsaid.”That’srarelyifevertrue(aslongasthepersonisspeakinginourownlanguage);we simplysayittopointoutthattherewassomethingwrongwiththewayanideawasexpressed. WhenMacbethsaystohiswife: …Iaminblood Steppedinsofarthat,shouldIwadenomore, Returningwereastediousasgooe’r(3.4.137-39) HehashimselfmurderedDuncanandhistwoguardsaswellashavinghadthreemurdererskillBanquo.Nonetheless,hehasnotkilledsomany menthathewouldhavetowadethroughtheirbloodasonewouldwadethroughastream. Ironyisabroadandsometimesoverusedtermthatcomesinseveralvarieties.Whatallexamplesofironyshareisthe realizationofasignificantgapbetweenappearanceandreality.Therearefourmaintypesofirony:cosmic,dramatic, structural,andverbal. 1.Cosmicironyrevealshumanbeingstobeatthemercyofacruelfate.CosmicironyoccursinMacbethwhenMacbeth decidestomakesuretheWitches’prophecythathewillbecomekingcomestrue.Hebecomesking,andisthenassuredbytheWitchesthatno onewilloverthrowhimunlesstwoseeminglyimpossibleeventsoccur.Andso,Macbethistrickedbyamalignfate. 2.Dramaticironycreatestensionbyemphasizingthegapinknowledgebetweentheaudienceandsomeorallof thecharactersonstage.Theaudienceseesalltheactiononstage;thecharactersareawareofonlypart.Dramaticirony,asyoumight expect,isthecommonestformofironyinShakespeare’splays.WhenamessengerannouncestoLadyMacbeththatDuncanwillvisit Macbeth’scastletohonorhimforhisbraveryindefeatingtheScottishrebels.Themessengersayssimply:“TheKingcomesheretonight” (1.5.31).HemeansDuncan,buttheaudience(whichhaswitnessedtheWitches’prophesyingMacbethwillbeking)knowsthatShakespeare meansMacbethaswellasDuncanbythetitle“King”. 3.Structuralironydoesnot(perhaps,cannot)occurinsopessimisticaplayasMacbeth.Hamlet,however,providesa goodexampleofstructuralironyinthecharacterOphelia.Shedrawsmuchofherpowerfromhernaïveteincontrasttothecynicismof Claudius,thedouble-dealingofPolonius(herfather),themachinationsofHamlethimself,andtheworldlinessoftheaudienceorreader. 4.Verbalironyisatoned-downformofsarcasminwhichsomeonesaysonethingbutmeansanother.Itisthislast formthatismostcommonlyusedoutsidethecontextofliterature.If,forinstance,yougotoareallyboringpartyand,then,saytoafriend afteryou’veleft:“Ihadawonderfultime!”you’rebeingironic.“Banquo’ssafe?”(3.4.25).Whatthewordsafeshouldmeaninalmostany contextisthatBanquoisdeadand,so,he—Macbeth—issafe. Metaphoristhesinglemostimportantandfrequentlyusedfigureofspeechwherethewriterdescribesoneideaorobject intermsofanothersothereisanidentitybetweenthetwo.InMacbeth,whenLadyMacbethcallsmemory“thewarderof thebrain”(1.7.66),sheissayingthatthememorylooksaftertheotherpartsofthemindinthesamewaythataprison guardlooksafteraprisoner.Whenametaphortakesplaceovermorethanalineorisdevelopedatsomelength,itis labeledanextendedmetaphor.InMacbeth,DuncanandBanquotalktogetheraftertherebelshavebeensuccessfullydefeated,anddevelopthe samemetaphoratlength.Duncanbeginswithanagriculturalmetaphor:“Ihavebeguntoplantthee,andwilllabor/Tomaketheefullofgrowing”(1.4.2829).TowhichBanquoresponds:“ThereifIgrow,/Theharvestisyourown”(32-33).Duncanrepliesinkindwithametaphorsuggestingtheirrigationof crops:“Myplenteousjoys,/Wantoninfullness,seektohidethemselves/Indropsofsorrow”(33-35). Onomatopoeiaisadevicematchingthesoundofthewordascloselyaspossibletowhatisbeingdescribed.Wordssuchas “buzz,”“tick-tock,”“hiss,”and“crash”aresupposedtorepresenttheverysoundstheydescribe.InMacbeth,theThird Witch’scry“Adrum,adrum!”isintendedtoreinforcethesounditself(1.3.30). OxymoronThisdeviceyokestogethertwocontradictoryideas.ItderivesfromtwoGreekwordswhichtogethermean “sharp-dull.”Weuseoxymoraallthetimewithoutthinkinghowoddthecombinedtermsare:“bittersweet,”“jumbo shrimp,”and“liquidpaper.”InMacbeth,theprotagonistdefendshismurderofDuncan’sguardswithastringofoxymora:“Whocanbewise, amazed,temp’rateandfurious,/Loyalandneutral,inamoment?”(2.3.110-11). Personification.Thisfigureofspeechtreatsanimals,ideas,orinanimateobjectsasiftheywerehuman.InMacbeth,when MacbethpreparestomurderDuncanheissonervousthathebegstheearthnottobetrayhimandsaywhathehasdone:“Thousureandfirm-set earth/Hearnotmystepswhichwaytheywalk,forfear/Theverystonesprateofmywhereabouts(2.1.57-59).Stonescannotliterallytalk(or“prate”). Pun.Aplayonwordswithidenticalorverysimilarsoundsbutdifferentmeanings.Punsareimportantbecauseoftheir abilitytoallowtheusertosaytwothingsatonce.Some,however,considerthepunthelowestformofhumor. Shakespeareusespunsfrequently.AsimpleexampleisinMacbethwhenthetitlecharacterpunsonthewordgrave(inthesenseofboth “serious”anda“tomb”)ashetalkswithBanquo,whomhewillsoonhavemurdered.Hesaystohim,“Weshouldhaveelsedesiredyourgoodadvice,/ Whichstillhathbeenbothgraveandprosperous,/Inthisday’scouncel”(3.1.21-23).Thissamepun(onson/sun)isevenmoreimportantinRichardIII, 3 whereitbecomesalmostamotif(somethingwhichrunsthroughouttheplayasacommentontheaction).Thefirsttwolinesoftheplay,whichare spokenbythefutureRichardIII,read,“Nowisthewinterofourdiscontent/MadeglorioussummerbythissonofYork.” Simile.Alongwithitsfigurativecousin,themetaphor,simileisoneofthecommonestliterarydevices.Simileisaless powerfulliterarydevicethanismetaphor,however.Wheremetaphordenotesanidentitybetweentwodissimiliarthings, similedenotesmerelyalikenessanddoessousingsuchintroductorywordsas“like,”or“as,”or“so.”Toclarifybriefly: Whenonesays“Myloveislikearose,”you’reusingasimile;ifyouweretosay,“myloveisarose,”thatwouldbea metaphor.Justasthereareextendedanalogiesandextendedmetaphors,sothereareextendedsimiles. Symbol.Thisdevicerepresentsanabstractideabymeansofaconcrete(i.e.physical)object.Symbolscanbedividedfor convenienceintopublic(oruniversal)andprivate(orgroup-specific)types.Thefirstofthesecanbeillustratedwellbya rose,awell-knownsymbolofloveorthebeloved.Thesecondtypeofsymbolcanbeillustratedbyreferringtothepoetry ofSylviaPlath,amajortwentieth-centuryAmericanpoet.Forher,blackshoeswereevocativeofherfather,andplaster castsrepresentedherfragilesenseofself.Neitherisauniversalsymbol;theycanonlybeunderstoodinthecontextofher poetryandlife.Symboldiffersfrommetaphorandsimilebecausewhereasinmetaphorandsimiletherelationismade clear,withasymboltherelationisneverstatedbutonlyunderstood.Somesymbolsgainpowerfromtheirsimplicityand frequency. Shakespeare’sRhetoric.RhetoricbecameahighlydevelopedartintheClassicalworldunderthecareofsuchGreek rhetoriciansasSocrates,Plato,andAristotle,andtheirRomandescendants:Cicero,Cato,andQuintilian.TheClassicalfivepartmodelfororganizinganypersuasivespeechhascomedowntoustodayasthemosteffectivemethodforconvincing anaudienceofthevalidityofanargumentorpointofview.Thefivepartsare: Invention.Thistermmeansdevelopmentofideas.Itrestsonthreeconcepts: 