APPENDIX A Sample Resumes, Cover Letters and Other Professional Correspondence RESUME ACTION VERBS Below is a list of action verbs to assist you in describing your experience and accomplishments: accelerated accomplished achieved acquired activated adapted adjusted administered advised allocated analyzed annotated anticipated applied appraised arranged articulated assembled assessed assigned authored balanced briefed budgeted built catalogued categorized chaired clarified cleared coded collaborated compared compiled completed composed computed conducted consolidated constructed contacted continued contracted convened conveyed coordinated corresponded counseled created critiqued decided defined delegated delivered demonstrated derived designed detected determined developed devised directed distributed drafted edited educated effected elicited encouraged established evaluated examined executed exhibited expanded expedited experienced experimented explained explored facilitated figured financed focused forecasted formed formulated fostered founded functioned generated governed grouped guided helped identified illustrated immunized implemented improved increased informed initiated instituted instructed interpreted interviewed introduced invented investigated judged led listened maintained managed marketed mastered measured mediated modeled modified molded monitored motivated named negotiated observed obtained operated ordered organized originated outlined oversaw perceived performed persuaded planned planted presented presided printed produced protected provided publicized questioned raised recommended recorded recruited reduced rendered repaired reported represented reproduced researched resolved responded restored retained retrieved reviewed revised rewrote routed scheduled searched selected served shaped shared showed simplified solicited solved specified spoke stimulated structured studied supervised supported synthesized targeted taught tested trained translated tutored updated utilized verified wrote SAMPLE RESUME FOR 1L CASIUS WALTERS CASIUS WALTERS 27 Easy Street, Brighton, MI 48116 (818) 929-3939 casius@umich.edu Education UNIVERSITY OF MICHIGAN LAW SCHOOL, Ann Arbor, MI J.D. expected May 2013 Activities: Membership Chair, Law School Republican Students Society Member, Food Stamp Advocacy Project Honors: I.C. Lotz Academic Scholarship 2010-2011 UNIVERSITY OF PONOMA, Ponoma, CA B.A., magna cum laude, December 2007 Major: History Minor: International Relations Activities: Volunteer: Ponoma Partners in Education Member: Ponoma Panthers Lacrosse Club and Surf Club Participant: University of Ponoma Paris Semester (Fall 2006) Honors: Dean’s List (6 semesters), Presidential Scholar Award Experience SENS RESTAURANT, Los Angeles, CA Bartender and Waiter, January 2008-May 2010 • Provided first rate service to all customers • Trained new restaurant staff • Maintained log of workers’ injuries for workers’ compensation claims LOS ANGELES DEPARTMENT OF HEALTH, Los Angeles, CA Office Assistant, Summers 2006-2007 • Scheduled appointments for the Chief of Health, interacted with the public, and answered phones • Gathered and verified birth certificate information U.S. DEPARTMENT OF STATE, Washington, DC Bureau of Foreign Affairs Intern, Summer 2005 • Composed memos, cables, and briefing notes on drought stricken areas in Africa • Gathered and compiled data on peacekeeping missions • Analyzed strategic planning documents for U.S. missions on Mars PONOMA COUNTY HISTORY CENTER, Ponoma, CA Museum Department Intern, Summer 2004 • Researched history of artifacts to be displayed in museum’s permanent collection and wrote explanatory notes and captions to be displayed with artifacts • Led tours for school children Interests Ultimate Frisbee, writing science fiction, and classical music SAMPLE COVER LETTER FOR 1L CASIUS WALTERS CASIUS WALTERS 27 Easy Street, Brighton, MI 48116 (818) 929-3939 casius@umich.edu January 1, 2011 Ms. Carla Sindlinger-LaLonde Commissioner Federal Election Committee 1 Federal Way Washington, DC 20510 Dear Commissioner Sindlinger-LaLonde: I am currently a first-year student at the University of Michigan Law School and am interested in becoming a summer law clerk in your office. I have a deep interest in the electoral process on the state and federal level. Moreover, I am committed to using my law degree to protect the rights of all citizens wishing to exercise their right to vote. Prior to entering law school, I studied History at the University of Ponoma in Ponoma, CA. In focusing on American politics I acquired a deep appreciation of the importance of the electoral process in the lives of all Americans. Inspired by my studies, I sought and won election as the Membership Chair of the University of Michigan Law School Republican Students Society. This position has allowed me to work with likeminded individuals in promoting the importance of registering to vote and exercising that right. In addition to my extracurricular activities, my two semester Legal Practice curriculum continues to teach me the skills necessary for effective and efficient legal research and writing. Based on my performance in that class, I am confident in my ability to synthesize and analyze legal research and write interoffice memos outlining both sides of an argument. Furthermore, my first semester Constitutional Law class has given me valuable insight into the electoral process and its underlying democratic theories. I have enclosed a copy of my resume for your review. I will be in Washington DC from January 39, 2011 and would welcome an opportunity to interview with you during that time. Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely, Casius Walters Encl. Jane Smith 551 S. State St./Ann Arbor, MI 48109 (222) 345-6789/janesmit@umich.edu Date Name of Contact Title Name of Organization Address City State Zip Dear [name of contact], I am a first-year law student at University of Michigan Law School, and am interested in a summer internship position with [name of organization]. I have long been attracted to international human rights, and am confident my past experiences, skills, and enthusiasm would benefit your organization. My experiences prior to law school fueled my interest in international human rights and led me to pursue a law degree. As an intern for the Human Rights Division of the Permanent Mission of the Republic of Korea to the United Nations in Geneva, I was responsible for attending human rights conferences and writing reports for XYZ. Further, I conducted research on issues ranging from X to Y and presented my research to policy makers from more than 50 countries. At Refuge P-NAN, I became intimately familiar with the issues that refugees face as I helped our clients seek refugee status in immigration court and resettle in our community. Through that experience, I witnessed how individuals are affected by commissions and treaties created by international NGOs. These experiences deepened my knowledge of international human rights and humanitarian affairs, strengthened my desire to pursue public interest work, and gave me a broader view on how governmental and non-governmental actors interact with one another to influence the world. In addition to fostering my passion for international human rights, my experiences before and during law school have also given me the technical skills necessary to contribute to the important work of [name of organization]. While interning in Geneva, I closely analyzed different issues identified in the Durban Declaration and conducted extensive research on current human rights issues such as Economic, Social, and Cultural Rights. My analytical and writing skills have been further honed through Michigan Law’s intensive year-long Legal Practice class, where I am learning the skills necessary to be an effective and efficient legal researcher and communicator. I appreciate your consideration of my application for a summer internship position. Enclosed is a copy of my resume, a brief unedited writing sample and names of references. I will send you my transcript as soon as it becomes available in February 201x. I will be in Korea from December 19th to January 8th, and I would welcome the opportunity to meet in person. I look forward to speaking with you. Sincerely, Jane Smith Encl. SAMPLE COVER LETTER FOR 1L SUMMER STARTER ROCCO TURILLIO Rocco J. Turillio 723 Arabia Street Ann Arbor, MI 48104 734-764-0546 rocco@umich.edu December 15, 2010 Maya Samms, Esq. Chief Recruiter U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission 100 F Street, NE Washington, DC 20549 Dear Ms. Samms: I am a first-year summer starter law student at the University of Michigan Law School and would like to apply for the Summer 2011 Honors Law Program. As a detail-oriented person with analytical and writing experience, I have the qualifications necessary to excel in the Summer Honors Law Program. I would like to work for the Securities and Exchange Commission because I am interested in a government position where I am able to use my business background to assist in regulating the securities markets and securing Americans’ investments. I am currently exploring my interest in business law by taking courses regarding public corporations, administrative law, and accounting for lawyers. As a summer starter, I will have completed three semesters of law school by the Summer of 2011. My academic background and previous work experience, including an internship in the information technology department of Lehman Brothers and approximately three years analytical experience at market researcher Ulivi & Associates, would help me in carrying out the mission of the SEC. I have sharpened my analytical and writing skills through my Summer 2009 judicial externship with the Honorable Erithe Smith at the United States Bankruptcy Court for the Central District of California. I demonstrated these skills by researching law and writing memoranda advising the Judge, including memos regarding whether to reopen debtors’ bankruptcy cases that have been dismissed. I also wrote a Memorandum of Decision explaining Judge Smith’s ruling in a bench trial regarding the dischargeability of debt stemming from the plaintiff’s allegations of misrepresentation, embezzlement, and conversion. My experience this past summer shows that I would be successful with the research and writing demands of the Summer Honors Law Program. As a participant in the Summer Honors Law Program, I would use my strengths in analysis and writing in order to fulfill the needs of the Securities and Exchange Commission. My résumé is attached for your review. I would be happy to meet with you and discuss my qualifications further. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely, Rocco J. Turillio Haley D. Randall 112 W. 7th Street Ann Arbor, MI 99999 (313) 555-5555 haleyr@umich.edu ________________________________________________________________________ EDUCATION THE UNIVERSITY OF MICHIGAN LAW SCHOOL, Ann Arbor, MI J.D. expected May 2013 Member, Environmental Law Society Member, Women Law Students Association TULANE UNIVERSITY, New Orleans, LA B.A. with honors, English Literature, May 2008 Dean’s List 2007-2008 Editor, The Tulane Times-responsible for running the school newspaper EXPERIENCE SMITH, SMITH & JONES, P.C., Boston, MA 2008-2010 Paralegal in 25-attorney law firm specializing in environmental law. • Analyzed and drafted summary of several provisions of the Clean Water Act. • Reviewed and summarized Environmental Impact Statements. • Conducted pretrial preparation: summarized witness testimony; organized and prepared trial notebooks. WOMEN=S CRISIS CENTER, New Orleans, LA Summers 2006-2007 Peer Counselor, part-time • Advised women on health care issues, domestic violence, and divorce. • Wrote training manual for peer counselors. SOFTWARE, INC., Detroit, MI Sales Clerk • Organized and maintained business records. • Provided service to retail customers. LANGUAGES Spanish INTERESTS Creative Writing, Skydiving, Jazz Summer 2005 Haley D. Randall 112 W. 7th Street Ann Arbor, MI 99999 (313) 555-5555 haleyr@umich.edu December 10, 2010 Ms. Marion A. Duncan, Director Environmental Law Group 333 Clear Avenue Washington, D.C. 10000 Dear Ms. Duncan: I am a first-year law student at The University of Michigan Law School, and am interested in a summer intern position with the Environmental Law Group. I have long been interested in environmental issues, and am committed to using my law degree to advocate on behalf of protecting the environment. Prior to entering law school, I worked at a small law firm specializing in environmental law. In one case, I assisted attorneys in advising a small corporation of its compliance requirements under the Clean Water Act. Moreover, my experience analyzing several environmental impact studies provided me with useful technical knowledge in the environmental field. This experience, as well as my education and my work as an editor of The Tulane Times, helped me strengthen my writing and analytical skills. In addition, I am taking the Law School’s rigorous two semester legal research and writing class. My work as a peer counselor at the Women’s Crisis Center afforded me valuable experience in advising clients, problem-solving on a variety of crisis intervention issues, and in educating others by writing a training manual. In addition, my work at the Crisis Center enabled me to strengthen my oral communication skills. At Software, Inc., I developed my organizational and interpersonal skills, and worked with financial records. I believe that I have gained the skills that will be an asset to your organization. I have enclosed a resume for your review. I will be in Washington, D.C. over the December break, and would enjoy the opportunity to meet with you to discuss further my qualifications. I will call you next week to try to arrange a convenient time to visit your office. Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely, Haley D. Randall Enclosure MOLLY P. WILLIAMS 1600 Washtenaw Ave., Apt. #139, Ann Arbor, MI 48109 (734) 764-0546 mpwilliams@umich.edu EDUCATION THE UNIVERSITY OF MICHIGAN LAW SCHOOL, Ann Arbor, MI Juris Doctor expected May 2011 Newsletter Coordinator, Asylum and Refugee Project, Winter 2008 Student Attorney, Family Law Project, Fall 2008-present KENYON COLLEGE, Gambier, OH Bachelor of Arts, cum laude, June 2009, Majors: Political Science and Public Policy Intern, Ohio General Assembly, Office of the Senate Majority Leader, Fall 2008 UNIVERSIDAD DE MADRID, Madrid, Spain, Fall 2007-Spring 2008 Intensive study of Spanish language, culture, and history EXPERIENCE DETROIT COMMUNITY SERVICES, Detroit, MI Public Policy and Legislative Specialist June 2009-August 2010 Researched emerging policy issues for metropolitan Detroit health and human service organizations Produced weekly newsletters for member organizations Coordinated annual legislative conference Organized monthly legislative