EMC Spoken Language Resources with DVD Acknowledgements Written and edited by the English and Media Centre Consultant: Alison Ross Cover: Rebecca Scambler, EMC Editorial assistance: Priscilla McClay Transcription: Priscilla McClay, Alison Ross, Kisa Charles and Ali Gregory Published by the English and Media Centre, 18 Compton Terrace, London, N1 2UN © 2010 ISBN: 978-1-906101-14-5 Printed by Page Bros (Norwich) Ltd DVD printed by Brown and Michael Media Services Thanks to the following for their participation in, and support of, this publication: Anna Sarchet, Amy Druce, the Head, staff and students (especially Harry, Natasha and Cressida) at Highgate Wood School, Haringey Karen, Bianca, Vivian and Rosalind from Highbury Grove School, Islington; Waqar, Umar, Wesley, Kulraj and Hassan from Seven Kings, Redbridge; Corey, Stephen, Ashley and Patrick from Netherall School, Liverpool Christine, Kevin and all at Alexandra Motors Dr Graeme Trousdale, Edinburgh University Emma Simpson and Islington teachers, Ruth Robertson and Haringey teachers for commenting on and piloting material Thanks to the following for permission to reproduce copyright material BBC for EastEnders, Criminal Justice, The One Show, Charlie Brooker’s Screenwipe and Newsnight Dirtee Stank Recordings on behalf of Dizzee Rascal Endemol UK for Charlie Brooker’s Screenwipe Silver River and Channel 4 for I’m Running Sainsbury’s With thanks to SpeakersBank, the Jack Petchey Foundation, SpeakersBank trainers (Caroline Clark and Simon Bucknall) and Kalm (Waltham Forest), Benedict (Hammersmith), Inez (Hackney), all Finalists in Jack Petchey’s ‘‘Speak Out’ Challenge! (2009) Daily Telegraph for The One Show by Matt Warman (05.12.08) Sebastian Coe and London 2012 for ‘My Heroes Were Olympians’ (2005); Jerome Monahan and Stuart Pearce for ‘The Voice Coach’ (2008), originally published in Best of Both (EMC © 2008). Every effort has been made to trace and acknowledge copyright, but if accidental infringement has been made, we would welcome information to redress the situation. 2 Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 Contents Contents CHAPTER PAGE Teachers’ Notes 06 DVD MENUS SECTION A Features of Spoken Language 13 Features of Spoken Language 1. Harry walking home 2. Tony Benn against the bombing of Iraq (1998) 3. Christine and Kevin chat 4. The One Show – the Soldier Context and Formality 15 NO DVD Standard English, Accent, Dialect 20 Standard English, Accent and Dialect 1. An expert view 2. Teenagers talk about accent and dialect Power and Power Relationships 22 Power and Power Relationships 1. I’m Running Sainsbury’s – ‘Store standards’ 2. I’m Running Sainsbury’s – ‘Jason sets up a meeting’ Language and Gender 26 NO DVD Investigating Group Talk 30 Investigating Group Talk 1. The apprentices 2. Student apprentices Jargon 34 Jargon I’m Running Sainsbury’s – ‘The appraisal meeting’ Scripted v Unscripted Talk 38 NO DVD 41 The Garage – Language of a Workplace 1. Introducing the staff SECTION B The Garage – the Language of a Workplace 2. Kevin greets a customer 3. Kevin and Christine in the office 4. Christine on phone/Kevin doing MOT 5. Woody explains the problem 6. Kevin talks to a customer about football 7. Christine orders a part 8. Paul re-upholstering, with Kevin and Chris 9. The sandwich van arrives 10. Kevin on the phone about the failed MOT 11. Christine on the phone to Catherine, a customer 12. Kevin on the phone to Catherine, a customer 13. Christine and Kevin chat 14. Play all Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 3 Contents CHAPTER PAGE DVD MENUS Highgate Wood School – Six Investigations on School Language 49 Highgate Wood School 1. Highgate Wood – a 3 min trailer 2. Assembly 3. English – teacher starts 4. English – questioning 5. English – group work 6. English – answering questions 7. English – teacher & group 8. Physics – start of the lesson 9. Physics – uniform issues 10. Physics – explaining 11. Physics – group work 12. Lunchtime talk 13. Teacher talks to Harry 14. Teacher and Natasha talk 15. P.E. – start of the lesson 16. P.E. – group work 17. P.E. – teacher questioning 18. P.E. – end of the lesson 19. Harry walking home 20. Play all Teen Talk 57 NO DVD Idiolect 61 NO DVD Multimodal Language 63 Multimodal Language 1. Texting – speech or writing 2. Texting – different audiences & purposes 3. What would you use texting for? 4. Attitudes to text messaging 5. Facebook – the rules 6. Cressida’s investigation into texting Speeches 75 Speeches 1. Tony Benn’s speech (1998) 2. Tony Benn on his speech 3. Highgate Wood School assembly 4. Kalm on ‘Orange Fury’ 5. Benedict on ‘Have a Heart’ 6. Inez on ‘You are a Winner’ 7. Caroline Clark, SpeakersBank Trainer 8. Simon Bucknall, SpeakersBank Trainer The One Show – a Broadcasting Case Study 83 The One Show 4 Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 Contents CHAPTER PAGE DVD MENUS Interviews – The One Show and Jeremy Paxman 93 Interviews Case study 1: The One Show: 1. The soldier 2. The Major 3. Chris Evans on the war 4. Chris Evans’ autobiography 5. Case Study 2: Jeremy Paxman interviews Dizzee Rascal Sports Commentaries 105 Sports Commentaries England v. Chile (1998) 1. On radio 2. On TV 3. The penalty on TV Scripted Drama – EastEnders and Criminal Justice 112 Scripted Drama – EastEnders and Criminal Justice 1. EastEnders 2. Criminal Justice – the police station 3. Scriptwriters on dialogue Section C: How to ... Section D: Resources 118 Find an angle for your controlled assessment 119 Your investigation – an early planning tool 121 What kind of evidence can I use? 122 Collecting your own data 124 Recording spoken language 125 Doing an interview 126 Conducting a questionnaire 127 Spoken language investigation consent form 128 Making your own transcript On DVD only Print materials in the resources folder on DVD: Transcripts, language analysis cards and grids in Word format for adaptation and differentiation. Transcription symbols used in this publication Pauses (.) (.3) short