1.Ethos(orthecharacterofthespeaker) 2.Pathos(orappealstotheemotionsoftheaudience) 3.Logos(orthestructureoftheideaspresented). Arrangement.Thistermreferstohowthespeechisorganized.Ideallythatorganizationisinsevenparts: 1.Opening 2.Statementofbackgroundfacts 3.Definitionofterms 4.Statementofthesisormainidea 5.Proof 6.Refutationoftheopposition’sarguments 7.Conclusion Style.Thistermmeansfittingthelanguagetothesubjectandtotheaudience.Itdependsonfourqualities: 1.Accuracy 2.Clarity 3.Appropriateness 4.Colorfulness Memory.Thistermreferstothewaysinwhichthelanguageitselfprovidesthespeakerandhisorheraudiencewiththemeanstoremember theideaspresented. Delivery.Thistermrefersprimarilytothepersuasiveedgegiventorhetoricbygestureandvoice. AndhowdoesallthisrelatedirectlytoShakespeareandhisplays? 1.Rhetoriciseverywhereinhisplays,andsoitbecomesanotherusefulmeansofseeingwhatShakespeareistryingtodowithlanguage. 2.Hisstyleisremarkable,varyingquitedeliberatelyfromtheverysimpletotheimpressivelyornate. 3.Shakespeare’scharactersmakeappealsbased,withremarkablefrequency,onethos,pathos,andlogos.Justthinkforamomentaboutthe powerofHenryV’sspeechatHarfleur(3.1.1-34),thefamousonebeginning“Oncemoreuntothebreach,dearfriends,oncemore.”That speechworksbecauseofathreefoldappeal. •Itworksbecauseofethosorthecharacteroftheking:Hehassufferedwhathistiredmenhavesuffered. •ItworksbecauseofpathosorHenryV’sappealstotheemotionsofhissoldiers(menwhomhecalls“dearfriends,”“noblest English”and“goodyeomen”). •Itworksbecauseofthespeech’slogosorcleardevelopment(fromrequestthroughseveralwell-developedmetaphorsandsimiles toanappealtopatriotismandbackattheendtothatsamerequest:Stormthetown’sdefensesevenagainsttheodds). 4 Shakespeare’sDramaticRhetoric Adage.Apithyorshortsayingverymuchlikeaproverboraphorism.“Astitchintimesavesnine”or“hastemakeswaste” arewell-knownadages.InRichardII,JohnofGauntremarkstoBolingbroke,“Thereisnovirtuelikenecessity”(1.3.278). Alliteration.Therepetitionofthesameinitialsounds(usuallyconsonants)insuccessiveornearbywords.Guildenstern’shope inHamletthathecanhelpGertrudefindthecauseofthechangeinherson’spersonalityshowsamoresophisticateduseofthesamedevice:“Heaven’s makeourpresenceandourpractices/Pleasantandhelpfultohim!”(2.2.38-39).Here,thereisadoublealliterationof“h”and“p”consonantswiththefirst alliterationbracketingthesecond. Anaphora.Therepetitionofwordsatthebeginningofsuccessiveclauses,lines,orsentences.Shakespearebegins RichardIIIwithhis“Nowisthewinterofourdiscontent”speech.Togiveclearstructuretothespeech,ShakespearehastheDukerepeat “Now”atthebeginningoflines5and10,and“I”atornearthebeginningoflines14,16,18,23,24,30,and37. Antistrophe.Therepetitionofwordsattheendofsuccessiveclauses,lines,orsentences.Thisdeviceis,then,thereverse oftheoneabove,anaphora.InMacbeth,forexample,Macbeth,afterhehaskilledDuncan,looksdownathisbloodstainedhandsandcomments, “Thisisasorrysight.”Hiswife,inanefforttosnaphimoutofhisshock,replies,“Afoolishthought,tosayasorrysight”(2.2.24-25). Aside.Thisdeviceisusuallydefinedasacommentorshortspeechbyonecharactertotheaudienceortoanother characterwhich,byconvention,isnotheardbytheothercharactersonstage.Suchadefinition,however,scarcelycovers thewidevarietyofasidesusedbyShakespeareinhisplays.Asalways,helikestobreakthe“rules”forthegoodofdramatic effect.AtypicalasideisViola/Cesario’sremarkinTwelfthNighttotheaudiencewhenher/hisbeloved,Orsino,asksher/himtowooOliviaonhisbehalf. Sheresponds:“Yetabarfulstrife!