forums for member organizations IMMIGRANT ASSISTANCE, Inc. Washington, D.C. Public Policy Intern Summer 2008 Researched and prepared memoranda regarding social, health, and policy issues affecting immigrant women Provided research assistance to domestic violence advocates Assisted in lobbying Congress concerning pending domestic violence legislation U.S. DISTRICT COURT FOR THE EASTERN DISTRICT OF MICHIGAN, HON. PATRICIA E. KING, Detroit, MI Summer 2007 Intern Performed basic legal research under the supervision of the judge’s law clerks Assisted with updating library materials Observed court proceedings including trials, motions, and settlement conferences GREEN VALEY COUNTRY CLUB, Oakdale, MI Swimming Instructor to children ages 3 to 10 LANGUAGES Fluent in Spanish, conversant in Portuguese Summers 2005-2006 MOLLY P. WILLIAMS 1600 Washtenaw Ave., Apt. #139, Ann Arbor, MI 48109 (734) 764-0546 mpwilliams@umich.edu December 11, 2011 Attorney General Bill Schuette Office of the Michigan Attorney General P.O. 30212 Lansing, MI 48909 Dear Attorney General Schuette: I am a first-year law student at University of Michigan Law School and would like to apply for an internship this coming summer with the Attorney General’s Medicare Fraud Office. I grew up in Michigan and have worked here since graduating from college in 2006. I am committed to a public service career in Michigan in order to make access to health care available to everyone. Prior to starting law school, I worked at Detroit Community Services as a Public Policy and Legislative Specialist. My primary area of responsibility was emerging health policy issues. My duties included coordinating an annual legislative conference attended by health care providers, health and human service organization professionals, and members of the legislature. This experience gave me a view of the organizational and substantive problems faced in providing health care to low income individuals. In addition, working with these groups fueled my desire to go to law school. Furthermore, I will be taking a class on health care regulation this coming semester. I believe my experience will enable me to be an asset to your office. I have enclosed a copy of my resume for your review. I am available to interview after my last exam on December 18th. Thank you for your time and consideration. I will contact your office in two weeks to arrange a mutually agreeable interview time. Very truly yours, Molly P. Williams Encl. Mr. Morgan O. White mow@umich.edu PERMANENT ADDRESS CURRENT ADDRESS 121 Augusta Dr. 551 South State St Chicago, IL 60609 Ann Arbor, MI 48109 312.667.4941 734.764.0546 _____________________________________________________________________________ Education University of Michigan Law School Juris Doctor Expected, May 2012 Member, Phi Alpha Delta Law Fraternity Member, Future Tax Lawyers of America Work part-time to finance law school education University of Chicago Bachelor of Arts, May 2009 Major: Mathematics Minor: Accounting Certificate Program in Statistics Completed Member, Mathematics Honor Society: served on Careers Committee Member/Treasurer, University of Chicago Students’ Hunger Task Force Honors: Received Sophomore Scholarship for Highest GPA in Mathematics Department Experience The Hon. Caridad Hechavarria, Chicago Municipal Tax Court Intern Summer 2010 • Researched city tax code regarding obtaining attorney’s fees in lawsuits seeking back taxes. • Drafted court opinions and findings of fact. • Observed court proceedings and attended settlement conferences. American Mathematics Academy, Hanover, NH Mathematics Tutor and Coach Summer 2009 • Served as Mathematics Olympics Coordinator. • Assisted in recruitment, training, and supervision of over 100 coaches and volunteers. • Organized curriculum for math teams, developed test materials. University of Chicago Student Financial Aid Office Student Worker-Office Assistant Summer 2008 • Processed financial aid applications, responsible for data entry. • Answered questions from students. Mr. Morgan O. White mow@umich.edu PERMANENT ADDRESS CURRENT ADDRESS 121 Augusta Dr. 551 South State St Chicago, IL 60609 Ann Arbor, MI 48109 312.667.4941 734.764.0546 _____________________________________________________________________________ Sept. 20, 2010 Ms. Yvette LaRue Legal Recruitment Coordinator Reese & Frey 100 West Wacker Dr. Chicago, IL 60609 Dear Ms. LaRue: I am currently a second-year student at the University of Michigan Law School, and I am interested in obtaining a summer associate position at Reese & Frey. I am confident that my particular experience, training, and enthusiasm would benefit your firm this summer because my primary interest is in tax law. Moreover, I wish to explore my interest in tax law while living and working in my hometown of Chicago. After my first year of law school, I interned with the Honorable Caridad Hechivarria of the Chicago Municipal Tax Court. Judge Hechivarria extensively reviewed my writing which developed