Mr. Wayne Berninger English Department, Brooklyn Campus, Long Island University English 14 Section 1 English Composition Spring 2008: MW 10:00 am – 12:50 pm Humanities Building, Room 215 Assignment Schedule Unit One: Reading And Writing Date W 1/23 Class Homework o Introductions to the course and to each other. o Diagnostic Essay. HW for M 1/28 o Read “Close Reading” by Prose and “Rhetoric” by Newall (both in course packet). o Read “Free-Writing” (in Key Words). o Notebook assignment: How are the ideas in these articles different from and/or the same as ways of thinking that you are already familiar with? Can you identify two or three specific sentences or passages in each piece that you think are particularly striking/interesting/surprising? What do you like about those moments? Be as specific as possible in all your answers. Don’t rush through this. M 1/28 o Discuss reading that you did for homework. o In-class notebook assignment (free-writing). o Lessons B2 (“Parts of Sentences”) and B4 (“Sentence Types”) in A Writer’s Reference. HW for W 1/30 o Read “What is Literacy?” by Gee (in course packet). o Read “Revision” & “Editing” (in Key Words). o Read “Transaction” & “Simplicity” (both in Zinsser). o Notebook assignment: What is the definition of “literacy” that Gee ultimately comes up with? Is it different from or similar to the definition you had in your head before you read his essay? Explain. What do you think of his definition? Would you call yourself literate, using Gee’s definition(s)? Quote from Gee’s essay as you explain why or why not. W 1/30 o Discuss reading that you did for homework. o Introduce assignment for Formal Essay #1. o Lesson G5 (“Sentence fragments”) in A Writer’s Reference. HW for M 2/4 o Read “Shitty First Drafts” by Lamott and “Zami: A New Spelling of My Name” by Lorde (both in course packet). o Read “Grammar” (in Key Words). o Read “Clutter” and “Style” (both in Zinsser). o Notebook assignment: Does Lamott’s essay make you feel better or worse about the prospect of writing the first draft of your first formal essay? Explain your answer, using specific quotes from her essay. M 2/4 o Discuss the readings that you did for homework. o Lesson G6 (“Run-on Sentences”) in A Writer’s Reference. HW for W 2/6 o Read “The Audience/Words/Usage” (in Zinsser). o Read “I Just Wanna Be Average” by Rose (in course packet). o Notebook assignment: What would you say is the overall point of Rose’s chapter? Do you agree or disagree? What in your own experience (including other reading you may have done on the subject) causes you to agree or disagree? What do you notice about the way Rose mixes stories about his personal life with other sections that are more analytical? Does it help him make his case or not? Why? o Begin working seriously on your drafts of Formal Essay #1. W 2/6 o Work independently and with classmates’ drafts. o Lesson P1-a (“The Comma: Independent clauses with coordinating conjunction”) in A Writer’s Reference. HW for M 2/11 o Read Chapter VII from The Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass by Douglass and “Black Fire” by Peery (both in course packet). o Notebook assignment: In this chapter from Douglass’s autobiography, he talks about how he learned to read and write. Can you think of ways that it might be possible to quote from his writing in your own essay? How might that help you make whatever points you are trying to make? Which quotes might you use? How would you explain what they mean, and how would you transition from your own writing into those quotes? Might you also be able to incorporate ideas from our other readings (Prose, Newall, Gee, Lamott, Lorde, Rose)? o Complete the first draft of Formal Essay #1. M 2/11 o Workshop drafts of Formal Essay #1 in small groups. o Lesson P3 (“The Semicolon”) in A Writer’s Reference. HW for W 2/13 o Based on the feedback you received in class on M 2/11, revise your draft of Formal Essay #1. o Notebook assignment: What changes did you make to your draft in response to small group workshop feedback? Be as specific as possible. Don’t just talk about grammar corrections but also changes you made to the structure of your essay, to the content, to the way you worded things, etc. Why do you think these changes make the draft better? W 2/13 o Workshop selected drafts of Formal Essay #1 as a whole class. I will need volunteers! o In-class Notebook assignment. o Lesson P6-a (“Direct Quotations”) in A Writer’s Reference. HW for T 2/19 (no class on M 2/18 Presidents’ Day, so Tuesday follows Monday schedule) o Notebook assignment: Reflect on all the discussions that have taken place so far about drafts, both in small groups and whole-class workshops. Think about the changes you have already made to your draft as a result of that discussion and in response to the feedback you have received. What improvements do you think you still need to make to your draft in order to make it ready for the instructor to read? Are there any