pause indicates length of pause in seconds Overlapping speech word [word [word Cut off speech wor- A dash shows that a word has been cut off Investigating Spoken Language Unclear speech (words) A guess at what might have been said ( ) Unclear talk, impossible to work out what was said. Loud or quiet voice word Underlined to show loud word Bold and underlined – shout or exclamation © English & Media Centre, 2010 5 For Teachers Introduction This publication aims to provide you and your students with a varied collection of data and teaching material to support the spoken language study for GCSE 2010. The material offers scope for meeting a wide range of different topics across all of the specifications, to reflect the annual changes of topic now required for GCSE. We have tried to show ways in which the material can be used flexibly and adapted, as topics change. The spirit of the spoken language study for all the specifications is exploratory, investigative and introductory. While there are some variations from specification to specification, the approach to conceptual knowledge and the use of terminology is low key and unthreatening. In this publication, we have offered a glossary for teachers, to help you clarify your own thinking and to allow you to make judicious decisions about what is most appropriate for your own students. Our belief is that terminology can be useful but the golden rule is: use it if it’s helpful and if it allows you to express an idea simply and succinctly, not for its own sake. The publication is divided into 4 sections, A-D: Section A: Introducing features and concepts For Teachers Introductory material around key aspects of spoken language. It is likely that you would select from this, rather than work through it, section by section. What you use will depend on the topic area you have chosen. Guidance on what might be most useful for each of our units is given in a box at the top of each of the Section B units. Section B: Case studies, data banks and investigations Teaching materials around topics for the different awarding bodies. Some units are ‘Case Studies’, which provide alternative routes through a large piece of video data (such as ‘The Garage’, ‘Highgate Wood’ or ‘The One Show’), where you might want to focus on different aspects according to your topic, selecting a few clips that relate to the topic you have chosen. Others, such as ‘Speeches’ provide you with the kinds of activities that you might do to introduce any speech that you have chosen to work on with your students. Ideas for possible investigation tasks are offered at the end of each cluster of material. The transcripts in this publication are also included in Word on the DVD so that you can adapt or select from them. In addition there are transcripts of the three ‘SpeakOut Challenge’ speeches and the transcripts of the three football commentaries from 1998. Section C: How to… Practical help for students. This section will be particularly helpful for those students who are either planning an individual investigation, choosing their own angle on data you’ve provided, or finding a little bit of data of their own to add to what you’ve provided for them. It may also provide you with a bit of structure for thinking about how to support students, for instance in choosing what’s useful data for a particular topic, or in transcribing. Section D: Additional resources DVD only. This section includes grids, blank formats and key ideas for looking at any stretch of talk. There are transcripts of the clips in Word, to allow you to edit them down, or pair or cluster them in whatever ways will work for your particular topics and student tasks. 6 Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 For Teachers Framing spoken language tasks The way you choose to frame your tasks may vary according to which specification you are teaching and the nature of the topic. However these are some of the ways in which you, or your students, might frame successful controlled assessment tasks: A hypothesis to test out, for example: – teenagers use texting in different ways to adults – teenagers’ language changes when they’re speaking to adults – workplace language is more functional than social – good scripted dialogue is very like spontaneous speech. Then narrow it down, to apply to a small bit of data, for example: teenagers use more textisms in texting than adults – an analysis of 5 adult text messages and 5 teenage text messages. Here are some of the significant opportunities for speaking and listening activities in this publication: P23 A speaking and listening role-play on power and power relationships P31 A simulation on Dragons’ Den – investigating group work P35 A role-play on jargon and specialist language P51 Trying out being a teacher – planning and delivering the opening of a lesson P77 Writing and performing a speech of your own P97 Role-playing interviews for a series of school podcasts P107 Sports commentaries – a commentary game Many of the group discussions on ‘attitudes’ to spoken language and individual experience (e.g. attitudes to accents, use of mobile phones, gender, talking about teenage language and so on) could also be assessed for speaking and listening. Mix & match – using the DVD flexibly An open-ended exploration of an aspect of spoken language, for example: – an exploration of my own idiolect – an exploration of the way I change my uses of language in a single day – speaking two languages: exploring when and how I use both languages. It’s worth bearing in mind the option of using clips from different sections to create your own case study, for instance if you want to look at football language you might look at Clip 6 from ‘The Garage’ and Clip 19 from ‘Highgate Wood School’, as well as the sports commentaries. An investigative angle on data, for example: – an investigation into the differences between speech in a scene from a soap opera and spontaneous talk. Answers for activities Introducing Multimodal Talk (page 64) A: Text message from a 21-year-old to his parent B: Open internet chatroom C: Text message from a 21-year-old during a football game D: Text message from a 60-year-old to a colleague E: Facebook conversation between adult sisters. Comparing 2 bits of data, for example: – a comparison of two conversations that one person participated in, in two different contexts – a comparison between two football managers being interviewed after a match. The spoken language study and speaking and listening Chatrooms and Social Networking (page 71) 1. Online conversation between Anna, on her gap year in Cambodia, and her best friend Mel, back home in England. Both girls are 19. 