/Whoe’erIwoo,myselfwouldbehiswife”(1.4.41-42). Assonance.Repetitionofvowelsoundsinsuccessiveornearbywordswheretheconsonantsthatfollowthevowelsand sometimesthosethatprecedethevowelsdifferfromeachother.InMacbeth,theWitches’chantat1.3.32-37employsassonancewith the“i”soundsof“thrice,”and“mine,”and“thrice”and“nine.” Caesura.Apauseinalineofverseorprose.Itusuallyoccursinthemiddleofthelineorsentence,andisfrequently signaledoremphasizedbypunctuation.CaesuraisoneofShakespeare’sfavoritedevices.Heusesittomatchthespeedof deliverytotheemotionofthespeakerandtobreakupthelongiambicpentameterlinesthatarethestapleofhisplays. Chiasmus.Thesequenceoftwoormorephrasesinthefirstpartofasentenceorlineofpoetryisreversedinthesecond half.Numerically,thesequencewouldberepresented1-2-2-1.PresidentJohnF.Kennedy’sfamousexhortationtotheAmericanpeople inhisInaugurationAddressisaclassicexampleofchiasmus(combinedinthiscasewithanaphora):“asknotwhatyourcountrycandoforyou;askwhat youcandoforyourcountry”(Horner322).InRichardII,thedeposedkingreflectsonthemistakeshemadeinhislife:“Iwastedtime,andnowdothtime wasteme”(5.5.49). Consonance.Repetitionoffinalconsonantsoundsinsuccessiveornearbywordsinwhichthevowelsoundsaredifferent. Thisdevicedoesforconsonantrepetitionwhatassonancedoesforvowels.Ineverydayspeech,thewords“lad”and“tread” areanexampleofconsonance.In3HenryVI,thefutureofEdwardIVinsultsHenryVIandhisqueen,Margaret: Butwhenhe[HenryVI]tookabeggartohisbed Andgracedthypoorsirewithhisbridalday, Eventhenthatsunshinebrewedashowerforhim Thatwashedhisfather’sfortunesforthofFrance Andheapedseditiononhiscrownathome. Forwhathathbroachedthistumultbutthypride?(2.2.154-59,emphasisadded) Threeofthewords--bed,brewed,andbroached--areanexampleofsustainedconsonance(aswell,incidentally,of alliteration).Eachendsinthesameconsonant(bed,brewed,andbroached),buteachtimethatconsonanthasadifferent vowelsoundbeforeit(bed,brewed,andbroached).Indeedafourthexampleinthesamespeechcouldalmostbeaddedto thelist,forthewordbridal,followedasitisbydayhasalmostthesamepatternastheotherthree. Ethos.Thecharacterofthespeakerand,byextension,thematchbetweenthecontentofthelinesspokenandthe personalityandworthofthespeaker.TheconceptisavitaloneinShakespeare’splaysbecausetheaudienceneedstobe abletojudgewhethertotrustsomeone’swords.Alongwithlogosandpathos,itisoneofthemajorformsofpersuasion availabletoanydramaticcharacter. 5 Logos.Thefitbetweenthoughtanditsexpressionaswellastheappearanceofcleardevelopment.Alongwithethosand pathos,itisoneofthemajorformsofpersuasionavailabletoanydramaticcharacter.Logosisacrucialconceptbecauseit allowstheaudienceorreadertojudgethequalityofanycharacter’swords.Whereethosdescribesthecharacterofthe speaker,logosdefinestherelationbetweenthoughtandexpression.Atitssimplest,howappropriatearethewordstothe ideasbeingexpressed? Pathos.Theemotioninaspeech,dialogue,orentireplay,thepurposebeingtomovetheaudiencetosorrow,compassion, andsympathy.Alongwithethosandlogos,itisoneofthemajorformsofpersuasionavailabletoanydramaticcharacter. Pathosasapersuasivedeviceiswonderfullyeffectivebecauseittargetsthewaysinwhichallhumanbeingsare