my skills in legal research and drafting. Both that internship and the extensive two semester Legal Practice Program at Michigan have sharpened my legal research, writing, and analysis. Furthermore, my job during the summer of 2008 as a mathematics tutor and coach at the American Mathematics Academy as well as my classes in tax law have strengthened my desire to practice law in that area upon graduation. I have enclosed a copy of my resume for your review, which includes my permanent address and phone number in Chicago. I would be happy to answer any questions that you have about my qualifications and experience. From December 24th to January 6th I will be at home in Chicago and would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you. Sincerely, Morgan O. White Encl. YOLANDA HEGELDORN 551 South State Street, Ann Arbor, MI 48109 734-777-0307 • yolanda@umich.edu EDUCATION University of Michigan Law School, Ann Arbor, MI Juris Doctor Expected May 2010 • Recipient, Provost’s Scholarship (merit based) • Recipient, Austro-Hungarian Law Students Fellowship • Participant, University of Michigan Clinical Law Program o Researched and drafted substantive motions and an appellate brief. o Represented clients at administrative hearings and negotiated with opposing counsels. o Tried a case before a mock jury. University of Jamaica, Kingston, Jamaica Bachelor of Arts in Psychoceramics with Honors May 2007 • Recipient, University of Jamaica Entrance Scholarship • Vice President, University of Jamaica Psychoceramics Students Association • Soloist, University of Jamaica Light Opera (2005-2007) EXPERIENCE Altheimer & Gray, Budapest, Hungary Summer Associate May 2008 – July 2008 • Prepared for and participated in an arbitration between American and Hungarian corporations. • Drafted loan documents, purchase contracts, and a letter of intent for Hungarian company. o Researched and wrote interoffice memos on a variety of topics including international arbitration procedures, applicability of Hungarian law to purchase agreement, and proposed changes to the European Union Commercial Code. European Convention on Human Rights Centre, London, England Legal Intern May 2007 – August 2007 • Researched and drafted pleadings for cases under the European Convention on Human Rights. • Advised attorneys on examining expert witnesses before the European Court of Human Rights. Conservatory of Modern Dance, London, England Instructor for primary school children May 2007 – August 2007 Youth Sports International, Salzburg, Austria International Volunteer June 2006 – August 2006 • Organized sports activities for fifty high school students. • Assisted the organization in finding funding for field trips and tournaments. LANGUAGES Fluent in German and Hungarian; conversant in French. INTERESTS Traveling in all European Union countries; competitive table tennis. YOLANDA HEGELDORN 551 South State Street, Ann Arbor, MI 48109 734-777-0307 • yolanda@umich.edu September 9, 2008 Dear I am a second-year student at the University of Michigan Law School, and I am interested in obtaining a summer associate position at your firm’s New York City office. I am attracted to your firm because of the depth and scope of its international practices. While growing up in Hungary I became fluent in both Hungarian and German. I believe my international experience would allow me to contribute to your office and clients. This past summer I participated in Altheimer & Grey’s summer associate program in Budapest. While most of my assignments involved researching and writing legal memos on corporate law issues, I also drafted loan documents and purchase contracts. Prior to law school, I interned for a non-profit organization in London, researching and drafting pleadings for cases brought before the European Court of Human Rights. Furthermore, I worked closely with attorneys to prepare in court examinations of expert witnesses, which also helped me learn about the litigation process and litigation strategies. This semester I am focusing on business-related classes including Commercial Transactions, Enterprise Organizations, and Securities Regulation. Next summer I look forward to developing my competence in the corporate area while working on complex European Union transactions. I am also familiar with the nuances of German and Hungarian cultures and have a unique appreciation for global perspectives. I believe these qualities will benefit your firm. Enclosed are my resume and transcript. I would be happy to answer any questions you have about my experience and qualifications. I will be in New York City from October 15-19, 2008; I will contact you in two weeks to see if it is possible to interview with you during that time. Sincerely, Yolanda Hegeldorn Encl. David John (DJ) Spencer 121 Augusta Drive, Apt 3 Ann Arbor, MI 48109 (248) 240-4692 djspence@umich.edu Education UNIVERSITY OF MICHIGAN LAW SCHOOL Ann Arbor, MI J.D. expected May 2010 BRIARCLIFFE COLLEGE Bethpage, NY BA in Theology, graduated