2. A Facebook ‘wall’ exchange between 20 and 30-something friends and neighbours 3. Discussion thread on ‘Comment is Free’, Guardian Online There are obvious connections between studying spoken language and participating in speaking and listening. Many of the activities in this publication involve an element of students talking, role-playing or trying out an aspect of what they’re studying. This could be a brief activity ‘along the way’ but equally, in some instances, it could lead to a more fully developed activity that can be assessed for speaking and listening. Combining spoken language study with other aspects of the course will obviously justify more time being spent on it. Sports Commentaries (page 105) 1. Formula One 2010 Spanish Grand Prix, Barcelona – Radio commentary 2. Celtic v Rangers Scottish Premier League Tuesday 4th May 2010 – Radio commentary 3. European Gymnastics Championships May 4th 2010 Beth Tweddle on the uneven bars Commentator A: Christine Still, Commentator B: Mitch Fenner – TV commentary 4. World Twenty20 Cricket May 10th 2010 – Radio commentary Investigating attitudes, for example: – what five people think about their own accent in relation to accents from other places – contexts in which teenagers would or wouldn’t use texting. Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 7 Section A: Features of Spoken Language A: Features of Spoken Language Useful introduction for On DVD Any spoken language study unit. Features of spoken language; video clips; cards to cut up for activity on page 14. Why have a special study of spoken language? Writing or speaking, isn’t it all the same English language? Well, yes and no. 1. Read the opinions, below, which give some different responses to the question ‘What’s special about spoken language?’. Think about your views on each opinion. 2. With a partner, discuss what you think about each opinion. Record your decision by ticking the ‘agree’, ‘disagree’ or ‘don’t know’ column in the table below. 3. In class discussion, feed back your views on the opinions. Leave the discussion open at this point and come back to the opinions once you have done some more work on the study of spoken language to see whether any of your views have changed. Opinions Agree Disagree It depends/ Not sure A. Spoken language is more informal than written language. B. You can’t judge spoken language in the same way as written language. C. Written language is better than spoken language. D. People use language more correctly when they write than when they speak. E. Spoken language is easier to understand than written language. F. Spoken language is livelier and more spontaneous than written language. Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 13 Section A: Features of Spoken Language Identifying features of spoken language 1. With a partner, look at these statements describing language features. A. Hesitations, false starts and pauses. B. Permanent record that can be read later. C. Expected greetings and sign offs, such as ‘hello’, ‘see you later’. D. Punctuation marks, bold or underlining to suggest tone of voice etc. E. A recognisable structure with unwritten rules. F. Gestures, facial expression, body language. G. Accent/dialect. H. People take turns. I. Speed, tone, emphasis and stress play an important part in the meaning. J. Addressed to someone who is there, face-to-face. K. Carefully planned. L. Mainly uses full sentences. M. Sophisticated vocabulary. N. Immediate feedback, for example laughter, shaking head, replying. O. Interruptions and overlaps. P. Can be re-drafted. Q. Use of slang. 2. Cut up the statements and sort them under the headings: – more likely to be found in writing – more likely to be found in speech – just as likely to be found in speech or writing. 3. Watch DVD Clips 1-4 and read the transcript of an online conversation, below. 4. After viewing each one, discuss with your partner whether you want to move any of your statements. 5. As far as you can, agree on the placing of the statements as a class and make a note of them for future reference as you continue with your language study. Transcript of an online conversation 1:11pm Mel oiiii maaaannnnn i cant believe your really there its crazy like i know your not here, but i dont actually believe your there also iv been looking after rob for you 1:12pm Anna i know 1:12pm Mel i read both his uni assignments are you happy 1:12pm Anna soooo far i miss u so much thanku, is he OK sometimes i speak to him and he seems so sad 1:13pm Mel yeah he got a bit upset, and i think hes had a couple of days where hes felt baaare cack but like nobodys lettin him wallow 14 Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 Section A: Scripted versus Unscripted Talk A: Scripted versus Unscripted Talk Useful introduction for On DVD Interviews (page 93); The One Show (page 83); Sports Commentaries (page 105); Scripted Drama (page 112) from Section B. NO DVD Introducing scripted talk 1. Brainstorm all the situations you can think of in which people might script speech or plan for something they are going to say, for example, a script for a play in the theatre, writing a few notes before a tricky telephone conversation, rehearsing a conversation in your head. 2. Before you start exploring the differences between scripted and unscripted talk in more detail, come up with a few first ideas about what might make them different. An example to get you started: ‘In unscripted talk a speaker is more likely to hesitate while they think what to say next.’ Included below are some of the different types of talk you might hear on television and radio. 3. In pairs, talk about whether you think each of these types of talk is scripted or unscripted? 4. Are there any types of talk which cause you uncertainty or about which there is disagreement? 5. – Commentary on live events – Set greetings and sign-offs – Comments to studio audience – Catchphrases and set phrases – Voiceover – Comments to camera – Debate – Anecdotes – Conversation – Questions and answers – Chat and banter – Jokes – Vox pops (off-the-cuff, short comments from members of the public) – Reports – Interviews – News headlines – Links between programmes – Phone-in For each of the types of talk that you’ve decided are unscripted, discuss how far you think it might be spontaneous and how far it might be planned in advance. 38 Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 Section A: Scripted versus Unscripted Talk Scripted or unscripted? Different types of television and radio programmes use spoken language in different ways. Some of these are described below. There are eight snippets from television and radio transcripts on page 40. 1. In pairs, read the explanations below of television and radio talk, then look at the snippets. Talk about whether you would identify each one as scripted or unscripted. 2. Make a brief note of the reasons for your decisions, including any difficulties you had in deciding which category to place them in. 3. Feed back your decisions in class discussion, unpicking in detail the language features which for you identified the extract as being scripted or unscripted talk. Types of talk on TV and Radio 1. Unscripted talk on TV and radio Some programmes such as reality TV shows like Big Brother rely on talk which has not been scripted or even planned in advance. (Of course, as soon as something is on television it changes the way people use language, even when it is a live broadcast. It’s not likely to be exactly the same as a spontaneous, private conversation between friends. When a programme is not live, everything you see and hear has been selected and edited.) 2. Scripted talk In some programmes the language has been entirely scripted in advance, for example a voiceover for a documentary or a drama. Dramas such as soap operas carefully script the language to try to make it sound as much like spontaneous language as possible, with typical spoken language features such as: Hesitations Repetition Fillers Incomplete utterances (an utterance is what one person says in a single go) Interruptions Misunderstandings Going back over things already said, or going back to a topic (back-tracking) 3. Semi-scripted talk In some programmes the basic structure of who will say what is worked out, and the participants might have planned what they want to say, but there isn’t actually a fully worked-up script. An example of this would be Graham Norton interviewing a film star about a new film. In this case the questions will have been planned in advance, the celebrity will have thought about what he or she wants to say (perhaps even preparing an amusing anecdote) but what is actually said will not have been scripted. It might be that the interview takes off in a different direction and the language moves more towards spontaneous speech. 4. A mixture Some programmes move between scripted, semi-scripted and unscripted talk. It’s worth watching for these shifts, where they occur, how you can recognise them and possible reasons for them. Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 39 Section B: Highgate Wood School B: Six Investigations on School Language In this unit investigate before this unit From Section A, depending on the focus of your investigation: Context and Formality (page 15); Jargon (page 34); Investigating Group Talk (page 30) and, from Section B Teen Talk (page 57). Highgate Wood School; transcripts Highgate Wood School On DVD A wide range of language use in the context of a school; a choice of six investigations – teacher talk; group talk; talk in different subjects; the language of a student. Speaking and listening task – role-play being a teacher. Introducing the sequence 1. Watch DVD Clip 1 ‘The 3-minute trailer of Highgate Wood School’. This will give you an idea of all the spoken language that was recorded in one day at Highgate Wood School. 2. When you’ve watched the compilation, try brainstorming all the different example of spoken language you notice. Then try to categorise your list into different types, contexts, or kinds of speakers, to begin to think about what aspects of a school’s language might be interesting to investigate. Here are a few ideas to get you started: – Teacher talk 3. – Student talk – Questions and answers Follow your teacher’s advice about what the class is going to focus on, or choose one of the investigations below. Investigation 1: teacher talk 1. Look at: DVD Clip 2: School assembly (introduction; Ms Sarchet’s speech) DVD Clip 3: Ms Druce starting an English lesson DVD Clip 7: English – Ms Druce talks to Harry’s group DVD Clip 13: Ms Druce talking to Harry about his work DVD Clip 8: Physics – start of the lesson DVD Clip 9: Physics – uniform issues DVD Clip 10: Explaining the experiment DVD Clip 15: P.E. – starting the lesson DVD Clip 17: P.E. – questioning Harry’s group DVD Clip 18: P.E. – end of the lesson 2. Choose a few clips or extracts of clips to focus on for a language investigation. You could choose to concentrate on any of the following. Investigating Spoken Language – How teachers start lessons. – How teachers ask questions and encourage student responses. – How teacher talk is different in different subjects. – How teachers do presentations to students (in class and assembly). – What makes teacher talk more or less effective in different contexts (presentations, feedback, one-to-one etc.). © English & Media Centre, 2010 49 Section B: Multimodal Language Detecting the rules of conversation 4. Try to uncover the hidden language rules of their conversation that are similar or different from face-to-face talk. Use the questions below to focus your analysis. – How do the speakers take turns? – Are there adjacency pairs, as in spoken conversation? Try annotating the transcript using arrows to follow the thread of questions and answers to see how this works. – Is the talk linear, or does it track backwards and forwards? – Are there any substitutes for body language and tone of voice. If so, what are they? – Is there anything else that differs from the rules of face-to-face talk? – Why does it look the way it does on the page? The detectives report 5. Present your findings to another pair of detectives to pool your knowledge, then present your evidence to the ‘Talk Magistrate’ – your teacher. (Details of who’s speaking and the context are included in the Teachers’ Notes on page 7 so you can see how right you were!) 6. Watch DVD Clip 5 ‘Facebook – the rules’ in which Highgate Wood School students talk about their views on the hidden rules of online conversation. Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 71 Section B: Broadcast Interviews B: The One Show and Paxman In this unit investigate Before this unit On DVD What makes a good interview; case study of different types of interview in The One Show; case study of Jeremy Paxman. From Section A, depending on the focus of your investigation: Features of Spoken Language (page 13); Context and Formality (page 15); Power and Power Relationships (page 22); Scripted versus Unscripted Talk (page 38). Jeremy Paxman; The One Show; transcripts; grid Interviews NB: If you want to view Paxman’s interview with George Galloway, you will need internet access. Students will need extra blank copies of the grid on page 96 for the speaking and listening activity. Introducing interviews Why do interviews take place? 1. As a class, brainstorm all the different reasons you might have for interviewing someone, for instance: –to get information out of someone –to challenge someone to explain his/her position on something 2. Next, create a series of linked spider diagrams to show all the situations in which you might interview someone for each of your reasons. The example below shows you the sort of thing you might do. Why do interviews take place? challenge someone to explain his/ her position on something job interview get information out of someone interviewing an expert on a factual topic market research interview on the telephone police interviewing a suspect Broadcast interviews 3. Tick or circle any of the interviews on your spidergram that you often see on television or hear on radio. Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 93 Section C: How to ... Collecting your own data Collecting spoken data can be difficult because you need to find a way of ‘capturing’ it, ideally by recording and transcribing. The DVD in this publication gives you lots of video and audio clips, with ready-made transcripts, so you could choose to use these as all or part of your data. Collecting your own data can be fun though, and it can make your investigation unique to you. You might want to add a little bit of your own data to material that’s already available. If you decide to do this, make sure you read the dos and don’ts on recording spoken language on page 124. If you are going to add data of your own, this might include: – video recordings or audio recordings, plus transcripts of very short extracts – notes of discussions held about spoken language – notes of interviews with individuals for example, with a parent or teacher – written data, such as a questionnaire about spoken language – observations of spoken language in use, with notes taken to record what you’ve noticed – anecdotal evidence, for example, your experiences of using spoken language, or those of others around you. Deciding on what data to collect – an activity There are no rights and wrongs about what makes interesting data but some things might be better for different kinds of investigations. Try out this matching activity in groups and use it to debate the pros and cons of different data for different investigations and what each type of data would allow you to explore. Match these topics to the choices of data using the chart on page 123. 1. Do males and females take up different ‘roles’ in group discussion? 2. To what extent is the language of texting more like speech or more like writing? 3. What’s special about the speech-making techniques of two different politicians? 4. How do I speak differently to different people, across the course of one day? 5. What’s the role of questioning in school talk and what makes some kinds of questions work better than others? 6. What do older people think about younger people’s use of slang? 7. In what ways, and how well do two different writers write speech for TV drama? 8. In what ways is body language important in group talk situations? 9. What’s different about the language of football commentaries on TV and radio and why? One example is given on page 123, to show the kind of discussion you might have. Data choices – Questionnaire – Survey – Interview – Spoken data (video, audio, transcript, notes of conversation) – Other kinds (for example, own experience) 122 Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 Section B: Speeches Tony Benn In 1998, Tony Benn spoke in the House of Commons in the debate about whether to bomb Iraq for failing to co-operate with the UN weapons inspection team. Tony Benn’s speech argued against the bombing. His speech was passionate and convincing and visibly moved many MPs. Printed below are Tony Benn’s notes for his anti-war speech in the Iraq debate. On it are his handwritten amendments made while he listened to the debate and before he got up to speak. The end of Tony Benn’s anti-war speech in the Iraq debate as it appears in Hansard is reprinted below. It relates to the final section of his notes. Tony Benn’s notes 1. Look through Tony Benn’s notes and the Hansard text of the end of his speech and talk about anything you notice about them. For example: – the general layout of the notes – the use of capitals, font size, tabbing, line spacing etc. and reasons for them – facts and figures in his argument – the purpose of his handwritten changes to his notes – words and phrases used in the final speech which also appear in the notes. Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 1 Speeches The end of Tony Benn’s speech (Hansard) War is easy to talk about; there are not many people left of the generation which remembers it. The right hon. Member for Old Bexley and Sidcup served with distinction in the last war. I never killed anyone but I wore a uniform. I was in London during the blitz in 1940, living where the Millbank tower now stands, where I was born. Some different ideas have come in there since. Every night, I went to the shelter in Thames house. Every morning, I saw docklands burning. Five hundred people were killed in Westminster one night by a land mine. It was terrifying. Are not Arabs and Iraqis terriļ¬ed? Do not Arab and Iraqi women weep when their children die? Does not bombing strengthen their determination? What fools we are to live as if war is a computer game for our children or just an interesting little Channel 4 news item. Every Member of Parliament who votes for the Government motion will be consciously and deliberately accepting responsibility for the deaths of innocent people if the war begins, as I fear it will. That decision is for every hon. Member to take. In my parliamentary experience, this is an unique debate. We are being asked to share responsibility for a decision that we will not really be taking but which will have consequences for people who have no part to play in the brutality of the regime with which we are dealing. On 24 October 1945 – the right non. Member for Old Bexley and Sidcup will remember – the United Nations charter was passed. The words of that charter are etched on my mind and move me even as I think of them. It says: ‘We the peoples of the United Nations determined to save succeeding generations from the scourge of war, which twice in our life-time has brought untold sorrow to mankind.’ That was that generation’s pledge to this generation, and it would be the greatest betrayal of all if we voted to abandon the charter, take unilateral action and pretend that we were doing so in the name of the international community. I shall vote against the motion for the reasons I have given. 1. Share your first response to this speech. 2. Watch DVD Clip 1 in the Speeches unit: ‘Tony Benn’s speech (1998)’ and share your first responses again. What is added to the speech by seeing and hearing it delivered in this way? 3. In DVD Clip 2, Tony Benn talks about this speech. watch the clip and make notes about what he says under the following headings: – clarity – relationship with the audience – did it make you think? – sincerity and passion – rhetorical devices – speaking from experience – the ending. 2 Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 Speeches Investigating Spoken Language © English & Media Centre, 2010 3 5 Speaking up for your beliefs Speeches – Which section of the speech were you particularly pleased with? – What features of other speechmakers (King, Cicero, Thatcher, Kinnock, Benn) you tried to imitate? – Write about one thing that you were trying to do but didn’t feel that you really achieved. Add to your commentary an evaluation of how you delivered your speech and how it went down with your audience. Comment on where there was laughter, applause, lack of attention, silence or cheering and how this related to the effect you were aiming for. Tony Benn’s complete speech (Hansard) Mr. Tony Benn (Chesterfield): If this debate is to Annan. The fleet has been sent there to be used, and the make sense, we should understand the area of total House would be deceiving itself if it thought that any agreement and where differences of opinion exist. First, so-called ”diplomatic initiatives” would avert its use. no one in the House supports the regime of Saddam This is a unique debate as far as I am concerned. I Hussein, who is a brutal dictator. I shall come to the have sat here with the right hon. Member for Old Bexley support he has had from the west, but he is a brutal and Sidcup (Sir E. Heath) through four wars—the dictator and nobody in the House defends him. Korean war, the Suez war, the Falklands war and the Secondly, no one in the House can defend for one first Gulf war. I cannot remember an occasion when any moment the denial by the Iraqi Government of the Government asked the House to authorise, in a implementation of the Security Council resolution resolution, action which could lead to force. which said that there should be inspections. The third Mr. Donald Anderson (Swansea, East): Will my issue on which there is major agreement, but little right hon. Friend give way? understanding yet, is the sudden realisation of the horror Mr. Benn: No. If my hon. Friend will forgive me, I of modern chemical and biological weapons, which do want to develop a case briefly. not depend on enormous amounts of hardware— The reason is that the right to go to war is a prerogative previously only available to a superpower—but which power. The Government are inviting the House—I almost anybody, perhaps even a terrorist group, could understand why—to share their responsibility for the use deliver. of force, knowing that force will be used within a week The disagreement is on how we deal with the matter. or two. The former Prime Minister, the right hon. Member for We are not starting afresh. I opposed the Gulf war. Huntingdon (Mr. Major)—whose speech was listened We should have asked why Saddam got into Kuwait and to with great attention—was talking about a preventive why he was