places in the paper that still aren’t “working” in your opinion? What would you need to change/add/delete/rearrange in order to get the effects you are looking for and to get the reactions you want from your readers? o With that in mind, revise your draft of Formal Essay #1, again. This new revision is the one you are going to turn in for feedback from the instructor. T 2/19 (there was no class on M 2/18 President s’ Day, so Tuesday follows Monday schedule) o First practice in-class essay. o Due: First complete draft of Formal Essay #1. HW for W 2/20 o Read “Nobody Means More to Me Than You: The Future Life of Willie Jordan” by June Jordan (in course packet). o Notebook Entry on Jordan: From now on, for each reading assignment, do the following: Write a minimum of one page in response to each reading, which may include a brief summary, quotations, your interpretation or understanding of the text, and your thoughts about it directly and in relation to your own observations and experience. You could also try to connect the ideas in the reading to other readings you have done and/or to papers you are working on. Also, don’t forget to use your notebook entries to practice the grammar issues we have discussed. UNIT 2: The Power of Language Date Class Homework W 2/20 o Discuss the reading that you did for homework. o Introduce assignment for Formal Essay #2. o Lesson G1a-b (“SubjectVerb Agreement”) in A Writer’s Reference. HW for M 2/25 o Read “The Politics of Teaching Literate Discourse” by Lisa Delpit (in course packet. o Notebook Entry on Delpit M 2/25 o Discuss the reading that you did for homework. o I will return Formal Essay #1 with my comments. o Editing workshop. o Lesson G1c-f (“Subject-Verb Agreement”) in A Writer’s Reference. HW for W 2/27 o Read “Dave’s Neckliss” and “The Goophered Grapevine” by Chesnutt (both in course packet). o Notebook Entry on Chesnutt. o Work on the Final Draft of Formal Essay 1 (Due M 3/3). W 2/27 o Discuss the reading that you did for homework. o Lesson G1g-k (“SubjectVerb Agreement”) in A Writer’s Reference. HW for M 3/3 o Read “Puerto Ricans” and “Concernment” by Hughes (both in course packet). o Read “Julius and Jesse in 003” by Gilyard (in course packet). o Notebook Entries on Hughes and Gilyard. o Finish the Final Draft of Formal Essay 1 (Due M 3/3). M 3/3 o Discuss the reading that you did for homework. o Lesson G2a-b (“Other Problems with Verbs”) in A Writer’s Reference. o Due: Final Draft of Formal Essay 1 HW for W 3/5 o Read “The Language of Oppression” by Bosmajian (in course packet). o Notebook Entry on Bosmajian. W 3/5 o Discuss the reading that you did for homework. o Lesson G2c-d (“Other Problems with Verbs”) in A Writer’s Reference. HW for M 3/10 o Read “From Outside In” by Mellix (in course packet). o Read “Of Girls and Chicks” by Frank & Anshen (in course packet). o Notebook Entries on Mellix and Frank & Anshen. o Start thinking about the first draft of Formal Essay #2. M 3/10 o Discuss the reading that you did for homework. o Lesson G2f (“Other Problems with Verbs”) in A Writer’s Reference. HW for W 3/12 o Read NYC Resolutions on “N,” “B,” and “H” words (handout). o Notebook Entry on NYC Resolutions. o Complete the first draft of Formal Essay #2. W 3/12 o Workshop drafts of Formal Essay #2 in small groups. o Select volunteers for next workshop. o Lesson G2f continued (“Other Problems with Verbs”) in A Writer’s Reference. HW for over Spring Break o Based on the feedback you received in class on W 3/12, revise your draft of Formal Essay #2. o Notebook assignment: What changes did you make to your draft in response to small group workshop feedback? Be as specific as possible. Don’t just talk about grammar corrections but also changes you made to the structure of your essay, to the content, to the way you worded things, etc. Why do you think these changes make the draft better? o Volunteers: Remember to meet me early to make copies of your drafts. M 3/17 SPRING BREAK: no class W 3/19 SPRING BREAK: no class M 3/24 o Volunteers: Meet me early to make copies of your drafts. o Workshop selected drafts of Formal Essay #2 as a whole class. I will need volunteers! o Lesson G2g (“Other Problems with Verbs”) in A Writer’s Reference. HW for W 3/26 o Notebook assignment: Reflect on all the discussions that have taken place so far about drafts, both in small groups and whole-class workshops. Think about the changes you have already made to your draft as a result of that discussion and in response to the feedback you have received. What improvements do you think you still need to make to your draft in order to make it ready for the instructor to read? Are there any places in the paper that still aren’t “working” in your opinion? What would you need to change/add/delete/rearrange in order to get the effects you are looking for and to get the reactions you want from your readers? o With that in mind, revise your draft of Formal Essay #1, again. This new revision is the one