COMMAS Using commas correctly leads to recognizable sentence structures. These BASIC BASIC sentences sentences DO NOT require require structural structural commas. commas. Do Do not not feel feel sorry sorry for for these These these sentences because they have don’tcommas. have commas. They just fine!!! sentences because they don’t They are justarefine!!! Simple sentences: 1 independent clause o o o o o o I laughed. (simple) Gas prices have increased dramatically. (simple) A Chinese skater won a gold medal. (simple) To Kill A Mockingbird is a wonderful book. (simple) The teacher read the class a story. (simple) I saw the bird over by the tree on the other side of the park. (simple) Complex sentence: 1 independent clause + 1 or more dependent clause(s) AT THE END o The crowd cheered because their team had won. o She didn’t know the real reason for the meeting until she saw the agenda. o Thomas Paine wrote “The Crisis” so he could boost morale for the American Revolution. o Peter will wait while we go into the bank. o Martin Luther King spoke eloquently when he gave his famous “I have a Dream” speech. o We need to go to the library which is on the other side of town. o Walden is the book that became Thoreau’s masterpiece. o Emily Dickinson is the poet who was a recluse because she felt out of place in society. STRUCTURAL COMMAS Using commas correctly leads to recognizable sentence structures. Add a STRUCTURAL COMMA if you are adding something to the FRONT of a sentence (an introductory element) a. A TRANSITIONAL EXPRESSION OR INTRODUCTORY WORD A transitional expression provides a logical flow of ideas throughout a composition by linking sentences and paragraphs. An introductory word can simply introduce a sentence. o Yes, the planners obtained the proper permit. o Well, come on in and join the party. o Thankfully, the boys found their dog. o Unfortunately, we will not have a table available for two hours. o Furthermore, I agree with the president’s position o On the contrary, he is your friend and not your enemy. o For example, the Puritans were among those who came to the New World for religious reasons. o However, I do not with agree with the editorial in the New York Times. b. AN ADVERB DEPENDENT CLAUSE. An adverb dependent clause has a subject and a verb but does NOT express a complete thought. An adverb dependent clause is a dependent clause that answers the questions “When?” “How?” “Where?” “How often?” “To what extent?” and “Under what circumstance?”’ o After we lost the ball game, we got in the car for the long drive home. o Before he wrote Huckleberry Finn, Mark Twain worked on a steamboat on the Mississippi River. o When Abraham Lincoln died, Walt Whitman wrote an elegy called “When Lilacs Last in the Dooryard Bloom’d.” o Unless your friend shows up soon, we will have to leave without him. o If I can get my grades up, my mother said she would buy me a car. o Although most people know Benjamin Franklin discovered electricity, they don’t know that he wrote a book of aphorisms called Poor Richard’s Almanac. o Since the dog needs exercise, we will take him on a walk when we get home. continued…Add a STRUCTURAL COMMA if you are adding something to the FRONT of a sentence (an introductory element) c. TWO OR MORE PREPOPSITIONAL PHRASES A prepositional phrase is a phrase that begins with a preposition and ends with a noun or pronoun. o In the first round of competition at the golf tournament, I had to play the best golfer in the state. o At the beginning of the second quarter of the game, he scored a touchdown. Note: A single introductory prepositional phrase need not be followed by a comma unless can be considered transitional. Example: On the other hand, I don’t want to offend her. Commonly Used Prepositions about above across after against among around as at before behind below beneath beside between beyond by concerning despite down during except for from in inside into like near of off on out outside over past round since through to toward under unlike until up upon with according to along with apart from as for because of by means of due to except for in addition to in case of in front of in regard to in spite of instead of out of with regard to with respect to with the exception of d. A PARTICIPIAL PHRASE A participial phrase contains a participle (a word that looks like a verb because it ends in ed or ing but actually acts as an adjective. The participle describes the subject of the sentence. o Looking poised and calm, Jill sauntered to the bus stop. (Looking describes Jill) o Exhausted after the five-mile hike, the scouts finally sat down. (Exhausted describes the Scouts) o