not stopped. We had the war. The equivalent war. I shall read Hansard carefully, but he talked about of seven and a half Hiroshima bombs was dropped on a preventive war. There is no provision in the UN charter the people of Iraq—the biggest bombardment since the for a preventive war. If we are realistic—we must not second world war. Some 200,000 Iraqis died. Depleted fool ourselves—that huge American fleet of 30 ships uranium bullets were used. I have had two or three letters and 1,000 aircraft is not in the Gulf waiting to be from Gulf war veterans in a mass of correspondence in withdrawn when Saddam makes a friendly noise to Kofi the past week, one of whom has offered to be a human 85 Talk on the Box © English & Media Centre 2000 Speeches 5 Speaking up for your beliefs shield in Iraq because he feels that he was betrayed by my argument. There are many others who want to speak. the British Government and does not want the Iraqi I hope that the House will listen to me. I know that my view is not the majority view in the House, although people to suffer again. it may be outside this place. All the evidence confirms my view that sanctions are another instrument of mass destruction. They destroy I regret that I shall vote against the Government people’s lives, denying them the food and medicines that motion. The first victims of the bombing that I believe they need. It is no good saying that Saddam took the will be launched within a fortnight will be innocent money for his palaces. If that is the case, why does the people, many, if not most, of whom would like Saddam United Nations Children’s Fund now say that there are to be removed. The former Prime Minister, the right hon. 1 million children in Iraq starving, along with 500,000 Member for Huntingdon, talked about collateral damage. who have died. The military men are clever. They talk not Bombing the water supply and the sewerage plants is about hydrogen bombs but about deterrence. They talk like using chemical weapons, because the disease that not about people but about collateral damage. They talk spreads from that bombing contributes to disease in the not about power stations and sewerage plants but about country. And, at the end of all that, Saddam is stronger assets. The reality is that innocent people will be killed than he was at the beginning. Nobody denies that. People if the House votes tonight—as it manifestly will—to give ask why we have to go back seven years later. It is the Government the authority for military action. because the previous policy inevitably made him The bombing would also breach the United Nations stronger. We know that when a country is attacked, charter. I do not want to argue on legal terms. If the hon. leaders wave their fists and say, “We will never give and learned Member for North-East Fife (Mr. Campbell) way.” It happened in Britain, it happens when we are has read articles 41 and 42, he will know that the dealing with bombings from Ireland—it happens all the charter says that military action can only be decided on time. Are we such fools that we think that if we bomb by the Security Council and conducted under the military other people they will crumble, whereas when they bomb staffs committee. That procedure has not been followed us it will stiffen our resolve? The House ought to study and cannot be followed because the five permanent its own history. members have to agree. Even for the Korean war, the The Government’s motion would not be carried at United States had to go to the general assembly to get the Security Council. I asked the Foreign Secretary about authority because Russia was absent. That was held to that. Why is he asking us to pass a resolution that he be a breach, but at least an overwhelming majority was could not get through the Security Council? On the obtained. basis of his speech, the Russians and the Chinese would Has there been any negotiation or diplomatic effort? not vote for the use of force. Why involve the House of Why has the Foreign Secretary not been in Baghdad, Commons in an act that runs counter to what the Security like the French Foreign Minister, the Turkish Foreign Council would accept? Minister and the Russian Foreign Minister? The time Several hon. Members rose— that the Government said that they wanted for negotiation Mr. Benn: I have very little time. I want to develop has been used to prepare public opinion for war and to Talk on the Box © English & Media Centre 2000 86 5 Speaking up for your beliefs Speeches with Saddam in 1990. I got the hostages out, which made build up their military position in the Gulf. Saddam will be strengthened again. Or he may be it worth going. He felt betrayed by the United States, killed. I read today that the security forces—who are because the American ambassador in Baghdad had said described as terrorists in other countries—have tried to to him, “If you go into Kuwait, we will treat it as an kill Saddam. I should not be surprised if they succeeded. Arab matter.” That is part of the history that they know, even if we do not know it here. This second action does not enjoy support from elsewhere. There is no support from Iraq’s neighbours. In 1958, 40 years ago, Selwyn Lloyd, the Foreign If what the Foreign Secretary says about the threat to Secretary and later the Speaker, told Foster Dulles that the neighbours is true, why is Iran against, why is Britain would make Kuwait a Crown colony. Foster Jordan against, why is Saudi Arabia against, why is Dulles said, “What a very good idea.” We may not know Turkey against? Where is that great support? There is that history, but in the middle east it is known. no support from the opposition groups inside Iraq. The The Conservatives have tabled an amendment asking Kurds, the Shi’ites and the communists hate Saddam, about the objectives. That is an important issue. There but they do not want the bombing. The Pope is against is no UN resolution saying that Saddam must it, along with 10 bishops, two cardinals, Boutros be toppled.It is not clear that the Government know what Boutros-Ghali and Perez de Cuellar. The Foreign their objectives are. They will probably be told from Secretary clothes himself with the garment of the world Washington. Do they imagine that if we bomb Saddam community, but he does not have that support. We are for two weeks, he will say, “Oh, by the way, do come in talking about an Anglo-American preventive war. It has and inspect.”