you are going to turn in for feedback from the instructor. W 3/26 o Second practice in-class essay. o Due: First complete draft of Formal Essay #2. HW for M 3/31 o First assignment(s) of Unit Three: To be announced as we approach the end of March. For now stay focused on Formal Essay #3. o (If you really want a head start, you could start reading the book The Colossus of New York by Colson Whitehead.) Unit 3: Reading and Writing Places W 3/26 o Second practice in-class essay. o Due: First complete draft of Formal Essay #2 (I will return it with my comments on M 3/31). HW for M 3/31 o Read “Defining Place” by Tim Cresswell (in course packet) o Read pages 1-3 5 in The Colossus of New York by Colson Whitehead. o Notebook entry on Cresswell. o Notebook entry on Whitehead. Remember, for each reading assignment, do the following: Write a minimum of one page in response to each reading, which may include a brief summary, quotations, your interpretation or understanding of the text, and your thoughts about it directly and in relation to your own observations and experience. You could also try to connect the ideas in the reading to other readings you have done and/or to papers you are working on. Also, don’t forget to use your notebook entries to practice the grammar issues we have discussed. M 3/31 Discuss reading you did for homework. I will return your draft of Formal Essay #2, with my comments. Final draft will be due M 4/7. I will introduce the assignment for Formal Essay #3. Lesson G3a. HW for W 4/2 Read pages 35-47 in The Colossus of New York by Colson Whitehead. Read “The Power of Perambulation” by John Monczunski (in course packet). Notebook entry on Whitehead. Notebook entry on Monczunksi. W 4/2 Discuss the reading you did for homework. Lesson G3b. HW for M 4/7 Read “On the Aesthetics of Urban Walking & Writing” by Phillip Lopate (handout). Read pages 47-71 in The Colossus of New York by Colson Whitehead. Notebook entry on Lopate. Notebook entry on Whitehead. M 4/7 Discuss the reading you did for homework. Lesson G3c. DUE: Final draft of Formal Essay #2. I will return with grade on M 4/14. HW for W 4/9 Read pages 71-97 in The Colossus of New York by Colson Whitehead. Read “On Being White, Female, and Born in Bensonhurst” by Marianna De Marco Torgovnick (in course packet). Notebook entry on Whitehead. Notebook entroy on Torgovnick. W 4/9 Discuss the reading you did for homework. Lesson G3d. HW for M 4/14 Read pages 97-123 in The Colossus of New York by Colson Whitehead. Notebook entry on Whitehead. M 4/14 Discuss the reading you did for homework. I will return Final Draft of Formal Essay #2, with a grade. Discuss Final Portfolio. Lesson W2. HW for W 4/16 Finish The Colossus of New York Notebook entry on Whitehead. Get started on revision(s) for your Final Portfolio. W 4/16 Final Discussion of Whitehead. Lesson W3. HW for M 4/21 First draft of Formal Essay #3. Keep working on revision(s) for your Final Portfolio. M 4/21 Workshop drafts of Formal Essay #3. Lesson W4. Schedule Individual Conferences with me to discuss Formal Essay #3. There will be times available on Tuesday 4/22 during my office hours, on Wednesday 4/23 (instead of class), and on Wednesday 4/24 during my office hours. HW for W 4/23 Based on the feedback you got from classmates in class on M 4/21 and/or feedback you got from me in our individual conference, work on the revision of Formal Essay #3. If you choose not to include Formal Essay #3 in the Final Portfolio, you still must submit it for a grade (include the first draft) on W 4/30. Keep working on revision(s) for your Final Portfolio. W 4/23 Individual conferences in lieu of class meeting. NOTE: Failure to keep your individual appointment WILL count as an absence! HW for M 4/28 Work on revision of Formal Essay #3. If you choose not to include Formal Essay #3 in the Final Portfolio, you still must submit it for a grade (include the first draft) on W 4/30. Keep working on revision(s) for your Final Portfolio. M 4/28 First part of 2-stage essay. This will probably be about Whitehead. HW for W 4/30 Finish the final draft of Formal Essay #3, which you must turn in on M 4/30 if you are NOT including it in your Final Portfolio. Keep working on revision(s) for your Final Portfolio. W 4/30 Second part of 2-stage essay. DUE: Final draft of Essay #3—if you are NOT including it in your Final Portfolio. HW for M 5/5 Finish putting together your Final Portfolio. Prepare for Impromptu, in-class essay (there will be a handout to read ahead of time—I will give it to you in class on W 4/30). M 5/5 Impromptu, in-class essay. Final Portfolios due. After you turn in your Final Portfolio, please DO NOT come around or email me asking for your grade. Such distractions will only slow down my grading process, making EVERYBODY have to wait longer to get their grades. Thanks. I assure you I will get the grades in as fast as possible, and then you should be able to get your grades online. Have a great summer!