fundamentallythesame.Atthedeepestlevel,weallhavethesamesenseofunfulfilleddesire,thesamefeelingofregret, thesamefearofdeath. Rhyme.Therepetitionofidenticalstressedvowelsoundsinwordsaswellasallthesoundsafterthestressedvowel. Rhymecanbethoughtofasacombinationofassonanceandconsonance,andmostoftenreferstowordsattheendsof successivelinesthatmatchIthewayI’vejustdescribed.Suchaninstanceofrhymeisstrictlycalledendrhyme,butthere aremanyexamplesinShakespeareandotherpoetsofinternalrhyme,thatisrhymeusedelsewhereinlinesofpoetryor prose.Therearethreetypesofrhyme,dependingonthenumberofsyllablesthatrhyme: 1. 2. 3. Masculine(orsingle)rhyme,inwhichtherhymeinvolvesonlyonestressedsyllable(runandfun). Feminine(ordouble)rhyme,inwhichboththestressedsyllableandthesyllablefollowinghavethesamesound(thunderandwonder). Triplerhyme,inwhichthestressedsyllableandthetwosyllablesthatfollowallhavethesamesound(gloriousandfurious). Rhymeisthegreatestmnemonicdevicethatthepoethastoworkwithbecausethemindinstantlypicksuponthe repetitionofidenticalsounds.Thevalueofrhyme,then,asrhetoricisthatitpersuadesbyemphasizingparticularwordsor ideas.Italsoprovidessomethingelse,variety. Soliloquy.Aspeechdeliveredtotheaudiencebyacharacterwhenaloneonstage.Thecontentofthespeechisofoneof twokinds:eitherthecharacterrevealshis/herinnermostthoughts,orhe/shepreviewsthecomingactionbylettingthe audienceknowwhathis/herintentionsare.Sometimes,asoliloquy(suchasIago’sinOthello1.3.383-405)combinesboth purposes.AlthoughShakespeare’smostfamoussoliloquiescomefromhisgreattragedies,hewrotethemthroughouthis career. Stichomythia.Adialogueinwhichtwocharactersdisputewitheachotherinshortalternatinglines.Oneofthebest examplesinallofShakespeareisthedialoguebetweenRichardIIIandQueenElizabeth,thewidowofRichard’sbrother, EdwardIV,inRichardIII4.4.ThetopicoftheirdisputeisRichard’swishtomarrytheQueen’sdaughter,ElizabethofYork. RichardbeginsbypointingoutthatsheisthedaughterofthequeenknowsthatRichardhasareputationforkillingthose whogetclosetohim,notleasthispreviouswife,LadyAnne.Thekingopenstherapid-firedialogueitselfbystatingthat ElizabethofYork“isaroyalprincess,”andthedebatecontinues: QUEENELIZABETH Tosaveherlife,I’llsaysheisnotso. KINGRICHARD Herlifeissafestoninherbirth. QUEENELIZABETH Andonlyinthatsafetydiedherbrothers(theprincesintheTower). KINGRICHARD Lo,attheirbirthgoodstarswereopposite. QUEENELIZABETH No,totheirlivesillfriendswerecontrary. KINGRICHARD Allunavoidedisthedoomofdestiny(213-18). Peopledotendtospeakinshortsentences,buttheyalsorarelygiveeachotheralternatinglines.So,whatisShakespeare’s purpose?Tochangethetempoofhisplaysandtoemphasizetheimportanceofparticularconcernsbythealternating rhythmofstichomythia.StichomythiaissimplyonemorewayinwhichShakespearevarieshisrhetorictomakehis dramaticpointmorepersuasively. Pattern,Repetition,Variation SomuchforthespecificsofShakespeare’smasterfuldramaticrhetoric.Theoveralleffectofthatrhetoricneedstobe examined,too,andthateffectcanbestbesummedupinthreewords:pattern,repetition,andvariation. 