I. II. Outlining . . . creating a formal III. A. B. A. B. A. B. outline This lecturette will cover: What an outline is Standard formatting requirements Unique requirements for ME! What is an outline? An abbreviated “picture” Identifies the parts of your paper/project Specifies the order in which they will come Types of outlines Working Final Speaking Informative Speech: Outlining Purpose: To inform my audience about outlining. Intro: Jeffery Deaver was quoted by brainyquotes.com as saying that the outline is 95% of the book. Preview: I’m going to tell you what an outline is, the elements of a formal outline, and what Prof. Jenkinson requires. I. What is an outline A. Types of outlines 1. Working 2. Final 3. Speaking “95% -- writing easy” What, Elements, Prof J’s req. I. What Working/Final/Speaking Sub/Coord When used Outlining is based upon the principles of: Subordination Coordination I. Superordinate point A. Subordinate point B. Subordinate point 1. Subordinate point 2. Subordinate point I. Coordinate Main point A. Coordinate subpoint B. Coordinate subpoint II. Coordinate Main point III. Coordinate Main point When are you likely to use an outline… formally or informally? Preparing a speech Drafting a paper Writing an email message Organizing a To Do list Studying a chapter Creating a PowerPoint presentation Anytime you need to organize or remember something, you outline! What should a formal outline look like? General Consistency Balance NO single subpoints Nuts & Bolts Numbering scheme Margins (hanging indents) Capitalization Generally… The outline should be as detailed as the need (or the professor) requires It should be reasonably balanced in detail No single subpoints Be consistent in numbering, capitalization, spacing Use full sentence, phrase, or topic style And, of course, proofread! I. Main point A. Subpoint 1. Subpoint 2. Subpoint B. Subpoint 1. Subpoint 2. Subpoint II. Main point A. Subpoint 1. Subpoint 2. Subpoint B. Subpoint 1. Subpoint 2. Subpoint III. Main point A. Subpoint 1. Subpoint 2. Subpoint B. Subpoint 1. Subpoint 2. Subpoint 3. Subpoint First and foremost: Get the numbering scheme right! 1st level Upper case Roman numerals. 2nd level Capital letters. 3rd level Arabic numbers. 4th level Lower case letters. 5th level Arabic numbers () 6th level Lower case letters () I. First Level A. Second Level 1. Third Level 2. Third Level a. Fourth Level b. Fourth Level (1) Fifth Level (2) Fifth Level (a) Sixth Level (b) Sixth Level B. Second Level II. First Level Margins: Use hanging indents I. Knitting has a very interesting history, although it is difficult to pinpoint where and when it began. A. Some believe people were knitting before the birth of Christ, or what some people call Before Common Era (BCE), but others dispute that fact (Rutt 1987). B. Most agree, however, that the first knitted item was probably a sock. 1. Probably invented in Egypt, in the 11th century. 2. Knitted socks appeared in Europe in the 14th century. a. Why socks? Because cloth didn’t fit around the foot very well. b. Purling wasn’t invented until the 16th century, so they had to knit everything “in the round,” then cut it open. C. In the Elizabethan era, socks played an even more important role. 1. Knitting schools were organized as a way for the poor to learn an occupation that would bring in an income. 2. Men were the first knitters. 3. Trade resulted, helping Britain’s economy. Capitalization: Begin with an Uppercase letter II. K Knitting today A. Change in equipment 1. Yarns have changed a. Less expensive to produce silk b. More animal fibers (alpaca, angora, merino) 2. Larger needles—create “instant gratification” B. Change in knitters 1. Celebrities (Julia Roberts, Cameron Diaz, Wynona Rider) 2. Men have been seen knitting (even attorneys!) C. Knitting Olympics (Yarn Harlot: The 2006 Knitting Olympics) 1. Stephanie Pearl-McPhee (Yarn Harlot) challenged people to knit during the 2006 Winter Olympics 2. Had to cast on a challenging project during the opening ceremonies AND finish it by the time the Olympic flame was extinguished (16 days later) 3. 4,000 knitters joined the challenge 4. Slogan: “16 days, many knitters, one dream. The Knitting Olympics” What does Professor Jenkinson want in your speech outlines? At top: Word for word: Outline to at least 3rd level At least 2 pages References: Introduction & Conclusion Preview & Summary Detail Speech Type & Topic (or title) Purpose statement Oral footnotes (prefer them highlighted) Bibliography (last page) Transitions are optional Sample Outline Informative Speech How to Outline Purpose: To inform my audience about the purpose and correct usage of outlines for Professor Jenkinson’s Public Speaking class. Introduction: Novelists use them extensively. Multi-taskers swear by them. Teachers couldn’t survive without them. The same can be said for business people, sports coaches and, of course, students—particularly those in Professor Jenkinson’s public speaking classes. What am I talking about? Outlines, of course. An outline is what you use to help you prepare and organize what you want to say. If you do it properly, actually writing your paper, speech, or book is easy. In fact, as well-known author Jeffery Deaver noted, “The outline is 95% of the book. Then I sit down and write, and that’s the easy part.” (http://www.brainyquote.com). Preview: If you want to improve your chances of success in your college classes—as well as life in general—get organized! It is important for you to know what an outline is, the elements of a formal outline, and then how to prepare an outline that will get you an A in Professor Jenkinson’s class. Transition: But first, what is an outline and when might you use one? I. What is an Outline? A. Types of outlines (Los Angeles Valley College Library, 2007) 1. Working – prep outline 2. Final – what you turn in 3. Speaking – what you use when you are giving a speech a. Can be just words b. Could use pictures B. Principles 1. Subordination 2. Coordination C. When used Continue for points II 1. Preparing a speech (What a formal outline 2. Drafting a paper looks like) and III 3. Writing email message (Professor Jenkinson’s 4. Studying a chapter requirements) 5. Creating a PowerPoint presentation Summary: Looking back, you now know more about what an outline is, the elements of a formal outline, and what Professor Jenkinson will look for when she grades your outlines for speeches. Conclusion: If you follow the words of advice offered by many successful people and start organizing your life, you’ll be subordinating and coordinating like a pro. You may not become a best-selling novelist like Jeffery Deavers, Mercedes Lackey or George Stephen, but you’ll probably become a better student and—at the very least—earn an A from Professor Jenkinson on your next Speech Outline assignment. Start your bibliography on the next page. Label it Works Consulted (for MLA) or References (for APA) Remember to use correct referencing form, for both in-text citations (your oral footnotes shown in the outline) and bibliographic citations. How to get Microsoft Word to let you outline the way you want to http://www.huffenglish.com/handouts/ formaloutline.rtf