summa cum laude, May 2007 Honors: Maintained 4.0 average for all semesters Dean’s Scholarship for Outstanding Academics Activities: Men’s Varsity Basketball; Bassoon Player, Briarcliffe Collegiate Orchestra (2006-2007) Experience Kaplan & Wickwire, LLP New York, NY Summer Associate 2008 Researched and analyzed tax law relating to corporate transactions, including M&A, partnership structures, and real estate investment trusts. Researched and prepared interoffice memos analyzing bankruptcy case law, including adequate notice, procedural requirements for amending confirmation orders, and standard of review. Observed court proceedings and attended confirmation hearings and Creditors Committee conferences. Co-authored article on the IRS treatment of horse farm tax shelters. Hon. Magistrate Judge Cherry Pie, WDNY Buffalo, NY Intern Summer 2007 Researched and analyzed case law and statutes, including copyright infringement, defamation by email, and breach of a surgeon’s duty of care. Drafted preliminary court opinions and findings of fact, including reports and recommendations, and summary judgments. Observed court proceedings and attended settlement conferences. Northshore YMCA Jericho, NY Camp Counselor Summers 2004-2006 Created activities concerning water safety and sports for 40 sixth graders. Provided instruction on CPR and acted as life guard. Priscilla’s Patio Palace Ronkonkoma, NY Sales Representative Summers 2005-2006 Highest grossing summer sales representative 2005-2006 for largest patio furniture wholesaler in the industry. Interests Backpacked throughout parts of Australia. Avid bassoon player. SAMPLE THANK-YOU LETTER FORMAT using personal letterhead Date Contact Person Title Law Firm or Organization Address City, State Zip Salutation: (Use formal titles even if directed during the interview to address interviewers by first name) Paragraph one: Express your gratitude to the individual (your host or the recruitment coordinator) and/or the group of interviewers you met with during your visit. You may mention here if there was a topic of conversation during your interview that was of special interest, or if you discovered a common interest or tie between you and the interviewer. Paragraph two: Mention enclosures or anything that may require attention, such as materials that were requested by the organization. Paragraph three: Conclude your letter by reiterating your interest in the organization and advising them to contact you if they require any additional materials or information. Sincerely, Your Name SAMPLE TRANSMITTAL LETTER FORMAT using personal letterhead This letter style may be used after the interview process to submit additional materials to the employer. Date Contact Person Title Law Firm or Organization Address City, State Zip Salutation: (Use formal titles even if directed during the interview to address interviewers by first name) Paragraph one: Address it to the individual who received your thank-you letter. A reminder of who you are and when you interviewed with the firm should be included in this paragraph. Paragraph two: Explain what materials you are enclosing and why. You may have recently completed a note or received a letter of recommendation from a past employer that you want the potential employer to review before making its final decision. Paragraph three: Conclude your letter by reiterating your interest in the organization and advising them to contact you if they require any additional materials or information. Sincerely, Your Name Enclosure(s) SAMPLE LETTER OF ACCEPTANCE FORMAT using personal letterhead Date Contact Person Title Organization Address City, State Zip Salutation: Paragraph one: Accept their offer of employment, stating the term of employment (Summer 2001), or if it is a permanent offer, your beginning date (Fall 2001). If the offer was extended and accepted via telephone or by email, indicate whom you previously communicated with and confirm your acceptance. Paragraph two: Indicate any future actions with the employer or information you expect to convey to them, such as your anticipated availability or specific starting date of employment, or if you plan to follow up with an individual at the organization at a future date to verify details regarding your employment. Paragraph three: Conclude your letter with a sincere statement of your gratitude or of your anticipation in working for the organization. Sincerely, Your Name SAMPLE LETTER OF REJECTION using personal letterhead Date Name Title Organization Address City, State Zip Salutation: Paragraph one: Indicate that you are rejecting their offer of employment and the term of employment that was offered and by whom the offer was made. Paragraph two: This is where you can explain why, in as much or little detail that you feel is necessary, you are rejecting their offer. You may want to keep your options open for the future! Paragraph three: Thank the employer for the offer once again and for their attention. Sincerely, Your Name