Hoping to see her friends at the pool, Sue put on her bathing suit. (Hoping describes Sue) o Knowing that John was broke, Tim decided to lend him five dollars. (Knowing describes Tim) Add TWO (2) STRUCTURAL COMMAS if you are INTERRUPTING a sentence These interrupters are described as non-essential or parenthetical. They interrupt the flow of a sentence by providing additional, but not essential, information. Since these interrupters interrupt the flow of the sentence, they are set off with two commas (like a parenthesis) Beth, on the other hand, always finishes her work. I hope, Catherine, that you will find happiness Mr. Pierre, our French Teacher, studied at the Sorbonne. I am, by the way, planning on going to dinner with him.) This is, naturally, the course of action I am going to take. I have no idea, to tell you the truth, what this really means. Be aware of the difference between essential and non-essential adjectives clauses Mr. Walenski, who lives upstairs, is from Poland. [“who lives upstairs” provides additional, non-essential information so you would set it off with commas.] The neighbor who lives upstairs is from Poland. [ “who lives upstairs” is essential in this sentence so you don’t need a comma. You need the phrase “who lives upstairs” so the reader knows which neighbor you are referring to. Add a COMMA if you are JOINING two sentences (in conjunction with a CONJUNCTION). These sentences may have dependent clauses at the end of the sentence or have commas for introductory elements or interrupters. a. A coordinating conjunction joins two complete sentences. The coordinating conjunctions are for, and, nor, but, or, yet, and sometimes so. Remember FANBOYS (the dumbest acronym there is) o We studied FDR’s presidency for many days, for he was very influential. o We hoped for rain, and now we are drenched. o There is no money in my account now, nor will there be any money until payday. o I believe that the bill will pass, but I am wary about the influence of the lobbyists. o You can try to find him at his office, or you can look for him on the golf course. o I don’t like to read, yet that is the only way I will do well in American Literature. Common mistake: Do not use a comma if the coordinating conjunction does not join two sentences. INCORRECT: We hoped for rain, and now are drenched. CORRECT: We hoped for rain, and now we are drenched. CORRECT: We hoped for rain and now are drenched. b. A semi-colon and a comma are used when you join two sentences with a “Non-FANBOY” conjunction (a transitional word) o o o Emerson was a very productive 19th century author; furthermore, he was the founder of Transcendentalism. Jane had never been to New York City; consequently, she got lost. I want to go on lots of road trips this summer; however, gas prices are too expensive. Common mistake ** Do not use two commas to put a transitional expression between sentence. This results in a run-on sentence. INCORRECT: Emerson was a very productive 19th century author, furthermore, he was the founder of Transcendentalism. CORRECT: Emerson was a very productive 19th century author; furthermore, he was the founder of Transcendentalism. STANDARD COMMAS Standard commas are added to sentences for the following reasons. These commas don’t have anything to do with sentence structure. 1. Items in a series o Mr. Sanchez used the money he won from the sweepstakes to buy a house, a car, and a yacht. o Peter, Greg, and Bobby were characters on “The Brady Bunch.” o Before I die, I hope to write a book, to run a marathon, and to be a millionaire. o Be sure to get bread, milk, and eggs at the store. o My three options are to pay the entire bill now, divide the payments in two, or finance over a long period of time. o We will purchase the stock if the prices is lowered to $30 per share, if we are allowed to buy a block of over 10,000 shares, and if we receive a guarantee that no new shares will be created in the next fiscal year. 2. Dates o June 6, 1944 was D-Day. o John F. Kennedy was assassinated on November 22, 1963. 3. Geographical names o Boise, Idaho is her hometown. o John F. Kennedy was assassinated on November 22, 1963 in Dallas, Texas. 4. Direct Quotations o “I can’t believe that you met him,” said Jill. o Jill said, “I can’t believe that you met him.” o “I can’t believe,” said Jill, “that you met him. 5. Addresses o Send your entries to Town Hall, 123 Main Street, Nome, Alaska 11721 6. Names with Titles. o Joe Allen, M.D. will speak at the conference. If you use a comma for any reason other than those listed above, you have a willy-nilly comma. You must always be able to justify your comma usage!