6 Pattern Patternismostobviousinsuchdevicesasstichomythiaandrhyme,butitalsoappearsinanaspectof Shakespeare’srhetoricthatislessobviousbutultimatelymoresignificant:manyofhismajorcharactersuse languageinaparticular,individualway.Tousethetechnicalterm,eachofthemhasanidiolect. Repetition RepetitionisevidentinmanyoftherhetoricaldevicesShakespeareused:alliteration,anaphora,antistrophe, assonance,caesura,chiasmus,consonance,isocolon,rhyme,andstichomythiaareallatheart,formsofrepetition. Yet,Shakespeareismuchmoresubtleinhisuseofrepetition. •Thereisthesimplerepetitioninproseofakeyterm.InOthello,forexample,thereisIago’sconstantreturntothewordmoneyin hisspeechtoRoderigowherehesuccessfullyconvinceshimtocontinuetryingtoseduceDesdemona. •Thereistherepetitioninduetformwheretwocharactersshowtheirclosenessbybeingalmostofonevoice.So,inTheMerchant ofVenice,thetwolovers(LorenzoandJessica)showtheirmutualaffectionbyeachechoingthesamephraseacross24lines.Eight timestheyinterweavethewords,“Insuchanight”(5.1.1-24). •Thereistherepetitionacrossthescenesofaplay,arhetoricaldevicewhichtiestogethertheactionofaplayjustasamelodygives coherencetoapieceofmusic.So,inTheMerchantofVenice,thePrinceofMorocco’sworryat2.1.1thathewillberejectedby Portiabecauseofthecolorofhisskin(“Mislikemenotformycomplexion,”hesays)isechoedsixsceneslaterbyPortia’sclosing couplet. •Thereisevenrepetitionamongplays,arhetoricaltracethatsuggestsShakespeare’saffectionforcertainwords,ideas,orpreviously successfuldramaticstrategies. Variation Shakespeare’smostpersuasivedeviceisonethatstressestherangeofhispowersasawordsmithbyjuxtaposing thetwoendsofthespectrumoflanguage:sometimes,simplicityandcomplexity;sometimes,straightforward wordchoiceandgrandiloquence.Againandagain,heachievesvarietyinhisplaysbyhavingasimplestatement followacomplexone.InMacbeth,MacbethwonderswhetherthestainofDuncan’smurdercaneverbewashed offhishands.ShakespearehasMacbethbeginhisanswertothatquestionwithlongimpressive-soundingwords andthenrepeathimselfinasimplershorterway: WithallgreatNeptune’soceanwashthisblood Cleanfrommyhand?No,thismyhandwillrather Themultitudinousseasincarnadine, Makingthegreenoneread(2.2.64-67). SOMECLUESregardingShakespeare’sGRAMMAR Mostlanguageshaveafamiliarformandapoliteformof‘you’.InShakespeare’stimethatwasalsotrueofEnglish. ‘Thou’wasthefamiliarformofyouandhaditsownverbpart,e.g. Thouart=youare;Thouhast=youhave;Thoudost=youdo ‘You’wasthepoliteformusedtostrangersorsocialsuperiors.AswithotherEuropeanlanguages,thiswasalsotheplural formoftheverb.Thereforeaconjugatedverbwouldincludeanextrapart–thesecondpersonsingular: ToBe Singular Iam Thouart He,she,it,is Plural Weare Youare Theyare ToHave Singular Ihave Thouhast He,she,it,has Plural Wehave Youhave Theyhave ToDo Singular Ido Thoudost Sheheitdoes Plural Wedo Youdo Theydo Itisimportanttonotethatusing‘thou’toasocialequalorsuperiorwouldconstituteaninsult,unlesstheywereaclose friendorfamilymember. AsinmodernEnglish,theverbisinvertedinordertoaskaquestion: Areyou? Haveyou? Didyou? Wouldyou? Withthesecondpersonsingularfollowingthisrule: Artthou? Hastthou? Dostthou? Wouldstthou? Etc. Theewasusedwhenthepersonwastheobjectofthesentence: Igivetheeanapple. Idefythee. Ilovethee. 7 Thisoriginallymatchedwith‘me’.Sowhereyouwouldsay”Hegavemeanapple,”“Hedefiesme”,or”Helovesme”,you substitute‘thee’whenitisappliedto‘you.’ ‘Thy’isthepossessive,meaning‘your’: “Thisisthydoing.”“Iwishthyheartweremine.”“ItisthyloveIwant.” Thisoriginallymatchedwith‘my’.SoifyouwantedtosayThisismydoing,IwishmyheartwerehisorItismylovehe wants,yousubstitute‘thy’whenitisappliedto‘you.’ Thineisalsopossessiveandusedinthesamesenseas‘mine’: Thisappleisnowthine;AllIhaveisthine; Usingthefamiliarformastheobjectofasentence.Youhavelearnedhowtousethefamiliarform‘thou’asthesubjectof asentence,andhowtouseitinquestions.Whenitbecomestheobjectofasentenceitchanges.Whenyouuse‘I’asa sentenceobject,itbecomes‘me’;youwouldnotsay‘HegavethebooktoI’,but‘Hegavethebooktome’.Thefamiliar formfollowsthispattern.‘Hegavethebooktothee’(not‘Hegavethebooktothou’). Thisisalsotrueofthepossessiveforms.Toindicatebelonging,wewouldsay,‘Thisismybook,’orperhaps,‘Thisbookismine.’ Inthefamiliarform,thisbecomes‘Thisisthybook’or‘Thisbookisthine.’ Formsofaddress InShakespeare’sday,mannerswerefarmoreformalthaninmoderntimes,andasocietysoclassconsciousthatthey prescribedwhatmaterialsandcoloursthedifferentclasses,or‘estates’astheywerecalled,shouldwear,wasvery particularaboutsuitablemodesofaddress. TheKingorQueenwouldbeaddressedas‘YourGrace’or‘YourHighness’,orsometimes‘MyLiege’,rarelyifeveras‘Your Majesty’. Generallytheupperclasseswerereferredtoas‘MyLord’orMyLady’,(oftenjust‘Lady’)withchildrenbeingcalled‘My youngLord’or‘MyyoungLady’. Itoftendependedonwhowasaddressingthem,e.g.TheDukeofNorthumberlandmightbeaddressedas‘MyLordDuke’, or‘MyLordofNorthumberland’,or‘Northumberland’,or‘Gaunt’(thefamilyname)or‘oldGaunt’or‘Cousin’or‘Uncle’or ‘Father’or‘MyLord’or‘Sir’or‘Husband’or(rarely)‘John’,dependingonwhowastalkingtohimatthetime. AKnightwouldgenerallybecalledbyhistitleandfirstname,as‘SirToby’orSirAndrew’.Amoregeneralmodeofaddress wouldjustbe‘Sir’or‘Madam’,ormaybe‘Gentleman’or‘Gentlewoman’(pluralformscouldalsobeused). Middleclasspeoplemightbeaddressedas‘Goodman’or‘Goodwife’(oftenshortenedto‘Goody’,asin‘GoodyTwoShoes’). ‘Master’or‘Mistress’wasapolitealternative,usuallyaccompaniedbyaname,like‘MasterJones’or‘MistressMary’. Peoplewithmilitaryrankswouldbeaddressedbythem,as‘Captain’or‘Lieutenant’. TheChurchwasamuchmoreimportantinstitutionthen,andhaditsownlevelsofhierarchy,sothatabishopwouldbe addressedas‘MyLordBishop’,apriestas‘SirPriest’orbyhisnamelike‘SirTopas’andacurateas‘MasterCurate’. Lowerclasspeoplewouldnormallybeaddressedas‘fellow’or‘wench’.Howeverthiscouldalsobequalifiedbyusingajob appellationlike‘Smith’or‘Innkeeper’,perhapswiththeadditionof‘Master’and,ifyouwantedtobespeciallypolite, ‘Good’aswell,sothat‘GoodMasterInnkeeper’mightgetyoubetterservice!WhenFesteorTouchstoneareaddressedas ‘Fool’itsignifiestheirprofessionandisnotaninsult,andisoftencoupledwith‘Good’.However,justasinmoderntimes, theuseof‘Good’canhaveironicconnotations,whichthestudentneedstolookoutfor!Ofcoursefamilyandclosefriends woulduseChristiannames,aswedotoday. DerivativesofHere,There,andWhere.InShakespeare’stime,peoplenotonlyused‘here,‘there’and‘where’toreferto places,theyalsohadtheformshither,thitherandwhither,meaningroughly‘tohere’,‘tothere’and‘towhere’;inaddition theyusedhence,thence,andwhence,meaningroughly‘fromhere’,‘fromthere’and‘fromwhere’.Forexample,someonemight ask,“Whithergoestthou?”(Whereareyougoingto?)andcouldreceivetheanswer,“O,hitherandthither”(O,hereandthere.)Ifapersonwasasked, “Whencecameyou,master/mistress?”theymightreply“FromCanterbury,goodsir/madam.”Ifquestionedaboutwhentheycame,theycouldanswer “Irodethenceyesterday.”Anidleservantmightbetold,“Gettheehence,thouknave.” 8