? The plan is misconceived. been planned and we are asked to authorise it in advance. Some hon. Members—even Opposition Members— The House is clear about its view of history, but it have pointed out the double standard. I am not trying to does not say much about the history of the areas with equate Israel with Iraq, but on 8 June 1981, Israel which we are dealing. The borders of Kuwait and Iraq, bombed a nuclear reactor near Baghdad. What action which then became sacrosanct, were drawn by the British did either party take on that? Israel is in breach of UN after the end of the Ottoman empire. We used chemical resolutions and has instruments of mass destruction. weapons against the Iraqis in the 1930s. Air Chief Mordechai Vanunu would not boast about Israeli Marshal Harris, who later flattened Dresden, freedom. Turkey breached UN resolutions by going into was instructed to drop chemical weapons. northern Cyprus. It has also recently invaded northern When Saddam came to power, he was a hero of the Iraq and has instruments of mass destruction. Lawyers west. The Americans used him against Iran because they should know better than anyone else that it does not hated Khomeini, who was then the figure to be removed. matter whether we are dealing with a criminal thug or They armed Saddam, used him and sent him anthrax. an ordinary lawbreaker—if the law is to apply, it must I am not anxious to make a party political point, because apply to all. Governments of both major parties there is not much difference between the two sides on have failed in that. this, but, as the Scott report revealed, the previous Prediction is difficult and dangerous, but I fear that Government allowed him to be armed. I had three hours the situation could end in a tragedy for the American 87 Talk on the Box © English & Media Centre 2000 Speeches 5 Speaking up for your beliefs and British Governments. Suez and Vietnam are not far living where the Millbank tower now stands, where I from the minds of anyone with a sense of history. I recall was born. Some different ideas have come in there what happened to Sir Anthony Eden. I heard him since. Every night, I went to the shelter in Thames house. announce the ceasefire and saw him go on holiday to Every morning, I saw docklands burning. Five hundred Goldeneye in Jamaica. He came back to be replaced. I people were killed in Westminster one night by a land am not saying that that will happen in this case, but does mine. It was terrifying. Are not Arabs and Iraqis terrified? anyone think that the House is in a position to piggy- Do not Arab and Iraqi women weep when their children back on American power in the middle east? What die? Does not bombing strengthen their determination? happens if Iraq breaks up? If the Kurds are free, they What fools we are to live as if war is a computer game will demand Kurdistan and destabilise Turkey. Anything for our children or just an interesting little Channel 4 could happen. We are sitting here as if we still had an news item. Every Member of Parliament who votes for the empire—only, fortunately, we have a bigger brother with Government motion will be consciously and deliberately more weapons than us. The British Government have everything at their accepting responsibility for the deaths of innocent people disposal. They are permanent members of the Security if the war begins, as I fear it will. That decision Council and have the European Union presidency for six isfor every hon. Member to take. In my parliamentary months. Where is that leadership in Europe which we experience, this an unique debate. We are being asked were promised? It just disappeared. We are also, of to share responsibility for a decision that we will not course, members of the Commonwealth, in which there really be taking but which will have consequences for are great anxieties. We have thrown away our influence, people who have no part to play in the brutality of the which could have been used for moderation. regime with which we are dealing. The amendment that I and others have tabled argues On 24 October 1945—the right hon. Member for Old that the United Nations Security Council should decide Bexley and Sidcup will remember—the United Nations the nature of what Kofi Annan brings back from Baghdad charter was passed. The words of that charter are etched and whether force is to be used. Inspections and sanctions on my mind and move me even as I think of them. It go side by side. As I said, sanctions are brutal for innocent says: people. Then there is the real question: when will the “We the peoples of the United Nations determined world come to terms with the fact that chemical weapons to save succeeding generations from the scourge of war, are available to anybody? If there is an answer to that, it which twice in our life-time has brought untold sorrow must involve the most meticulous observation to mankind”. That was that generation’s pledge to this generation, of international law, which I feel we are abandoning. War is easy to talk about; there are not many people and it would be the greatest betrayal of all if we voted to left of the generation which remembers it. The right hon. abandon the charter, take unilateral action and pretend Member for Old Bexley and Sidcup served with that we were doing so in the name of the distinction in the last war. I never killed anyone but I international community. I shall vote against the motion wore uniform. I was in London during the blitz in 1940, for the reasons that I have given. Talk on the Box © English & Media Centre 2000 88